Thnx for u r overwhelming response. So here is the first epi..
The episode starts with Apu comes to kitchen and tells yes.. They four hifi each other… Ishaani tells now this time we have to make them go out with us.. One old house is shown… Fully of old things and scary skeletons etc….????..
Ishaani,suman,apu and sonakshi comes to Malay,ranveer,dev and shravan who is getting ready.. They four girls tells we all need to go out for a week with u outing.. Shravan tells u all can go but we have work.. Suman stares at him.. He tells OK for me no problem. I am always with my wife suman. Ranveer sees Ishaani and tells sure we can go… We can earn how much money we want? But time with our spl wife’s!! Malay also tells the same. Dev comes to sonakshi and asks let us go to tour.. They all tells no we all need to live in one farm house for 1week and we should enjoy peace.. Shravan tells her itself there is peace.
Ishaani brings sound horn and makes sound.. All boys closes their ears.. Ishaani tells if this means what we can do? Shravan agrees.. All other also agrees. Boys asks which house we will stay? Shravan tells I got one new house for suman which I did not tell her??Suman sees him and asks when u got? Shravan tells two weeks before. Malay tells I got land for apu. Ranveer tells I got hotel on Ishaani name. Dev tells I got big shop on sonakshi name..
All girls gets amused.. Apu tells don’t even dare to escape from us.. U should take us to that house. Shravan agrees and tells there is more dust and we should clean it then only we can stay there.. All agrees and tells tmr we all can go there and clean it and after one day we can go there with bags..
House door is opened slowly.. One girl comes out and laughs loudly and disappears??Suddenly soemthing comes and falls on outside gate. Ghost takes it through her power and puts on gate(Outsiders are not allowed).. Ghost cries vigorously.. Inside.. People around wonders who is it? Gate opens and closes fast.. It stops at once.. Ghost comes infront of house door and cuts man hand. Blood falls down..it licks it up and laughs.. Shravan tells suman tmr we are going so give me kiss!! Suman tells no and leaves.. Ishaani kisses on ranveer cheeks and leaves. Apu gets a watch for Malay.. Dev gets chain for sonakshi and makes her wear it.
Ghost smiles and tells so 8 of them are coming here.. U are welcome.. I am here to kill u all.. Ghost breaks man bone and throws his body near poll.. Many bodies are already buried in that this one also joins.???Skeleton comes infront of screen.. Freezes..
Hope u all liked the epi.. I knew it is more scary.. But for me.. I can’t sleep today night becoz.. While writing i am very fear.??i am crying while writing.. Hope u all liked it.
Credit to: Narendran
54 Comments
Scary enough. Tried imagining the scene in my head. Grave mistake
Thnx.. What is grave mistake??
Imagining the scenes like a movie. My sleep is gone
ohh thnx yaar…yesterday me too did not sleep..well
very nice dr loved this ff
Thnx.. Ishveer
I think I also will not be able to sleep today..its so scary…But I like horror stories,..Eagerly waiting for the next post.?
I am still thinking what to write more scary for next epi!!!!
Ranaji this ff I read in night bec horror story reading in night it looks amazing & feared . but one thing I told u that I know ur ff is superb as usuall.
Sure Mariya.. Whenever u want read it
Wow nice story….I love horror story.
Thnx vuprishtha for the comment
Wow … U r writting something diffrent.. Superb… Waiting for next part…..
Thnx bhoomi…
Perfect story…..I’m trembling in fear
Thnx Prince for the comment
Nannayitund bro.enikishtaayi.
Thnx.. I can’t understand Malayalam
I don’t scary because I have friend who are ghosts.??? so nice, waiting for next plzz update fast
Really!!! Thnx. Sure I will update ASAP
It’s superb Ranaji I can imagine your scenes it was awesome
Thnx neelam..
Wow scarry epi.but add more horror in upcomming epi bro.asusual rocking bro
Sure I will add.. As u wish
I used to watch krpkab,edkv..and never watch vishkanya and matsh..pls tell me what is this matsh?????
meri aashiqui tum se hi…Popular colors show ended on 26th feb…Anyways thnx for the comment
Okay
Too good..more scary plzz
sure as u wish..i will add more scary..
Nice one bro…. Tell me about another ff u r writting.
Nice one bro….. Which another ff u r writting ?
Rettia Vaal kuruvi epi-26…meri aashiqui tum se hi (ishveer forever)season-2 epi-150,vishkanya ff epi-16, and ishqwala love epi-2.. And this ff.. That is it.
Bhavana my comment is about you only.
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Sry not you
just love it ranaji u can be a writer of the horror film. I m telling u it would be a blockbusterrrrrrrrrrrr .
Thnx thnx thnx thnx thnx
u said was r8 more scary …. pls dont kill any jodi frm the stroy cz i luv all jodi’s pls pls
Sure.. Don’t worry
Very nice epi. Plz update asap
Thnx I have sent.. I hope they will post soon
Sorry bro.I thought u know Malayalam.I meant it was superb and want more horror.
it is ok sana thnx for sompliment
Very nice naren, but yes please add some more scary things, it is really good. Update the other part asap
yes i have sent already Tu will post asap
it was just awesome u are going to be a very good writer bro keep it up
Thnx ooshi akbar for the comment
hey naren bhai awsm epi
plz read my artcl also – abhi na jao chod kr (edlw)
n cmmnt your cmmnt is really valluable as u r wrttng too many ff’s
Sure.. Thnx for the comment
Awesome episode bro! Sorry for late comment on my part.. Im super excited for the horror!
Thnx Reena????
Nice starting episode. They all welcome to ghost house?. Hahahaaa?
U r also welcome Mariya!!???
licking the blood oomg im tooo scared.but I have to say ITS wonderful