Hey guys I am mahi….I am new to this ishqbaaz page and I seriously love the show…I am so obsessed with it….the show really gives a new meaning….so I decided to start my own fanfiction…if I get support then I will continue this is just the intro…the name of my fanfiction will be I hate you to I love you
Some of this characters are different…I will focus more on shivaay and anika but ishkara and romya will also come…
CHARACTER SKETCH
SHIVAAY GOENKA: A VERY POOR GUY WHO SELLS MILK TO OTHER PEOPLE’S HOME FOR MONEY…HE IS VERY NICE AND NOT ARROGANT LIKE IN THE SHOW….HE LOVES HIS TWO BROTHERS OMKARA AND RUDRA VERY MUCH AND CAN DO ANYTHING FOR THEM….ALL THREE BROTHERS STAY TOGETHER BUT THEIR PARENTS ARE DEAD…..
OMKARA GOENKA: A STRAIGHT FORWARD GUY WHO LOVES DRAWING…HE SELLS HIS PAINTINGS AND EARNS MONEY FOR HIS FAMILY….HE KNOWS HOW POOR THEY ARE SO THEY ALL HAVE TO SPEND THEIR MONEY CAREFULLY….HE IS VERY MATURE AND KNOWS WHAT IS RIGHT AND WRONG…
RUDRA GOENKA: VERY CALM…NOT LIKE IN THE SHOW THE FLIRTY TYPE…HE KNOWS HOW TO RESPECT GIRLS….HE IS A DANCER…HE TEACHES PEOPLE HOW TO DANCE…..HE EARNS MONEY FROM TEACHING PEOPLE HOW TO DANCE
ISHANA RAM SINGH: SHE IS SISTER OF SOUMYA AND ANIKA….LOVES THEM DEARLY….SHE PLAYS INSTRUMENTS AT ART GALLERIES….SHE IS NOT A CON GIRL IN MY STORY BUT SHE IS A VERY UNDERSTANDING GIRL…..
SOUMYA RAM SINGH: SHE DREAMS OF BECOMING A DANCER….SHE WANTS TO TAKE DANCE CLASSES BUT FEARS BECAUSE OF HER WEIGHT….SHE THINKS HER WEIGHT IS GOING TO STOP HER FROM DANCING….
ANIKA RAM SINGH: SHE IS THE TOP BUISNESSWOMAN…AFTER THEIR PARENTS DIED SHE TOOK THE WHOLE BUISNESS IN HER HAND…SHE IS VERY EDUCATED….SHE IS ARROGNAT AND HATES LOWER STATUS PEOPLE…SHE THINKS THEY ARE USELESS….
SO GUYS THIS WAS MY INTRO TO THE CHARACTERS….I HOPE YOU ALL LOVE IT AND LET ME GIVE YOU A PROMO OF HOW MY STORY WILL BE
A big car stops in front of a big office….it says ARS in very big letters….a lady comes out wearing high heels and professional clothes….she has a huge handbag in her hand and has her hair down…she walks inside and all employees stand up and nervously say hello ma’am….she just nods and goes straight to her cabin….she sits on her chair and turns the chair…her face is shown…she is anika….she smirks
The screen shifts to ram singh mansion….soumya and ishana are having their breakfast….soumya says di I don’t like it at all that anika di always goes to office before us and she doesn’t even have breakfast with us….ishana says yes somu I really hope anika di finds someone who can change her thinking…soumya and ishana think while the screen shifts to a poor small condo….
It shows shivaay in a milk wala attire and getting ready to take milk to everyone’s home…om and rudra say bye to shivaay and he smiles…om and rudra leave to their work….om says rudra I really can’t stand shivaay giving milk to others….rudra says yes bhaiyya and that is why we both work too so we can tell bhaiyya to stop selling milk….om and rudra smile and go to their work…
Shivaay goes to everyone’s home when he stops in front of ram singh mansion….he thinks one day I will give this much luxuries to both my brothers…he smiles and goes inside the mansion….he rings the bell and ishana opens the door….she says hi shivaay…shivaay says hey ishana…she smiles and shivaay says do you guys want milk today….ishana says sure….he smiles and gives it to her….ishana always gives a 10 dollar tip to shivaay because she knows he has two brothers who he has to handle….whenever shivaay comes ishana always opens the door so both are friends you can say…
Shivaay knows soumya and ishana but he has never seen anika but he knows that they both have an elder sister…he thinks anika is also caring and sweet like ishana and soumya….he goes home….he counts his money and says 110 dollars….he smiles…he takes it and puts them in a jar….he cooks for om and rudra and waits for them to come home….
