HAMARI KAHANI-Twinj(Few Shots)Tiktik 5
Hey guys!! Shooo shoorry for being late!! Maaf kar dena pleash!!!! Koi bhi punishment qubool hai…??
Thank u for commenting guys!!! U r fab??
Love you all!! U always make me feel special??
N all my darling writers…i have been going through a tough emotional phase lately..thank u soo much for ur amazing pieces of writing??
I am really happy that u liked the prev epi..i will try to keep it going…
If anyone missed the previous epi..here’s the link:
Part 4
Now let’s get on with the epi:
❤️_________ready set go_________❤️
Twinkle was in her room, thinking about Kunj and she was red,blushing….
Twinkle’s POV
Babaji..ye kya ho raha hai mere saath? Aapne mere system mein kaunsi CD daal di hai jo har pal uss bandar ki hi pics flash kar rahi hai..
Vo akad dikhata hai aur flirting mein to casanova ko bhi piche chod deta hai…par phir bhi jalebi ki meethi chashni jaise lagta hai….yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai? Kahin mein uss bandar ki bandariya banne ke baare mein to nahin soch rahi hun? Kya? Kuch bhi bol rahi hai Twinkle!! Apne dimaag ke engine ko break maar…!!! Par jo bhi kahun…sweet to bahut hai…
(Babaji what CD are u playing in my head which is flashing images of that monkey in my head? He is arrogant and he even surpasses romeo in flirting…irrespective of that he is sooo sweet….what is happening to me? Am i dreaming of becoming his? What? No Twinkle…give ur mind a break….but he is indeed very sweet…)
She smiles to herself n hides her face in her teddy n goes to sleep….
❤️Next Scene❤️
The college campus is shown.
Twinkle enters the college with Pallavi by her side…
P-yaar aaj kuch bhi interesting nahin lag raha hai…aur upar se tu! Do din se meri dum bankar ghoom rahi hai…
(Nothing is seeming to interest me today….n on top of that you! Ur roaming around being my tail since two days….)
(Looking at the sky) babaji pls uski aawaz jaldi vapas la dena…yeh goongi zaroor ho gayi hai lekin iske naatak ke chakkar mein meri band baj rahi hai…khud to bol nahin sakti par phir bhi haath pair chalaane mein mahir hai…
(Babaji please make her regain her voice…she might be dumb but she is still an expert in throwing things at people…)
N she caressed her bum where she had got hurt the prev day(Remember???)
Twinkle was glaring at her when a voice came from behind…
V(for voice??)-abhi badi bol rahi hai…par uss din bodyguard banke tarafdaari kaun kar raha tha?
(Now ur complaining…but who was siding her that day like a bodyguard?)
Twinkle frowned n both the girls looked back to where that voice was coming from. The mighty Kunj was there in his hot avatar!!
He approached the girls n removed his shades…
P-ohh hello Mr.Psycho! Tum hote kaun ho hamare rishtey ko define karne wale? Apne kaam se kaam rakho! Apni jo lambi naak hai na..usko roll karo aur humare matters se door rakho…
(Oh hello Mr Psycho! Who are u to define our relationship? Stay in your limits and stop poking your nose in our matters…)
K-meri naak hai…mein iska jo bhi karoon…tumhein kya?
Vaise tumne sahi kaha…vaar to karti hai…par jo iski aakhon ki talwar hai na! Haye! Ek vaar se dil paar ho jaye!
(It is may nose…i may do whatever i want out of it…how do u care?
By the way u r right…she does attack…but the blade of her eyes??! Oh god! One blow pierces the heart!)
Pallavi stared at him weirdly while Twinkle blushed.
P-Twinkle chalo yahan se…lagta hai tera vaar iske dimaag par assar kar gaya…pagal ho gaya hai…
(Twinkle let’s go from her…it seems that ur blow had an adverse effect on his mind…he has lost it…
She glared at him, still bizarrely, while he was lost in Twinkle.
P-(snapping her fingers in front his face) oye Mr Psycho! Jaldi apna illaj kara dena…varna yahan vahan joote khate phiroge….
Chal Twinkle…
(Oh Mr Psycho! Get yourself treated soon…otherwise you’ll kept getting thrashed….)
K(to himself)- yaar ab kaise bataoun? Meri dava to tu le gayi…
(How do i tell u? U took my medicine away…)
N he brushed his fingers in his hair n smiled brightly as he watched Twinkle being dragged away by Pallavi.
