Hi guys!! How are you?? Do you remember this kind of FF…which I writes for you…hope you don’t forget it…okk here is present another part of this FF….hope u will enjoy this.
So before see the names of my friends who commented on my previous updates.
1:Mahin
2: priyankashaurya
3:Amna
4: swetha
5: Pooja
6: samidha
7: Aafiya
8: Mannat
9: Dhruti
10: Vanu
11: Anu
12: ZiyaRasheed.
……………………………….So let’s begin……………………………..
Saanchi was searching for veer in the hospital.. She asked by isha and pragya..
Did u see veer??
No we don’t… Kiun abhi tak naaraaz hai?? Ishgya
Yeah guys….don’t know how I understand him that he was saw that wasn’t true…she tensed.
Don’t worry saanchi he need some Time… U give him he understand by himself… Pragya kept hand on her shoulder then try to console her.
Saanchi nodded….then she remembered some urgent work then went from there…pragya was looking her but isha was looking to pragya.
Then pragya turned to her and asked what?? by nodding head and her mouth was little opened..
Why u told her that veer needs sometimes?? Is veer is child??
Ohh, toh madam ko ee preshaani hai ke hum veer ki side liye…she little laughed.
Isha frowned, pragya I didn’t meant that…but are u believing that veer is doing right??
Ohh c’mon yaarr…veer loves her… Aur jahaan pyar hota hai wahaan jealously toh hoti hai na??
Pragya jealously se zyada pyar main trust hona zaroori hai. Isn’t it??
Par pyar main aise chhote moty larai jhagre toh hoty rehte hain…iss main itna preshaan hone ki kiya baat hai…. Tu ziyada mat soch ab chal yahan se..
Isha wasn’t convinced but that time she thought its better to go…
At night…hostel room:
Saanchi was trying to call veer…but veer didn’t answered of her call… She send lots of massages… But he also didn’t replied of her massages… She became angrier on him…she kept phone down…and murmured…
Samjhta kiya khud ko……aany do hospital… Iss ki naani na yaad diladi toh mera naam Bhi saanchi nahi….too much attitude… Kisko dikharaha hai….main kaun sa mari ja rahi hun uss se baat karne ko….khud hi peeche aaya tha….main toh maa ki vaje se…khair main kiun apna dimag khrab kar rahu hun….then she went to bed and sleep.
At kapoor’s mention…in kabir’s room:
Kabir was in his laptop….then swabir came there….and sat beside him….kabir looks at him…he shut down the lap top… And asked.
What happened?? Tum soye nahi abhi tak…won’t you go school tomorrow??
Ooohoo…papa again you forget it…tomorrow is Sunday and more over than tomorrow is swarda mumaa’s barsi na..So we will go to mander to her shaanti pooja.
Kabir just looking at him..and it seems he was thinking something…
Swabir looked at him confusingly… He waved hand..Papa…papa….Papaaa…he little shouted.
Then kabir came out from his thoughts… And suddenly said…Haan…
What happened papa?! Are u still missing mumaa na??
Kabir instantly hugged him…he too hugged him back…after sometimes they broke hug and kusum reached there..
Kisi ki nazer mere bachun ko..
Maa, aap Bhi nahi soyi??
Yes, and I came here to remember you that tomorrow we will have to go mander and don’t forget it…him??
Maa, I want to tell you something.
But don’t want hear anything…. Let’s go swabu…dadi ke saath sona hai na….aaja mera bacha dadi aap ko sulati hai….then they leaved.
Kabir was just looking at them.
Next morning
At hostel room
Saanchi got call from jaya…in which jaya told her to go mander..
Hello, maa how r u??
I’m fine maa, tell me how you are??
I’m also fine…you know what day is today??
Yeah, Maa today is Sunday.
Saanchi Sunday means?? U know na what you need to do??
Ohh, yeah maa…I remember…I need to go mander…because I’m going mander every Sunday for taking blessing from god for my better future….and u wished earlier that I need to complete that by visiting mander every week…she said in one breathe.
Hmm…That’s good girl…
OK maa..aap ki ichha poori krni padegi na??
Good… Ab jao..
Okk maa bye tc luv you…
Luv u too.. Tc.
Saanchi cut the call and goes for temple.
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Kapoor mention:
Kabir, kusum and swabir were ready for go…then they sat in the car and arrived for mander they reached at mander pandit ji (priest) waiting was waiting for them they greats him..
