HAMARI KAHANI-Twinj Tiktik 15+SUMMARY LINK
Oh mahhh god! 15 episodes! I never thought that i would reach this far…i had initially thought that i would wrap it up in 5 episodes…but then your love made me turn it into a ff. I had thought that it would last 10-15 episodes but at this point, i feel that i can keep on writing…
However, i feel that the comments are dropping…Am i going wrong somewhere? Some regular commenters have not been commenting…if this trends keeps on going, i will end this ff as soon as possible…
I know i have been quite irregular on my posts because of my exams and other unforeseen situations so this is the link to a summary of the ff:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/hamari-kahani-twinj-five-shots-tiktik-12/
Now coming to the episode, this is specially dedicated to my Pumpkin, Nautanki Ft and Vasiya di…so let’s move on without further ado…
❤️_________ready set go_________❤️
Kunj and Twinkle returned to their respective houses. Both were heartbroken.
❤️Twinkle’s room❤️
Twinkle was crying bitterly in her room, crouched on the floor. She was thinking where she could have gone wrong in her relationship.
T(to herself)-kya mein itni buri ladki hun babaji? Jiss rishtey mein maine apna tan aur mann donnon lagaya hai…usmein mein kahan chook gyi? Ye mujhse kaisi galti ho gyi jiske liye Kunj mujhe aur khud ko itni badi saza de rha hai? Milna to door ki baat hai vo mujhse baat bhi ni karna chahta hai…subah tak sab kuch theek tha…phir achanak aisa kya hogya ki vo itna bhid gya? Usne chillaya to chillaya, chot pahunchayi to pahunchayi…mujhe yakeen hai ki uske peeche zaroor koi badi baat hogi…varna mera kunj aisa ni hai…kya uske peeche…
(Am i such a bad girl babaji? Where have i faltered in this relationship where i have donated myself wholly? For which mistake is Kunj distancing himself from me? Meeting him is a far-fetched thing…he does not even want to talk to me…he was fine till morning..then what could have happened that he got so upset? He might have screamed at me and hurt me, however, i know there must be a valid reason behind his behaviour…)
She kept on thinking…
Twinkle’s POV
Kaaran jo bhi ho Kunj! Tumne The Twinkle Taneja ko apne pyaar ka mohtaaj banaya hai…agar tumhein lagta hai ki tum mujhse itni aasani se picha chura loge to tum bilkul galat ho…ek baar jo mein gale pad gayi to hateye ni hatungi…ab tumhari ye siyappa queen fevicol se bhi strong wali glue ban gyi hai…dor katne ki koshish karke to dikhao! Junoon se mohabbat ki hai maine…shiddat se usse nibhaoungi bhi! Kal raat ka to mujhe pta ni…par mein apni zindagi ki aane wali raatein tumhare saath bitana chahti hun…sirf Bandar Sarna aur uski Siyappa Queen…vaada raha Mr Sadu!
(Whatever may be the reason Kunj! You have made The Twinkle Taneja a slave of your love…if you think you will escape from me then you are wrong…once i have chosen you, i will not let go of you…now your Siyappa queen has become more sticky than fevicol…now try to break our bond! I have loved you passionately, i will thus fulfill that love wholeheartedly! I want you with me for the rest of my life! I promise to achieve so Mr Sadu!)
❤️On The Other Side❤️
Kunj’s entire room was messed up. Broken pieces of glass beneath the creased blanket, messied bed, scratched mirror but most importantly tears…kunj’s heart was weeping…
K-maine shiddat se tumse pyaar kiya tha Twinkle…phir tumne mere saath aisa kyu kiya? Dil kehta hai ki tumpar bharosa karoon…par dimaag tumhare khilaaf kyu ho gya hai? Dimaag zid pe ada hai ki tum…AAHHHH!
(I had loved you with all my heart Twinkle…then why did u do so? My heart says that i should trust u…but why is my brain against you? My heart is adamant on the fact that u…AAHHHH!)
He broke the glass of wine in his hands, leaving him in a pool of blood.