Twinkle’s POV
Ye pallu bhi naa!! Friend hai ke dushman? Pehli baar bandar ke munh se itni cute baat suni…uska bhi mazaa kharab kar diya! But babaji aap na ye galat kar rahe hai…agar uss vakt pallu mujhe vahan se nahin le jaati naa to mein bandar ki aankhon mein kho jaati…phir mein usko kaise face karti? Ye na jo aakhon aakhon se pyaar baras raha hai…usse band karna hi hoga varna teri khair nahin…ab se decided! Tu bandar se koson door rahegi! Usko bilkul bhaao nahin degi! Tujhe chocolate ki kasam….she spoiled that fun
(This pallu na! Is she my friend or my enemy? For the first time that monkey utters such sweet words from his mouth! But babaji ur doing it all wrong…if Pallu had not dragged me away from there at that moment…i would have got lost in his eyes…then how would i face him? This is getting dangerous..now it is decided Twinkle…u’ll stay away from that monkey as from now onwards! You will not give him any attention! Ur under chocolate’s oath!)
she made a cute pout…
2DAYS LATER
K-yaar iss siyappa queen ko ho kya gaya hai? Mein Mr India hoon kya jo dikhayi nahin deta hoon? Yaa phir awaaz ke saath ab aakhon ne bhi saath chod diya hai? Vaise…Kitni pyaari aakhein hai na? Mann karta hai inn mein kho jaaoun!
Wait? Kya? Kunj beta tu topic se hat raha hai! Concentrate! Aaj tu usse baat karke hi rahega! Chahe uske liye tujhe kissi bhi had tak jaana pade…
(What has gotten into this Siyappa Queen? Am i Mr India to be invisible for her? Or has she lost her eyesight as well?
By the way she has such beautiful eyes…i want to get lost in them…
Wait? What? Concentrate! Today u will definitely talk to her at any cost!)
The whole day he kept trying to talk to Twinkle n communicate with her…but everytime either Pallavi hindered him or Twinkle made an excuse…He was being avoided n he had realised that fact…pretty late but Kunj is Kunj…
K-Beta jo kaam seedhi ungli se naa nikle vo tedhi ungli se nikaal le…ye siyappa queen raita phailane se baaz nahin aati hai…ye jo lukka-chuppi ka khel ho raha hai na…ab dikhata hoon usse…
(Kunj u should use crooked ways to get ur task done now…this Siyappa queen wont stop making mistakes…this hide n seek….i will show her now)
N he smirked…
❤️Next Scene❤️
Pallavi and Twinkle were in class. Twinkle was very restless because Kunj had not yet arrived in class.
T-babaji! Ye Bandar kahan reh gaya? Mujhse zaroor naraz ho gaya hoga…ab kya? Par mein kyun uske baare main soch rahi hun? Twinkle usse goli maar n concentrate kar…
(Babaji where is this monkey now? He must surely have got angry with me…now what? But why am i thinking about him? Twinkle just shoot his thought n get back to work….)
She glanced at the door n then hid her head behind her book…
After sometime our Mighty Kunj came in.
‘Knock knock’
K-May i come in sir?
Everyone looked up to see who had come. Twinkle’s face lit up n this was remarked by Kunj who smiled.
Teacher-yes come in…what is it?
K-voh actually sir mera samaan andar reh gaya..may i?
(Actually sir i left my stuff here…may i?)
Teacher-sure u may…but this should not be repeated again…
K-yes sir…
Kunj started to move towards his desk while Twinkle was impatiently looking at him. He walked pass his table n started moving in the direction of Twinkle-Pallavi’s table. Twinkle started sweating and was trying hard to conceal her nervousness…
He approached Twinkle…
K-haan ya naa?
(Yes or no?)
T-…..
K-i will consider this as a yes???
Twinkle nodded her head in a ‘no’ but Kunj did not head to her words…sorry…signs?
N he lifted her up in bridal style while her eyes popped open…she looked straight into his eyes n they shared an intense eyelock…
He started to get out of the class…
Teacher-ye kya batameezi hai?
(What is this?)
K-chill sir! Iss umar mein itna tension nahin liya karte hai…kahan tha naa samaan chod diya tha…vahin le jaane aaya hoon aur utha ke leke jaa raha hoon…aapse matlab?
(Chill sir! It is not right to be so tensed at this age…i had told u that i had left my stuff behind…i am taking it away…how do u care?)
Teacher-dekho ye sab school ke rules ke….
(Look! These are against the rules…)
K-sir agar aapne koi panga create kiya na…to agli baar Aayat ko leke jaaounga!
(Sir if u mess something up then the next time i will take Aayat!)
