Hi this is ramya.
Let’s start with a smile.
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Ho gaya hai tumse pyaar sajna.
Recap – some masti in class. Noddy orders Taneja gang to prepare for teacher day. Kunj to get jealous. Twinj fight. Twinkle met with an accident.
Episode #8
Kunj- mai twinkle se pyaar karta hu? ( I love twinkle? )
Uv-ha kya tujhe abhi bhi samaj nahi aa raha tere aankho mai uske liye pyaar dikhta hai ( yes. Y still u r not getting that. I can see love for her in your eyes)
Kunj was all shocked by listening to uv. He was in dilemma whether uv is saying right or wrong but kunj somewhere was attracted towards her. N he don’t know whether it is love or simple attraction.
On the other hand.
In OT
Twinkle was heart broken that kunj had not came to see her in her worst condition where she needs her best friend.
“kunj u r that much upset that at least u not even came to see me that to by knowing that I had met with an accident. ” thought twinkle n a lone tear escaped.
Kunj sees twinkle through the window n smiles by seeing her OK but his heart wants him to go to her n hug her n to take care of her but he can’t as he remembers Leela words. He was in dilemma whether he loves her or not. But he kept those feelings aside n was observing twinkle from outside without anyone notice. After a while he left from there by thinking that twinkle had not seen him. But little he know that at last twinkle had seen him.
“yeh padaku narayan mujhse Mile bina kyu chala gaya. Aur pura taneja gang aisa upset kyu hai. Feels like something fishy.”(this padaku narayan had went without meeting me. N y the taneja gang is upset. Something is fishy) thought twinkle.
Kunjs room
Kunj was still in dilemma. All the while uv’s words are revolving in his brain n only one question is revolving in his brain “do I really love twinkle ” . He remembers the time spent with twinkle that how they met how they had fun on picnic everything n he remembers accident scene immediately a lone tear escaped from his eyes. He want to call twinkle but can’t because of Leela aunty words. Then a idea popped in his brain.
He calls uv .
K-hello uv
Uv -hi kunj
K-umm. How is twinkle?
Uv -she is OK. She got discharged so we took her to her home. Just before I left from there.
K-sighs in relief n says OK.
Uv – what u thought?
K-about what
Uv- that u love twinkle
K-i will talk to u tomorrow in the school.
Uv -ok bye
K-bye.
Kunj was happy that twinkle is safe at the same time he was sad as he was not with twinkle when she needs him.
K-babaji please take care of her.
N soon he drifts into sleep while thinking about twinkle.
NEXT DAY
AT SCHOOL
All Taneja gang reached school n went to do prayer but today they are not making fun of noddy instead all are sad as they are missing twinkle.
All went to their class.
Kunj sat alone in bench after a while uv sat beside him. When Alisha from their front bench tried to talk to him but he not paid any attention. Chinki and cherry also came near kunj bench. All are having random talks but kunj was lost in his own world but got disturbed when Alisha started talking about twinkle.
Alisha -today that chipku twinkle not came.
Maya (one of the student)- no
Alisha -thankgod today there will be no complaints from this class. She is such a spoilt brat.
By listening to this all taneja gang members burning in anger.
Chinki – hey Alisha be in ur limits. Dare u if u say any word against twinkle.
Alisha – y I have said anything wrong ha.
Uv – see who is saying teacher ki chamchi.
Others giggles
Cherry – don’t mess with taneja gang.
Alisha – else what will u do?
She starts to say bad about twinkle. This is enough for kunj.
Kunj – ENOUGH IS ENOUGH
Alisha becomes quite n all looks at him.
Kunj – dare u say any word against twinkle. U r the spoilt brat not her. N if u say any word against twinkle consequences will be won’t be good.
Alisha becomes quite n sits in her place at that time shoba madam comes n all wishes her. She starts her class.
Uv – what was that kunj?
Kunj-what
Uv – y u shouted on that Alisha
Kunj – because she is speaking bad about twinkle n I can’t handle if anyone speaks bad about her.
Uv – so finally u accepted that u r in love.
Kunj – when I said that.
