Hi This is VHM aka Harika coming up with a new story / Fanfiction on Ishqbaaz. This will involve all the three couples . A subtle romance, thrill, accusations, support and family bonding. Get on a new ride with me and do support me.
Please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes…….Hope the readers would support me the same way as they have supported me till date……
Author’s Note : Please read the Author’s Note posted before Precap. Thank you in advance !!!
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”Haan tho Anika…you were saying about some lunch date…please tell me in detail as you know I am very poor in these matters”
”Why don’t you ask your brothers then?”
”Who this Om..forget it, if I ask him he will ask me to say some tongue twisting Shaayari”
”Shivaay” Om looked at him in surprise, while Shivaay gestured him not to take it to his heart. Om supressed hi smile
”Actually can anyone say what’s happening?” Priyanka cut off
”Prinku…come I will say” Om took her to other side
”Come on Anika…give me some ideas for a perfect lunch date. See I don’t generally request , but please” Shivaay said
”what do you think of me? Some date organiser that I will have my brain filled of these nonsensical ideas of arranging perfect dates. Listen I never went on any dates nor have I ever witnessed any dates…haan but I ate dates a lot…they are tasty” she banged the lid once again making faces
”Didi…why do you get so irritated , Shivaay sir is asking for a help…you can be polite too”
”Gauri ..you don’t come in between…why should I help him for his date with some Special girl whom I don’t know…and by the way don’t forget you are my sister before his employee…got it…now eat quietly”
”ohh so that’s your problem that you donno her…fine I will make you talk to her so that you will know her and then will you arrange a date for us. Pretty please”
”Uff…can’t you understand when told once..aapka date gaya tel lene (go hell with your date)..mein jaa rahi hoon (i am going)…” she left from there much irritated
While Shivaay, Priyanka and Om laughed holding their stomachs and Gauri was trying to understand what was actually happening
”Shivaay bhayya..you are teasing her a lot …get ready to face consequences too” Prinku warned
”I don’t know what’s happening but I have never seen Anika didi so upset and weird since I met her. Be careful Shivaay sir…she will pounce anytime and then” Gauri gave her advice
”nothing will happen Guari..i know her very well…in all these years she didn’t change a bit…she is the same weirdo” Shivaay smiled
”Shivaay…I am so happy to see you smiling…something we missed all through these years…thanks to Anika for getting our bhai back to form” Om put his hand over Shivaay’s shoulders and spoke
”true..and we love you bhayya for being so” Priyanka hugged Shivaay
”Awee…how sweet” Gauri said and smiled
”ok ok…you know this doesn’t suit me at all” Shivaay said adjusting his coat
————–Anika’s Cabin
”what does he think of himself. Hrithik Roshan. I have to arrange a date for him , he was saying this to me. Why should i? Not only me my chamki will also not arrange anything. Huhh…kanji aankhon wala bagad billa . I would rather destroy his date than arranging one. Will..you..arrange…a …date (in the most irritating soggy way) ” she spoke
”perfect..i will destroy his date…he he hu hu ha ha…SSO ..wait for my vaar when you go on date with your jaanebahaar(dearest)…wahh I am being so poetic …wah wah wah wah…Think Anika think…what should you do ”
”mmm” ”mmm” ”mmm” she was saying to herself and knocking her brain with her finger looking at ceiling
”idea…yess…ab aayega mazaa(now it will be fun)….but first I need to know when will he be going on date”
————Omkara Cabin
”Hey Gauri…come come” Om spoke when Gauri entered
”here the designs I made for the new construction deal. Have a look at and let me know. I will make changes as per your concerns if raised ”
Gauri turned to go when Om held her hand from behind. Her breathe beca,e uneven and she turned towards him and looked at him…He left her hand
”So…sorry..Gauri”
”For what Om?”
”for leaving your home that day and saying all those which I suppose wouldn’t have made any sense to you” he turned his face away
”Om..”
He didn’t look at her
”look at me Om” She made his face turn towards her
”shall we go for a coffee and discuss there”
”yeah”
—————–Cafeteria
”Om…I donno what had happened with you earlier…but I didn’t feel bad for whatever you spoke..infact I am happy , that something that’s known only to you, you have opened up to me. Yeah not completely but a pinch of it”
”you understand me so much Gauri…thank you…after my siblings may be you are the one thing that has happened best to me” he looked at her holding her hands spoke
Gauri smiled…”Same from my end to”
”Don’t you want to know what I meant that day?”
