Im sorry for dragging d story guys..actually i didnt think any track after this so im dragging this..tell me frankly guys if it was boring then i will unit them soon nd end this ff…someof angry on me, so sorry friends for disappointing u guys…dont wry i will end it soon…
@next day
Ragini:ayaan go nd get ready we r going out
Ayaan:out..where we r going mumma.
Ragini:shravan’s frnd throws a party so he invited him with family..
Ayaan:k..come frnd we will get ready
Ragini(looking at sanskar):he was not coming.only we three r going..
Ayaan:but mumma
Ragini:dont argue..go nd get ready fast..dad will come in 15min
Ayaan nodded unwillingly nd goes…
Ragini looks at sanskar who was glaring at her…
Sanskar:u r not going anywhere with him
Ragini:i want to go
Sanskar:i will not let u go
Ragini:do whatever ..u cant stop me
Sanskar suddenly pulls on him holding her elbow nd says dont do this to me..im dying here…ragini in mind when u r with that ria i also felt like that but u didnt think that im hurting that time…her thoughts broken by ayaan scream…ragsan rushed to ayaan room nd finds ayaan screams holding his leg in washroom…
Ragsan worried..
Ragini:kya hua ayaan
Ayaan:mumma i slipped nd fell down..my leg was paining..he cries..
Sanskar lifts him nd makes him lie on bed..
Ragini goes to get medicine..
Sanskar(worried):ayaan dont cry..i will call doctor
Ayaan(stops crying nd sits on bed):papa calm down..im fine
Sanskar:u got hurted na..how can u say u r fine
Ayaan(gets up frm bed ):papa i didnt get hurt..
Sanskar:then y did u lied to us
Ayaan:now im hurted na then how can we go party with that man..he winks at sanskar..
Sanskar( understands nd smiles):but u made me scared
They hears ragini foot steps..ayaan lies on bed,sanskar sits beside her..ragini gets balm..sanskar grabs it frm her hand saying i will apply…sanskar acted like appling…
Shravan came nd asks ragini y she hasnt get ready yet…
Ragini:ayaan slipped in washroom..his leg got hurted..
Shravan(concerned):u should have informed me..i will call doctor
Sanskar(in mind y he was overacting like ayaan was his own son):no need ..i applied balm he will be fine..
Ragini:u should go party orelse ur friend will feel bad..
Shravan:how can i go without u both..i also wont go
Sanskar in mind i wish i would kill him..
Ragini:its k shravan u go..i need to be with ayaan..
Shravan nodded..he placed his hand on ragini shoulder which irked sanskar..nd says take care of my son..ragini smiles..sanskar cant digest my son word frm his mouth..he want to shout loudly he is my son..nd he wants to cut his hand which was on ragini shoulder…
Shravan left..sanskar comes to ragini who was coming after bidding bye to shravan..sanskar drags her to room…
Sanskar:enough is enough..i cant bear it now anymore…it was killing me whenever i saw u with him..stop this all drma
Ragini:drama..u only started this drama..u only first decides to move on
Sanskar:do u think i can do like that…she is my friend only..i jst want u make jealous..
Ragini:so u wants to play with my feelings again
Sanskar:its not like that..its jst drama
Ragini:then what..do u how much i hurted when i saw with her..u told she was ur would be wife..do u knw how i felt that time..but u simply saying its drama..u didnt care about what i feel that time..
Ayaan(who jst came there):papa was not ar fault mumma..its my idea only..
Ragini looked ar him shocked
Sanakar:ayaan u wait…what u(rag) told before a while ,u hurted seeing us together then y didnt u admit that time..
Ragini(she doesnt listen sanskar ,she thinks what ayaan told):ayaan
Ayaan:ha mumma.. i knw he is my papa..i only gave this idea to him..he said u will hurt but i only convinced him..
Ragini(cannot believe what ayaan was telling..tears rolling down frm her eyes):ayaan ..u too cheated ur mumma
Ayaan:nay mumma..
Ragini:then what ayaan..u didnt told to me that u knw he is ur father..u both mixed up nd cheated me na
Sanskar:ragini..try to understand
Ragini:what will i understd ha..u Made my son ur side..bcz of u he lied to me..using him u tried to come into my life ..right
Ayaan:mumma plz dont talk to papa like this..he really loves us..plz forgive him..
Ragini:now u r happy ..u want this only na..
San/ayaan:ragin/mumma
Ragini:plz leave me alone
Sanskar about to hold ragini hand..ragini said i want to be alone..
