Next morning… Sanskar is staring his beautiful wife who is hugging him more and more…
Sanskar (whispers) : baby doll… Wake up…
She nozzles in to him more… Sanskar smiles genuinely and cares her cheek… Feeling his touch swara slightly open her eyes… And sees him… Sanskar kisses her cheek…
Sanskar : good morning (rub his nose on her cheek)…
Swara smiles shyly and wishes him back : good morning… Then hugs him…
Sanskar (whispers in her ear) : i love you…
Swara close her eyes… And tighten her grip… Then departs… Sanskar looks at her with a hope… Swara smiles and palms his face…
Swara : what will you like to eat in breakfast…
Sanskar (smiles and sighs then) : ummm…. Alu ka paratha and raita…
Swara : ok…
She gets up from bed and goes to her room for change… Here sanskar with sad face sighs…
Sanskar : baby doll… Why are you not confessing… I can sense your love but firvi… I need your words… I need those words for loving you…
Here swara is so happy… She gets ready humming a song… When she feels someone is pulling her dupatta… She looks down and find ayush…
Swara : ayu… Baby… (picks him) i am soo happy today… Your mamu is here… Chalo now we will make breakfast…
That day night…
Sanskar is sitting on bed and is doing work… Swara Again with pale face keeps the water jug… She was about to turn but feel a strong grip on wrist… She turns and finds sanskar is holding her wrist… Sanskar extend his one hand and gesture her to come… Swara walks round the bed and climb on bed… She adjust herself in his embrace… While sanskar doing his work wrapping him… Swara waits for sometime… Sanskar finishes and looks at her…
Sanskar : what happened…
Swara : what’s need to come… You are going tomorrow morning… You will be tired…
Sanskar wraps her by both hand and pulls her closer: don’t you know why i come here han??
Swara sobs hugging him : a66a nei lagta mujhe… I feel so alone here…
Sanskar makes her lie and kiss her forehead then cares her face…
Sanskar : please don’t be sad… That’s why i came… I will come again… Ok…
Swara nodes and hugs him…
Sanskar : ummm… Baby doll you want to tell me something??
Swara nodes in no and hugs him tightly… Sanskar feels bad…
Next day morning 4…
Swara sees sanskar sleeping peacefully holding her tightly… She somehow releases herself and starts to pack his things… After 30 mins she looks at him… She feels bad to wake him up… He is sleeping so deeply and peacefully… But she has to…
Swara : wake up sanskar… You have flight…
Sanskar looks at her and sits hugging her by her tummy… Swara cares his hair…
Swara : sanskar… It’s 4:30 already…
Sanskar: hmm…
Then looks at her…
This way 7 months passed… Every month… Whenever he gets some time for his own… He comes here… For her… He never thinks how much he is tired and all… He comes there for swara… That 2 days…. Both use to wait for this day… Swara can’t confess her love… Here sanskar is eagerly waiting for those words from her mouth… At least for once… The main thing is changed that now sanskar’s room is now their room… Swara sleeps with him at night… Not only here… She went mm for some days there also she stayed in his room…
After 7 months… One fine day…
Swara is happily standing at bus stop… Today HER sanskar is coming… At evening.. She is thinking about him when feels a hand on her shoulder… She turns but numb to see sahil standing there…
Swara : y… Y… You…
Sahil: wow… You recognize me…
Swara clutch her bag handle… And turns… Looking at watch…
Sahil : day by day your beauty is increasing…
Swara says nothing but looks away…
Sahil : i think… That blo*dy guy has left you… That’s why you are roaming alone…
Swara looks at him with blood shot eyes…
Sahil (with dangerous voice) : lo your looks or i will ruin those eyes…
Swara shouts : no i will not… And don’t use bad language about my HUSBAND… And now go…
Sahil : youuu…
Sahil about to slap her… But swara holds his hand and jerk it…
Swara : i am not that swara… Mr sahil Chopra… Who is standing in front of you is SWARA SANSKAR MAHESHWARY… She is not coward…
She slaps him… Then shouts…
Swara : help… Help… Please help me…
Some public comes to her… A man…
Man : what happens sister…
Swara : bhaiya look he is teasing me…
Sahil is shocked…
Man : who??
