Hi guys I’m back thankuu so much for your appretiation to write this.That’s really means a lot for me.Before submit that i want to know your opinions and i’m glad to see your possitive feed back and now i’m submit my first part of this os hope you will be enjoying this.
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Story starts with..
Come on saanchi wake up your gang is coming and you are still sleeping? Jaya said
Mom you don’t worry i’m getting ready quickly Saanchi stood and said
Then her gang Was came at her home
Gang Include kabir, veer, Isha and pragya.There they were teenagers they got scholarship from savitri devi college they were excited to there.our Kaanchi is loves each other while Ishaveer also loving couple there they got ready for going.
Ok maa take care of yourself Bye Bye. saanchi said then she was leaved with her gang
They all are got taxi in mid way there thier taxi was stopped
What happen why you stop here are we reach? Kabir asked.
No sahab ji I’ll check wht is the problem..Driver replied
All were stepped out from taxi the the got to know the taxi’s tyre was punctured
Shitt yaar!!!! Now how we reached the hospital kabir said with sad mood.
Sir, I have another tyre I fix in it.Driver said
Yehh! Great why you don’t tell us before.Kabir said with happiness.
Ohh no Sahab ji How is this possible? Driver Shocked
What happen Now all were turned to see that
This Tyre is Punctured too.Driver said in Scary voice.
What how is this happen?Pragya said
Ok ,don’t worry guys we are finds out any shortcut here. Are you any shortcut here? Can you please tell us? Kabir asked.
Sahab ji I heard that in the middle of the forest there is graveyard, only that is the shortcut, I was also heard that there is a lot of dangers here,she is drinks the blood of the human beings. Driver replied with scary vioce.
What????? Ddddanger blood of humans kabir we have to go back. Veer said in stammering.
What guys are you serious? Are you believe in these type of things? There is nothing like this, are we taking shortcuts ok guys. kabir said
Abe haan ya i think kabir is right aise hi tum log dar rahy ho (Like you are scared). Pragya said
No kabir just leave we are waiting here for some help. Saanchi pleads.
Saanchi common yar don’t be scared we are taking shorcut my love coz we have to reach hospital immidiately. Kabir said.
Then ther were ready to taking shorcut, they were enterd into forest veer isha held each other’s hand, Kabir looked forward and behind them, Veer Isha and Pragya. Then they finally reach in the graveyard.
There so many Weird strange sounds were coming. Saanch held kabir’s hand isha was scared so much.
Then suddenly isha yelled Ahhhaaaaa!!!!!
All were turned to see her
What happen?? Veer asked
No,The thorn has pierced in my foot. I’m not able to walk to long. Isha relpied with weep.
Ok guys weise bhi raat hone wali hai I think we should stay here.kabir siad
No i’m not stay in the graveyard Isha said.
We are not have another option so we have to stay here aur waise bhi yaar hum bhi boht thak gaye hain.pargya said and sat on the grave.
Kabir and veer also isha saanchi were also found place of sit. Then the sat on thier places.
Sudenly ahaaaaaa!!! Saanchi shocked from behind then turned.
Hahahaha!!! look at yourself saanchi this is skelton on human nothing else we are going to become a doctor and you are sacaring from skalton. Kabir laughed and said coz he was opened garve and took out skelton from there.
Huh!! kabir pleaze keep it in the grave please saanchi pleads.
Ok baba i taking it in ok. Kabir siad then took back skalton in the grave.
Then they Everyone got a little slept but saanchi was not slept she felt some shadow around herself ,she was turned around her self but nobody was there, she was scared so much she tightly pressed her purse then slowly took steped and went behind the shadow.she saw dark smoke coming behind the trees she consistantly walked walked and walked.
Ahaaaaaaaaa!!!
Saanchi saanchi where are you? Guys wake up saanchi is not here. Where is she? Are you the heard the Scream? She is definantly saanchi.kabir got worried about and tried to woke veer isa and pragya.
Abe haan yaar she is saanchi but where is she? Pragya said
Oh God hope she will be fine but where is she? Isha paryed for her and also got worried.
Then they all were started to searching for saanchi.
Saanachiiiiiiii sanchiiiiiiii where are you? Kabir Shouted and searched her
Are you ok saanchi are you hearing us please give any answer. Veer yelled
Isha pragya also called saanchi.
What happen to you why are you screaming? you damm what are you doing here? Are you alright? kabir asked.
After lot of search finaly they met with saanchi.
Kabir i saw the shadow then i was followed the shadow i reached here and see what i found here? Sanchi said.