Sanskar:no..i cant let u be alone
Ragini pushes him nd runs outside as she wants alone sometime…she walks on road thinking about what ayaan told…sanskar who was following her sees one truck coming towards her..he cals her but she doesnt listen…sanskar runs to her..truck about to hit ragini..sanskar pushed ragini nd got hitted by truck..ragini was numb seeing sanskar who was in pool of blood…
@hospital
Ragsan holds eo hands….ragini was crying un controllablly..doc asks ragini to leave OT as they wants to treat him..but sanskar who was in half sense holds her hand tightly not letting her go….
Sanskar(breathing):i hurted u so much..im sorry…god wants to punish me what i have done to u..
Ragini:sanskar
Sanskar:i really love u so much…take care of ayaan..i dont knw will i alive r not..
Ragini:plz dont like that
Sanskar:i think shravan is nice guy..be happy with him..i hope he will not hurt like me..i want to see ayaan for las……
He stops breathing nd leaves ragini hand..
Ragini shouts sanskarrrrrrrrrrrrr…
Sorry if it was bad..actually i dont have any plan ,how to unit them but i had to..i wrote what came frm my mouth..sry if i disappointed anyone…
57 Comments
Nice
Thank u so much
Awesome akka don’t end plz..try to bring some obsessed gf for sanky
Thank u so much
dont make sanky to die then i will cry. Plz plz when will u post another ff. Feeling pity for sanky
Thank u so much
Wt an emotional epi yar waiting fa next one….when u ll update next part?…
Thank u so much..i will post it soon
It’s not dragging
Nice part
Thank u so much
Awesome
Thank u so much
ragini to pray for sanky by hurting herself and sanky to come alive and both being happy. Kavitha poisioning ragini father and he is trying to break ragsan relation ragsan planning to give ayaan a sister. These ideas come in my mind u can use it.
Thanks dear..i will try
oh my!…. what a clffhanger…..super…but you absolutely cannot kill of sanskar…update soon… cant wait….
Thank u so much
another idea sanky to be very serious thinking about child hood days with ragini on other hand ragini praying to god hurting herself eadge to die thinging about childhood. As a child promising that they will die if any one of them not there. Sanky while going to pune saying to ragini if it is rain in presence of sun,if the moon came there we will be together. Like present also happens they both die together. Ayaan grown up by sanky parents. When he grows up look like sanky falling swalak daughter who resume like ragini there complete love story……is it nice
I will not kill sanskar
Ok thanks for not killing sanky???????
Nooooooo please don’t kill sanskar and abviously not ragu , it’s their story and should be completed as their story only
I will not gonna kill anyone..sanky will be alive
awesome
Thank u so much
Dont know what to write…….. Happened by Lahari’s wish so pray to Lahari….
Thanks dear
Nice keep going
Thank u so much
Sooper da awesome eoi
Thank u so much
Plz don’t kill sanskar
Awesome
Thank u so much
Superb epi. But plzzz make sanky aliveand unite soon.
Thank u so much
Nice.waiting for next part
Thank u so much
Awesome
Thank u so much
Love this ff sis.Dont end it plss :’-(
Thank u so much..i will try
nycccc…
Thank u so much
awesome don’t kill sanky pls unite them don’t end soon now a days there are low ragsan ff pls don’t end soon
Thank u so much..dont worry dear i will came with new ff
Awesome
Thank u so much
Awesome…. Update next part sooooon can’t wait to read
Thank u so much
Good.. end dis dragging track..add some other plot. ..u know I like ur way of writing alot.. So I searched ur older ff and read it. ..it was too good ( love Vs trust and love u Mrs ragini sanskar maheshwari)
Have u written any other ff rather than this
Thank u so much..i wrote 2 Ragsan SS named hug nd crazy love nd bcoz i love u(ragsan)ff
Awesome update lahari… U ended it on cliffhanger…please update soon
Thank u so much
Dear..u shud hve choose a different path like rags very much hurt by sanky nd ayaans lie…it wud hve been mre awesome..bt dis way is also good dear..keep rockinf…..
Thank u so much..im also not satisified with this..but readers wants to unite ragsan..so
Amazing and poor sanky he finally loves her and she finally realised how much but,,xx
Thank u so much
Riya-Shravan track was a bit dragging…..plzz don’t kill Sanskar….and plzz don’t bring obsessed lover….it will be dragging and boring…..maybe u cn show like what happens in serials…exactly 2 tear drops from R’s eyes will fall on S’s cheeks…it will create a sound similar to the sound of raindrops falling on a water filled tumbler….then he will miraculously wake up whispering her name….hehe…I know it’s dramatic….didn’t get anything better…
Superb