Swara points to sahil…
Public comes to him and starts to beat him… Swara with teary painful angry eyes looks them… Tjwn gets in the bus…
At night… Sanskar is waiting for swara doing works… Swara comes… Sanskar close it and walks to her…
Sanskar : what happenes to my baby doll… Why she is pale??
Swara looks at him then down clutching his shirt… A tear falls…
Sanskar cups her face : hey what happened??
Swara wraps her hands around his neck and hugs him tightly… She sobs…
Sanskar lifts her : chalo…
Both go to their favorite place…
After sometime…
Sanskar is sitting under trees… Back hugging swara who is sitting between his legs…
Sanskar : omg baby doll you did this?? ???
Swara looks at him turning his face : i did wrong?? ??i shouldn’t do like this…
Sanskar : swara… What’s the meaning of this…
Sanskar with serious face looks at her… ??
Swara: i don’t know how is he… Where is he?? If something bad happens then ??… I will be the reason for someone’s de…
Before she complete Sanskar jerks her and gets up…
Sanskar : what the hell… Like seriously… You are still thinking about him?? If i was there then i made sure that really something bad happens… Swara you forgot what he did with you… If you are so worried then why the hell are you here with me… Go to him…
Swara gets teary eyes… Looking at him… Here sanskar angrily turn looks away… There was big silence… Sanskar looks at swara, who is looking down while sobbing, with blood shot eyes then takes out his phone…
Sanskar : hallo amit… (his pa)
Swara looks at him…
Sanskar : cancel day after tomorrow’s flight and book tomorrow’s ticket…
Swara runs to him and snatch his phone then cut it…
Swara hugs him and cries : i am sorry i didn’t meant that…
Sanskar wraps her and calm himself hugging her tightly…
Swara looks up… Sanskar pecks her nose tip…
Sanskar : love you… You are mine… Only mine…
Swara shivers when he whispers above those line in her ear…
This way another 1 years passed…
Today is swara’s final result out day… Also sanskar is coming… Sanskar is now a great business man… But always find sometime for his love… Still waiting for listening those words from her mouth… Je know she is his… She loves him like he does… But still…
Swara somehow rich the score board… And search to find her name from last… Cause she is sure she will be the last… She waa biting her nails while searching when someone hold her finger by which she wad searching and drags it to the 1st name… And a manly voice came from behind…
‘look from here baby doll’…
She turns her head back only to find her hubby staring with a warm smile… She blushes when she feels his other hand on her tummy…
Sanskar : what look there… Baby doll
Swara looks at the first name…
Swara maheshwary 97.8%…
She widen her eyes ???
And close her mouth… She turns Immediately to hug sanskar but sanskar hold her hands…
Sanskar : hold on baby doll… I know your husband is so handsome and charming but control yourself ???… It’s
College…
Swara ???…
Then walks away…
Sanskar smiles… Both enters in principal’s office…
Principal grins : wah sanskar… After so many days…
He smiles…
Principal : congratulations swara…
They talk for sometime… After coming… Both were walking through college campus after bidding bye to her friends… Sanskar holds her by waist… But swara jerks his hand…
Swara : i know mr maheshwary your wife is beautiful sweet and cute… But control tjis is college ????
She runs while laughing… Sanskar chases her…
Both gets in the bus… Both sits… Sanskar pulls her in his embrace…
Sanskar : miss me??
Swara : ummmmm…. No ???
Sanskar : a66a??? ???
He tickles her…
At home… Swasan are spending quality time… Sanskar is lying keeping his head on her lap… When ayush came there… Then push sanskar…
Ayush : this is my place… ??
