Hi Guys!!! Here I’m with the third part of this fanfiction. Hope you’ll will like it
Today’s part begins with Swara’s first day to work after her rest.
“Gauri wake up!!!! Get up idiot!!! Let’s go for jogging!!! Come on!” Swara tried waking up Gauri!
” Swara please let me sleep, we’ll go after an hour.”
“No no get up Gauri, you’ve become unhealthy, lets go, come come get up fast.”
“Fine I’m coming, will you lend me 5 mins to dress up miss Swara Maheswari??” Gauri asked in anger.
”Swara Maheshwari????”
” ehh!!!! Haan……… woh………. haaaan …. maheshwari….. means Durga ma….. ”
“Durga ma?” Swara asked.
” You are like her na, anger and your adamant nature, Bas hogaya, ab chalo, nehi tho hospital ke liye late ho jayenge (Enough now, lets go, or else we’ll be late for hospital).”
“What about my jogging Gauri?” Swara complained.
“Arey baba, jogging ke liye jayenge na, chalo ready ho jao (we’ll go for jogging, go get ready).”
“That’s like my sweety pie, Gauri.”
They both smile.
Swara and Gauri comes dressed up in their track suits.
“Kya mein jaan saktha hoon, yeh tum dono subah subah kaha ja rahe ho (Can I know where u girls are going early morning)?” Om asked while gazing into the newspaper.
“Jogging, and you are not invited Om, because you woke up late.” Swara said
“Oh ho mujhe aana bhi nehi he, jao tum dono (I don’t want to come, you both can go)” Om said with fake anger.
“Par Om tum……. ” Gauri tried to convince Omkara thinking his anger was real but then Swara interrupted and said “Oh come on Gauri, he’s joking, you don’t have to get him convinced.”
Swara pulled Gauri and took her along with her, Gauri walked along while turning back and looking at Om to try to convince him.
Om understood and he winks at her with a cute smile, she smiles like an Indian bride and lowers her gaze. He looks at her till she becomes out of his sight.
They both reach the park and jog.
” Hi Gauri beta, kaisi ho, bohoth din hue tumse milke.” An old man asked.
“Hi uncle, kuch kam se delhi gayi thi.”
” Yeh kaun he tumhare saath?”
“My friend, we stay and work together.”
“Bitiya, mere vo ghutno ka dard phirse shuru ho gaya.”
“Swara, you can continue if you want, I’ll join you, or else come with me, let me just ……”
“No no, I’ll continue…. see you.” Swara said.
As she walks, Swara notices a crowd of children, shouting…. “Bhaiyya!!! Get up, what happened to you….. get up Bhaiyya.”
Swara runs to the scene and peeps into the crowd. A guy was lying unconscious. She sits on her knees and gets closer to him to check what’s wrong.
“Bhooohh!!!! The guy sprung up and scared everyone. Swara sprung back and was about to loose balance but the guy held her hand.
” Oh I’m sorry, I was just scaring them, sorry to involve you in this, mein bas bachon ke saath mazak kar raha tha, apko daraane ka mera koi irada nehi tha (I didn’t intent to scare you).” He said.
She smiles and replies ” Its ok, I know I know, bechare bache dar gaye (poor children they became scared). She said and looked at the children. “Bache bhaiyya ne tume dara diya na, tho badla do bantha he na (Children, he scared you na, so you deserve to take revenge right)!!!! She says to the children with a naughty smile.
“Nehi nehi nehi” the guy says when the children jumped on him and tickled him.
“Sorry sorry maaf karoooo, I wont repeat it, I promise.” He shouts
Swara laughs.
The children gets up and laughs along with Swara.
The guy looks at Swara and is mesmerised. He admires her childishness and her naughtiness.
“Bhaiyya, didi ko aise math dekho, dhapad padegi (Brother, don’t look at her like that, you’ll get a slap from her.” A girl said.
They all smile at his embarrassed expression and he gets up.
“Chalo chalo, tum log jaake khelo….. (Go go, you guys go and play) ” he said to the children.
The children ran to play and they both watched them with a smile.
“Its so good to remain a child right, no worries and life is full of energy, with sweet little pranks” Swara says lost in the sight of joyful children.
“Anyways you are not less at pranks, my stomach still aches.” He said.
Swara laughs.
“What were you doing, scaring those poor children, you had to see their faces when they thought you were unconscious.” Swara said.