”you will yourself tell me at the right time…I believe it and if you don’t wish to tell , I respect that too”
”you are ..you are just the best” he got up to hug her when she stopped him and pointed to the surroundings smiling
He pulled the elastic of the rubberband that binds his long hair, she was into splits
”by the way , you said you wanted to tell me something about you. What’s that about” Om asked
”I will also tell you at the right time. But let me try by myself first”
”okay as you say”
”anything else Mr.Jhatadhaari Hippie?”
”After staying with Anika..i am sure you are also getting weird words …sangath ka asar you know”
”true that..she is something else…”
”I know..but she is very sweet”
”yes…I so wish she was my real sister…life would be so better”
”and I so wish that she comes as my Bhabhi..life would be double better” Om winked and gave hifi to Gauri
”by the way where is Rudra? Even Saumya isn’t seen”
”Rudra had done something so annoying that there’s a huge fight between those both” saying this Om narrated what Rudra did and what Om and Shivaay advised him
”awee Poor boy…I will talk to him after the office and now let’s get back to work”
”yeah..after you”
They both left to their works
———————–OM
Rudra was doing Gym and was remembering Sumo’s words and ShivOm’s advice
”If I wouldn’t make fun of my friend whom will I make fun of and what was the need for her to get angry…if she is fat I will call her fat…like I am dumb she calls me dumbo…I never feel bad…by the way i am not so dumb….fine, if she doesn’t want to talk to me, I will also not talk to her..”
He speaking to himself lifted dumbbell’s instead of dumbbell and screamed in pain leaving the dumbbells and they apparently fell on his feet making him whither in pain
”Sumo…Fatso…I will not leave you” he cried
That’s when his mobile rang
”hello..”
”Rudra..hi…Gauri here”
”gauri Didi..hello..how are you?”
”am good..and was missing you…so called you…are you fine?”
”yes and no”
”why what happened?”
”That Fatso..i mean Sumo..i mean Saumya scolded me and left to her home leaving me alone with my car in the highway” he made a cry baby face and spoke
”Awee Rudra…don’t be sad…but ..but you shouldn’t have teased her on her weight..it’s sensitive matter for any girl isn’t it and with the reason she said , she is hurt more…”
”but what to do now..i am getting bored without her and without teasing her and there she might be enjoying with her mom…I am sure she doesn’t for once remembered me till now”
”How can you say that?”
”because she hasn’t sent a single message till now”
”did you send her ?”
”no..”
” See you did mistake so you have to rectify.”
”but what should I do”
Gauri said something to which Rudra nodded and said thank you…the call ended and Rudra smiled
——————————Anika’s Cabin
Shivaay stood near Anika’s cabin and was talking to someone …Anika took baby steps and leaned to the cabin door to listen to Shivaay. Khanna who saw Anika doing so, gestured Shivaay about the same. Shivaay smirked and raised the tone so that Anika would listen
Shivaay on call ”Ok …sure…we will meet..i am also eager to meet you”
Anika spoke to herself ”He said he will meet and he is smiling also that means he is on call with that Lucchi Tucchi and date is fixed. Let me hear what he talks further”
Shivaay on call ”Ohh ya perfect..at what time?”
Anika spoke to herself ” Haan haan Tell the time…”
Shivaay on call ”yeah sure Lunch..it is perfect..fine then ”
Anika ”ohho…how much time will they take to decide the venue and time..phone bill kitna aata hoga inlogon ka (how much do they pay for their phone bill)…waise bhi how will it matter (anyways, how will it matter) he is Oberoi aur inke paas paise ki pahad hoti hogi(he is oberoi and he has a hill of money) anyways Concentrate Anika..Concentrate”
Shivaay on call ”Zodiac Hotel, 13: 00 hrs Tomorrow for Lunch…will meet there..bye…take care and see you soon”
He ended the call and left from there without seeing Anika
Anika spoke to herself ”Zodiac Hotel, 1 PM tomorrow ..he he hu hu ha ha…Bhagad Billa now wait and watch how will I do chopsy of your lunch. She will not roam or will dare to talk to you ever again and left with no option , you will chose me to be the one whom you would want to share everything with”
She came back to her desk and started working when her Intercom ringed
”Anika”
”Yeah Shivaay”
”Can you come to my cabin once”
”sure”
————–Shivaay’s Cabin
”Come in Anika…no need to knock the door”
”you called me”
”yeah…are you free tomorrow at lunch time..i have an important ” before he could complete
”No..i am not free…absolutely busy …I have…I have”
Shivaay looked on and said
”I have yeah parent teacher meet in Sahil’s school..yeah Parent teacher meet…infact I am thinking …I am thinking of taking a day off ”
”Ohh okay..Parent Teacher meet…Sahil’s school…okay…fantastic…okay…you can take a day off then..all the best”
”yeah..thank You..can..Can I leave now”
”yeah..”
