heart beat ., a show changed my life (epi 13) (ria tanweer or ria malhotra)
Hi guys meghs is back with another epi of hb .. sorry for late update i am late as my clg started it is not possible to be regular …
Recap : viplav to propose dhani via song.. and vidha unite.
Link to previous epi
Episode 12
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@malhotra mansion
Dhani and Viplav is spending time.. Viplav coming close to dhani while dhani shying of their proximity…
(Background song sab tera my and mishal fav song?)
(Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara
Bin tere mujhse naaraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha)
she moving backward till the wall touches her back.. Viplav move close to her and hold her by waist bringing her more closer.. both wants the moment to stop there .. the feeling of getting love is inexpressible. Viplav gives his killerwala smile! Touch her face softly ? move her hair aside coming close close very close to her?
(Main toh tere rang mein
Rang chuka hoon
Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera)
There only a little inch only gap between them… dhani breathing heavily as they for so close to each other. Viplav kisses her forehead.. seeing her nervous he says “i will never do the one to make u feel uncomfortable….”
(Main toh tere dhang mein
Dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri ban chuki hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi
Sab tera, sab tera..
Sab tera, sab tera.)
Hearing his words dhani gets happy hugs him tightly ? she feels herself lucky to get the one who understands her morethan her. His each touch make goosebumps in her stomach.. she becomes crimson red color blushing..
Dhani hugs thanking him for understanding her…
“aham aham can we come” said kritika teasingly.
Ria : bhai u romancing publicly!.. (in dramatic way) oh god now little kid can’t walk anywhere… tapping her head.
Viplav : Ria (show fake anger)
Ria hugs him saying sorry bhai…
Ria then hugs dhani congratulating for her getting her love back.. the time when she hug dhani, dhani feel as if someone close to her is ria like some previous birth relation..
(Aa aa aa aa aa… Kabhee khushee gham
Naa juda honge ham, kabhee khushee kabhee gham
Aa aa aa aa aa…)
Ria eyes fill of tears.. feeling of someone close to u there still can’t reveal that dhani is her sis? she can’t handle more and is about to say something to dhani but Amit nods not say anything which is only seen by kritika. Amit sign her to go .. Ria binds bye to everyone and leave from there.
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Ria about to leave Amit stops her.. Ria hugs amit says ” for what work i come here is done..”
Amit : “Thanks ria for coming if u not come then…….”
Ria : anything for dhani di
Amit ? : angel!
Ria (sobbingly) : bhai till when i need to hide our relationship.
Amit (hugging her): till everything gets settled.. Kritika who come there is shocked to hear this !! Btw she trust her love that her topper can’t cheat her. There is something which she not know about him.. she goes near them to confront.
Amit and ria are shocked to see her. Amit tries to justify himself about their relation. Kriti interapts “topper i trust u.. trust is important in every relationship i have faith on u can never do wrong. If u want then only say what u both hiding i won’t force u. “said politely. But before she warn him” but never try to misuse my trust and about to leave from there..
“Ria is my sis ……” this words of amit stopped her.
Kriti (shocked): what?
He reveal everything after sunil leaving malhotra mansion with his family.. that time amit mother was pregnant. But noone knew this not even sameer and rithika… Ria when join dhani college Amit asked her to hide her real identity.. so thus Ria malhotra become Ria Tanweer to world..
Ria cries.. “dhani di not know about this sis ???”
kritika hugs consoling her.. now kritika determine to unite this complicated relation between family. Uniting family is new task to kriti now.
Ria leave from there. And amit kriti too about to leave but car stop on their front. A lady comes from it. It is Rithika.. amit remember childhood incident seeing her.. she looks at both of them .. as she knows kriti she greet her first…
Rith : how is ur party?
Kriti : its mast bindaswala party aunty.! Rith : beta what is ur name? I seeing here first time !!
Amit : aa.. amit !!
Rithika shakened to hear name she remember a naming ceremony of baby where geetanjali ask her what to name child when rithu says amit… she jerks her thought look emotionally at Amit!!
(Meree saanso me too hai samaya, meraa jivan toh hai teraa saya… (2)
Teree puja karu mai toh har dam
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Naa juda honge ham, kabhi khushi kabhi gham… (2)
Tear filled up on her eyes she wipes it ask both of them to get inside mansion also ask to stay back as it is late.
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Note : Ria and amit age difference 5 years. She joined college recently 1 month back in short time become close to viplav.. viplav also treat her like sis.. viplav not know her being malhotra! But he know she is Amit sis. He even not know amit being malhotra rather being amit childhood friend.!!
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Inside mansion
Dhani sitted on sofa Viplav sleeping on lap of dhani caressing his hair. Dhani admiring his sleeping face he looking so cute?
(Main toh tere dhang mein
Dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri ban chuki hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi
Sab tera, sab tera..
Sab tera, sab tera.
Viplav wake up and hugs her saying “I love u”
“Love u too thanks for coming to my life u made my life more beautiful” said dhani
“Offo u starting ur rj work here too this sweet talk make me fall to u more?” said Viplav winking.
Dhani make fake anger face says “Viplav ” started running behind him.. viplav strike to Rithika while running where as Rithika looks at both of them and says” not again u again started fighting too bad !!
“But mom we r not fighting we we just…… ”
Amika themselves talk ” romancing. .”
Viplav(winks at dhani) : Rithu maa see dhani is teasing me!
(Vip call rithika as rithu maa)
Rith : who teasing my bacha!
Dhani open her mouth in shock ” bachaa….. says herself “in which angle he is bacha he can have bacha now? ohh dhani what u thinking u becoming naughty in his company..
Viplav : rithu maa i have to leave now bye….
Rith : bye ? Where u go now its too late now u stay here that’s it..
Viplav : but mom…..