Sanskar is shocked… Swara laughs…
Ayush : mami… Tell me story…
He adjust himself on her lap… Swara smiles…
Sanskar : i will also sleep…
Sanskar also sleeps on her lap… Pushing ayush a bit…
Ayush : mami tell…
Swara starts to tell… While unknowingly Caressing sanskar’s hair… Ayush notice this and with jerk takes her hand and place it on her head… Sanskar again place it on his head glaring him… Ayush Again takes it and places on his head….after continuing this 3-4 times… Swara withdraw her hand and push both head from her lap…
Swara: Uffff… You both fight then call me huh… Both are irritating me so much… ??
She goes out and looks at laksh who is working… She sits beside him and hugs him… Laksh smiles and kiss her hair…
Laksh : what happened to my doll…
Swara nodes in no… And kiss his cheek… Laksh with teary eyes : after 2 days you will live your bhai… Then who will love me like this. …
Swara gets sad : don’t cry bhai ??
Laksh smiles in tears… Ragini comes and adore their bond…
Ragini : doll… We will miss you…
After 2 days…
Sujata is shouting at the top of her voice…
Sujata :, arey ramu… Why the hell are you keeping those flower their… Hey bhagwan… Kis kis ko kam pe lagaya h…
Ram comes there : arey… Sujju… Why are you so yelling… You are doing like only your daughter in law is coming in your house…
Sujata : 1st of all she is my daughter not daughter in law… And finally permanently she is coming here… She will not go anywhere leaving me…
She smiles in joy… Yet teary eyes….
Suddenly they heard…
‘mom look i came where are you….’ swara’s melodious voice comes to them…
Sujata widen her eyes and runs to take arti thal… ???
Swara literally jump on sujata when she finishes arti… And both squalls in joy…
Swara : i missed you so much mom ??
Sujata kiss her forehead : me too ?
Ram bless her and kiss her forehead…
Sanskar makes faces: someone please look at me also… I am here only… Can anyone see me…
Ram hits his head back : dramebaaz… Come swara beta…
Swara tugging her hand around Sujata’s…
Swara : mom… Why this decorations… ?
Sujata : for my daughter… She finally permanently comes to me…
Swara bimmed: really ???… It’s so beautiful…
She is sooo happy to day….
At night…
All are having dinner… Sujata is pampering swara… Putting more foods on her plate… She is making faces… Sanskar is giggling…
Ram : swara beta… What you thought will ypu join company or will study further…
Swara : ummm papa… I think i should complete m. Tech… Then will join…
Ram : do one thing… Study and beside you can join company… You assist sanskar… He will teach you… Then after 2 years… You only have to see our mechanical activities of company…
Swara nodes…
Sujata : but before that … Both will go london… As they didn’t go anywhere together…
Ram : sujju… You planned for their honeymoon…
Swara turns red and sanskar caughs….
Sujata : aye chhodi… Why are you blushing like newly wedded wife… And han ji… I have planned … And day afte tomorrow they are going…
Swara: i am done…
She literally runs from there being shy… But sanskar misunderstood…
Sanskar :i think she is not comfortable ?
Sanskar comes to room sees swara looking at sky…
Sanskar : if you don’t wanna go… I will tell mom…
Swara turns being confused : ??what…
Sanskar : if you are not comfortable to go…
Swara: where ??
