Hi Guys! ! I know the suspense is irritating many of them. But I request you to please wait, this story is not an on the spot script, I have already prepared it, I just make small changes according to your requests like adding Om-Gauri scenes and all. I thank you all for reading and request you to keep reading. I’m introducing new characters, so that while the suspense goes on on one side, you can enjoy the romance of already known pairs and a new love story. Thanks to all those who read and thanks for all the comment.
Link to previous episode: : Part 7
*** Hospital***
Sanskar is worried for Swara and thought about calling Gauri, but he stopped himself because he thought she would yell at him. Just them an idea popped up in his mind. Sanskar drove home.
***MAHESWARI HOUSE***
Ragini entered Laksh’s room. She looked for him around and didn’t find him.
She thought of waiting for him in the room and took a book on his table and sat on his bed to read the summary behind the book. Suddenly she heard the washroom door open.
“AHHHHHH……. “ She shouted, covered her eyes and turned around.
“What are you doing here?.”Laksh asked in surprise.
“What am I doing!!! Don’t you have any shame Lucky, will anyone leave the room’s door open while taking a bath.” She asked still standing with her face covered.
“ Oh really!!! My washroom door was closed OK!.”
“What ever, just put some clothes quickly.”
“Just pass my clothes, its in front of you, lying in the bed.”
“Hoh!!! No…. I’m not going to turn around”
“Oh hello, I have worn a towel ok.”
“CHIIII…… Mein shareef ghar ki ladki hoon, nangee ladko ko nehi dekhthi (I’m from a decent family, I don’t look at naked guys.”
Laksh walked close to her without making any noise. Ragini expected a reply and looked surprised when she didn’t get.
“Lucky??? Lucky???? Why are you not telling anything???” She asked
Still he didn’t respond.
“Lucky” she checked once again and turned …………………. And….. OMG………. Ragini was in Laksh’s arms.
They were lost in each others eyes. She felt Laksh’s arm move in her waist and she was worried.
***Bg music***
{{{Ik pal bhi tu mujhse (Even for a moment)
Hotha nehi he juda (you are not separated from me)
Eh khuda….. eh khuda…. Eh khuda….. eh khuda……. (Oh God) }}} [Song from hate story 2 – Kabhi aaine pe likha tujhe]
He balanced her and slowly took his arm away from her waist and looked here and there. Both felt awkward to start a conversation.
Laksh went close to Ragini and Ragini felt confused. She didn’t know what was going on and didn’t know if to stop him or not, she stepped back but after two steps the table next to the bed stopped her. Now she was fully puzzled. She didn’t know how to cover her feelings for Laksh and feared if it reflected on her face , on the way she looked at Laksh. She felt Laksh’s arm on her hands and looked at it and then at him in surprised.
***Bg music***
{{{Eh khuda……eh khuda…..eh khuda…..eh khuda…..}}} [Kabhi aaine pe]
“Shareef ghar ki ladki hoke, kaise dekh rahi ho tum, sharam nehi aathi.” Laksh asked and smiled mischeviously.
Ragini turned her face and said “Woh mein……. “ she stammered.
He took his dress from the bed and moved away from her.
“I actually came to say sorry, I didn’t know you’ll be angry when I said……… “ Ragini said but Laksh went close to her and said “This is
not the answer to my question Ragini.”
“RAGINI….. LAKSH…… Khaana khaane neeche aajaooo (Come down for lunch)” Sujatha called out.
Ragini ran out of the room. She came out and smiled, she covered the blush on her face with her hands.
***Bg music***
{{{Eh khuda……Eh khuda……Eh khuda…..eh khuda……}}} [Kabhi aaine pe]
In the room, Laksh dressed himself up without any change in reaction.
***SWARA’S RESIDENCE***
Swara came out after her bath and was worried. She sat on her bed and cried. She took out her phone and tried to unlock it, but she didn’t remember the password. She took out her laptop and tried to unlock it to, but she couldn’t unlock it either. She cried at the confusion.
“Why did you do this to me God, why have you put me in such a situation, I want an answer……..” she complained to God and cried.
