“Annika”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi let out a loud cry,”Don’t close your eyes”.
Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi didn’t obeyed her husband. She was unconscious at the sharp point of the bullet Kameeni shot at her….
“Annika”-He hugged her tight in his both strong arms,”You have promised me to be with me in all situations…You can’t break our pinky promise”.
He hurt her enough from their first meeting..insulted her.. blamed her,then when he realised her value in his life…she broke her promise..
“Shivaay”- Omkara hands on the shoulder of the great wall of Shivaay Singh Oberoi…,”She is a fighter…she had seen worst..she will survive this one too”.
“Bhaiyya..the ambulance is here”- Rudra helped Shivaay to lift Annika for taking to hospital.
“Bade papa”- Shivaay ,the lion roared,”don’t leave them in peace ever”.
He couldn’t see a chotiwala Daksh trying to kill and torture his wife…his wife hanging on tree on a deserted forest..His wife’s pain at his pain… He was not ready to leave the Kutti Kameeni in peacr after he attacked his wife…his lovely and pretty wife..his strength in all problem…his hamsafar…
“Oh my Maatha…”-Pinky prayed the almighty,”My heera bahu…please cure her soon”.
Pinky cried hard.. The first time she couldn’t love the wife his son forced to marry himself ..hate her…blamed her for small problems when she was the Angel who solved all the major problem from their life….this list of accusation is never ending…
“I did a mistake”- Pinky cried after sitting inside the ambulance,”don’t punish my Shivaay for a crime he never committed”.
“My Annika is not looking at me”- Shivaay complained ,”I want to see her dark orbs piercing in to my kanji eyes”.
“Every thing will be alright Bhaiyya”- Soumya was also not ready to leave Annika for a second.
“Close the door”- The driver instructed,”only two people are allowed with the patient.”
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Dadi sat on the couch. Her strength all drained out from the incidents the day followed. The major revelation from her grand daughter’s marriage and all the failed trap .. that her children successfully failed …and save the family from evil once again…the strong sense her Priyanka show…she clutched her heart…
The last incident the day gave was the greatest lost…Annika got shot…that Lady shot bullet at her Billu’s life…
“Dadi”- Om ordered,”you should rest . We are going to hospital”.
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“Doctor”- SSO rushed towards a closed door of operation theater as soon as the red light went off,”How is my Annika??”
“She is not stable..”- Doctor was shaken by an angry Shivaay,”My Annika will be alright. Take all money from me..power name fame every thing…just make sure she is fine”.
He remained unable to make the doctor understand the value of his new patient in his life. How can he tell that he is feeling breathless thinking about the oxygen mask they put during operation.. the red blood… his heart wept looking at her wounded neck…his body shake at the loss…
“No money can buy a life in return”- The doctor sighed,”The blessing and love is counted in front of God”.
“I will pray maatha Raani”- Shakti stood from the steel bench,”I am going to the hospital mandir now”.
Shivaay stood motionless..all the words ..harsh words he threw at her….he remembered all their fight… ishqbaazi… water..white curtains,chand bracelet.. her teasing eyes..the word Billuji from her mouth..the sweetest nectar for his ears…a silent torture returned to him..she was sleeping due to the side effect of sedative doctor used during the operation and he on another side of the glass wall that separate them both….
“Dard hota hai Annika… “- He accepted,” Bahut fark padta hai…”.
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He entered her room as they shifted the patient in to a general word after observation.
Shivaay sat on the stool near the bed..holding the soft delicate hands of his wife..to never let her go away from him… he visited the hell in these few hours…her hands looked white and pale to his kanji eyes….
“Rudra…”- Shivaay send his brother out side.
“I was trying to sent you away from me…When you came this close and I felt the lovely pain…”- A lonely tear escaped his eyes “I have risen so high in your love that I am unable to stable my self just by the thought of losing you”.
Omkara saw a vulnerable Shivaay murmuring sweet nothing in the ear of his unconscious wife…his caring and mature Annika bhabhi…
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“Shivaay”- the first word that come to her mouth after gaining sense,”you are awake”.
“My neend is long gone by just the thought of your blood… so red and valuable”- Shivaay kisses her hand near the needle for drip….
“I”-He began to blabber,”Shh…..”.
“Every thing is fine …Prinku is fine and bold”-,Annika smiled,”just the great wall of Shivaay Singh Oberoi is weak like made up of soil in a rainy season”.
“This is not rainy season Annika”- He quickly answered,”This is worst then a storm”.
“That Kameeni and AC and P are arrested “- Rudra has always a perfect interrupting entry,”Papa came just now directly here”.
“Dadi is with Chulbul at home alone”-He cleared their doubt as they will be worried for Dadi.
“Now I am leaving and will give the news of bhabhi gaining sense to all”- He did his smart logic sign,”I am not a kawab mein haddi .. paneer or skeleton”.
“That thing happened Annika..”- Shivaay agreed to the point,”the real pain .. the dard of losing you..I felt like dying then and there”.