What is this? Kabir asked shockingly
This was one locked room this room was so old The spider webs were all around there.all were shocked to see the locked room.
Isha guys let’s go from there Do not know what is in it.Isha said with scary voice.
Wait a minute let’d find out what’s in it. Kabir steped forward then said.
Then they opened lock of the room suddenly earthquick is came,stom command all trees fell down on the earth they couldn’t saw to each other.kabir tried to find saanchi.isha pragya veer also lost in the strom. Everything was destroyed in the strom. Then suddenly strom stopped. But one wiared noise came they all are scared saanchi turned back got shocked and fell down on the earth.
No,No she scared with weep kabir veer isha and pragya also got shocked to see her.she was witch long entangled hairs, teeth bleed with blood, eyes were bleeding she was looking freaking horrible.
She flying in the air saanchi stood they all were ran from there the suddenly isha fell down her feet got stucked in mid way she was screamed veer saanchi kabir prayga was looked back just for her.isha was weeping veer went back for her but witch came there and pulled through legs to isha veer is screaming isha raised hand also she badly sceamed and weeped but the witch took to isha with her. All were ran ran and ran and at last they were reach thier taxi and got shocked the taxi driver was also dead his body was completly blue his eyes were out of his body.saanchi is weeping badly.
I told you kabir let’s go back but you were dosen’t heard me now see what happen sanachi said with weeping.
Then suddenly isha driver and witch attacked on them they are sticked to each other they held each other’s hand.then witch attcked on saanchi she bought saanchi with her they disappeared in air.
Precap: Next part remains
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So guys how was that? Are you enjoying or not please tell me through comments.
Till then bye bye
Take care of yourself
I’m eagerly waiting for your comments.
31 Comments
Omg awesome fantastic pls update next part soon
This was mindblowing ! Splendid ! Perfect !
Thank you so much trishu feeling so much that you liked it dear.
Awesome super fabulous fantastic update soon can’t wait
Thankuu divya and sure dear
Please update today only I can’t wait
Sorry dear I was tried but not possible.
Oh god really yr its fantastic….. You are stupendous…. And really I was imagining each and everything and thinking that I was in graveyard tooo…. I forgot that I m in my house…… Really amazing Yr!!! Update soon!
Thankuu so much abhi dear glad that you liked it dear
wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic i really loved it
Thank you ashu
Complete thriller yaar.
Are you taking it to few shots or an entire ff???
Plz post next asap.I can’t wait.
Thank you so much dear but I trying complete it in two shots.
Amazing yar…
Thank you so much dear
Its a different story. Cant wait to know wat happens next update the next part soon
Thanks Amanda N ya sure.
Ohhhhhh God its too scary . Really excited for next chapter plzzz update soon
Hehe thanks Alia and yaa sure.
it’s awesome when i read i totally forgot that i am at home not in graveyard and i can easily imaging everything…
Thank you glad that you enjoyed each n every scene.
welcome keep writing…..
So amaz fantastic mindblowing os anee eagerly waitting to know how u end it plzzz plzzz post nxt asap dear
Thank you niyaa my sweeti and ya sure
No words can describe how gr8 story u have written Annie. I am a horror genre freaky person..i love such types of stories and u nailed it dear. Attacking part were like Zombies Attacking but felt good that they were ghost..otherwise Khoon Karaba, Blood Sucking.. hahah just kidding
Enjoyed it dear.. do post next one asap
Anee dear, u know what, I enjoy watching horror movies, but the fact is, I don’t know the reason, but the ghost’s get up, omg, after looking at them, instead of fearing, I rather start laughing, dear plz don’t get me wrong for this…………..urs plot was a very good attempt & I enjoyed every scenes………luv u a lot sweetie…….
Hey riya it’s not new for me, me was too laughed after read it so Don’t worry i’m not getting it wrong. and glad that you enjoyed each and every scene if not scared then laughed too.that really meaningfyll for me Love you tooo Swettie.
Omg Anne……this was too scary…i loved it ….amazing …i could imagine everything….and it looked so scary…amazimg dear…and post ASAP……
Interesting story………
That was really very cool to read. Firstly I felt like I was there watching all the scenes. Feels really entertaining to watch. Can’t wait for next one..
This is a interesting and Fabulous ff! Its is really scary too! I can Imagine veer, Sanchi, Kabir, Aisha and Pragay in the graveyard!! Please update soon! I love it!?❤️?
Anne it was totally jhakass and scary too.. Omg… Cant wait for next Part update soon dear.