Soumya says to ishana di I am going to go check other dance academies today…every dance academy I have been to has always said no to me because I am fat and they can’t handle over weighted people…ishana says don’t say like that somu I’m sure there is someone out there who will agree to teach you to dance…on the other side rudra is seen teaching all ages how to dance…he enjoys spending time with them and loves teaching them to dance….
Soumya goes to every dance academy when she sees one…it says SOR DANCE ACADEMY….she thinks let me try there…she prays the owner accepts her….soumya goes inside and says excuse me…can I speak to the owner of this academy? Rudra hears here and turns around….he says yes I am the owner…when soumya sees him her mouth opens wide…she thinks this young man is the owner….she gulps and says sir I am soumya and I want to learn how to dance….soumya gets scared because she feels like he will also say no
She thinks before he insults me I should leave…she starts going but rudra shouts from the back hey wait…soumya stops and says where are you going? Don’t you want to learn how to dance? Soumya can’t believe it she says really…he says yes…wait what was your name again? She says soumya….rudra says soumya you can start from tomorrow….soumya is so happy she just runs to rudra and hugs him and says thank you so much Mr. bodybuilder…..she laughs and says no problem…soumya realizes what she is doing and breaks away….
Ishana goes to the art gallery where om was waiting for his to be sold….ishana is holding onto her guitar and looking down when she bumps into someone…she wasn’t looking and says sorry…om says no problem…ishana thinks wow such an handsome voice yaar….she looks up and sees his eyes….she thinks arrey yaar such handsome eyes…om says miss are you fine? She says yes and thank you! He smiles and says no problem….both smile
SCREEN FREEZES ON ISHKARA SMILING….ROMYA HUGGING….SHIVIKA IN THEIR OWN PLACES
PRECAP: FIRST MEETING OF SHIVIKA….HOW WILL BOTH REACT?? WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN AN ARROGANT AND RICH GIRL COLLIDES WITH A POOR AND CARING GUY???
GUYS THIS WAS MY INTRO….I WILL POST PART 1 ONLY IF I GET ENOUGH COMMENTS AND SUPPORT
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Mahi nice intro but y shivaay is a milkman he should b sum thing else I am sorry but I can’t c shivaay like this plz change his occupation other then that the story is Nice????
Best of luck???????
Wooo ishqbaaz reversed… Imagined shivaaye selling milk lol….superb story dear plz continue….
Wooo… Ishqbaaz reversed… Superb dear plz continue…
Mahi it is a very nice intro . But I feel if Shivaay should be a caterer or a servant in ram Singh’s house. Anyways I know that you are one of the members in ishqbaaz family in comments . And all the best. And forgot to mention, please continue as I can’t stop thinking about your ff. ???
Hey nice idea of reversal.. but shivay milkman.. seriously. . No yaar.. He should be someone else.. may be a new employee in anika’s office.. As u said she stays in office all the time.. then shivay being her employee and she insults him on the ground that he is poor.. that will be fair game i think..
One more thing I didn’t understand if somu is anika’s sister then she must be as rich as anu then why she can’t hire a personal dance teacher.. which rich ppl can easily hire even if they are healthy. . Just my thought.. and ishu also she can easily own all art gallery of the city then why she plays guitar there.. These are few things i felt. . Rest is superb..
I agree with you Nidhi. These are the things I noted too and chalo baqi sb ignore kr bh do pr Shivaye as a milkman. No please. I was about to comment the same thing k yiu can show him as an employe in her office OR if he cooks well then he can run his catering business pr imagining him as a milkman is impossible. The imagination sounds hillarious when I imagine him in a professional doodh wala avatar ?
Happy raksha bandhan guys
But ..its good but u know..im not complainting but it would be better if it was like how it was in the show and just the new story cuz (for me) its very hard to even imagine the three bro’s as poor especially shivaye and anika and arrogant omg i cant imagine ..and pls dont nake him a milkman atleast that us too much ya…atleast he can be..middle class but not low class..and this charector dont even suits nakul ..i dont mean to say that tge hero should be rich and heroine poor but there is smthing called “standard” not to be rude but lead as a milkman is just ?..atleast if they can be buisness rivals or smthing like dat but anyone..(even if i ,u or anika) would not fall in love with a MILKMAN nit to insult any occupation but atleast anika is a wedding plsnner ..sorty if i hurt someones feeling ..-and soumya is so rich thay can hire a persnal dance teacher why to suffer cuz its pretty easy for us even if they r over weight
I agree dear…this is why unchanging his job since a lot say they can’t imagine shivaay aka nakul as milkman:) I glad you presented your feelings to me and I worried about hurting me because I know how much it’s difficult to imagine someone as a totally different character:)