Anika left and Shivaay smiled
Shivaay TAM ”Stupid…I know there is no PT meet in Sahil’s school…as you fumble whenever you tell lies or you hide something…”
His thoughts travelled to his childhood with this
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”Stupid…what are you doing?”
”you…why are you here?”
”I came to spend time with you”
”i..i ..yeah I am busy..i can’t talk to you” she turned and spoke wiping her lips
”But ..i find something strange…what are you doing?”
”no..no..nothing..what will I hide?”
”something is wrong..tell me stupid else I will call Aunty”
”no…” she screamed
”Then say the truth”
”Why do you want to know”
”because I want to know”
”i…I ..i said na I am hiding nothing..absolutely nothing”
”When did I say you are hiding something Stupid”
”oops..i mean..i mean..i am doing nothing..you go Khadoos”
”Now without finding what you are hiding…I am not gonna go from here”
”You are Khadoos Singh Oberoi..i found right name for you”
”whatever you think” and he started searching and removed a pillow to find out 6 empty cups and one cup half filled with Icecream. His eyes widened
”Anika closed her eyes and mouth”
He removed her hands from her mouth and patted her slowly, pointing his fingers towards the bed
”Are you serious Stupid, you were eating Ice creams that too hiding it from everyone and then saying me that you are doing nothing.”
”woh…woh..i ..i like icecreams and today there was some offer so dad brought many different flavours..mom asked that we will eat little everyday..but you know me..i can’t be at peace until I eat my tummy full of icecream…so”
”So..you ate everything hiding from everyone”
”yes” she sat on her bed pretty cool
”you are impossible Stupid. Wait I will tell aunty now”
”Oyee…if you tell her anything na..i ..i …I will not talk to you for one full day…”
”fine don’t talk …I will wait till day after tomorrow then”
”You are such a khadoos..you don’t like me at all…you don’t feel I am your friend…you are going to complain against me” saying that she coughed a lot
”see this is why everyone asks not to eat so many ice-creams at a time and over that your melodrama…now come to the doctor and get some medicines before aunty gets to know”
”That means you are not gonna say to mom?”
”no..i can’t see you get scoldings…”
”Awee…you are so sweet” she hugged him
He too hugged her and said ”I can’t see you fall sick Stupid…please don’t do such things ever”
”ok fine…don’t start your senti talks…by the way how did you suspect that I was hiding something”
”Ohh that..you get nervous and repeat all the words twice whenever you say lie or hide something”
”uff …next time I should be careful”
”Whaat? Stupid you are seriously”
She ran smiling and he too ran behind her.
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”Shivaay shall we leave for home ” Om came to him bringing him out of the thoughts.
Author’s Note : I never expected that i will continue this story to 25 episodes and more as initially i didn’t have the confidence on the plot. But all your opinions, wishes and words of appreciation boosted me so much that this story has now kept me thinking and make me write with enthusiasm. I want to thank all the readers, who have taken their time to read and post their opinions. Thank you so much all the silent readers , who have pressed the LIKE BUTTON as well to all those readers who pressed DISLIKE BUTTON (You wouldn’t dislike if you don’t read or just scroll the page). Special Thanks to
Astmasiddika, Ritu Ritika, Harini, Banita, Nikita, Sameera, Prabha, Raji, Chaithu, Vishnusri, Jeevitha, Iman, Alna Ashok, ChandanaSSV, Katz, Avika, Nithu, Fenil, Neeru Sabikhi, Jeeta, MeMyself (Donno the real name), Medhangel, Kaur, Pavani, Brisha, Agga4102, Hiyam, 12323, Sweety, Jeevi, Shiny Tirupathi, Chaitanya, Shanaya_Rajput, 🙂 (This is one id in TU ), Stargazer, Vishwas, Bilkisu, Hauwau, Nati .
for your time, patience and motivation through your opinions. Lots of love and best wishes to you. Keep smiling and keep motivating me.