“But I’m not going to accept defeat, because…………” she was convincing herself suddenly flashes of memories of someone telling her a dialogue came in her memory, she couldn’t see face but the dialogue was clear “You cant accept defeat Swara because you are a fighter and I’m there with you in every step keep.” that memory gave her confidence. She decided to find out who her husband was.
“Now I’m not going to step back, I’m going to find out my husband, before that I have to find out who all know that I’m pregnant. Its sure that Gauri is aware of my pregnancy, but if I ask she wouldn’t give me an answer, now whatever has to done should be between me ………. and my BABY…. Right mera bacha.” She talked to herself, wiped her tears, and smiled with confidence keeping a hand on her stomach.
***MAHESWARI HOUSE***
Sanskar entered the house, he went upto his room and changed his clothes. He did everything in a rush because what concerned him was to know about Swara and he didn’t have any idea better that seeking Ragini’s help. He tried calling Omkara but he didn’t pick up the call. Maybe he was busy at work, Sanskar assumed.
Sanskar saw Ap on the way and asked “Where is Ragini, Ma?”
“Maine socha voh tere kamre me hogi, (I thought she was in your room)”
“No Ma, I was in hospital and just came now.”
“She ate her food and maybe went back to her room.”
Sanskar checked for Ragini in her room but didn’t find her, finally he remembered that Ragini always sat alone in the terrace. He went to the terrace and saw her there, he held her hand and took her along with him to her room and locked the room from inside in a hurry.
“Jhalli, I need your help and its very important.”
“Calm down Sanskar, and tell.”
Before Sanskar could tell what he wanted from her, Laksh knocked on her door.
“Jhalli, Jhalli, open the door, I want a help from you.”
“Yeh tum dono bhai, hamesha se ek hi baath kehthe ho (Both of you brothers always say the same things), and I’m sure this is going to be the same.” She said and went to open the door.
“Wait let me hide, 1 min.” Sanskar said and hide under the bed.
Ragini stood puzzled and thought why he had to hide.
Laksh entered her room and sensed her weird attitude.
“Why do you look worried.”
“No nothing, tell me what help you want.” She asked.
Actually Swara fought with me this morning, and I want to see her. You know Gauri is not going to let me meet her, she thinks it would affect Swara’s health and you are the only one who can help me.
Ragini’s face went dull but she couldn’t say no to Laksh.
“Let me think” she replied.
“No need to think, I have the idea too.”
“Did you meet Gauri yet, no right, she is your sister, go and meet her, and ask them for an outing, rest I’ll manage.”
“I had called up Gauri when I came itself, she said she’ll meet me in the evening, during the party.”
“Oh today there is Omkara’s party right, great I’ll meet her there, thanks for telling Jhalli, Bye.” He said and left her room ignoring her.
Ragini closed the door and Sanskar came out from under the bed.
“I’m sure what you wanted was also to meet Swara, you can meet her in the party.” She said.
“Ya I know, but I cant wait till then, I just want to know how she was, just call Gauri and ask her Ragini.”
Ragini called up Gauri, the phone was on speaker and Ragini and Sanskar got to know the incidents that occurred in the morning. Sanskar angrily stepped out of Ragini’s room and went to his room.
Ap saw Sanskar leaving her room and asked Ragini.
“Kya hua beta, voh phir se ghussa hoke chala gaya kya, tumhe patha he na Sanskar ka gussa, jao ab, use manao, ab tho jagadne aur manane ki aadath daalni padegi tumhe (What happened dear? Did he go away in anger again, you know his anger right, now go and convince him, anyways you have to make a habit of fighting and convincing from now onwards).” She said with a smile and turned to leave…. Ragini tried to stop her “Maasi….. voh mein…..” but Ap didn’t stop and walked away. She stood their puzzled.
She ignored Ap’s dialogue and went to Sanskar’s room.
She saw Sanskar throwing all the things here and there and got worried. She tried to stop him. But all in vain. Sanskar threw a vase…. It broke into pieces…….
”AAAAAAAhhhh” Ragini howled in pain. Sanskar ran to her and hurried to first aid.
***Bg music***
{{{Muskuraane ki wajah tum ho (You are the reason for my smile)
Gungunaane ki wajah tum ho (You are the reason for my humming)
jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na (I can’t live, can’t live,)
o re piya re (Can’t live (without you), O beloved.)}}} [Song from movie city lights – Muskuraane ki wajah]
She looked at him and said “Sanskar, we have to do something, I will help you by all means to get Swara.”
