Hello beautiful and handsome readers, thank you everyone for everyone who commented and Thank you silent readers too.
Before I begin I would like to tell you who will be kanchi’s children. I will write their real names and you can go and check them out…they are also shown in the pic…on the left side Kabir and Riya’s children and on the right side Sanchi and Kabir’s children ..i don’t know if you will like them but if you have any other suggestions please say so…
Sanchi and kabir’ s children
Aryan = Shravan Reddy
Kanchi= Sanaya pithawalla
They are both 17 years old in this story
Riya and “Kabir’s” children
Siddarth = Ashwini koul
Siyali = Sana Amin Sheikh
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A woman is seen shouting…she is none other than Sanchi..
Sanchi= Aryan..kanchi wake up or you will be late for college…..
She went into their room and saw Kanchi already woken up….and just came out from shower but Aryan sleeping like a kumbkaran…
Sanchi= look Kanchi has already woken up and you are here sleeping..come on wake up….kanchi is so precise just like Kab…she stopped herself..
Aryan= mom why are waking me up…this stupid kanchi wakes up early just to impress you..so you can buy her makeup…nothing else
Kanchi= oh please…..at least I wake up not like you..sleeping till afternoon..and showed her tongue?
Sanchi= now enough both of you…get ready and go to college and I will get make your breakfast…
Kanchi and Aryan= ok mom
On the other side
A man is holding a photo and crying..he is none other than Kabir
Kabir = why don’t you understand…i did nothing…..sanchi I am yours and will always be…why don’t you get it….i don’t know where you are..you just left me ..without knowing the truth..and hugs Sanchi’s photo…
Just then a 17 years old girl and 17 years old boy come saying dad..they are Siyali and Siddarth..kabir and Riya’s children..
Siddarth and Siyali= Dad we have come to seek your blessings for a new start at college…
Kabir = God bless you and keep you happy
Just then Riya comes.
Riya= Go my prince and princess or else you will be late for school
Kabir = No, I will drop them
Riya = ok dear..i meant Kabir
Kabir glared at her
They left
Riya to herself…” You still haven’t forgotten that stupid Sanchi…it was so easy to trap you in my net…?..but what can I do Kabir after all I love you
On the other hand
Aryan and kanchi= Bye mom we love you??
And they leave for college as well.
Precap = Aryan and Kanchi’s car broke down…..kabir takes them to college…..Kanchi is about to fall down but Siddarth helps her in the other hand Siyali bumps into Aryan
So this was it
Thanks for reading
And also who knows the serial or have watched Warrior high and Krishnadasi because the pairs are from there
49 Comments
Awesome ff… But I am litte confused if kabir is father of aryan, kanchi, sid, siyali… Then they four will be siblings right… Then how can they (sid and kanchi) (aryan and siyali) love each other as couple… Sorry for it but it’s just that I am litte confused…..
Thanks a lot Richa..actually Kabir is not the father of Siddarth and Siyali…Riya somehow trapped him…which you will know in comimg parts
its gud dear but kabir and riyas children is little bit confusion
btw waiting for next one
Thanks Hema..and the confusion will be away in the coming parts..I
Awesome.Loved it to the core.????
Fab as expected from a author like u.???????
I want to say one thing,i hope u don’t mind???Frankly ,i want to say that
Veer is also a part of sdch,so don’t u think so to add Veer as Kaanchi and Aryan’s fake
father.There r so many Sanveer fans too,so they would love to read it.☺☺☺
Kaanchi and Aryan fighting was too cute .
Keep writing dear.
Thanks a lot, yes you are right…now when I thought of it..i will add him..thanks for your suggestion..??
Hi Tania.It’s apathetic story.But Superb. Hope all misunderstandings cleared in upcoming updates.And all matches r good…Keep writing dear…
For starting new FF these flowers for u sissy?????
Thank you so much brother…..and thanks for the flowers too…hope you post your story soon.?
Hey moonlight this was fab nd so different I really loved this one pls post next part soon …I have a little bit crazy question will kanchi nd sidd ke lured kr bro sis ??
Sorry yr I am confused totally
Thanks Trisha..dont worry your confusion will fly away in the coming episodes..
Awesome start Tanya ??? I got cleared all my confused thoughts after reading your reply to Richa’s comment ???
Thanks a lot Ruwani…glad your confusion got away
Hey moon I hope u won’t mind me calling u moon talking about the episode it was just amazing nd I just hate that riya plzz post nxt one asap.
Hey u know what everyone in my home calls me moon it’s my pet name.
I will call you moon as well
Thanks a lot…i hate that Riya too
Nice story.eagarly waiting for next part……
Thanks Anu
amazing storyline Tania……….loved it a lot….one question…..aren’t pragya,isha & veer, a part of ur plot????? don’t want to miss the bff moments…….& yes, I used to watch krisnadasi, but no idea abt warrior high,but I hv seen ashwini koul in other shows(Sadda haq & kuch rang…) & sanaya in yeh hai aashiqui………..& they’re good………..eagerly waiting for the upcoming twist & turns in ur plot………
& dear…..i know u may or may not like this, but I can’t stop myself from writing…..can u add a part of grown-up Sunny,sanchi’s bro(played by Shaheer Sheikh)……actually I’m a big big devakshi fan, but after kuch rang pyar ke ended, I was very disappointed, so to get some scenes by Dev(Shaheer), I made a request for this character…..plz ignore if u didn’t like this idea……….
& sorry for such a long comment………luv u dear…….