N she winked at a girl sitting on the first bench who giggled…
Teacher-AAYAT!!!
A-sorry papa….i mean sir….
Teacher-get lost! N aayinda mujhe apni shakal mat dikhana!!!
(Get lost and do not come in front of me again!!!)
K-with pleasure sir…
N he left the class with a shocked Twinkle in his arms…while the whole class was hooting…
❤️Next Scene❤️
K-ouch! Aah! Siyappa que…aah! Yaar lag rahi hai! Kya kar rahi hai? Ouch!!! Kya? Twink….
On the other side, Twinkle was bombarding him with books and stationary…
K-achha sorry na…bachhe ki jaan logi kya?
(Ok sorry! Will u kill me now?)
Twinkle signalled him with her hands…while kunj was trying to denote them….
K-mein? Samaan?
(I? Stuff?)
N he realised what he had said earlier…n then looked at Twinkle who was red with anger…
K-are meri siyap…
(Twinkle narrowed her gaze…)
I mean choco chip…sweetie pie…tu naraz kyun ho rahi hai?
(N he pulled her cheeks)
Aisa mat kar…ye jo gussa hai na…teri chocolate jaisi naak ko aur candy jaise cheek ko suit nahin kar raha hai…red red everywhere u know….aur…….ahhhh!!!!!
(My sweetie pie…choco chip…dont do this! Ur sweet nose and cheeks are red n aaah!!!!!)
He looked at Twinkle closely while Twinkle got scared..
Twinkle lifted her eyebrows as in ‘kya??’
Kunj got closer to her and whispered in her ears:
K-agar itna gussa karegi na, to tera makeup kharab ho jaayega…aur sab tujhe chudail samajhkar darr jayenge..
(If u get so angry then ur makeup will get spoilt and then everbosy will think that u r a witch and will get scared of u…)
N he burst out laughing in the grass while Twinkle fumed…
Twinkle’s POV
Hawww! Ye khud ko kya samajhta hai?? Idiot! Pure Amritsar mein kya? Puri duniya mein mujh jaisi hot and s*xy ladki nahin hogi! Kissi ne sahi kaha hai…bandar kya jaane adrak ka swaad…iski to vaise bhi zindagi off track chal rahi hai…lele pange…bass meri voice aa jaaye…phir interest ke saath vapas karungi! Huh!
(Haww!! What does he think of hinself? Idiot! There is no other girl hotter and s*xier than me in this whole world! *sorry vo adrak wali baat i dont know its translation…if somebody does pls post it in the comments* )
N she started to do her hand signs again….
By that time Karan and Rahul arrived there in search of Kunj. They saw Twinkle doing those weird moves….
Ka-Ye to vahi hai na…hamare majnu ki laila…Miss Bhabhi…..
(She is the juliet ou our Romeo right? Miss Bhabhi….)
R-haan yaar par ye kar kya rahi hai?
Jaanta hoon doosron se hatke hai bhabhi apni par itni weird…sorry special….
(Yes pal but what is she doing? I know that she is a little different but soo weird..sorry…special)
Ka-jo bhi kaho…apne atrange dost ke liye satrangi bhabhi hi theek hai!
(Sorry i dont know how to translate that)
N they did a ✋
Ka-Chal lovebirds ko akele chod varna Kunj aakhon se goli maar dega?
(Come on let’s leave the lovebirds alone otherwise Kunj will kill us with his stare)
N they walked away…
K-oye! Siyappa queen…ye kaunsa naya dance form create kar rahi hai? Ye le notebook le aur apni baatein chaap de..varna mein pagal ho jaaounga!
(Oye! siyappa queen…what type of dance form are u creating? Take this notebook n write ur thoughts on it…itherwise i will become mad!)
Twinkle gave him a death glare and snatched the notebook from him. She wrote something quickly and threw it on Kunj…
K-teri to…
(You!)
N he saw Twinkle in an angry bird avatar…n preferred to stay mum…
‘Uss ladki se flirt kyun kar raha tha? Teri behen lagti hai kya jo itna cheezy smile de raha tha? Duffer kahika’
(‘Why were u flirting with that girl? Is she ur sister to give her such a cheezy smile? Duffer!’)
Kunj looked at her n was startled at her possessiveness…but then he smirked.
K-tujhe itni mirchi kyun lag rahi hai? Teri behen lagti hai kya? Tujhe itni fikar kyun ho rahi hai? Chill! Mighty kunj ke charm se koi bach nahin sakta…
(Why are u so offended? Is she ur sister? Why so u care? Chill! Nobody can escape from my charm…)
N he held his collar….
