Thank you everyone for the support. And xyz, I don’t know your real name.. so, what I’m trying to say is.. I can’t change story line. And, swara is not negative here, she is just taking her revenge. However, at last she will leave Ragini. Moreover, there are many swasan ffs in which ‘Ragini’ is negative. I never opposed anyone. Because, these are just stories and serials. Not humiliating or offending anyone. Hope, you can understand.
And Ritu dear, I’m very sorry.. it can’t be swalak because, Swara can’t come back alive. Hope everyone will support me till last…
And see this one as just a story.. don’t take to heart.
Next part…
Just then, Swara is about to do something to Ragini, but some priest comes and locks swara’s soul.
Shekar goes and wakes Ragini. Ragini wakes up. She looks at everyone confused.
“Swara is dead ragini..” shekar says painfully.
Ragini looks on..
Laksh says, “and Ragini has to say truth now..!!”
Ragini says, “yes, I have killed swara.”
Slap..!
Shomi has slapped Ragini. She starts scolding her. Ragini remains numb.
“Get out of the house” Ap throws Ragini out. Laksh remains calm and he cries for Swara.
Laksh talks with Swara soul, “swara, I agree Ragini has done wrong with you. But it’s not correct if you posses someone like this. We have given Ragini her punishment. Now, it’s time to say you bye,.”
Priest chants some mantras. Swara closes her eyes painfully and she vanishes. Laksh, shomi and shekar cries.
Here Ragini is walking on road lifelessly. She remembers all she has done with swara.
She stands at bridge.
“I have done everything for you Laksh. But at last only I got betrayal. Yes. I deserve this. I have done wrong with someone and I’m punished now. Whole family don’t need me now. Why should I live?” Says Ragini and about to jump.
Suddenly, her hand is held by someone to stop her. She looks. It’s Sanskar.
“Leave me Sanskar”
“Why I will let you die this easily Ragini?” He says.
“Sanskar..???”
“Not, Sanskar. I’m Swara..!!”
Ragini shocks.
“I didn’t go away Ragini. Without taking my Laksh with me, I won’t leave this world”
Says Swara in Sanskar and keeps dragging Ragini.
Ragini shouts, “swara, leave me please.”
But Sanskar drags her into a dark room and ties her.
“Die here without food and water. Meanwhile, I will kill Laksh..!!”
Says Sanskar and leaves.
“Swara no..!!! Don’t harm Laksh please..!!”
Ragini tries to remove her knots of rope.
Laksh was walking on the road upset. He was missing swara badly.
He stands near a valley crying. Sanskar just comes. He keeps hands on Laksh. Laksh turns back.
Laksh pushes his hand, “you and ragini were trying to fool us.”
“Lucky, i have changed now. If you listen, i will say you one thing.”
Laksh looks on..
“Ragini has snatched your love from you. Why don’t you take revenge on her?”
“I’m not like you sanskar.”
“Yes. You aren’t like me. But Ragini deserves punishment.”
Laksh looks on. Sanskar takes Laksh to one place where Ragini is tied.
“I have said her leave swara and forget you. But she even killed swara. Don’t you think Ragini needs punishment?” Says Sanskar.
Laksh goes near Ragini and unties her rope.
“Swara, don’t harm Laksh” ragini is murmuring in sleep.
Laksh wakes Ragini. Ragini looks at Laksh and amazes. She looks at Sanskar and shocks.
“Laksh, he is not sanskar. Swara is there in him.”
Laksh looks confused. Ragini sees in a mirror in which sanskar is shown as swara.
“Laksh, look into that mirror. It is swara. She came back to kill you Laksh..!!” Ragini says,
Laksh looks into mirror but it is shown as Sanskar only.
“Ragini, you need rest. Let’s go home”
“I can’t come. Everyone are hating me!! I have done mistake.”
“Let’s go to my farm house.”
Laksh lifts Ragini. Ragini looks at him confused.
“Are you not hating me?”
“No. I will give you second chance.”
Laksh says and Ragini believes him.
Here Sanskar smirks. Raglak leaves and swara leaves sanskar body. Sanskar amazes why is he in such place?
Laksh is taking Ragini to his farm house in car.
“You have cheated us all Ragini. Now I will show you how will be that pain”
Ragini keeps crying remembering swara. But, she is still scared what swara is going to do next.
To be continued.
26 Comments
Interesting
Omg scary
Feeling bad for ragini
It’s ssoooooooooooooooooooooooo interesting
A new plot i must it’s just awesome ……………
U wrote it well bhuvi
Nice
Amazing dear
Interesting
Awesome episode di
I think swara’s ghost is in laksh
Waiting for the next part
thanx fr make it raglak……n amazing chappy….vry intrsting plot…bt plz make our ragu also positive ….
Amazing. its ok dear I understand but it just that I want to read ff on swalak from where Ragini pushed swara in river if you don’t mind can you write another ff please.don’t worry dear I will support you till the last .
Fantastic dear. Post next part as soon as possible. If possible give one more update sissy
Awesome
Too good awesome poor ragini
Superb
It’s like a horror story and amazing
Please.post soon
i feel bad 4 ragini dear…
It’s interesting episode and eagerly waiting for next
Feeling bad for ragini.update nxt part soon
Nice
its ok neither I am opposing u. I was just saying ok so sorry if u felt bad.
nywyz awesome n scary epi
AWESOME
Superb
awesome dear….it’s really horror dear….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear
amazing xx
Awesome…pleeeeeezzzzzz upload soon..
Marvelous yaar… Awesome.. Do continue… Lots of love
Thank u