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Hum Dil Dejuki Hai Sanam…(Hum Jeeye Na Tere bin) episode 1

hey guys its me sana……im so nervous as iam not sure whether you guys would like it or not…….mei likh rahi hu is sochke ki har koi hai hamare apne yaha….jo denge sath hamari har pal…..jo hamari galathiyon ko sudharengi aur hume himath dengi….beech mei chodtho nehi jayengi…..

scene:1

a big mansion is been shown…..a lady gets a call she then attends it

lady:hello….

anonyamous:******************

lady:im coming…..

lady:driver ghadi lo……

driver:mam apko kaha jana hai?(mam where you have to go?)

lady:apne sawal apne pass rako aur chalao chup-chap….ithna bhi nehi patha….ab ye bhi mei tujhe samjhao….haveli thak jani hai umeed hai apke beji mei gusgay honge (keep your question to yourself and keep driving quietly…..you dont even know that….now i have to tell you ? want to go o haveli…..i hope it got into your mind)

driver:im sorry mam ….mei boolgaya tha ….phir dobara na honga esa galti mam (sorry mam …i forgot it…..i won’t repeat it again)

lady:dobara agar galti karonge to tum chalane ki kya chalne ki layak nehi bachonge…..hume gher zimmidar log pasand nahi….. hum.jo kare na wo kahe na…..(if its been repeated then you won’t be in a state to drive or to walk…..i don’t like irresponsibility………..what i say i do

shifts to a place where a man is tied by some man

lady:ek bhar kahi ti tumse ki hamse na lade par toone ye kya kiya humse ladne chale ho…..humse…..okath dekhe ho apni…..meri nokar banne ki bhi okath nehi aur ladne chale ho
(i told you once not to go against me……but what you did you are fighting against me…..didn’t you look at your standered…….you don’t even have a standered to be my servant and you are fighting with me….

man:ap ye zameen nehi khareed sakti (you can’t buy this place)

lady:tere bhete ko khareed sakti hu to yeh zameen kya cheez hai……bheta chahiye ya zameen………. teri marzi…..hum tere bhete ko ithna thadpayenge ki wo hamari per padenge…..yeh
zameen to mei lekhe rahoongi
( if i can buy your son then what’s in this place……you want your son or this place?…..its your wish…..i will make your son to bear so much that he would fall on my legs….i will definitly
take this place

man:dont do anything ….i will give you this place

lady: yeh hui na baath….tere dimag tere thara kamzor aur dhemi chalti hai is mei tera koi dosh nehi….yad rakna…yeh zamana hamari hai aur yeh zameen bhi…..agar koi cheez mujhe pasand hai to wo har hal mei haasil karoongi mei…..jaya mishra nam hai hamari
(your brain is weak and slow like you but it’s not your fault…..remember…this genera is mine and this place too…..whatever i like i will make it mine at any cost….jaya mishra is my name)

jaya:leave him and drop him safely after all he did a lot for me….

goon:sure mam…..

jaya heads back to car ….she gets in it

jaya makes a call

jaya:where is sanchi……did she went or not?

servant:yes mam

jaya:did she took car or not

servant :no mam

jaya:what about the guards did they went along

servant:no mam …she didn”t let them accombine

jaya:how did she went and with whom?

servant: sanchi mamwent with pragya mam in her car

jaya:alright

she cuts the call

jaya in mind:yeh ladki bhi na…..kya zaroorath hai use ese jaane ki….vo bhi bina guards ke….ye ladki to naahi apne khayal rakti aur naahi kisi ko rakne deti hai….wo samaj kyu nehi rahi ki uski jan khathre mei hai…ek minister hone ki naathe….meri dushman hazaro hai jo mujhe dard dene keliye kisi bhi had tak ja sakte hai(offo…this girl…..what was the need to go out alone and that too without guards…she won’t care and even won’t let others to care….why can’t she understand that her life is at risk….as a minister i have thousands of rivals who would go any extend to hurt me

scene:2

prasha in car

pragya:abheo…tu to mujhe marwayengi ek din…..tu aunty ki baath kyu nehi manthe( hey you would definitly get me killed someday….why can’t you obey aunty)

sanchi:it will be like im in a jail and police officers is guarding…..that guards won’t even let me enjoy….

pragya:abhe ha wo do kaale suit waale agar unki basme hota to tujhe hilne bhi na dhete…

sanchi:kabhi kabhi mujhe laga ki sans lene ki permission na lene pade(sometimes i felt i would need to get a permission even to breathe)

suddenly it starts to rain

sanchi:pragya ghadi rok na…..baarish ho rahi hai aur sanchi na beegu esa kabhi hua hai…..(pragya stop the car…..its raining and sanchi won’t drench that never happens

pragya stops the car and both got out of the car just to drench in rain

sanchi:kaun kambakth esa hongi jo beegna na chahe(who idiot won’t love to drench in rain)

pragya:agar hai koi….(if there is someone)

sanchi:to zindgi vo jeeya hi nahi(then he didn’t lived the life)

otherside a car is shown and a man got down from it …he opened his umbrella and started walking…he stopped when he saw few people enjoying the rain he just went near them

man:apne bachkani harkate kab chod donge tum sab…..maza lene hi the to kisi circus kyu nehi jaathe tum log….maza mehsoos hai to saza bhi mehsoos karo….jis kam keliye aaye ho wo karo…ayindha mujhe tum sab time waste kiye nehi nazar aani chahiye …..baarishe to aathi rahengi magar samay nehi…..

scene shifts to prasha

sanchi:aaj beeg le ne dho mujhe ….kya patha ye phir na mila aur hum na rahe…..(let me drench what if it won’t be there or if i won’t be there)

pragya:lo hogayi tu shuru….sanchi agar aunty ko patha chala ki tum barish mei beegi to wo tho gussa karengi zaroor(oh yoiu started….if aunty will get to know that you drenched then she will be angry)

sanchi:isiliye tho wo mother india hai…..ma baap ka tho kaam hai rules banana…. bachon ki fikar karna or unhe samjhana…..or bachon ki kam hai… .vo rules thodna

shifts to that man

man:apne khayal nehi rakonge tho dusron ki kya khaak rakonge…..agar doctors khud teek na ho to wo dusron ko teek kese karenge….mujhe koi risk nehi lena tum logon ke health ke sath….if you fall sick because of this then i won’t grant you leave….leave ki expect tho apna dimag se nikal ke fek do …kyu ki leave kabir ki dictionary mei hai hi nahi…..(if you can’t even take care of yourself then how would you take care of others….if doctors won’t be well then how would they make others well……i dont want to take any risk on yours health…..no compromise with health…if you fall sick due to this then i won’t grant you leave…..you just throw out the expectation of leave from your brain…..because there is no leave in kabir’s dictionary

interns;lag gay langa…ye kaha fas gay hum…..dr kabir tho ab hume kacha chaba jayenge…..

kabir:ab andhar jane keliye kisi muhoorath ki zaroorath hai….just get inside

kabir in mind:ye kaha kaha se mooh utaake aathe hai….

precap;kanchi aamne samne…..

kya hongi jab dono ek dusre se takra jaaye…..jaan ne keliye padiye agli episode….

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