Sanskar : in honeymoon (then shook head) i… I… Mean london trip…
Swara smiles and blushes looking down : no its not like that…
Sanskar grins : you wanna go…
Swara turns being shy:han…
Sanskar jumps in happiness…
At london…
Sanskar : swara you get ready… We will go out…
Swara nodes and open the bag…
Swara calls sujata : mooommmm… What is this… What type of dress is this…
Sujata : while cooking… Why what happened…
Swara : mom… This are short… How could i wear…
Sujata : then you wanna wear sarees ???… Like oldies… Go change… Don’t disturb me…
Swara rolls her eyes and took a frock till her knee length and headed to washroom…
Sanskar gulps seeing her…
Swara feels his gaze and shies… : chale…
Sanskar nodes : han…. Han…
At night…
Ram tell sanskar to meet a client over there… Sanskar makes faces but went…
When sanskar comes then it’s quite late… He enters the room being tired… And shocked to see the room is full with candles and flowers… Bed is decorated with red rose petals… And above them… Swara and sanskar is written… He being shocked scanned the whole room… And there his eyes stops on his lady love… Who is lightening candles… Sanskar mesmerized to see swara… She is wearing deep blue lahenga and deep sky colored shoulderless and sleeveless blouse… Exposing her milky belly fully… There is no dupatta (if you all have seen Bahubali then u can imagine panchi bole song’s dress)… Minor amount needed jewelry… Swara looks at him and smiles… Then comes to him…
Sanskar : baby doll… This all…
Swara holds his wrist and drags him to balcony… It’s full moon night… Sanskar is staring her…
Swara takes a deep breath…
Swara : i… I don’t know from where i should start… You teach me how to live life… And what is life… This life is gifted by you… No… I will not thank you… Cause thank you is very small word… I don’t know what would happen if you never came in my life… That thought makes me shiver in fear… I wanna thank god… He gives me you… You give me myself… So this life… Every breath is yours sanskar (hugs him) I LOVE YOU SANSKAR… LOVE YOU A LOT… WITH ALL MY HEART… TODAY I WANT TO GIVE YOU MYSELF… PLEASE TAKE… MARK ME YOURS COMPLETELY… PLEASE
Sanskar close his eyes… He takes some minutes to understand that this all are real not any dream… He is getting his love today… Which he wanted from day one… He was numb…
Swara feels he is not hugging her back… She looks at him…
Swara : sanskar… Why you are numb… Tell something…
Sanskar looks at her : is this all real… U are saying those lines for which i was dying…
Swara looks at him : i am sorry… I made you wait long…
Sanskar hugs her tightly and lifts her through waist then twirls her…
Sanskar : thank you… I love you so much…
Swara hugs him tightly… Then both look at each other… Sanskar sees her from top to bottom intensely… Swara feels shy and runs other side…
Music starts… (panchi bole from Bahubali)
Sanskar place his hand on her bare shoulder… Swara close her eyes… Then turns and looks in to his eyes.. Their eyes conveying their love…
Swara: Panchhi Boley Hai Kya Piya Sun Le Chalo
Pyaas Badhti Rahe Pyaar Hota Rahe
(swara pulms his one cheek and comes bit close to him.. Then rub his rough cheek with her soft ones…)
Aaj Dil Se Sada Aa Rahi Hai Suno
Ishq Jagta Rahe Waqt Sota Rahe
(swara holds his palm and kiss it… Then walks backwards holding his hand shaking her waist with bits…)
Sanskar pulls her : Itne Din Main Jiya Kya Jiya
Ab To Jeena Hai Tere Liye
(swara falls on him… Sanskar rubs their nose and pecks corner of her lips… Swara clutch his collar)
Dil Ne Dil Se Yeh Wada Kiya
To Jan Main Lun Tere Liye
(he makes her turn… And gives some trails of wet kisses on her bare shoulder and neck… Swara close her eyes and breathes heavily feeling that)
Swara somehow comes out of his grip and runs away then stops holding a piller : Panchhi Boley Hai Kya Piya Sun Le Chalo
Pyaas Badhti Rahe Pyaar Hota Rahe
…………………………………………..
Sanskar comes to her and makes her turn… Swara with close eyes faces him… Sanskar kiss her eyes to make them open…
Sanskar :, Tu Kahe To Aasmano Pe Likh Dun
Umr Bhar Ko Ab To Hona Juda
(sanskar looks in to her eyes with her desire and love fill eyes… And leans to her lips… But mean time swara turns her face being shy)
Swara turns facing her back to him… : Sab Likh Tu Aankho Se
Aankho Se Dil Pe Likh
(sanskar kiss her earlobe…. Swara leans her back to his taut chest… Closing her eyes)
Ishq To Pyaara Hai Pyaara Yaara
(swara places his hand on her belly… And tighten it herself… While sanskar was kissing her neck)
Sanskar : Itne Din Main Jiya Kya Jiya
Ab To Jeena Hai Tere Liye
Dil Ne Dil Se Yeh Wada Kiya
To Jan Main Lun Tere Liye
(sanskar makes her turn… And both look at each other… Sanskar looks at her then her lips asking for permission…. Swara close her eyes… Sanskar put his lips on hers…. It was gentle and sweet kiss… Both cares their lips with their own then break it)
Swara runs from their being shy… But sanskar holds her wrist and takes her in arms and walks towards bed…
Swara looks at him : Panchhi Boley Hai Kya Piya Sun Le Chalo
Pyaas Badhti Rahe Pyaar Hota Rahe
Sanskar makes her lie on bed looking in to her eyes… Then sits in front of her…)
Aaj Dil Se Sada Aa Rahi Hai Suno
Ishq Jagta Rahe Waqt Sota Rahe.
