Hello friends…this is shreyanvi nd I m back wd another story….I hope u will like it. Fingers crossed ???….so lets get into story….
Kindly ignore grammatical errors nd typos…
Omkara is seen sitting in his room…holding a photo frame closed to his chest….his eyes were red nd swollen as if he was crying continuously…he was lost in thoughts….tears were rolling through his eyes..suddenly lil nd delicate hands wiped his tears….
Ansh:- chachu…..y r u crying….???..plz don’t cry…or else I will also start crying….nd act like crying…
Om who was sitting like lifeless person suddenly became most happiest person for his champ…
Om made ansh sit in his lap…
Om:-no…champ I wasn’t crying..
Ansh:-I knw chachu…u was missing chachi naa ..
(Om hugged ansh nd started crying ) ..
Om:- no..champ..i was not crying…its just that something went into my eyes…
Ansh:- oh ho chachu….stop giving me baba aadam k jamane ke reasons ..
(This made om burst into laughter)
Om:- accha…is it so??
Ansh:- yup…u shuld learn hw to lie smartly frm me…..i hv done mastery in lieing….
Om:- accha….so now I will tell abt this mastery to ur mumma…
Ansh who was now scared….chachu…u r my handsome chachu naaa….will u do this wd me??? (Makes puppy eyes)…
Om:-ummmmm??????…..ok..stop u r emotional blackmailing…i will not tell abt this to mumma….pinky promise…
Anika:- whts cooking amid u both haan???…
Ansh:- nothing mumma…i was asking chachu not to lie…but he…he was teaching me hw to lie…
Shivaye pulled his ears..
Shiv:- accha…om chachu was teaching u hw to lie….i think u forgotten that he never lie…
Ansh who now understood wht he did .looked towards om..who was giving him deadly glare…
(Ansh’s cute antics were making om to laugh)…
Ansh:- no muma…he was crying holding chachi’s photo…
(This made om to again lost in thoughts…but this time he tried his best to control his tears…but shivaye noticed this nd signalled anika to take ansh frm their)
Soon anika nd ansh left that place..though ansh wasn’t ready to go cz he wanted to sleep wd his chachu …anika somehow managed to convince him…..
Shivaye:- om…r u ok?? ?…it has been a month nd half u hvnt stepped out of ur room….i knw u still love her..but…(his voice chokked)
Om:-but she is no more….(completing shivaye’s sentence he burst into tears)….
Shivaye its my mistake. …she always stood by my side…always cared for her…but I acted like stubborn…
Fb is shown…
Om:- so u r back again…before sometime u was giving…pages long lecture on help nd humanity.. .nd now u came back….oh yes I got it..u want money r8…isnt It??..
Gauri:- onkaraji..plz listen to me…i came here for u….ur life is in danger..trust me
Om:- I don’t care…nd I cant believe that girl like u is explaining me to trust ..really…
Gauri:- nahi..omkaraji .plz listen…
(Before she can complete he dragged her out of his room….rest happened same as in dbo…gauri called durihnder)
Days passed…gauri was keeping eye on buamaa…after a lot of efforts she got to knw her plan …
Wdout wasting a single moment she came to om…
Fb ends..
Om:-shivaye….she always did everything.. for me..but I kept insulting her…dat day I crossed all my limits..
Fb is shown
Gauri:-omkaraji…buaamaa…
Om:-not again Gauri.. .
Gauri:-no…she want to kill u..she wants revenge..
Om:- screamed her name at top of his voice..not a word against buamaa…
Gauri:- no..u don’t knw her true colours.. she is not like she looks. She is pshyco…
Om wdout even thinking slapped her….
Fb ends
Om:-shivaye…can u believe…i slapped her wd this hands (he looks towards his hand nd start hitting them on walls… shivaye tries to console him..he hug him nd carress his hairs ..she was deeply hurt shivaye….but she didn’t utter a single word….dat day her silence was more hurtful than my pain..
