Hello my lovely readers, thank you for Everyone who commented…it means a lot and love you all.
I will be adding another character….
Tiya= she loves Siddarth and is after him…and is very jealous when kanchi is around him…
As usual Everyone was working on their project
Kanchi : I will go to the washroom to wash my hands..there are in a complete mess..
Siddarth = You are always in a mess chipkali
Kanchi= at least I try to make myself clean…not like you eating bananas all the time like a Bandar actually you are a Bandar and she started laughing…and ran to the washroom
Siddarth = Youuu
Aryan = Why do you always irriatate my sister?
Sid= I don’t know why…but I love irritating her…chipkali
Tiya who was seeing this fumed in anger…she went after kanchi….
Tiya = hey you…why are you after my Sid…he is only mine do you get that….just because you don’t have a father doesn’t mean you will try to trap guys so they can marry you and you can become rich…fatherless girl
All the words didn’t hurt her at first but about having no father hurt her to the core …she ran out and started crying…
Kabir who had come to Savitri devi to pick Sid and Siyali saw Kanchi crying and went to her
Kabir placed his hand on the shoulder
Kanchi= papa and hugged him tightly…kanchi felt so much peace in his arms…kabir as well..he never felt the same feeling when he hugged Sid or Siyali but her hug was something different…it was unexplainable
Kabir = What happened beta?
Kanchi saw it was Kabir and broke the hug..
Kanchi= I am sorry sir..nothing
Kabir = i am like your papa…so tell me what happened…why are you crying…
Kanchi= nothing sir
Kabir = if you don’t want to tell don’t….but don’t cry…you see your makeup is removing…you don’t want to be ugly right?
Kanchi burst into laughter…
Kabir= in his mind ( she looks just like Sanchi when laughing)
Kanchi= thank you so much sir…you are the best…
Kabir = the best? No I am not…if I was the best I would never have been away from her
Kanchi = Did you say anything?
Kabir = No, nothing beta where are Sid and Siyali?
Kanchi = they are working on the project…oh there they come…
Siyali = papa thank God you came..i was missing you
Kabir = I missed you too…come on let’s go….bye Aryan and kanchi…keep smiling
Kanchi = I wish we had a father like this…
Aryan = I know right…mama never even showed our father’s picture…
Kanchi = let’s go bhai
They went home
Sanchi = Aa ge mere chipmunks…let me serve you lunch
Kanchi and Aryan sat on the table and started eating…
Aryan = Mom what was the name of our father?
Sanchi was shocked after hearing this…
Sanchi = What are you asking beta?….
Kanchi = Mom i want an answer….why don’t you tell us where is our father…why are you hiding this from us.
Sanchi = I don’t want you to know
Aryan = Why mom? We have all the rights to know about our father…please tell us
Kanchi= I have never asked you anything but please tell us
Sanchi = after knowing the truth you will hate him which I don’t want
Aryan = Mom please tell us….please he begged her
Sanchi = okay..i will
Kanchi = Thank you so much maa
Precap = Sanchi and kabir ‘s past !
That was it…Tell me what would you like me to post next
1.) History repeated itself part 5
2.) Teenage love part 3
3.) AN OS
Thank you for reading…
Regards ,
Moonlight Tania.
37 Comments
Oh my God u have put me in trouble.
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Pls try to update all three but I want teenage love to be update first.then this one
Lol??
Thanks Priyanshi…ok I will try
I. Just hope kanchi and aryan will get to know that Kabir is their father…..pls reveal it in front of them soon
Thanks Sana and yes I will reveal it soon
Post first an os…thn history repeat itself,,am just loving it…its so diffrent plot nd thoughts…
Thanks Sanjukta…i will definitely try
It is becoming interesting but teenage first due to its shocking precap
Thanks Kanchi and sure
Amazing
Thanks Alia…glad you liked it
wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod waiting for next part
Thank you so much Ashnita
no no no….I really want that Kanchi,Aryan bonding with kabir should increase first……..afterwards they should know he’s their father…..this is bcoz, in the beginning they can’t know how’s kabir….eventually after spending time with him they’ll know him better & later this will help them in solving their parents misunderstanding……..dear, its completely my perspective, u may proceed as u like………..abt ur nxt update, I’m really confused what to choose so I would say whatever is possible on ur part, u post that…………luv u a lot Tania……….
Thanks Riya sweetie….you are perfectly right but first I will reveal the past of kanchi then …i will post whatever is possible…love you too sweetie
It was awesome plz update teenage love first ..
Thank you Jessica..i will sure do
Please post part 5. Next I absolutely love this ff!!! Really want to know the kids reaction
Thanks Palak and sure dear
Omg perfect tania I love all ur os so better will be an os first nd then teenage love story afterwards this one (I know m being greedy) nd sorry for that luv uh sweetie
Sweetie thanks a lot…and you are not being greedy…love you too and you are my inspiration
Its amazing
Thanks Amnaa
It was sweet and sober………. Loved it to the core of my heart!!
Thank you Abhi dear..glad you liked it
Awesome one Tania ??? you can update anything per your wish dear I love all your stories???
Thank you so much Ruwani dear…my stories are nothing in front of you..
Omg tania amaz epi tania nd i think kancki aryan bonding increase with kabir afterthat they know about kabir reality… For me post ist teenage lov 2 os then this one nooo ist os 2nd teenage then this ohhh m confused so do u what ever u want to do…but post asap….
Thank you so much Niyaa dear…i will post whatever I can…i will start writing now and thanks dear
Please update all because I this three and coming to ff it’s amazing awesome fabulous mind blowing update soon
Thank you so much Divya…glad you like all of them
Tania dear it was fabb amz
And plz reveal the past soon to arychi
And now im in a big trouble to choose one of them plz if u can so plz update that three if not then only two a teenage luv and this one
If not then plz post this one first
Plz plz plz tania dear
Aww thank you so much Sanju….i have submitted the teenage love and next will be The OS and larger that will be this….but thank you for your lovely çomment…love you dear
Tania dear it was fabb amz
And plz reveal the past soon to arychi
And now im in a big trouble to choose one of them plz if u can so plz update that three if not then only two a teenage luv and this one
If not then plz post this one first plz plz plz
Plz plz plz tania dear
I would like you to post allnof them one by one ..
Sure Neha
Nice episode…..
Thanks Anu