Introducing the characters
Shraman(same as shown in the real show)
But they r not childhood frnds
Preekar(same as shown in the real show)
Both the tiwari and malhotra family’ characters are same as shown in the real show
Introducing a new character
Mrina-a beautiful girl doing her undergraduate degree.shravan’s sister.loves his brother so much her world is her brother after her mother(nirmala) left them for some man(ahuja).she hate nirmala
New characters will be introduced later if it is needed
No promos guys
So let’s start the 1st chap:
Mrina’s pov:
“BEEP! BEEP!” The alarm sounded. I woke up and looked at my phone. It said 6 AM. “Oh well, time to go back to normal life” I thought and got out of my bed. I went outside my room and looked at the house. The house was strewn with all sorts of flowers, lanterns and all types of decorations. After all, it was Shravan bhaiyya’s wedding yesterday. I recollected yesterday’s events.
“Wow,Shravan bhaiyya and Suman are finally married. After all these days, it’s high time they got married.” I thought and left for jogging.
Meanwhile in Shravan’s room,
Shravan’s pov:
Suman woke up and got up. She couldn’t, because my huge hands were wrapped tightly around her.I watched as twisted around to face me so that her face was resting on my chest.She blushed on seeing my intent eyes staring at her.”Tell me,my beautiful wife.How are you feeling now?”,I whispered in her ears.She stammered and buried her bright red face in my chest.I made her look at me and said”Tell me love,how you feel on seeing me.Tell me or I won’t release you”. She smiled coyly and said,”I feel proud that you are mine and mine alone., protected that you are there to look for and after me,and love. Pure love.” I felt damn happy on hearing this.”Ok,that’s good”,I said and released her.She got up blushing,and went to the bathroom while I went back to sleep,smiling like an idiot.Inside the bathroom, she washed her face and looked at the mirror. Her face showed every percent of happiness that she felt. After some time, she stepped out of the bathroom, very silent to not wake me up. She closed the door, but I woke up on that sound.I woke up and looked at her with half opened eyes. She was wearing a baby pink sari with a gold border that accentuated her blush and made her look like an angel. “My angel”, I thought and went back to sleep. “Shravan, wake up. Please wake up” Suman said. “Please, five more minutes”, I said and rolled over. She again called me shravan I asked wat in my sleepy tone she came near me “l love you Shravan” , she said,caressing my face and kissed me. “I love you too”, I mumbled back in between my sleep.”Ok, I am going to make halwa”, she said and went. She walked into the kitchen and started cooking. She knew exactly where everything was, because of the countless times she had cooked there. She hummed to herself and started cooking.
Mrina’s pov:
I returned from my jog and went to the kitchen to drink water.There, I saw Suman cooking happily. “Best not to disturb her”, I thought to myself and tiptoed back to my room.
Shravan’s pov:
Suman went back to their room. Just then, I stepped out of the bathroom in a towel and was drying my hair. On seeing me,she blushed and came to me. She took a towel and tried to dry my hair,but couldn’t. It was cute watching her standing on tiptoes and trying to dry my hair.I laughed and sat on the bed,so that she could dry.Then I wore my usual blue jeans and white shirt.After I finished, I took her in my arms,held her by the waist and whispered in her ears”I love you, Suman Malhotra.”She smiled and I bent down and kissed her. “We should go downstairs. They’re all waiting for us”, she said, smiling and took my hand.
Precap:Shraman’s honeymoon trip and some flashback about their first meeting(love at first sight)
26 Comments
Wow loga..
It was really good..
Sounds amazing..
Shraman r already married…
Loved it..
Post soon…!
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Tq dr?
Glad u liked it
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
Sorry Megan.. Didn’t mention ur name…luv u both..???
Logs it was great
U have written very nicely
R u my di
What’s ur age
It was fantastic
Nice thought
Married couple wow.
Post soon
Tq pretty preeti ?