(swara gets up while breathing heavily… Softly touch his cheek… Swara looks at his eyes… Before taking his lips in to hers… Her hand goes to his shirts buttons while kissing… They kissed each other passionately… Sanskar slowly makes them lie while kissing… Sanskar breaks the kiss when they get breathless… Sanskar kiss her throat…. Swara arc her back… Slowly screen focus on beauty red rose bunch….)
After 8 months…
Swara is eating fruits and blabbering sitting in kitchen… Sujata is cooking and talking with her… Suddenly…
‘mami…where are you…’
Swara grins widely… And stands quickly holding her small baby bump… And literally runs out…
Sujata yells : aram se chhodi….
She also runs after her…
Swara :ayu baby ???
Laksh gets worried seeing her running and he runs to her then stops her… Laksh eyes her…
Laksh : doll… How many time we have to tell you… Dont run?
Swara mumbled : sorry ?
Laksh shook his head and hugs her… Swara hugs him back…
Then meets with ayush and Ragini… She starts to play with ayush… Mean time ram and sanskar comes….
Sanskar goes to swara and kiss her cheek : you okay baby doll…
Swara nodes in yes then gets up and starts to search his pockets… All looks at them with smile… Swara can’t find anything : my choco ???
Sanskar laughs : i forget ???
Swara goes to laksh and sita beside him hugging him : bhai… Look…
She complain like a child….
Ram : sanskar… Why are you teasing her… Give hr…
Sanskar sighs : alright. . ..
Then forward two big DMS… Swara squalls in joy… And takes it..
At night….
Swasan raglak and ramta are sitting…
Laksh : papa called me… Dadi is not well… She want us to visit her and spsnd this holi there only…
Swara’s eyes welled up with tears… Her face becomes pale… Sanskar looks at her…
Sanskar : hey baby doll… What happens…
Swara : i won’t go… If they snatch you from me… She sobs…
Sanskar smiles : pagal… No one can separate us. . I am there na…
Swara hugs him…
Laksh : doll… Nothing will happen… We should go… After all she is our grandmother… Right??
Sujata : swara… Come here ..
Swara goes to her…
Sujata : we all will go… We will be there only… We will see who can snatch my daughter from me…
Swara nodes…
Next day… All comes to her village in westbengal….
Sanskar helps her to come out from car…. Shomi gets teary eyes looking at swara… And then looks at ayush…
Ayush to Ragini : mamma… Why are we here…
Ragini : they are your family… I told remember??
Ayush squalls in joy : really….??
Ragini nodes… He runs to shomi… Shomi who was holding arti thal… Looks at him…
Ayush touches her feet : namaste dadi… I am ayush laksh gadodia…
All chuckle…. Shomi bless him and kiss his forehead… He takes blessings from all… At last he goes to Parvati…
Ayush : you are badidadima… Right?? Mami told you are so sweet… You told her stories… She use to tell me those stories… Thank you…
Ayush hugs her… All looks at her… Parvati with shaky hand… Bless him… Ayush kiss her cheek…
Parvati looks at Ragini… Then at ayush…
Parvati : laksh you teach him well… Sanskar (sanskar looks at her and was about to come)… Hamara sanskar… (sanskar ????)… Hamare sanskar dia tune isse… Ye chhoda itna a66a hua h…(???)