Fb is shown
Gauri who was deeply hurt cz of this…but she didnt losed hope nd somehow managed to show omkara true colors of buamaa….after alot of efforts she exposed her in front of omkara..
Om who was deeply hurt nd shattered…wasnt able to bear dat..the person for whom he was ready to sacrifice everything back stabbed him…
Om:- y buamaa y???..y u did this…i m ur omkie shomki??..
Bua:-no…for me u r killer of my son…u hv committed crime…nd for every crime der is punishment…
Om:-in ease of trauma…punishment???
Bua:-yeah…punishment..nd ur punishment is dat u hv to die..(laughs evily)…
She was holding gun towards om…nd was abt to shoot but at the nick of moment police came nd arrested bua maa….but cz of her mental condition she was admitted in mental hospital for her treatment..but before going she sweared that she will not leave him so easily..nd will come back for sure…..
Om was now completely broken…wd every passing second he was blaming himself
For not trusting gauri’s words.. .he was angry on himself…gauri tried to console him but he asked her to leave him alone…
Om’s POV
Gauri..I m sorry…i m really sorry…i hv hurted u so much..dat I..i can’t face u…actually I don’t deserve u…
Days passed…om still use to ignore Gauri.. .but not cz of his misunderstanding but cz of his guilt….he didn’t wanted to hurt her more..but the fact was..his ignorance was becoming unbearable to Gauri.. nd so she decided to go back to barely..
Gauri:-omkaraji..i need to talk to u..
Om who was standing facing either side..just nodded his head.. we turning to her..
Gauri:- I knw u don’t want to see my face but I hv came here just to bid u final gudbye and i promise that this time I will not come back for sure…..(tears were rolling through her eyes)
Wd her every word….om was feeling as if he is losing his life ..
He turned to see her…but till that time she already ran away frm his room wiping…om felled on his knees nd started crying badly…
Gauri was walking on road..nd was lost in thoughts….her nd om’s memories were going through her mind..
Fb ends..
Om:-do you remeber shivaye…that day u told me that it’s never late to confess our feelings ..but look in my case it’s totally different..
Fb is shown
Gauri’s POV
Stop it Gauri.. ..y r u crying???…dont cry.. .he already told u that not to keep any expectations frm this marriage..but it was u who fallen for him..he don’t want to see ur face….stop giving urself hopes he is not gonna come to stop u…y will he come???…
She was lost in thoughts a car was abt to hit her but someone pulled her aside….she was shock to see the person nd just said one word “aap” (yes it was omkara)..
Om:-yes me…whom else u was expecting??..
Gauri:-nahi…woh…actually I wasn’t expecting u…
Om:-hmmm…
Gauri:-btw..y did u came here??…
Om:- I came here cz I wanted to confess something….(he closed his eyes….nd was abt to say I …i…but before he could say anything..gauri pushed him aside….nd Gauri was shot)
Omkara was in shock…he didn’t understand wht happened…all he could see was gauri lying in pool of blood….he ran towards her…he placed her head in his lap..he saw her pointing opp direction..nd to his shock….buamaa was their holding gun..(she has ran away frm hospital.. .soon she shot Gauri.. hospital member came nd took her back)…
Om understood dat…the bullet was for him…but again he was saved by Gauri.. .
Om was crying blood tears seeing Gauri in dat state….
Om:-gauri..open ur eyes…u can’t go leaving me all alone. He cries holding her..
Gauri:-(breathing heavily) …omkaraji I knw i will not survive..but..plz don’t hate me…i not such girl u think of..u had misunderstanding…
(OMKARA was nodding his head in acceptance…he was trying to tell her dat she will b fine..but both of them knwed the fact dat she was going to die)
Gauri:- onkaraji.. .I…i want to leave all this moments wd u…plz don’t leave me…he hugged her tightly …..will u fulI fill my last wish..
