Hy guyss Maria again wid prt 7 sorry fr delay….
So lets start:
(sharam reach kapoors villa)
(dey luk at eachothr )
Shr: ammmm….. tumhara ghar aagaya sumo….
(Sumo realizes) oh yess….. thanks…..come
Shr: wht…?? Nai nai i m going….. U go….
Sumo : dis is nt done yr i want to thank u…… plz at least ek coffee plzzz……. 🙂
——- she makes a puppy face—–
Shr: oo god…. (laughs) emotional blacmail huh..?? 😀
—— Sumo nods naughtily——
—– dey go insids d villa—–
Shr: where is everyone??
Sumo: i think dey went out fr shopping…. i think…. kyun ke unhon ne kaha tha wo subha chale jaain gai…
Shr: so y didnt u go wid dem…??
Sumo: impor work.!! Tha!! ( naughtily)
Shr: ooohoooo han han impor work
Sumo: betho i will make coffee…..
Shr:ok
(she goes to kitchen)
——- he coms frm behind—–
hmm nice….. he says in her ears…..
(she smiles n luks back)
Sumo: kya nice…… 😉
Shr: umm……wo…coffee…..nice coffee….. 😀
Sumo: thanks
—– aftr a while—–
—- dey both comes out wid coffee in their hands——
(they sit on the couch)
Shr: coffee is relly nice….taste se bhi….
Sumo smiles……
Sumo: acha…..waise kuch kehna Tha…. Ammm Tha…thank u….
(Shr luks on)
Shr: fr wat…??
Sumo: fr saving me…. n also fr driving me home…. (smiles)
Shr: oohooo thank u se kam nai chale ga i should also get smthng in return also…… 😀
Sumo: han han.. Anything bolo….. or afterall u saved myvlife its nt a small thing… ask…
Shr: anythng…… tumne kaha
Sumo: han bolo bhi…..
( come close to her more n more)
Shr: i want……..
Sumo in mind: no.no….no… plz dont
—– she close he eyes in nervousness——
Shr: 1 more cup of coffee (he laughs)
(Sumo opens her eyes)
(he leans back)
Sumo: ahhh…coffee….. mujhe lga…….
Shr : kya lga….?? 😉 😀 oh had hai Sumo :D…….
Sumo: kyaa……kya…..mai ne kya kaha…… 😮
Shr teases her—
had ho gai Sumo u though dat u was about to kis…….
Sumo: shut up….!!!!!!! Badtameeez idiot!!!
(he laughs out loud)
Sumo: tum!!!!! Utho niklo tum yahan se……tumhe bula kar ghalti ki Maine……..
Shr: awww really hahhahaha
Sumo: get out n dont u dare tease me……
Shr : i wont go any where…
Sumo: ooi 😮 kyun….? she tries to pull him frm d couch……
Sumo: kitne bhaari ho tum km khaaya kro….. 😀
Shr : oyy ……. Excuse me…??? bhaari mai nai hoon….u r match stick 😀
Sumo: Shr ke baccheee
Shr: ooo hello meri shaadi bhi nai hoi….bacche… 😮
Sumk:ahhhhh!!! (she again tries to pull him)
Shr: tum match stick ho want a prooof..??? 😉
——he pulls her towards him——
—– she falls on him——-
(n dey have an eyelock)
screen freezes…..!
Precap: kl ka epi….. Haha 😀
so guysss how ws d epi??? 🙂
Do comment….!! 🙂
Love u all!! [4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ❤❤
[4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ?
18 Comments
Awesome Maria….. Tune toh kamaal hi mar diya….loved their nok jhok and of course the cute romantic eye locks…..loved the dailouge… Achi..hai coffee…???
Ahem ahem….naughty Shravan? I like it…keep it up dear
Thankxxx alot ladooo yr by d way how old r u n wats yr really name?? If u dont mind?? 😀
hahahaha i love precap…….
And their nok jhok was very nyc……
Thankxxxx alot angel dii 🙂
as usul very nyc epi…….. last prt ws awsm 😉
so nicely wrttnnn…. post nxt prt soon………..
love u loads
Thank u soooo much lovely dii 🙂
Love u toooo
Hey yr Maria….tu rehti kahan hai???
Main bhaag ke vahan aa ke tujhe hug karna chahti hun….Maine yeh Teri pichli post pe bhi kaha tha ab bhi keh rhi hun….tu jis tarah eyelocks and all show karti hai that’s just amazing mujhse nhi hota….love u yr
@guys….it true yr main bahut hi unromantic hun….plz yr Kuch suggest karo all of u so that main bhi apni ff mein Kuch romance laa sakun…mujhe aap sab ki advice ki bahut zaroorat hai??
khushi aap jo likhti ho wo funny hota h bt sath hi me romantic bhi hota h…. are school romnc me aur kya chahiye……
aur agar km lge to kuch romantic movies dekh lo……. 😉
waise u r gng vry wll……
Hahahhahah khushi even i wnt to hug u soooo tightly ! 🙂 yr mai bilkul romantic nai hoon bs shraman ke liay pata nai kaise romance jaag uthta hai! 😀 n thanksssss alot yr m really glad u like it!!
Love u toooo yr !!
Or jahan tk suggestion ki baat hai yr am also nt a romantic prsn or ek baat btao tumharai ff mai itna romance toh hai wi drunken scene bhoool gai Kya 😀 or han agr or romance ka tufaaan Lana hai toh imaginaaation bacha…….. Lekin honestly batao toh ur ff has already on d heights!!!!
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No words..☺☺
Just…???
Wanna…??????
Read…next ff…??????
ASAP…ASAP…????
Love ur ff..maria???
Thankxxxx alot Sumo di!!!! M really glad dat u liked it!!! Will definately post nxt 1 soon 🙂
it wasss amazing year beautiful maria… I loved the want a proof thing… Shravan n sumo r so cute… ???
Thank u sooooooo much sumi Di m really glad u like it !! 🙂 🙂
Loved it Maria. Keep writing.
Thanxxxx a lot shalini !! 🙂
Maria I just love your writing…. U just rock… Keep writing.. U have a great talent and I hope u will continue writing and entertain us…
Love you ?❤
Thankx alot vaishali 🙂 keep commenting n loving like dis….. My ff 😀