“Aap…..stop showing tadi now”- Annika held his face in her hand and then winched in pain.
He picked her that hand and placed numerous kisses on its length.
“No storm can make Shivaay Singh Oberoi Vulnerable”- he accepted,”love did that.. the fear of living with out you and your antics is living without life”.
“No storm can snatch Annika from Shivaay Singh Oberoi”- She whispered,”We are fine .. all is well for now”.
“I felt like a Baahubali in the battle ground with out Katappa”- He blamed ,”don’t go away from me ever”.
“I am not a fool”- Annika smirked,”I will not let you breath in peace ever”.
“Every torture and pain is acceptable in life “- He answered back,”except for letting go of you when I have discovered long back that I love you enough to die with out you”.
“Marne ki baat ki toh “- Jhansi ki Raani threatened with out the knife,”I am angry on you now”.
“You show that practically … demonstrated that before my eyes “- He stood from his sitting place,”I was feeling like a hundred needle pierced my already weak heart”.
“That stupid heart that was always on back seat of your lofe”- She tried to sit,” I shouted that I love you during the problem it causes you in the forest”.
“You did”-He sat once again,”I never heard..I want to hear it numerous time till the last breath…every second from now”.
“Its a feeling not any new and famous music to hear this much more time”- Annika glared at him,”Its just simple I love you from a wife to her husband”.
“This is the most beautiful lines of a branded music I heard in my life”- He touched his ears,”My ears are lucky”.
“I never heard the same music”- Annika pouted her red lips,”I must hear that”.
“I love you….”-Shivaay touched her plump lips,”If you dare to pout once again…I will kiss you on this red rose petals”.
“You are my hurricane … I am a tornado”-He said loud enough to break her trance ,”no place of any storm in our way of love”.
“I heard nothing bade bhaiyya “- Soumya bit her lips,”I am sorry for that”.
“Sumo.. it is common in Ishqbaazi…”-Rudra hugged his moti wife,”We will return to the same hospital soon after some months I think for a happy occasion then”.
“You both naughty”- Pinky twisted the ears of Rumya,”this is bad manner. but the fact is always a truth one”.
“I can do more things in front of all”- Shivaay teased,”i have the licence after marriage”.
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The OS was not too dramatic,I mean everything was in proper quantity,The romance,humour,seriousness and ofcourse our Rudy’s logic.This was much more realistic, close to what can happen really but now I don’t trust the CVs , they can do anything even illogical things.
I had a feeling while reading that it was written by you and see I’m correct.Oh no need for much appreciations,I know I’m intelligent(just kidding).
Take care di and Love you.
🙂
Tanz… this is the least thing I can do for the bullet shot result… as you know I am a bit less.
emotional to put more of emotions in my ff… so this is the better way..I can avoid emotions easily…by the common logic of Rudra ….
Thank you for reading my craziness….for Shivika….
Wow Astha….I kinda knew while reading that it must be you only….so no taad na this time (u know what I mean by that right?)….but I loved it….this was so sweet n romantic…
Bahubali n kattapa….???I guess u r eagerly awaiting the release of 2nd part….
Nita… As I love Anushka Shetty.. I am eagerly waiting for Baahubali 2…
Thank you…Thoda toh tadte mujhe..par tum to..chalo nahi bataungi…
Only Love you Nita is wenough for now…
Oh my god Aastha di !! You are truly fabulous. Your os are always so good. To appreciate it I have no words. Literally you took my heart away❤
I am a thief … I stole your heart away…
Thank you for trusting this thief enough to let her stole your heart and reading my OS…..
Astha di . This is ….. aree di , u left me speechless . I just loved it ( and di, I dont need to say that I love u , after all , u already know na how much we all love u ha ) . Still , love u a lot ???
Surbhi… I also love you all a lot…
thank you chelli….
Awesome Aastha…i always wonder why don’t i get such beautiful thoughts to write an OS of this standard …this is fantastic
VHM… I am happy you like my OS…thank you dear…
I am new to putting crazy thoughts in to pen/key board…so I am expecting you to guide me in tough situations…
VHM… I am happy you like my OS…thank you dear…
I am new to putting crazy thoughts in to pen/key board…so I am expecting you to guide me in tough situations…
You are a born writer yaar….will always support you if at all you require, but i don’t think such situation will ever arise, as i have, infact everyone has pretty high expectations from you … waiting for what will you writing next
Every one has fault VHM at that point of Astha, I request to guide me….
awesome
Thank you Aisha…
Wonderful
Thnx…dear.
It’s just superb…fabulous….loved it….
Thnx. Lilly dear….
Just loved it…..
Dini… this love it does wonders…
Hey…..asthma I couldn’t read some of the ff of urs……and when I read this ..,………………it was really a shocking epi to me …..yaar ur this much smart and ur creativity is great!!!! So go astha didi go….we all will surely enjoy ur ff dear……..