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Precap : An person to make an entry…The disastrous Lunch Date of Shivaay !!! To know more stay tuned.
This is the Twenty Fifth episode…..please do let me know , how you felt after reading this…any opinions good or bad is welcome…i would reply as soon as possible……….do press the like button and post your opinion without fail…..Thank you so much !!!!
25 Comments
Hey hari
Congrats for completing 25 episodes ??????
Coming to episode kya bolu yrr khidkithod tha
Starting with
1) scenes of organising date for shivay??
2) jealous anika ?
3) priyanka and gauri warning
4) lunch date at zodiac hotel ( girl unknown) ??
5) lovey dovey talks of rikara ??
6) use of luchi tuchi, mr jhatadhaari hippi awww you just reminded me golden days of ib
7) anika is going to destroy date ???? I’m goona love this track
8) flashback of shivika lie was ?
Sooo overall episode was ???????
Waiting for next update eagerly and eagerly
Bye keep smiling and stay blessed ???
Love you and your writing skills keep writing
Hey Medha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…glad to know you liked all those points..lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Hi dear, just read yr previous post. Love it. Cute fight between Sumo and rudra..anika getting some flashback hopefully she can remember some of her past.
Love this current episode. Jealous anika and cute shivaay. How he make her jealous. I laugh the part where he did fake call.
Will she’s remember her past anytime soon? Will it be shivaay or guari help her to remember her past or by seeing tej she will get some flashback incident on her father’s death.
I am waiting for that part. Anyway take care ?
Hi Jeeta…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….glad to know you liked the episode…lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Hi harika… How are you?. A big hug and congratulations for completing 25 episodes. Because of my work schedule, I couldn’t make regular feedbacks. But you are awesome. You included me in your thanks note. Thank you. You are giving back to back amazing episodes. Waiting and wanting more and more. Much love and God bless…..
Hi Katz…am better, how are you? Thank you so much katz, thanks a lot…no worries dear, take your time ….i had to include your name dear…you had been with me more than year….lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Congratulations di?? for completing 25 episodes…This epi was superb?..loved it waiting for next part
Hey Harini…thank you so much dear for the congratulatory message…thanks a lot for the compliments…lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Anika rewind in her khidkitod avtar to destroy the lunch date in jealousy i am very excited to know about it and also for that unknown person
Hi Vishwas…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..am glad to know you liked the episode…lots of best wishes to you..keep smiling and take care
Yippie… Congo Hari Dear For Completing 25 Epis… What a Wonderful Epi… As Usual… Annika’s Jealousy Is On Top Notch.. Excited For Lunch Date… Upcoming… Can’t Wait to Know
Hi Shiny…thank you so much for the congratulatory message..thanks a lot for all the compliments…glad to know you liked the episode…lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Hi akka,
Good morning. 1st congrats akka for the 25th episode. As always the episode was super akka. Along with shivay even me enjoying a lot akka. Waiting to know wt anika will do spoil it. and akka no need thank us r me akka. I feel pressure to encourage u akka. Akka even jeevi is also me only akka. Expect my mobile if I comment from others I use tht user name akka…. Waiting for next episode akka. Lots of love to u nd Akki ??????? Tc
Hi Jeevitha/Jeevi…Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…so overwhelmed with the congratulatory message and the compliments…lots of love and best wishes to you..keep smiling and take care
Hi hari congratulations for 25th episode really it’s so beautiful journey ..
Thank you for your effort for amazing story line..we are always with you.. keep writing ..