Om Simply nodded his head …
Gauri:-(she was finding it very difficult to speak)I.. .I don’t want to leave this world as GAURI KUMARA SHARMA but I want to die as GAURI OMKARA SINGH OBEROI…will u fill my hair line again??..plzz…
Om filled her hair line….he wanted to speak alot…he wanted to aplogise her . Wanted to confess his feeling..but the fact was time was not wd them…
Gauri:-(breathing more heavily)..omkara ji…i..I LOVE YOU…(somehow she managed to confess her feeling before leaving this world)
Om:- Gauri.. .I. ..I LOVE YOU TOO…..but to his surprise Gauri was already died….she left him wdout hearing those 3 magical words from him.. .
On holded her more tightly..nd screamed GAURI..
Fb ends…
Omkara was completely broken…shivaye was trying to clam him down….
Om:- shivaye….m I dat bad …ki woh mere dil ki baat sune bagair hi chali gayi.. .but u knw wht…i deserve dis…i deserve dis…i hv always wasted my time in showing her attirude.. hatred nd angryness..dats u all this happened wd me shivaye.. .
Shiv:- no ..om no..its not ur fault….dat time circumstances were such …its not ur fault….(cries)…
Om:- shivaye…people says truth dat..
HUM KISI KI KIMAT TAB SAMJH AATI HAI JAB WOH INSAAN HUMARE LIFE SE CHALA JAATA HAI…
(We understand value of person when they go frm our life)…
Nd this true in my case…when..when she was in front of me…i kept telling her not to show me her face…nd knw when I want her to be wd me look she isn’t ever….shivaye she never kept her promise…but this time…when I wanted her to break promise then she kept her promise of not showing her face to me….y shivaye y???…
Shiv:-I can understand om….but u hv to accept dat she is no more……u will hv to move on in ur life….
Om:-move on???…nahi shivaye…
TUM MUJHSE MERI ZINDAGI MAANGLO
MAIN KHUSHI KHUSHI DE DONGA..
PR MUJHE MERE GAURI KI YAADON
SE DUR MAT KARO….
MAIN MAR JAUNGA SHIVAYE MAR JAUNGA…
( if u ask me to sacrifice my life….i will do it happily….but plz don’t ask me to move on frm my gauri’s memories . I will die shivaye .I will die….)
Saying omkara cries badly….
Om:-
KISMAT BURI THI…
YAA MAIN BURA????….
WOH TOH HUMARE HO GAYE..
PR SHAYAD MAIN UNHE WOH PYAAR N DESAKA….
(Don’t knw whether kismat was bad or I was….she became mine..but I think I was unable to give her the love)….
Shivaye for the first tym understood om’s shayari….nd hidden pain in his poetry…
Om:- u knw wht. Shivaye …she took my heart wd her….but to my goodness she wasn’t that angry on me…or u can say she forgive me so easily dats y she left her memories for me….nd I….i can spend my whole life as her memories shivaye…
Shivaye:- om…clam down..he just hugged his brother nd console him..i m sorry …frm here on I will never say this…sorry…
Om:- boo.. shivaye..dont say so..i knw u was worried for me…
Shiv:- hmmm…ok..u rest now…but one thing I wanna say is…gauri main kafi dum tha aakhir omkara singh oberoi ko ishqbaaz bana hi diya….
(Om slightly smiled on hearing this…)
Shivaye left that place….
Now it was just on nd his Gauri’s memories…
Om seeing gauri’s photo..
TERI YAADON SE GHIRI HAI MERI TANHAYIAAN….
MERE SAATH HOTI HAI TERI PERCHAIYAAN…
NAHI GUZARTA EK PAL BHI TERE BIN…
PAL PAL YAAD AAYI HAI TERI WOH NADANIYAAN…
Om dozed off in gauri’s dream…..
That’s it guys…..shreyanvi is singing off…i just hope u guys liked it….i knw it was lil boring…but plz share ur views….thank u..