K-ni! Meri Twinkle aisa ni kar sakti…uski aankhon mein maine pyaar dekha hai…uske aasouon mein sachchai dekhi hai…uske dil ki dhadkanon se pyaar ki pukaar suni hai maine…puri baat jaane bina, samjhe bina, mein uske saath itna bada anyaay ni kar sakta…soch aur samajh gaye tel lene…mein bas apne dil se parkhunga…
(No! My Twinkle cannot do so…i have seen love in her eyes…i have seen truth in her tears…i have heard her heart screaming love for me…i cannot wrong her without analysing the situation…let the brain and the mind go to hell! I will test her with my heart…)
❤️Next Day-College❤️
Twinj had both arrived to the college and their eyes were desperately searching for each other. Finally they spotted each other and they shared a small eyelock. Kunj broke it and looked away while Twinkle made a ‘haww’ face.
T-footage kha rhe ho? Khaao…jitna khaana hai khaao…mein bhi hone wali Mrs Twinkle Kunj Sarna hun…soot samet sab lungi beta…mujhe akad dikha rhe ho? Le…ulta chor kotwal ko daate…khud galti ki hai par ego aasmaan choo rhi hai…bas akele mein mil…angry young man ka bhoot na utarvaya sar se to mera naam bhi…naam kya tha? Haan! Mera naam bhi Twinkle Kunj Sarna ni! Hawww! Mujhse nazrein bhi chura rhe ho…matlab tumhein bhi pta hai ki tumne yahan solid khichdi pakayi hai…aankhon ko bhatakne do…bechare…bhatakte bhatakte yahin aayenge mere paas! Aur jab aayenge na…to tumhare sar pe aisa bomb phodungi ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhoge…aur mujhe rulvane ke liye pachtaoge!
(Why are u acting so pricey? Continue to do so…even i am to-be Mrs Twinkle Kunj Sarna…i will make u pay for all of it with interest…Moreover u r wrong and ur blaming me??? Meet me alone…i will get rid of all ur ego…then you will regret having messed with my feelings and you will feel remorseful for having made me shed so many tears because of you silliness!)
She gave him a death glare.
K(to himself)-Twinkle mujhe ni pta ki uski baaton mein kitni sachchayi hai ya kitni makkari hai…mujhe bas itna pta hai ki tum sirf meri ho! Mein sab kuch seh lunga par dhokha ni seh paaounga! Maine tumse bhut pyaar kiya hai…aur karta hun…par kisi aur ke saath tumhein dekhkar mera khoon khaulta hai…kal subah shaayad mujhe tumse uss tarah baat ni karni chahiye thi…par uski baaton ko mein nazarandaaz bhi ni kr sakta tha…
(Twinkle i do not know if he was saying the truth or not…i only know the fact that u r mine! I can bear anything but i will not be able to take cheating! I have and will always love u…but my blood boils when i see you with someone else…maybe i shouldn’t have talked to u as such yesterday…but i can’t ignore his words either…)
❤️Meanwhile❤️
Person-perfect! Wo word kya tha? Love-birds! Bas maine apne love ko uss bird se alag kar diya jo meri prem kahani ka shani bana pada tha…kisne kaha hai ki beyhadh aashiqui le doobti hai? Vaisi mohabbat jannat dikhati hai…kal apni Twinkle ko gale ni laga paya…afssooos…par inn donnon ke beech aisi aag jalaayi hai jo inn donnon ki prem kahani ko raakh bana degi…
(Perfect! What was that word? Love-birds! I have separated my love from that bird which was flocking on out happiness…who said that passionate love brings u to a dead end? That kind of love makes your world become a heaven…i could not take my Twinkle in my love embrace but i surely will soon…as i am sure that the fire that i have ignited between them will burn their so-called love to pieces….)
❤️Next Scene❤️
Twinkle was trying to talk to Kunj but he was only ignoring her.
Kunj was seated under the same tree when Twinkle sat beside him. He tried to move from there but Twinkle held his wrist.
T(facing the floor)-baat ni karoge mujhse? Gussa ho? Ek baat kahun? Tum na mere favourite butterscotch wali ice-cream ki tarah ho…jab vo gol gol…freezed hota hai tab mujhe bilkul achcha ni lagta…par jab vo pighal jaata hai tab mujhe khaane mein bada mazaa aata hai. Jab tum mujhse rudely behave karte ho tab rone ko jii karta hai…par jab pighal ke vapas mere purane wale sadu sarna ban jaate ho to tumhein pyaar karne ka mann karta hai…beintehaa pyaar…pta hai? Kal se tumhari nazrein mujhpe ilzaam laga rhi hai…mujhse hazaron sawaal pooch to rhi hai…par jawaab sunne se katra rhi hai…maine aisa kya kiya jiske liye mujhe itni bhaari rakam chukani pad rhi hai? Aisa lagta hai ki maine tunhein pyaar karne ka hak kho diya hai…tumhari saason ko mehsoos karne ka hak, tumhein gale lagane ka hak, tumse jhagadne ka hak, tumhari dhadkanon ko sunne ka hak…tumhein dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne ka hak…vo sab ret ki tarah mere haath se phisal rhe hai Kunj…mujhe sambhaloge ni?