“Don’t you want to get Laksh.” He asked.
“You can’t snatch love Sanskar, Laksh doesn’t love me, what I can do is only try to win his heart.”
“Now Swara has lost her memory, its our best chance to confuse Laksh, when Swara is around him, its difficult to take his attention off Swara, now that Swara is not around, make him realise about your love, I’ll help you in that.” He said.
“But Sanskar, Laksh already loves Swara right.”
Sanskar stood up in anger and shouted “SWARA MERI HE!!! USKE UPAR KISI KA HAQ NEHI HE, SIRF MERI HE…. SIRF MERI….. (Swara is mine! Only I have right over her).
Ragini got tensed seeing Sanskar angry again. Seeing her worried, Sanskar calmed himself down and he did her first aid and helped her to her room.
“You just tell me if you can help me Ragini, if not for me, atleast for the fact that you would get Laksh.”
“Can that happen Sanskar”
“I’ll make it happen.”
She thought for sometime and finally agreed “Yes I’ll help you because I love Laksh and I tried to convince myself all this while that I can live without him, but I always knew I cant, but is this cheating Sanskar?”
“Arey Jhalli, Everything is fair in love and war.”
Sanskar helped Ragini to her room.
Ap and Sujatha saw them, Ap smiled.
“Dono ek saath ache lag rahe he na (They look good together right)!” Ap said.
“Par Sankar, uss chori Swara se bohoth pyaar kartha he na (But Sanskar loves Swara a lot right)?” Sujatha said.
“Don’t dare take that girls name, she spoiled my both son’s life, they were like Ram Lakshman and see how they are now, all their fights are all because of her, if Gauri was not married, both your bhanji’s would have been my daughter in laws, but its ok, I’ll make everything fine. I’ll not let that girl enter both my son’s life. Everything was going well when my son decided to marry, but everything went wrong because of that Swara, she is such a shameless girl, and there is no place for such a girl in my family.”
{{{ Gauri and Ragini are sisters }}}
“Par Jhettaniji, Ragini ki pasand tho hum nehi jaanthe na (But we don’t know Ragini’s choice right)?”
“Isme jaanne ki kya baath he Sujatha, undono ko dekho, sab dikh raha he, aur tumne dekha na kaise Sanskar ne bohoth pyaar se uske liye pakode banaye the, aur use dekhar woh kitni kush thi (What is there to know in that, just look at both of them, everything is visible,and you saw right how Sanskar made pakoda for her with love, and she was so happy seeing it)!!!
“Haan jhettanigi, voh tho hai (Ya you are right jhettanigi).” Sujatha replied.
***Ragini’s room***
Sanskar and Ragini plan. Ragini refused for something what Sanskar said but finally agreed.
Sanskar and Ragini parted ways and Ragini went to Laksh’s room.
***Laksh’s room***
“Lucky, from the time I have come, you didn’t take me for an outing, come I have to shop for today evening’s party.”
“I’m busy Ragini, I’m busy with some arrangements for today’s party, ask Sanskar to take you.”
“He already went to the auditorium to monitor the arrangement, come Lucky please…..” she requested.
Ap passed by the room and heard the conversation.
“Leke ja use Laksh, hamare ghar ki bachi he, party mein achi lagni chahiye na (Take her for shopping Laksh, she’s daughter of our house, should look good in the party right).”
Laksh agreed.
Laksh waited near the car for Ragini.
Ragini came and they entered the car. Ragini struggled with the car seat belt. Laksh noticed and laughed.
“Tumhe ek car ki seat belt bhi lagaana nehi aathi, Jhalli kahinki (Don’t you even know put a seat belt, crazy fellow)” he mocked and went close to her.
Seeing him coming close she worried, his hands came close to her face but crossed her face, she felt relieved but her eyes followed his hand and saw it went towards the seat belt. She turned and …. she felt her breath just stopped. Laksh was so close to her, she didn’t know how to react but couldn’t take her eyes off Laksh. Somewhere inside she wished that if that moment would have taken a pause for a lifetime and she would always be with Laksh.
