Hello guyz…I have written this short OS on our loved twinj
This is my second os first was on qubool hai
https://www.tellyupdates.com/heart-touching-love-story-qubool-hai-os/
So have a look at this…hope u like it
Kunj: one whole day you have to live without me …no phone..no email..no msg nothing ….if u do like this then I will marry you..n thn I will say you truly love me
Twinkle: truth is that I can’t live one moment without you but I have to do this bcoz you have challenged me…n I accept this challenge..i will not contact wid you whole day
One whole day gone without no contact.
Next day at early moring twinkle waked up…went to kunj’s house with much excitement but she was shocked to see that atmosphere…she saw kunj body was covered with white clothes and wid garland
Twinkle was very much shocked she doesn’t understand hoe this happen..why this happen..she was wid full of tears…full memories were infront of twinkles eyes
Just then kunj’s mom came and gave one letter to twinkle
“dear twinkle’
Only one day had left of my life so I have given this challenge to you..n you have done it
Baby now you have to live these all days with accepting this challenge
I LOVE YOU baby
Your kunj”
Guyz how is this….plz comment
32 Comments
it was cute … it was very emotional.. short and heart touching
tysm sharman
Really heart touching os ??
thnx lama for cmnting
It really made me emotional…. Plz someone tell me properly to add dp and status
tysm 4 cmnting..u can create ur own acc on TU n then u can add dp n status
Short n cute bcz Ik it hehehe
hehehe…i m happy that u liked it
This was truly heart touching…. Quite emotional….
thnx thnx yaar rashmi for cmnting
Very emotional I litteraly cried
tysm tanisha for cmnting….n sorry for making u cry..???.hehehe
Hey Snehal I have read this story
It was damn emotional
Do write some more…like this one??
tysm shatakshi….keep supporting…n i will surely write more n more stories……
The last part was really sad….but I loved it….too good..
thanx a lot sayeeda
Such an emotional os…… do write some more….
thnx komu..i will surely write more
Snehal aheart touching one
Do write more
thnx thnx dreamer arundhati…i will write more
amazingggg
ty fiona
It was short but emotional
tysm ria..keep supporting
Really nice Nd short plot………… loved it……….
tysm usvathul
I loved it . Good job snehal
tysm sanam
awesome. ..really amazing…ur status is funny. ….do write more
hehehe…thnx ..will surely write more
nice
thnx sam