Chakor’s pov
I slowly wake up to find myself in Suraj’s arms then I remember what had happened last night. I blush. I slowly get up trying not to disturb Suraj but didn’t succeed. He wakes up and comes up in a position that made me blush again. He comes close to my cheeks but the moment was interrupted by Kamal Narayan.
“Oh, oh have some shame. You can do this in private but you will never get that so I can understand the situation but still you shouldn’t do this in front my men. These could cast an evil eye.” Then he laughs.
“Anyway, I came here to get Suraj. We need him for entertainment” he says.
Before I could say anything the goons take Suraj away.
I wonder what today’s latest drama is going to be. I run behind Suraj and see that there is a big crowd of villagers in front. Ragini is standing with a gun in her hands and Kamal Narayan is standing with his evil wife.
“Okay, now that the main guests are here, let’s start. Today’s entertainment may be the last one in somebody’s life.”
I am starting to get a bad, very bad feeling about this. What if they are talking about Suraj? Are they conspiring a plan to kill him?
“All entertainment depends on the villagers so villagers today you can take your revenge with this evil man standing in front of you, Suraj. You can kill him, shoot him or choose to save him. So my villagers, what is your decision?”He says seriously.
“Are you kidding me, the villagers will never kill Suraj. The villagers are not like you, Kamal Narayan. They are not stone-hearted.” I yell at him.
“We will see about that. Villagers, if you shoot Suraj, then you will each get 1000 rupees every month!!!!!!!!” He exclaimed.
“Villagers, please don’t believe him. How can you be sure that he will stick to his talks and give you money every month? And you can’t kill an innocent person for money. Don’t be selfish, please”
“He is not innocent, Chakor. Maybe you think so because you are in “love” with him” someone yells from the crowd.
“Yes, yes kill him! Kill him!!! Kill him!!”Everyone starts yelling.
“Please, he has changed. Please, for me. Don’t kill him, please” I beg in front of them.
“They aren’t going to listen to you” Suraj says
“But I can’t let them kill you, Suraj” I reply.
“Ok, it is decided then. My daughter here, Ragini will shoot Suraj with his own gun” Kamal Narayan exclaims.
“No you can’t do that” I yell
“It is not my decision, it is your lovable villagers’ decision” he says.
“Please don’t do this, Suraj is a good person now, please change you decision, please” I yell at the villagers.
“Chakor, I will do a favor on you, I will give you two lovebirds, 10 mins to have your last and final private talk. Until then, we will set the ground for Suraj’s death”
Everyone leaves and I and Suraj are the only ones left. I start to cry. Suraj’s cool fingers were under my chin coaxing my face up. His expression was much softer now.
“Chakor, there is nothing we can do about this; we can’t even run away because of this stupid chain on my feet.
My voice turns pleading in response.
“I was so close to losing you last time. I don’t want to lose you.” I hold his collar.
“Why, why does this have to always to us? Why can’t Kamal Narayan die now? He is pretty old now.”
“Wow, Chakor, I have never seen you be so mean” Suraj laughs.
“Kamal Narayan is the one who is being mean” I reply
“Let’s not waste our last minutes talking about Kamal Narayan, ok”
He comes close to my face. His black eyes were smoldering, just inches away, and his breath was cool against my open lips. I could taste his scent on my tongue. I forgot everything again. His fingers braided themselves into my open hair, securing my face to his. My arms locked behind his neck. One hand slid down my back, pressing me tighter against his chest. I crushed myself closer, molding myself to the shape of him. The tip of my tongue traced the curve of his lower lip; it was flawlessly smooth as it had been polished, and his taste….
He pulled my face away from his as he saw two men coming this way. The goons dragged him away as he was letting them drag him, he said” sorry”
That is all for today. I will post the next episode soon. Please comment.
Precap: SURPRISE
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Excuse me, but if you don’t like udaan then why would you read a fan fiction about it? And comment negative things. That seems stupid to me.I am going to keep writing this ff because I like udaan and I am not stupid like you said in your comment. Maybe you are. I am sorry I you didn’t like my ff but don’t say that I am stupid because you have no right too judge me ok.
They say the queen builds her empire from the stones thrown at her. I hope you will not be let down by that abusive comment. Keep writing. Enjoying your fiction a lot. Lots of love.
Nandini … full respects to your feelings… but you have absolutely no right to say such harsh words for any author. If you dont like a show, change your channel or switch off your tv. Similarly if you dont like a fiction, simply try never to visit that site.
But please do not expect the world to go by your likes or dislikes. The authors take lot of pains to write their stories. I really appreciate their hardwork. We all know it hurts when someone throws abuses at some artists’ hardwork.
Please try to be little respectful for others. I dont know if some fiction can kill someone as you wrote, but your harsh words definitely bleed hearts.
Thank you so much for helping me show nandini the true way.
Ms nandini respect the work which others do, if you can’t do that… Get your shit out of here.
I dont how come you people can write these type of disgusting comments. Dont try to demoralize the people who put there efforts to entertain us. Get that to your mind.
And hey dear sukor, keep writing, there are many idiotic people like them… Who are such bastards tha dont have respect and cant give to others.
Keep writing, you are doing an amazing work.
Ps: Miss nandini dont dare to comment now
Nandini…so much negetivity ? if u don’t like udaan then don’t see….everyone have their own choice or interest. ..it is their own wish to like or dislike anything…you have no right to be harsh on any writer or any show. ..if u don’t like then just ignore it and let us all to live in peace yaar. ..writing an ff is not an easy task. ..it takes lot of time and patience…if u don’t have the courtesy to appreciate somebody’s hardwork then you don’t have the right to degrade or insult their hardwork. …
So GET WELL SOON DEAR…
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Amazing updates. It’s getting interesting day by day.
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@sukor loved your ff…doing a great job and i truely appreciate your hardwork. ..and ignore those stupid people who don’t have the courtesy to appreciate somebody’s hardwork. ..stay blessed ?
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Hi dr actually I c ur fiction from last week I used to follow u..ur writing skill is very unique it’s not so easy to write fiction on udaan..because udaan is very unique concept and showing present things happens in dis generation really chakor type girl is needed… when I see dis serial my heart feel so happy how sukor fight for freedom how kn torcher them I become big fan of sukor..I appreciate ur intelligence ur too good today onwards I read ur fiction regularly and I will comment pakka for u more appreciation is needed..eventhough I wrote 9 0s and 4 ff in telly for swasan in sr after tats end I thought not to watch any hindi serial because I. M kannada girl but I often watch udaan but recently I start to watch udaan I get impressed I watch old episode of udaan I madly love with sukor soon I will start my new ff on sukor and don’t worry for bad comments and bad people 100 dabba worst comments is equal to 1 praising comment u deserves tat ..ur more talented girl don’t give up for good story and for good people like u… I. M always Their to support don’t worry all d best for ur education and lastly wat tat surprise waiting waiting and tc friend…
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Thank you so much everyone for supporting me. I really appreciate it. This fan fiction is my first one and I really do my best on it but I had started thinking that nobody liked it because of the lack of comments but I kept going and today I see that a lot of people like this ff. Thank you so much for encouraging me.
Awesome story
Please update soon