Sanskar is like ???oh that sanskar…
Laksh : no dadi… I didn’t teach him… Ragini teaches her everything…
Ragini looks down… Shomi comes and did their arti…
Sanskar : baby do…. Aaaah (he shouts as swara pinch him and glare at him)
Sujata also hits him…
Sanskar : ????
Sanskar : swara… Chalo you need rest…
He holds her and takes her to her room… While going…
Swara : i told you not to call me by that name here… What will all think… Mom also told you…
Sanskar : what… That’s my habit… What will i do… And my wife… My mouth… My tongue… My heart… I can call anything… Huh…
Swara roll her eyes…
At night…
After dinner…
Sanskar notice swara is uncomfortable…
Sanskar : what happens baby doll…
Swara : my leg is paining ???
Sanskar : one min…
He goes out… And comes to kitchen… All woman looks at him like he is alien…
Sanskar : hi ladies… And ladies… Wo i just…
Ragini comes to him hurriedly : what are you doing here…
Sanskar : that’s my question… Chudhail comes in kitchen too??
Ragini hits him…
Sanskar : wo… I want hot masterd oil…
Ragini : one min…
Sanskar takes it and goes to room… All woman looks at each other and goes behind him… They shocked and feels jealous seeing sanskar massaging her feet… Both are talking…
All looks at each other…
Next day….
Sanskar is always there during holi… All notice their love… Sanskar Every second watching swara… Once one of her cousin tries to apply water color on her… Sanskar runs to her…
Sanskar : excuse me… Only powder color please… It’s harmful…
All men laughs at him saying : jodu ka gulam…
Sanskar just smiles… : why only girls have the rite to take care of her husband… We husband can’t take care of her… Wo kya kahte h – pati ki kadmo mein patni ka swarg h… Then same things should go for husband also… Life is a car… And husband and wife are the wheels of that car… Or can say if husband is the driver of that car then wife is the person who tells us the direction by which path we should go that we can drive safely… If any one of them got weak then car will stop… So we should take care of each other then only we can lead a safe fearless and smooth life… We men earn money that doesn’t mean we have won someone’s head… We are best… A woman… Who takes care of her family her house… She also does a lot of things… Think na… After a particular time we men get retirement… But this housewives never get retirement… We should salute them… And you all are toh…. (he shook her head)… I love to care her… I love her… Jan h meri… And for that if you all are calling me jadu ka gulam… Then i will take it as complement…
All woman gets jealous… Jealous on swara… They notice how sujata and ram also care for her…
Dadi calls sanskar…
Sanskar (thinks) : is he calling me or talking about that sanskar…
Dadi : sanskar come here…
He sighs and goes to her…
Dadi : thank you beta… You are right… I was wrong… My upbringing is wrong… Swara laksh Please forgive me…
Sanskar : no dadi please… It’s not like that… Bas you need slight changes…
Laksh and swara hugs her…
After 3 days all left and promise they will come… After 4 months swara gives birth to a baby girl… Avni…
The end…
It’s not so good… I wrote it in hurry… But then also… It’s last chappy so… If you want you can comment…
39 Comments
Honestly you are fabulous dr …..Concept is too gud ….loved ur writing skills ….each line of story have lives in it ……last part of today’s episode is just speechless …..worth of meaning ……both husband and wife are responsible to eachother to run a good and happy life …….You gave nice mgs to us ……..i hope u ll come again with new concept …..
Amazing story…sanskar is perfect husband?swasan r so cute??my babies r always cutest…cone back with ur other stories…take care
Hats off to you for giving wonderful plot!! Ur each and every word is very true. Sanskaar is a perfect husband and also he is the actual meaning of husband!! Come back soon with ur other stories….
The whole story is awesome….loved it….thank u so much for the links….
???? Awesome….loved it. One of the best TSs i hv read
Superb dear. Just loved it.
Come back with another one.
It’s awesome..loved it.
Superb….one of d best ts read so far…!!!! continue writing more stories
uuughhhhhh.. love it soo very much…..husband and wife have equal responsible to make wonderful journey on their marriage…