Rith : i inform kanak u staying here no more argument u r staying here thats it..
Viplav : ok #pouting his face
Dhani smile seeing this.
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Amit and viplav sleeps on guest romm where as kritika and dhani sleeping on dhani room…
@12
Dhani and kriti wake up…
Dhani : call her and put on speaker mode.
Kriti : but what if she sleeping! !
Dhani : oh common who sleep so early during birthday!
She calls someone and put on speaker mode and both dhani and kriti sings
Happy birthday to u
Happy birthday to u
Happy birthday to u dear joyee
Happy birthday to u
They shouts ” happy birthday joyee”
On call otherside shown a girl wearing jeans and shirt she getsurprised and excited..
Jo ? thanks u sooo much guys haa such a lovely wish love u both??…
Dhakrit : love u too ?
After ending call dhani and kriti sleeps.. screen flash on sleeping dhani face and on other side viplav sleeping face
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Precap : dhani bout to get slapped by sameer.. amit holding his hand.
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Why do u think sameer slapping her?? Any guess.. to know keep reading hb
And most of ur guess on ria is crt
I dedicated this part to my dearest frnd joyee aka fatarajo birthday girl.. and to all vidha lovers.
I try to post nxt asap if i get time?
If u have doubt regard epi free to ask..
Pls comment i am posting on busy schedule ur one wrd make me feel good..
Criticism too welcome
25 Comments
Megha its lovely☝☝☝☝☝
So sweet of u that u wished dear joyee via this ff. She wud be real happy ☺ ☺
Finally amit is rias sis n my guess was right?
Loved the romance of vidhani; yr perfect description n the songs.
I cud relate to original ikrs shown on viplavs birthday (similiar romance?????)
Liked rithikas caring attitude towards viplav n telling him.to stay bavk.
Her rembering past naming ceremony was too emotional
Scary precap
Liked yr cover pic n yr idea of taking marias name in it.
Thanks di ?
Glad u liked it di… yup jo is really happy i think reading this.. yup ur guess was right. Yup vidha romance ? now u can see more sry if u felt similar i made according situation.
I said na rithika is indeed good positive character situation made her to do that
Thnks to like cover pic?
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Hi Megha. ? Episode was too good!! ? Next waiting for Amit & Ria reality unveiling before Dhaani. How sweet you wished Fatarajo, such cutely! ?
Happy Birthday Joyee! ?
Hi areeb thanks for liking it
Reality will reveal in nxt epi probably. Keep supporting like this
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U rocked sis…nice cover pic too..keep it up.. Wah…amit nd kritika r awesome…
Thank u sis glad u liked it yup they r always best
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Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii it was an mind blowing episode loved it soooooooooooo much???????Rithika was shown I was sooooo happy ?????precap is very scary ????
Yipeeeee my guess was correct i’m sooo happy sooo happy
Ur class started u must be very busy right then also u updated the episode thank u soooo
Loved the romance between vidhani ??
Post the next part whenever u are free ??
Thanks aish? glad u liked it …
Yup ur guess is crt.
Ya ur right now i busy even see i reply comments late naa studies assignment n all i stuck bt i try my best to upload it soon.
Thanks i post when i be free keep support like this?
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Hey Megha.. it was too lovely re?? viplav dhani cute romance and sab tera song Hayee hayee?? just loved that part.. I was laughing reading that line “bacha, from which angle he is bacha, he can have bacha now??” so now Ria mystery is revealed.. amit and ria scene was quite emotional kabhi khushi kabhi ghum made that scene more emotional.. now waiting for them reunite as a happy family..
Precap is scary why sameer slapped dhani, no idea.. he won’t slap her for having relation with viplav.. haiiinaa, so what else excited for that to reveal.. post the next one whenever u get time because I can understand ur college has started so it would be difficult to be regular.. keep writing?
Hey Megha.. it was too lovely re?? viplav dhani cute romance and sab tera song Hayee hayee?? just loved that part.. I was laughing reading that line “bacha, from which angle he is bacha, he can have bacha now??” so now Ria mystery is revealed.. amit and ria scene was quite emotional kabhi khushi kabhi ghum made that scene more emotional.. now waiting for them reunite as a happy family..
Precap is scary why sameer slapped dhani, no idea.. he won’t slap her for having relation with viplav.. haiiinaa, so what else excited for that to reveal.. post the next one whenever u get time because I can understand ur college has started so it would be difficult to be regular.. keep writing?
Happy Birthday dear joyee.. many many happy returns of the day?
Hi maha glad u liked it? sab tera is perfect for them so i added.
Hahaha good analysis vip is not bacha na? arre my ff is making u emotional means my hard wrk is not wasted then? uniting family then my ff end naa?
Precap ur guess may right or wrong most probably he won’t have problem with vidha relationship then y u guess ??
Yup both of our situation same so u understand me better naa? ipost when i get time
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A www so sweet of u meghs epsiode is just amazing and thanks for the wishes 🙂 thank u dhaani thank u kriti:P
Ur welcome joyee?
Glad u liked my treat
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Ye Rithika kayn hai…? bhulne ki bimaari hai.. ?
And the epi was good.. Looking mre fr the complicated family relation to gt a uncomplicated relations…?
Swe rithika is mom of dhani and chachi of amit .. vip call her as rithu maa
Bulne ki bimari h treat soon?? shorterm memory loss is dangerous sry just kidding
Uncomplicated relations they will be soon
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Loved their romance❤❤
Awesome as always!! Post the next part soon!
Thanks angel?
So sry for inconvenience i post nxt when i get some time u know na my busy schedules
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Good epi.. Ye Rithika kaun hai.. Todi bhul ne ki bimaari hai..
Waiting the day whn these complicated relations will become uncomplicated relations…?