(Wont u talk to me? Are u angry? May i say something? U are like my favourite butterscotch ice-cream, which i like to eat when it has melted…but i hate it in the frozen state…the same thing applies to u…i hate when u act rude to me…when u r back to being my sadu sarna i wand to shower unlimited love upon u…do u know? Since yesterday i feel that your eyes are accusing me of having done something really big…ur eyes do carry thousands of questions and they keep asking me myriads of them but i feel that they are reluctant to hear the answers to them…what have i done to bear this? I feel that i have lost all rights that i had on u…that of loving, understanding, fighting with u…all those are slipping from my hand like sand…kunj wont you handle me?)
K-agar meri itni fikar thi to vo sab ni krti jo tumne kiya hai…mera dimaag bahut garam hai Twinkle…mein kuch aisa vaisa kar dunga…haath chodo mera!
(Had u really cared about me then u wouldn’t have done what you have done…i am really pissed off at the moment Twinkle…please let go of me!)
Twinkle wiped her tears and stood to face him.
T-aisa vaisa kaisa bhi ho…mujhe manzoor hai! Tumhein kya lagta hai kunj? Ki tumhare ek baar keh dene se humare beech mein jo dor hai vo toot jaayegi? Agar tumne aisa soch rakha hai to tum duniya ke sabse bade bewakoof aadmi ho. Agar tum dheet ho to mein bhi tumhara PYAAR hoon. Meri zindagi se tumhari chutti kabhi nahin hogi! Samjhe tum? Kabhi bhi nahi!
(Whatever the result may be…i approve of it! What do u think Kunj? If u’ve said so once our relationship will end? If you think as such then u r the silliest person on earth. If you are stubborn then even i am ur LOVE. I will never let go of u! Never ever! Get that?!)
She let go of his hand.
T-humara rishta mar gya hai na? To theek hai…aaj se tum aur main ajnabee…na jaan na pehchaan…mujhe har vo cheez karne ki aazaadi hai jo main chahti hun…aur tumhein mujhe rokne ka hak tabhi milega jab tum mujhpe patiyon wale hak jataoge! Ye Twinkle Kunj Sarna ka vaada hai tumse!
(So our relationship is dead, isnt it? Fine then…as from now onwards we are complete strangers…i have the liberty to do everything that pleases me…and u will have the right to stop me from doing so only when u will be back to normal! This is Twinkle Kunj Sarna’s promise to u!)
Kunj was startled at her words. However…
K-tum rishton mein kabhi kaid hi kahan thi…jo aazaad hona chahti ho…
(When were u bound by relationships that u want to be free today?)
With these words, he went from there while Twinkle’s eyes welled up at his reaction.
T-Mr Kunj Sarna tumne galat insaan se panga liya hai! Abhi tak tumne meri zid ni dekhi…apni bandobas kr lo…kyunki ab mein tumhein aise roller coaster pe daalne wali hoon jiske baad tum khud mujhe gale lagaaoge! Vaat lagvaane ko tayyar ho jaao.
(Mr Kunj Sarna u’ve messed with the weong person! You have not seen my stubbornness yet…get ready to be blown away…because you are going to regrets your doings…)
She smirked looking at him going away.
Precap:Twinkle: i love u romeo..
Yuvi:i love u too jaan.
And they both hugged.
❤️_______to be continued_______❤️
So this is it for this epi…the next will be up really soon. Sorry for having made u wait for so long…was just trying to make it up to the mark.
Really sorry if it was boring…and please do comment…i respect the fact that some people want to stay silent readers…but a word would really boost my confidence…
Hope u’ll enjoy it!
Love u all?
19 Comments
awesome amazing emotional epi….eagerly waiting for next part
Ayu……
Superb dear???
It was amazing???
Excited to know now what will twinkle do to make kunj regret what he has done….. now can’t wait more for the next episode….. plz post soon….. n precap is just awsum
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Love u?
loads of luv??
Take care….
Bye
Orange ????