And the jealous annika and teasing shivaay lovely scenes.. waiting for next cute update
Hey Chaithu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…your congratulatory message and compliments made me so happy and overwhelmed…lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Hi friend how is your day going.a hearty congratulations for completing 25th episode. Cheers to you dear. i too un believable that we reached here very quickly n unknowingly that you keep in cherishes every time in every episode.its time for big celebration yaar. My party from my side to you to have a numerous n un bearablewishes hugs n kisses for your performance.im unable to give my view to praises you but after reading your efficient n beautiful writing that makes me cool n glow with pride n with that I’m presenting these lines .in my view these are insufficient to express n something is remained more than compared to these words.dont you dare to stop or complete quickly Yaar bcoz it became habitual n not only mine some are like me telling you are lifting their moods n diverting their mind in bad times tension relievers n what not friend plz be in contact n connected to us it’s my wish request suggestion demand n command as a friend I’m just offering you.you should jump with joy because you are applicable to make us feel blessed n blossom in happiness n pleasure of reading very cute stories like you.in before years I had interest in reading love stories of novels as they connect b lite the heart.but my father objects as my mother had that habit so I left now you are taking place of that unfilled portion of my habit that gives alot of confidence n lite my mind n heart too.you are doing great n exact job that you are connected to our hearts through your writing keep it up friend.shivaay bade chaant nikali he is teasing his stupid in sweet n perfect manner .it’s extraordinary n excellent feel that we got when I read anikas expressions inside her heart.she is going to rock n fail shivaays lunch date so that no other girl should not be n reach his khadoos.i think it’s not jealous than she had immense feelings to be shivaay belonged to her only what’s that unknown to her.spoiling lunch date fine but her thoughts to choose shivaay her only to share with us just like his old stupid n struggling to get her rights from coming to shivaay as he said to him .wow what a great narration Yaar that she don’t know anything happened in past of her beautiful memories but he knows everything about her n making those wonderful memories for her once again. unintentionally she is doing what she think but he is doing intentionally to her get back.im falling again n again how many times I have fallen it’s fantastic n fabulous n went deep down inside the heart n making me happy n cool in my tough times.im enjoying n loving to the fullest .she granted leave for PT but when she to zodiac hotel n spoils date n caught by shivaay then will be the love war of khadoos n stupid.what will anikas answer n how shivaay take it n tease her more.its full of comic romantic love care n affection for true friends, going to become romantic lovers n between known brothers n unknown sisters it’s delighted special n magical that shivaay thinks to make some special in his life as Anika to be the one.gauri thinks it’s best of her life to be anika as her sister n om thinks double best in his life to be anika as his babi.ru specially likes Anika as his teacher.how a beautiful family it is pairing .more than that their bonding between each shivaay sahil Gauri somu prinku Anika omRu is awesome n amazing .you are quality cum family cum romantic writer ho.episode is perfect
Please bear my long messages friend I’m trying but short of short messages.i love you vhm
Hi Raji…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..am so so glad to read such lots ng kpinions as it makes me more positive…25 episodes of this ff and all readers deserve huge applause for their patience…so congratulations to you…lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
hello akka..amazingly lovely epi…hehehe anudi ni aatapattinchatam baaga enjoy chesthunnadu billu..kaani i doubt the consequences..hehehe…rikara convo and ruri convo are so nice.. so anudi wants to spoil the date..trust me akka..aa scene lo anudi eppudu ‘he he hu ha’ ani navvinappudu mee monster urf my Darling gurthukochindhi…and billu full on dramebaaz ayyipoyadu….and khannaji help okati thodu daaniki…Loving this dramebaaz billu..and that FB is so awwww…Precap is hell interesting..will be eagerly waiting to read the disastrous date of billu..so thwara thwara ga next part post chesai..Till then take care…and bye for now???..and haa keep smiling???…..love you loads❤❤❤…
And Hearty congratulations on this silver jubilee milestone..
Hi Chelli…thank you so much talli…thanks a lot …yes Monnie ni gurthu tecchukune he he hu hu ha ha raasa…happy neeku nacchindi ani telisi…lots of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care…Congratulations to you too for the silver jubilee ??????
Beautiful.
Just loved it.
Take care lots of love.
Many more chapy will come.
Congo.
Hey Ritika…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot..congratulations to you too…lots of love and best wishes to you too…keep smiling and take care
It is lovely dii.. Excited for the precap
Congracts!A little suggestion 4 u plse don’t make a new entry now.want to see romantic moment of shivika