Sorry astha typo error this auto correction…….it’s not asthma dear it’s astha…….
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Ha ha …auto correct Asthma… I think Astha is more hazardous to heart…and Asthma is for lungs… ha ha…
Thnx. Diyas… keep loving dear…
Oh my Mata u r fantabulous the way u spice up ur stories is wow
Thnx. Dhar… it will encourage me more …..your praise dear…
Awesome….Loved it…
Simple yet amazing….
Rudy baby rocks with his logics…. 😉
Shivika as usual are charming…. 🙂
Thnx. Shivika dear…
Rudy was eager to get promotion..as uncle soon…..
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Relax… its Ok dear..
Kehne lagi khamoshiyan……oh Jaana…lolz
Kya karoon yaar, kehane keliye kuch bhi nahi hai.. Woh hi superbbb.. Awesome… Amazing… Sab bol ke mein tak gayi hoon…???
Tum hi mujhe kuch naye words sekha do..
Some times silence is the best way to say a lots of unsaid feelings….Bhavana…
ohho..aap toh om ki thara philosophical ho gayi..
I am not a great philosopher like Omkara… I just put my thought in to words….
Thoda Bhavana mein beh gayi thi…. ha ha..
Awesome
Thnx. Vincy…
haayyeee !!!!!! mai toh mar hi gyi !!!!!!!!
really loved it !! 😉 😉 😉
d way u wrote !!!!!
fablous !!!!!!!!
Pooja.. thank you…
a happy prosperous long life wish from me…for you …
Meri Gudiya rani tum ne tho puurae kae puura cinema dikayi diya sabko. Nd in mon , tue epi ur bro wil make us everyone cry by his acting . Luvd all ur dialogues . U gave us a double dhamaka in dis week dr . Luv u … Bless u abundantly…
Thank you Liba…
Both brother( Shivaay) and sister( Astha) on action mode…..lolz..
Aastha di
Hiiiiiiiiiii re jabra,
Hiiiiiiiiiii re jabra,
Fan ho gai
Ke tere ff ko padhte hi
Mai Teri ONCE AGAIN fan ho gai ???
Meri sister Amayaa ….
toh paagal hogayi….
uski dimag meri tarah dahi hogayi…
oh my maatha se gangaram hogayi…
Khotiyya…chup kar.. I am imagining you dancing like crazy on the busy street of Delhi…. kya ajeeb khayal aaraha hai mere dimaag mein…
Ha ha ha
Like really
I too imagine myself dancing crazy on de streets
Nd ur song is
Gzabbbbb
Amayaa… Delhi se Agra door nahi …sambhal ke haan…ha ha ha….
Awesome
Thnx. Rashi..
Wonderful
Thnx . Annanyaa… keep reading..
Oh astha dii… You are awesome…. What a wonderful os….. Seriousness ka base…. Romance ka traka…. Hilarious ki icing….
I want more…..
With lots of love and care dii….
And lots of love from reader…
Thank you Nikku dear…
Astha my cute baby , what a sweet os dear, I love it.?????????
Thnx. Darling…keep loving..
That was cute !
Thnx. Archisha…
Aastha ab kya kahoon….u r writing every scene before hand..putting on high expectations abt tje next part in serial…then i am ending up in disappointment as cvs are not reaching ur level..really u r too bad..????….
U have stolen my heart ..every dailogue and sentence in this os made me smile..blush.???????????.
And girl now i have got addicted to ur writings…if ull not post d next parts soon ….mere haal kya hoga mujhe bhi pata nai…soo ur responsible for my good health and i know that like ur shivay bhaiyya u will also accomplish ur responsibility..??.
Navya… Now that I have realised that I love you… I will not let any thing happen to you and your heart…Ha ha… I will post it soon..
Keep reading… keep loving … heart in hand…tongue in cheek…
Nyc os
Thnx. Alekhika dear…
Loved it…awesome..
Thnx….Zaveesha dear
Superb
Thnx. Fffan dear…keep reading..
Di……what is this??
Its just speechless…….. When I started to read this os I feel this is urs but the word ‘Kutti kamini’ makes me conformed that this is urs only! Astha di u stole my heart…..by ur creativity, ur writing style! Rudy….my buddy is very excitement to get promotion!! Ur Shivaay bhaiya is very naughty di…… Totally just perfect os!!!
Thank you Gayathri… I am also excited for a promotion as an aunt soon….of Ansh Or Shivika…lolz…
Oberois are totally crazy like I am..And my Brother is super naught and romantic ….ha ha…
AWESOME…….. SUPERB…….. FABULOUS……. FANTASTIC……. What not!!!!! U make me speechless di…… I always luv u & ur writting…..
Thnx. Banita dear…I too love you..
AWESOME…… SUPERB….. FABULOUS….. FANTASTIC….. What not!!!! U make me speechless di….. I always luv u & ur writting…..
Mistakenly pasted for the second time perhaps…any ways thnx. always…Banita….