Aawwwewieeeee!!!!!! Tu dialogue orange nikli re??????
Itneee emotional dialogue haaayeeee!! Maarrr dalaa tu ne toh!!!!! Oh god kahan se sochti hai aise dialogues ?????
On a serious note its not at all boring. It truely depicted twinkle passion and love for kunj. True love ❤️!!!!! I loved it girl. Its just awesome ?? amazing. So lovely.
But precap ????????yeh kya ? rollercoaster pe leke jaa rahi hai tu humien kunj ke sath????????????
Overall its just fabulous
Post soon baby
Love u orange ?
Muahhhhh
Amazing
Post soon
Awesome post waiting for next update
Amazing
Omgggggg…..
Dialogue Queen…..
Tera dialogues..uff..!!!!!!!!
Mujhe….Mardala yaar……!!!!!
Itni acchi dialogue kese likhti hey tu..mujhe v bata jara….its just mind blowing… fabuloussss…… love it to the core……
And the epi was just out standinggggg and emotional……mere twinj kitna hurt hay us UV ke wajese….ab lagtahe twinkle acche se ready ho raha hey kunj ko roller pe ride karwneke liye…. good acchese ride karwana usse…..taki uski nana-nani yaad ajaye acchese…….
Baas ab or nahi jaldhi se post karna plzzzzzzzzzzz………ab jyada wait karayana to dekhlio… ha nahi to…..
Well love you lodssssss………..
And keep smiling……
Hey Ayu,
Well this was damn amazing! Each and every emotion was perfectly described making the reader engrossed in your FF! Well I guess that UV is the person who entangled Twinj’s relationship! Post the next one soon! Love u!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Yaar…..tune Hindi mei PHD kar rakhi hai kya? Matlab kya words….kya sentence formation…. Yaar ye tera first ff hi hai jisme mei English translations nhi padhti…I just love the way u write girl! Moreover I love u….isse toh end karne ki sochna bhi Mat…nd pls next part jaldi Dede yaar….pls pls pls…nd ho sake toh aur lamba…hehe…sorry kuch zyada badi demand hi gyi…I knw u must be busy…but pls try to post soooooonnnnnnnn
Agreed Ritzi..main bhi translations bilkul nahi padhti ?…yaar kya likhti ho Ayu jaan??…soooo Awesome!… But you know..I feel sometimes to grind that Yuvi …uff..Twinj ki life ke itne beautiful stage ki baind Baja k Rakhi hai…and lso …I am soooo excited for the roller coaster!!…
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Ek baat bolu??..dono se..Ritzi and Ayu..mujhe tum dono se abhi khoob gussa ho Jana chahiye…Kyu??…
Khud socho..agar jawaab na mile toh batana..
Phir dekhti hoon….????
Bye
Ayu
Post soon please as i cant wait to read more ?
Ayu kitna wait karvaya it’s just amazing
Jaldi twinj ko Mila do I’m waiting dear
I hope jaldi in dono ko beech San tik ho
N don’t feel sad
It’s just amazing
Love u
Chiku ko pumpkin..vassy sis ko vasiya di aur mujhe nautanki ft…???
Epi pe aajane de warna meri satak jaegi..
So the epi was just brilliant..yaarr ye yuvi ne kya kitta he..mere twinj ko alag kardiya..it was so emotional
Upper se ur dialouge…loved it…
Twinkle my sherni
And precap..- think twinkle ka plan he kunj ko jealous kar waane ka..just a guess..pitiyo mat abb
Over all it was FANTASTIC MINDBOGGLING
Kitna sataya tumne hum teeno ko..abbb jaldi dusra epi post kar warna phirse baat nahi karungi???
Love ya
Post the next epi ASAP
Finally you posted ..
You know what all the while I was just waiting for you to post your episode but then I realised my Ayu is a busy personality 😉
Well I loved the episode it was awesome 🙂
I feel UV has done all this …
Bechara Kunj His heart wants to trust Twinkle but his bhuddhu sa brain …
I love your dialogues kidhar se late hai yeh sab ???
Love you and this time please post soon 🙂
AWESOME ?
That uv ?
Twinj are goals for life ??
Post soon please ?
Love you ❤️️
Jst too good.. hope everything is sorted soon
Solly di !!!
Can’t comment long wanna comment the longest but no time… awesome see bhi awesome update…. damn.. that was lovely…
Post soon..
Love you !!!