Thank you Riya…yes I will definitely try to add him..i can’t just ignore your request like that…and about Isha and Pragya…yes I will add them as well..thanks for your suggestion
A very big THANKS to u for this dear………eagerly waiting for ur nxt update………
Wowwww it’s really amazing it’s really unique I loved it and sorry for late comment
Thank you Ashnita…
Awesome story Tania ! I loved reading it …. but it was a bit short ..try writing longer … loved the epi … update soon
Thank you Neha..yes I will try to write longer next time for sure
Tanu Amazing very new concept loved it a lot.
Thank you so much Anee
It was amazing but lamp little confused and this I don’t know what to do with this girl.
Thank you Divya…your confusion will get away in the the comimg episodes
Very good part! Keep it up???????
Thanks You a
really nice loved reading it..you are a talented writer..plz post your next part soon dear…if you don’t mind can I call you Tani..love you loads
Thanks Suzaan…yes you can call me whatever you like..love you too dear
Ooooh tania! U r writing this ff…I m really sorry dear I was just so busy that didnt read the first part and also didnt comment.(puppy face) really very sorry sweetie.Just now I was thinking about that which ff u would be writing and opened this ff to read the story and got suprised to see u as author….the story is amazing yaar and also unique but sad to know that kabeer is with that devil riya….hope sanchi’s misunderstanding gets cleared.loved it dear and love u too….
Thanks Vrusti..yes their mis understandings will be cleared…love you too dear
Sorry dear but I have one question…r aryan and siyali twins?? Because they r twins naa so I wanted to ask u dear..waiting eagerly for next part dear…
No, they are not…just some months difference
Sorry again I was wanted to say that they are of same age! Mistakely typed twins…
Yes they are the same age
Hey tania nice story ploat dear n my confussion got clear reading ur reply to other i know kabir didnt do anything its all bcoz of that evil ria nice amaz epi plzzzzzz update nxt soon
Thank you Niyaa…yes I will update soon
HEY TANIA………..ITS AN AWESOME START TO UR FF…………..I LIKE IT THAT U R IGNORING ALL THOSE WHO ARE CRITICIZING UR STORY AND WORKING HARD FOR US GUYS TO WRITE IT AS BEAUTIFULLY AS U CAN
I REALLY APPRECIATE UR EFFORTS…………AND REQUEST U TO KEEP DOING THINGS U LIKE ND NEVER THINK OF OTHERS
BACK TO THE STORY………….ITS AMAZING…………..I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY S=DOES THAT ENVIOUS RIYA ALWAYS COMES IN BETWEEN THESE TWO LOVEBIRDS…………A QUESTION ARE U GOING TO SHOW A LOVESTORY BETWEEN THE FOUR KIDS………………..IF SO HOW IS IT POSSIBLE AS KABEER IS THEIR FATHER SO THEY SHOULD BE SIBLINGS………JUST A SMALL DOUGHT………THINK SO WILL GET SOLVED IN THE UPCOMING EPISODES………
UR SILENT READER [ MY HABIT OF SIGNING OFF] { DONT MIND }
SIYA
Siya..thanks a lot..your comment brought a smile on my face..yes their will be a love story. But they aren’t siblings..kabir is not the father of Sid and Siyali…riya somehow trapped him..so don’t worry…and thanks for commenting..??
HEY TANIA………..ITS AN AWESOME START TO UR FF…………..I LIKE IT THAT U R IGNORING ALL THOSE WHO ARE CRITICIZING UR STORY AND WORKING HARD FOR US GUYS TO WRITE IT AS BEAUTIFULLY AS U CAN
I REALLY APPRECIATE UR EFFORTS…………AND REQUEST U TO KEEP DOING THINGS U LIKE ND NEVER THINK OF OTHERS
BACK TO THE STORY………….ITS AMAZING…………..I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY DOES THAT ENVIOUS RIYA ALWAYS COMES IN BETWEEN THESE TWO LOVEBIRDS…………A QUESTION ARE U GOING TO SHOW A LOVESTORY BETWEEN THE FOUR KIDS………………..IF SO HOW IS IT POSSIBLE AS KABEER IS THEIR FATHER SO THEY SHOULD BE SIBLINGS………JUST A SMALL DOUGHT………THINK SO WILL GET SOLVED IN THE UPCOMING EPISODES………
UR SILENT READER [ MY HABIT OF SIGNING OFF] { DONT MIND }
SIYA
HEY TANIA………..ITS AN AWESOME START TO UR FF…………..I LIKE IT THAT U R IGNORING ALL THOSE WHO ARE CRITICIZING UR STORY AND WORKING HARD FOR US GUYS TO WRITE IT AS BEAUTIFULLY AS U CAN
I REALLY APPRECIATE UR EFFORTS…………AND REQUEST U TO KEEP DOING THINGS U LIKE ND NEVER THINK OF OTHERS
BACK TO THE STORY………….ITS AMAZING…………..I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY DOES THAT ENVIOUS RIYA ALWAYS COMES IN BETWEEN THESE TWO LOVEBIRDS…………A QUESTION ARE U GOING TO SHOW A LOVESTORY BETWEEN THE FOUR KIDS………………..IF SO HOW IS IT POSSIBLE AS KABEER IS THEIR FATHER SO THEY SHOULD BE SIBLINGS………JUST A SMALL DOUBT………THINK SO WILL GET SOLVED IN THE UPCOMING EPISODES………
UR SILENT READER [ MY HABIT OF SIGNING OFF] { DONT MIND }
SIYA
sorry posted the comments thrice………..my mom called me urgently when i was typing and my younger sibling did this………i literally scolded him for this
Never mind…dear
Amazing…. Outstanding………. Tooooo good……
Yr its really interesting and loved it from bottom of my heart and sooo excited for their past revelations!!!
Keep going and so glad that u don’t pay attention to those silly people…….. All the best and can’t wait to read further!!
Thank you so much Abhi..i have submitted the next part..