Uv – oh shut up kunj. If u won’t love her y u reacted in that way. Anyone can say u love her by seeing u accept the fact. See u all say that I’m bhudhu naranyan but now u r acting like u r a bhudhu narayan.
Shoba mam – kya ho raha hai uv.
Uv – sorry mam
Rest of the day went with classes.
As school got completed all left to their houses. whole Tameka gang went to twinkle house afterwards except kunj.
TWINKLE ROOM
Twinkle was feeling bored by lying on the bed. Then there comes cherry, uv and chinki.
Chinki – how are you feeling now?
Twinkle – I’m good.
Uv – we missed u.
Twinkle – aww bhudu narayan even I missed u all.
She sees for kunj on not finding him she asks.
Twinkle – where is kunj?
Uv – he had not came.
Twinkle – ohh.
N they all had some random talks.
KUNJ ROOM
” is twinkle is OK? I want to meet her but Leela aunty said I should not. Do I really love twinkle? What uv said is right that I love twinkle? How will I get to know? ” is what thinking kunj .
He again remembers all the time spent with twinkle. Their meet n how kunj got jealous of that boy n twinkle accident n today’s his encounter with Alisha.
Kunj – I love twinkle. Omg I’m in love he becomes hell happy.
He slept with a cute smile thinking about his best time spent with twinkle.
NEXT DAY
all went to school except twinkle n the day went with their daily routine.
After school got completed.
Uv came to kunj.
Uv – hey kunj after going to home come to twinkle house.
Kunj -y I mean leela aunty said that day u know na
Uv – leela aunty only said.
Kunj – y what happened
Uv – how would I know.
Kunj – OK I will be there.
Kunj went to his home n got ready in his casuals n went to twinkle home. All the way only one question is haunting him that y Leela has called him.
After a while he reached twinkle house n went inside after ringing bell as one of servants opened it. There Leela was standing. He went to her.
Kunj – a.. au…aunty
Leela – I’m sorry kunj.
Kunj looks at her confused.
Leela – yesterday that boy who had done accident came to me and said that it was their fault so he asked forgiveness from me. I’m so sorry beta I shouted on u.
( ab dekho twinj ko juda nahi kar sakti na)
Kunj – aunty please don’t say like that. U r elder to me. Indeed it’s my fault too.
Leela gets impressed by kunjs words n asks him to go n meet twinkle.
Kunj goes to twinkle room n knocks on the door.
Twinkle – ” come in”
As kunj enters twinkle gets angry while kunj gets teary eyed as twinkle had bandages on head, hand n even on leg.
Twinkle- who are you?
Kunj – it’s me kunj twinkle
Twinkle-i don’t know any kunj.
Up-to now kunj understood that twinkle is angry with him. So he went towards her n sat beside her on bed.
Kunj – I’m sorry.
By now twinkle had water in her eyes n she started hitting him with pillow.
Twinkle – how dare u to ignore me?
She is hitting him continuously while kunj was silent.
Twinkle – ouch
Kunj – aaram se twinkle dekh tu abhi bhi tik nahi hai. ek baar tik ho ja phir tujhe jitna maarna hai make. ( twinkle see u r not well right now. Once u will become fine then hit me as much as u want)
Twinkle stops n becomes silent.
Twinkle – y u not came to meet after I met with accident.
Kunj – I’m so sorry twinkle I was so scared to face u.
Twinkle – u know u r very bad I wont talk with u.
Kunj-im so sorry n holds his ears.
Twinkle – OK but don’t repeat again.
Suddenly twinkle room door gets open n there comes chinki, cherry n uv.
Chinki, cherry & uv – kunj .
All are shocked to see kunj but remains Silent.
Kunj – hi guys.
Twinkle – hey.
They all have some random talks.
Uv slowly asks kunj.
Uv – what happened how aunty allowed u.
Kunj narrates whole story.
Uv – oho tho yeh baat hai.
Twinkle – guys exams aane wale hai n I’m not attending school. How will cope up with u all n twinkle becomes sad
All gets into deep thinking.
Kunj – idea.
Uv – what
Kunj – after school gets complete we all will come to twinkle house n we will do combine studies in that way we can study n even twinkle will also won’t miss any classes.