Twinkle looked down,being embarassed but then after sometime got up and started to go in class…
Kunj ran behind her..
K-achha sorry na!
He held his ears…’please??’
Twinkle smiled at him n they hugged each other. They were smiling endlessly. They broke the hug n shared an eye-lock…
K-sorry voh…excitement mein…
Twinkle hugged him again and smiled at him…
Kunj understood what she wanted to convey n brushed his fingers in his hairs…..
N both went in class while Kunj started with some random talks to lighten the atmosphere….
All that while two mysterious eyes were following them and observing each and every move of them…
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Days passed by n twinj became closer…but as besties….they were always together…fighting in signs…kunj always saved her from college bullies n so on…
That baba also extended Twinkle’s maun vrat because Twinkle had broken it couple of times while fighting with Leela at home…but she felt ecstatic because she could stay with Kunj for a longer time…somewhere she knew that Kunj cared for her as she was ‘handicapped’ but she did not know that the care n respect she was getting was because of love…
With time their mutual love, passion, trust and respect kept on increasing….though they were best friends…kunj always hinted at his love but Twinkle always ignored them thinking that Kunj was merely flirting like with any other girl…kunj had realised his feelings but Twinkle was in a fix…she was unsure about what had to be done because she knew it was complicated…their relationship was based on a lie…but the storm was yet to come…
A week had passed…and those two eyes were constantly reaching for them…at each and every level and stage…at each step there was an intruder…
PRECAP: Whose eyes are stalking the lovely bffs??
❤️_______to be continued_______❤️
So guys…can u guess whose eyes are those?
I know it was a long one…n boring one….sorry but this epi was imp for the story to move on the track that i am planning….
Tell me if you are fed up of the flashback…then i’ll jump to reality for a while…but that will keep the suspense going for some time.
N yaa i know this one was a lame epi…n my translations were horrible…please be kind to me?
Do share ur comments n suggestions….
Kanjusi mat karna!
Love u all??❤️
37 Comments
Hehhehhe
Oh god itna cute comedy I will die for sure
No long cmnt exam time or han meri gut feeling shi thi
Hhheheh
Thank u bulbul! Thats so sweet of u!?
Good luck for ur exams
Hi ayu
Awesome episode loved it
N aur kitna din twinkle ka moun wrath hoga
Bechari
Thank u Ramya…u must read to know…?
Ayu superb
Thank u Aru?
awesome amazing fabulous cute funny epi….loved it
Thank u Purnima?
Loved it and according to me the eyes are of Pallavi I think but lets see and the dialogues Like Twinkle kills Kunj with her eyes you kill me with your dialogues
Loved it to the core and yeh post soon 🙂
Love you 🙂
Aww thank u soo much Shruti!
We will see if u guess this one right…love u?
Awwww it was so cuteeeee???? please post next one asap❤❤❤
Thank u Anam! Will definitely try to…?
Hey ayu
epi was awesome kunj comedy……and that line next time ayat ko Utah ker le jaunga …superb
and I guess that two eyes are uv…….
Hey Payal! Glad u liked it…
Let’s see if u guess it right?
Ayu it was not at all boring…
infact it was such a cute epi….i was smiling throughout???..
Loooooved it❤❤❤❤❤…
And I think the person who is keeping an eye on them is UV…… just a guess..
I am waiting to know kunj’s reaction when he’ll come across the truth…
Continue soon
Thank u Shreya! Really happy that u smiled! Thats my goal..to make u guys feel happy!
Let’s see if u guessed it right…in the next epis…
U know what? Even i wanna know what will be kunj’s reaction on this??
Saath mein dekhenge??
Hey ayu it’s awesome ?❤️❤️❤️❤️???❤️❤️❤️❤️
Lovely
Mazaa agayaa
But plz todha reality dikha na. Kunj twinkle se naaraz hole chalagya. Plz dikhana kise twinkle kunj ko maanayegi?????❤️
Aww thank u Pumpkin! Glad u enjoyed it! I will definitely take ur wish into consideration dear! Love you❤️
Nice episode dear but plz twinkle ka moun wrath katham Karo no but I liked the episode nice and post asap
She will talk soon…par she is Twinki..jab uska munh khulega na…dhamaka hoga?
Awesome epi… Loved it…. I wish twinkle jaldhi kunj ko sab kuch sach sach bata dey.. Nd unke bich mey sab thik hojaye…
Hey dear! U will have to read ahead to know..?