We r 19 yrs old
Glad u liked it
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
Yahaan hum log bhagwan se unki shaadi ke liye pray Kar rehe hain aur tumne hum logon ki wish poori Kar Di hope the same track on the show too
Tq shramansangel?
Ya shraman’s marraige is on the way in the real show.we r so excited for their marriage
Glad u liked it
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
Hi guys this is Loga and Megan we r doing our under graduate degree.
Guys this is megan I am totally new to this site
Guys this is loga I know everyone bcoz I read all of ur ff’s I never comment bcoz I m a silent reader.though I have commented in some of ur ff’s.all of those who r writing ff’s r amazing I like angel’s “a desire of star to get the moon”
Fatrajo’s” different shade of love we have for each other”
Nikita’s”two shots”
Khushi’s ” love is blind”
Weirdsister’s “kahin tere khamosiyan ”
Marie’s “pyaar dhosti hai..”
Ufaq’s” silence and noise of love life”
And Ariana’s “love,friendship or something more”
Sry if I forgot anyone’s name but I read everybody’s ff
Now we r so obsessed with shraman so we thought of writing a ff named “My heart beats for u”
So guys how was the first episode?
Hope you like it.we will try post the next ep asap.
So are u guys comfortable with the romance
If not pls say it through comments.ya you may think at the very first chap we started with their marraige bcoz we want their marriage to happen in the real show soon they are dragging it slightly
Waiting for u comments?
Love u all
Loga-Megan
Hey loga hey Megan……!!! 🙂
Frst of all toh welcome to this sweet family……
N secondly abt d ep,……!!
?????????❤❤❤?????? OMG it was such a cute romantic n beautiful ep….!!!! I loved each n every bit of it….!! Just beyond d words….!!!
N wow u read all our ff’s that’s so sweet of u both….!! Thank u so much through u can’t comment that’s ok….not a prob…. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Bt ur ff is something else….!! I loved it….!! N yes totally comfortable wid d romance…..cause we r not watching romance on d show….so yes…..
N that’s a wonderful ff….plz continue…
N post ASAP ASAP ASAP 🙂
Take care
Lots of luv
Maria
Hey marie tq?
So sweet of u dr
Glad u liked the ep
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
hey Loga di and Megan di, I hope u understand hindi…I mean hearing ur names I don’t think ur Indians… right..
it was fabulous, amazing start…
Really exited to know their luv stry…dere married wooowww
u didn’t read my ff, very bad…sry sry I’m just joking don’t take it at heart… no need to b sry….many people write ff here so it’s nt possible to write every names…u can’t read every ff so it’s fine Loga di….
pst asap, nice start, it was a dhamaka….
lots of luv Loga and Megan di – Neeti
Hey neeti tq?
We r tamil
Glad u liked the ep
Sry for not mentioning ur ff dr
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
Very different n nice loved the concept can’t wait for the next epi 🙂
Hey fatarojo tq?
Glad u liked the ep
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
Such a sweet episode.
Loved it.
Post soon ?
Tq zainab?
Glad u liked the ep
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
Hey loga and megan
U guys are superb
I mean the way u wrote this
It made me feel so joyfull…
Ahh loved reading it
Will be waiting for shraman’s luv story
Post soon
Hey anamika tq?
Happy to hear that u liked the ep
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
Hi…
It is a brilliant start dear. Direct from wedding!!! I’m really excited abt it. Post next part soon. Lots of love nd blessings. Take care
Hi Ariana tq?
Ya we want their marriage to happen soon so we directly started from the marriage
Glad u liked it
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
hey !!! a warm welcome to u . lovely start and ur writing skills are awesome . loved it . post asap. precap was damn interesting . cant wait 2 know how they met
Hey deotima tq?
Glad u liked the ep
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan
Waohhhh !!!!! First ep hi fully loaded with awesomeness ???
Luved it very much ??
Post very sooooooon ..
Take care ..
Tq fatima ?
Happy to hear that u liked the ep
We will try to post next ep ASAP
Loga-Megan