Cherry – great kunj
Twinkle becomes happy n kunj smiles by seeing her.
” in this way I can spend some time with you twinkle ” thinks kunj.
Uv – so it’s done from tomorrow after school we will come to Taneja mansion.
All hoots as they all can even njoy with studying.
They had some random talks n went to their houses.
Kunj was more than happy as he can meet his twinkle daily n can spend some time.
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I know it was not that good. I tried to reach ur expectations.
I’m late was stuck up with some work.
I know I’m not that good writer but tried to reach ur expectations.
Next turn is of aamna.
Aanu all the best.
Love you all keep smiling
35 Comments
Hiya Ramya!
yaar who said it was not good? it was awesome! You caught a nice grip! That was really Amazing to read! Beautifully written!
All the Best Mango!
With Love,
Urs Tamanna
Thank you so much
Well idea tho shayad teri Story padne per hi aaya hai
Love you keep smiling
hilarious
a bit emotional
superb
incredible
loved it
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz post as soon as possible
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
waiting for it
Thank you so much
Amazing thank God everything get okay between twinj as leela has missundering kunj all the best Aamana
Thank you so much Sidmin
Hey ramya it was soooooooo sooooooo soooooo amazing!!!!! ?????????? yipeee finally kunj realised his love for twinkle !!!!!!????????? i am soooo happpyyyy!!!!! Hope twinkle also realises !!!! Love this episode to the core!!!!!????????? i am sooo sorry for
not commenting on ur ff but now i will comment..waiting eagerly for nxt ..i give u 9.5/10..
Post soon
Love u!?
Thank you so much Rochika
I’m glad u have commented
FANTABULOUS !!!???….. Finally Leela allowed Kunj to meet Twinkle?…..
I am excited for the next …post soon Aamna??
Thank you so much cp
Great epi
Finally kunj realised his love for twinkle
Waiting for next
Thank you so much Pallavi
Superbbbb episode yr…
U just nailed it….
Mindd blowing….
Thank you so much Lama
Awesome
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Loved it…
Too good…
Love u..
All the best ramuuu
Thank you preshu
Love you
Ammu it was awesome fantastic don’t u dare to say that u r not a gud writer
U r a good writer ok
Thank you Nishu akka
Love you
Haayeeee shooo cute finally everything solved between twinj loveddddddd it and kunj realisation amazinggggg …yaar loved each n every scene ..
Wow leela impressed with kunj saasu maa ko impress karliya ?????..
Loved each n everything don’t u dare say it was bad okay …
Love u shoooooo much…
Best of luck aamna ????….
Do post soon ????
Thank you Sam
Ab saasu ma ko tho impress karna banta hai na
Love you
amazing fabolous
post sooooooooooooon
Thank you maha
Nice job ramya
Wow finally kunj realised his love for twinkle
Wow our uv is also smart
Waiting for the next update
Do continue
Thank you Sohi
Love you keep smiling
Heya not fair ha .
I didn’t know u write ff .
U r Amazing ?.
Thank you Sanam
I started from a while ago
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What a concept..
All the parts… Are just amazing!!! Loved them…??
Thank you Aanya
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Amazing awesome fabulous cute
Thank you Purnima
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Sorry for the late one..but it was amazing..
N truly u dint reach expectation..but did all unecpected…
Goood turn….??? loved it
Thank you Aamu
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oyyyyyyeeeee hoyeeeeeeee ramieee…….♥
tussi great ho…….♥
u literally nailed it…….♥
rocked it ♥
osm ♥
speechless ♥
finally leela allowed…..♥
loved it soooooo mch……….♥
marveleous ♥
emotional but lovely…….
love u soooooooo mch ♥
mazaa aagya…….♥
n dare u say urslf a bad rtr samjhii…….♥
love u ramieee…..♥
Ramya it was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb episode. Don’t tell you are bad writer else main gussa ho jaungi.beautifully written nd finally jamai raja ne apni saasu maa ko mana liya??????????.loved it so much.
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Thank you so much diii
I’m happy u liked it
Love you keep smiling