Bechari twinkle aur kitne din chup rhe gi…
Ayu Maza aa gya yrr…:*:*:*:*:*:*
Voo to dekha jaayega?
Really happy to know that u enjoyed it??
Ayu you are such a fab writer.. like seriously how can u write so well??.. love ur dialogues.. ur the 2nd dialogue queen of tu.. first is jisha di and ur the 2nd one.. that dialogue “kahin me us Bandar ki bandaria banne ki nahi soch rahi hu” was ??????.. I think the stalker is uv.. and yh ur punishment??.. ur punishment is to post soon ???.. love you ❤❤
Hey Yashvee! Inborn talent hai…u know??
Joking yaar…but seriously jisha di is just awesome! Her dialogues make me ho ‘WOW’!!!
Vo mein raat ke 12 baje likh rahi thi…time ka mere dimaag par kuch to assar hoga na????
I will try to post soon! Thank u for u lovely comment. Love u?❤️
Omg!!!!! This was awsm….mind blowing yaaaar❤
I luv long epis and the dialogues were fab!!
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And twinkle being possessive!!! Haay haay kunj lifting her in bridal style?
That convo with sir was so funny yaar??? I srsly don’t know who is the intruder
And wen u said that the story is in past only then I realized….ol the while I was thinking it is happing in present…..???
Amazyn piece of writing???
Jzz luvd it???
Awww! Thank u sooo much noodles! I was scared u guys would find it boring cuz its the first time i’ve written something sooooooo long!!!
Yaar we are in fb mode now…will take some time to shift to present….
Glad u liked it???
Love you❤️❤️❤️
ayu yr mein kya khun
i dont know yr how can sm1 ryt how can sm1 ryt
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.soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo damn cool ohhh god mein toh
has has ke pagal hi hogyi i mean wow yr dat ws epic kunj ka samaan twinkle hahahhahahaaa
n he pickd her up in bridal style n all wow fabulous really adorable n beautiuful
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.Vaise tumne sahi kaha…vaar to karti hai…par jo iski aakhon ki talwar hai na! Haye! Ek vaar se dil paar ho jaye!
n wen twinkle blushed srsly cute n
d twinj hug ufff….very very very cute n romantic
i just hpe she soon realises it
n d stsrting wen twinkle was thinking abut kunj n said khin mein iss bandar ki bandariya banne ke baare mein toh nhi soch rhi hahahahahahha
luvd it sooooooooo mch i cant explain i mean wow yr u ryt sooo sweet melody n twinkle ka maunvrat hahahaaahahahaa i hpe she soon gets fee from dis vrat………..
n dis mystry prsn uggghhhhhhhhhhhhh……….who is dis eager to know……
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sooooooooo dear post asap u can bcoz i srsly cant w8 sooooo excited for nxt part……………..
love u lods ayu……….. 😀
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..aajjj bhot lamba msg hogya naaa par batana tha ki episode lamba tha par boring nhi or acha lga kunki lamba tha luvd it 2 infinity………….
luv u ayu dear……..sis……..
Yaar baby u made me blush!!!??Thank u sooooo much!! ?❤️ U made my day! I am soooo happy that u liked it!!
Dont worry…the maun vrat will end with a bang! N the mysterious eyes will soon be revealed in my next…most probably?
Love u baby! Ur a super cutie pie sis❤️❤️
Ayu aaj mai ek baat bolu??
I love u shoooo much…. seriously becoz this was like???
I m in love with this ff…
I read it just now….n trust me u made my day with this story…
Love u loads???
Thank u shatakshi!!! Ue sooo sweet! Aaj comments i am blushing as well as crying!!! Thank u sooo much for u love???
Love u loads!!❤️❤️❤️
Great awesome fantastic
Thank u Angita?
I’m shoooooooo sooooooooooo sorry aayu!!!!! I KNOW I’m too late ………., n I missed it too ….so sorry ………… actually missed it in music exams time …. so sorry n about this ….it was fab …… I’m just awestruck….. I’m like if u write these amazing parts just for giving important notes ..so I’m eagerly waiting that what will be ur upcoming track ……. n it’s super cute yaar ….. mera dil toh baag baag ho gaya …… ????????? maari jawaan twinj ki itni pyaari jodi dekhkar…….it’s wow n again biggest wala sooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ………..love u ???????????????????
Oh in exams time I don’t know from where this music came ……. n again sorry ??
Yaar tu serious ho gayi!! Glad u liked it dear❤️❤️❤️
N sorry yaar i was just pulling ur leg!! My sweetu pie❤️❤️