Bye?
46 Comments
Heart touching ?
Emotional ?
Thanks…
It was very emotional nd heart touching… loved it…awesome…
Thank u so much…
i was litrally crying…it was soo emotional…
Really means alot…
Omkara, Life’s Lessons learnt..You will never know the use of someone or something until you have lost it. Gauri gave everything to you, but you only gave her pain, yet she never stopped loving you. It ‘s hard, but you will heal.
This story is really heart wrenching..a real tear jerker, but enjoyable. Thanks!!!
Thank u so much dear…really means alot…
Amazing yaar… It was emotional too…
Thanks ?
Heart touching…it’s so emotional loved it ??
Thanks?
Oh no I was crying shreya….
Too good…come up with more yaar….
Awwww….thanks shradhuu dii…really means alot….
Omg I was literally shocked when om said she’s no more… I thought she must hv left OM in the beginning… But u made me cry yaar…. So heart touching and emotional!!!! Loved it….
Sorry for making u cry dear….nd thanks for reading?
AMAZING EMOTIONAL? FANTASTIC HEART TOUCHING SUPERB WONDERFULL?????????
Thank u so much dear ?
Its very heart touching saku.. Really Gauri can die for On but don’t know when om will understand this.. Amazing OS…
Thank u so much dear?
It is superbbbbbb dear
Thanks dear ?
Aww this was so emotional and beautiful. Sweety u wrote it so nice, i really enjoied reading it. Keep writing this amazing os for us. Luv u.
I m glad dat u liked it…..nd luv u too diii?????
Awesome..fantastic..very emotional..filled my eyes
Thank u so much dear ?
Hey.. saku.. such a great writer u r.. where did u.hide this talent.. I was thinking that u r a sweet naughty mischievous girl.. but u r amazing.. hope u give regular ff too.. and abt.OS.. I’m really feeling painful for my Om.. and pls for next time u pls give jolly happy khidkitod Omri part.. and best wishes for this OS
Hehe ??…veruuu diii…i think u hvnt seen Chennai express dats y u don’t knw that NEVER UNDERESTIMATE POWER OF A COMMON MAN…(HERE IT IS SAKU???)
I m glad u liked my writing…really means slot for me….nd nxt time definitely it would b comedy one??…luv u??
Its nice yaar. Not boring. Don’t under estimate your talent yaar. Hope u will meet us soon in another one.
Thanks alot shashi .. ..really means alot for me ??…nd ofcourse we will meet soon ?
it’s so heart touching nd full of pain it made me so sad
Thanks…really means alot ?
Awesome!!
Loved it!!
Amazing
sry for short comment
m busy
love u
take care
My busy beee…i m so happy dat u read it????…luv U sissoo..take care…
It was awesome yaar….i m crying nw reading dis……too good…..shayaris were lovely……really good one…..
I m glad u liked it….nd sorry for making u cry dear…nxt surely u will laugh..promise..?
Mumma mumma????????? i am crying heavily but next time if u write u shouldn’t kill gauri pinky promise and the awesome loved it????
Pinky promise ishu …nxt time I will post full lovy dovy wala OS?
I am jumping waiting for ur lovely dovely os???
Awesome ?
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Awesome… Loved it
Thanks vani?
hey saku….
so heart touching update dear…
just loved it…
and so sorry yaar…
i read ur previous works also… but bcoz of my super late latifness i couldn’t comment on them…
there is no comment box available…
a big sorry….
fabulous updates… this one and previous one’s also…
love u dear…???
Someone plz pinch me….m i dreaming???….shakshat mru di ne mera OS padha??? finally????……chalo
Koi nai…aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge ki maine aapko maar kiya tha ???…
Seriously…i m so happy seeing it comment…i m glad u liked it..luv u too diii???
I knew it…???
Tune jo reaction kuhu ko diya tha uss se maine yehi expect kiya tha…???
Meri President love u dear…