“Arey yaar mazak tha, mazak ki itni badi saza (it was a joke, such a big punishment for a joke?” he said with a complaining expression.
She laughed.
“Anyways I’m Swara.”
He smiles and jumps up inside!!!
“I’m Sanskar.”
“Aur itne saare bache (and all these children)??” Swara asked.
“Tum in sabke naam bhi jaana chahthe ho (You want to know all there names too)?” Sanskar asked.
“Nehi bhudhu, yeh sab tumhare (No you fool, these are your)?” Swara asked pointing towards the children.
” Oh, I’m there hostel warden!”
“Oh my God, how can parents put these small children in hostel” Swara asked in concern.
“Its not their fault, its God’s fault who snatched their parents from them.” Sanskar said.
Swara looked at him in shock. “Tumhara mathlab he yeh bache (you mean they are)…..” before Swara could complete Sanskar said ….”Our children.”
Swara looked at him confused.
“Me and my friend look after them. They are our children.” Sanskar said.
She was still not out of the shock of what she had just heard.
Sanskar interrupts her thought and asks “You came alone?”
“No with my friend Gauri.” She replied pointing to Gauri sitting in a bench talking to the old man.
Gauri gets up and walks towards Swara.
“Ok you’re friends coming to join you. You carry on, we’ve to go.”
“I’ll introduce you to Gauri.”
“Its time for their breakfast, some other day, when we go for a coffee probably.” Sanskar said.
“Ohh that’s a smart way of invite to coffee haan.” Swara said.
“You’re late to realise that I’m smart, sab log dekhthe hi samajh jaathe he (everyone realises as soon as they see me)” he replies smartly and smiles.
They look at each other and Sanskar walks in reverse direction, not taking off his eyes from her and slowly turns and takes the children with him. When he enters the car he looks at her and waves. She smiles.
“Kaun tha woh (Who was that)? Gauri enquired.
“Sanskar” she replied still looking at their car passing by.
“WHO??”
“I’ll tell you later, now come or I’ll be late on the first day itself.”
” Ya fine.”
Om drops the ladies to their clinic and all of them get down the car. He wishes Swara good luck for her first day. She thanks him and excitedly goes inside.
Scenes at the same time
***Outside hospital in the parking lot
Gauri is about to follow her when Om holds her hand pulls her closer.
“Omkara ji, chodo, log kya sochenge(Leave me, what would people think)? Gauri asked looking here and there.
“Tumhe aas paas koi dikhraha he Gauri (Do you see anyone around)” Om asked.
“Nehi par koi aa jayega, Swara vapas aajaegi (No, someone will come or Swara will come back).” Gauri said
” Ghar me tho mujhe good morning aur good night kiss nehi milthi, ab tho deke jao (I don’t get my good mng and good n8 kiss at home, give atleast now).”
“Omkara ye kaisi mazak he, chodo mujhe please, teeke aaj ghar pe de doongi, pakka (What a joke is this, leave me please, ok today I’ll give you at home, promise.” Gauri promised.
“Tho Swara.” Om asked
“Woh mein manage karloongi (I’ll manage it)” She said.
Om frees her and she turned to leave but stops. She turned towards him and said “Mujhe tang karne mein bada maza aatha he na aapko (You enjoy troubling me right).”
Om smiled and said “Ok baba, mazak tha, sorry.”
“Ok ok, don’t repeat it.” Gauri said acting like a teacher.
“Acha, aisi bath he,….” Om said and tried to catch her, but she ran before he could hold. They both look at each other and smile. Gauri takes her phone and Om receives her call, “Love you Omkara ji”. Gauri said.
“Gauri tum mere parivaar vaaloke liye mujhe ji kehke bulathi ho, par mere liye tum please hum jaise the, vaise hi rehne do, mujhe vo badmash, nautangi karne vali Gauri hi chahiye, jo chulbul pandey ki fan thi(Gauri, you call me ji for my family, but for me, be the way you used to be, I want that naughty, drama queen Gauri , who was chulbul pandey’s fan)” Om said.
“Arey haan hamare Salman ji (Ya ours Salman Khan) Gauri said in excitement.
Om looks at her with all his love.
Gauri smiles shyly and replied “Love u my cutie OMOOO…. ”
“Now that’s like my girl”.
They both smile, Gauri goes to Swara and Om leaves.
***Inside hospital
Swara ran into the hospital and stood at a corner to get a look of everything around her.