***Bg Music***
{{{ Main toh tere shab ki subah hoon na (I’m the morning of your nights)
Haathon ki lakeeron mein likha hoon na ( I’m written in the lines of your palms)}}} [Song from movie 1920 London- Rootta kyun]
***Sujatha’s room***
Sujatha talking to herself.
“Jab mere didi aur jiju ke mauth hui thi, tho sasural me rehkar mein nehi sambhal pai Ragini aur Gauri ko, who chori Swara aur uske parivaarvalo ne sambhala meri bachiyon ko, aur bhagvan ke kripa se meri bachi Gauri ko Omkara jaisa ladka mila, ab Ragini ko bhi acha ladka milni chahiye, jhettaniji ji jaisa sochthi he vaisa bilkul nehi hone doongi, Sanskar se shaadi karke mein apni Ragini ki zindigi kharab hone nehi doongi, meri bachi keliye mein ek acha ladka doondoongi, ithna karna mera farz he. (When my sister and her husband died, because I was in my husband’s house, I couldn’t take care of Ragini and Gauri, that girl Swara and her family members took care of my children, and with God’s blessings, my daughter Gauri got a husband like Omkara, now Ragini should also get a nice guy, I will not let anything happen like Ap wishes, I will not let Ragini’s life spoil by marrying Sanskar, I will search for a better guy for her, to do that much is my responsibility.) Sujatha determined to take a good decision in Ragini’s life.
Ap called out Sujatha.
“Kya hua jhettaniji (What happened)?”
“Avni is coming today right?” she asked.
“Haan who aa rahi he, Laksh aur Ragini pehle Avni ko lene jaayenge, aur theeno saath me shopping ke liye jaayenge, maine Laksh ko bathaya tha ki meri beti ko bhi party ke liye kapde khareedhne honge. (Yes she is coming, Laksh and Ragini will first pick up Avni, then the three of them will go for shopping, I told laksh that my daughter will also want to by dress for the party.”
“Voh bhi kuch kehne ki baath he, hamari Avni tho kal party me samse jhajegi, pari jo dikhthi he woh (Is that to be said, our Avni is going to be the best in the party because she looks like a fairy.” Said Ap.
“Voh tho hai, meri bachi tho iss duniya ki sabse khubsoorath he (Ya you are right, my daughter is the world’s most beautiful).” Sujatha said.
“Aur apne bhaiyyoki laadli (And her brother’s pet).” Said Ap.
Precap: ***Hospital***
Swara is searching for something in all the drawers in a cabin. She got a photo in one of the drawer and is shocked to see it.
That’s all for today. Don’t worry guys 50% of the suspense will be cleared probably by Part 10, i.e, the one whom Gauri and Om has been speaking through phone, i.e, the one Gauri and Om says is Swara’s husband. Keep reading to know what exactly happened before Swara’s memory loss and is keeping Swara’s husband away from her and what makes him to remain silent. Why isn’t he stopping his brother who is trying to get close to his wife. Is it he who is at fault, or his brother. Who is Swara’s love among them? Keep reading to know the answers to all these questions. Thankyou for patiently reading.
33 Comments
its lovely i am loving it dear. I can imagine ragini’s character as Anushka of Crazy stupid ishq. funny bubbly same type of dressing nice. and Swara I am thinking how she would be
Thankyou sooo much dear 🙂
Nice
Thankyou
Ragini is really cute in this ff, how I missed to read this ff?
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Awww!!!! Thankyou dear!!
Awesome
Thankyou simi
Nyc
Thankyou sus
Cute raglak and ragsan bond hope everybody got their true love in last and hope ragini clear misunderstanding between sanlak
Thankyou!!!!
So good post soon
I post once in three days dear. If everything’s fine then next episode will be posted on 26th
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Thankyou sinni… Thankyou Follybraverl
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Thankyou sus
superbbb dear….ragsan and raglak scenes r supper…loved it alot…
Thankyou dear
Nice….But how could you give both raglak n rag….san romantic song…..
That is just a part of keeping suspense!! Even swasan and swalak has romantic music dear!!! Thank you for reading dear
nice
Thankyou Sanji
it is very very interesting ,very very confusing who ever its swra hubend or her son father,its must be swasan love
Thankyou and keep reading dear
swasan
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