Pranam pandit jee…everyone said.
Ayushmaanbhav…priest gave them blessings by rising both hands..
Pandit ji saari tyariyan hogayin hain??
Yes, only I was waiting for all of you….you brought all the material (samagiri)…
Like phool maala (garland of flowers) etc… (Don’t know guys what other needs so don’t ask and much think about it).
Then kusum realized that she forget maala in the car…then she said to kabir that bring that maala from car kabir went for taking maala.
When kabir went then Saanchi reached at temple…swabir saw her from so far…he stands up…and went behind him….kusum was busy so she wasn’t noticed him…Saanchi reached inside the temple swabir was stood just behind her…she was praying…..swabir shockingly starring at her. But didn’t saw her face…but said MUMAA…Saanchi heard this word…and opened eyes…after some time Saanchi finished her prayer then she turned but before swabir saw her kusum came and took out swabir from there..there peoples crowd were gathered so that’s y she didn’t hear their convo…swabir denied but kusum make him realized that they are getting late for pooja so that’y he went with her….
Unknown awkward feeling felt Saanchi…she was confused…why she is feeling like this…but after sometime she went from there..
They performed their pooja peacefully….swabir saw swarda in white dress she was smiling tears came in swabir’s eyes…swarda sighed to him do not cry…mumaa is always with you.
Then swabir little smiled.
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When they finished their pooja then kabir send them home and he himself went for the important meeting by other car that he called by driver…in the midway his car got worse….
He was getting late for the meeting then he saw the one girl is coming from her bike…he raised hand for the lift. Girl stopped she took off her helmet…kabir stunned to see her…because she was none other than Saanchi…
You??Kabir shocked
Yeah me…and what are you doing here sir?? She asked
Nothing, I was going for meeting but in the mid-way my car betrayed me. He sighed towards car and shrugged…
She little laughed…
So why you are laughing I’m serious u don’t believes me??
She quiet and was looking in his eyes…he too starring at her. And both had an eye lock.
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Love To all and Love you all.
By Anosha Anee.
27 Comments
Amazing ,mind blowing,awesome no words to describe……..plz post soon…
TY Dear
It’s lovely, please post next part soon
TY Samidha
Superb
TY Aafiya
awesome yrr….i thought there would be more after their eyelock….bt it ended there only….bt no problem plz update soon as i always eagerly wait for your ff…..love u dear….keep posting
TY dear Pooja…that so sweet of u.
amazing
post soon
TY Vanu
Pragya has some logic. Loved her reply to Isha. And veer is right on his side. Because he always sees them in awkward situations. So obviously he would be mad. And I was hopping for swabir to see sanchi. It was like, palat palat…. But at the last moment you didn’t allow her to palat??
And one more thing, I want more Kanchi scenes….
Waiting for Kabir having a romantic ride behind sanchi. I hope she keeps applying breaks….??
Hey Ziya you are grt analyzer…i love the way that u analyze every scene though ur analyzing i explore myself more…..TY for that….and yeah what will further unfold u can read in the next epies……and I also trying to make more kaanchi scenes but some like that scenes of story’s requirements hope u getting it right.
lovely epi….post next one soon……tc…………..
TY DHRU
Loved it Anee ??? I kept staring at the screen hoping to read more, but it ended too soon ???. Come soon ???
Thank you Ruwani.
o7m meri jaan…tu hi ek tu k grup mai se post krti hai…golu to gayab hi hogayi hai….ab jldi se post krna warna mai katti hojavgi…lv uh meri jaan
TY Luv u 2 meri jaan
it’s sooo nice.
Ty Sandya first time saw ur comment.
awesome dear..
Ty Dear Swetha
You are totally rocked dear………this episode is mind blowing and fantastic and awesome and outstanding episode dear……….and sorry yaar for commenting late yaar………. post next one soon dear………..love u dear…….tc yaar
Oyee Koi nahi Anu Yarr….tu toh seriorus hogayi late aayi toh kiya hua…Comment toh kiya na?? or tujhe pasand bhi aaya That’s enough for me.
Wow anee…amazing article.. hope we get to see kanchi chemistry in show also.. but koi nahi..happy to read in ur article..sorry 4 late commenting
Hey!! tu bhi sorry bolegi pagal…..Chal katii….Okk Okk iss baar maaf kar rahi hun…tu aisa mun na bana…..tujhe yeh article pasand aaya….yahi boht hai mere liye…..Love U Pagal.
Lovely