“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING, DON’T YOU HAVE COMMON SENSE……….” A doctor was yelling at the nurse.
“Humans make mistakes, why does that doctor have to insult the nurse in front of so many people.” Swara thought.
“MEIN NEHI BAIT SAKTHA ITNE DHER THAK, TUM APNE CHECKUP KARVAO, MEIN GADI BHEJOONGA, MUJHE AB KAAM KE LIYE JAANA HE.” A husband shouting at his pregnant wife.
“How can a husband even talk like that to his pregnant wife, after all she’s carrying his child, how cruel can people be, her face showed, how much pain she was in.” She thought.
So many old people sitting in a row and seemed like didn’t have anyone along with them.
“Their family should have had the minimum courtesy to come along with them to hospital, how come people have become so heartless.”
While she was noticing all this, she saw a crippled old man walking with great difficulty. Suddenly the man was about to trip, and Swara ran towards him.
Before the man could fall, Swara and a doctor held him.
“Uncle aapke saath koi he (Uncle do you have someone with you?” asked the doctor.
“Haan meri beti he, voh goliya lene gai (Ya my daughter is their, went to buy medicines)”
“Teeke, jab tak woh nehi aathi aap yaha baitiye (Till she returns, you sit here, ok) He said.
They both help the old man settle down on a chair. Both of them walk past together looking at the old man, then faced each other.
“Aap aise bhaag dhod math keejiye, iss waqt khayal rakhna chaahiye, (Don’t run too much, you have to take care during this time).” He said.
“Iss waqt mathlab (What do you mean by during this time)? She asked.
“Vo……Mera mathlab he……, aapko dekhe lagtha he ki aapko sar me chot lagi he, tho apna khayal rakhna (No looking at you, it seems like you’ve got a head injury, so take care of yourself.)” he stammered.
“OH! ” Swara replied still confused.
”Hi I’m Dr. Laksh” Laksh says putting forward his hand towards Swara.
***
Swara is about to shake hands with him when suddenly Gauri holds her hand and angrily looks at Laksh and takes Swara with her.
Swara doesn’t notice Gauri’s look, but she was surprised at Gauri’s reaction.
“Gauri, I was talking to him.” Swara said.
“We’ll be late, come now.” Gauri said very seriously.
Gauri and Swara goes to see the manager and joins back to work. Gauri guides her to her cabin, and tells her about the hospital and then Gauri leaves.
While Gauri walks to her cabin, she gets a call.
Gauri on a phone call…….
“Mana ki thi na maine tumhe, mana ki thi na uske saamne aane se (I had warned you right, didn’t I), phir bhi tumne nehi mani meri baath (Still you didn’t listen to me)!!” Gauri said in anger.
“Uske pathi bankar tho nehi aaya na! She does not have to forcefully remember anything. To her I’m a total stranger. Isn’t this new idea cool Gauri!!!.”
Gauri still not convinced and was very irritated.
Precap : Swara is walking in the hospital isle, while a child runs by her side and pushed her, she slips and before she could fall, someone catches her to balance her and with one hand on her stomach.
” Sanskar??” Swara asked.
” Careful Swara.” Sanskar said while his hand was on her stomach.
She looked at him in surprise, and he reflexely takes his hands off her.
That’s all for today and hope you’ll enjoy today’s episode.
Thanks to all who read my fanfiction. Thanks a lot and keep reading.
20 Comments
Dear I am loving it but I hope it’s swasan
Please make it swalak coz swara is already married to him, don’t break their story
I assure you, this fanfiction will not break any Indian values!!!!!
nice
Thank you anu
Thank you Ria!!! 🙂
Superrrrrrrrrrr……. But I want om gauri sscene more…. This my request….
I’ll surely consider your request dr!!!! 🙂
Superrrrrrrrrrr……. But I want om gauri sscene more…. This is my request….
I love this story very much.
I am committing for 1st time because of my class and exam.
Please keep it swalak as pair
All the best for your exams…. Do well 🙂
mindblowing but confusing too
Thankooo all…. Keep reading…. Confusions will be away soon…..
Nice
Thank u
how you all know that Swalak are married 🙁
superb story like noval it’s interesting but confessing whether it’s laksh or sanskar baby in swara womb …..pls it must be sanskar I like swasan pair very much
Thankyou 🙂
Mind blowing episode di…u r a great writer….???????
post soon!!
Thanku da……. Will update soon…. :-* :-* :-*