Hi guys… I come again with a new ts…. Ok toh remember my os ‘perfect husband’??…. It’s another different story…. So here i am… That story is very close to my heart… And i am very much excited and also somewhat afraid to know your reaction…. So 1st of all i am asking sorry if you feel disappoint and bore after reading it…. So let’s start….
A girl is sitting in front of mirror and a old woman is helping her to get ready… She is wearing red gorgeous lahenga and red velveted blouse with heavy stone work… That old lady is making her wear jewelry… The girl is looking tired for continuous marriage rituals so the glory of jer face is faded…. She makes faces when her dadi makes her wear a heavy gorgeous necklace…
Girl: dadi it’s so heavy…
Dadi didn’t paid any attention just continue her work… She brings the dupatta and cover her whole face… The girl again complain…
Girl : dadi i can’t see… Remove this…
Saying this she hold the dupatta but her dadi holds her hand…
Dadi: don’t swara it’s ritual…
Swara became silent… Makes a pout…
Just then another woman come and smiles looking at swara… She has veil till her forehead above eyebrows…. Her one hand is holding the veil near her lips…
Dadi: sharmishta… You teach her the rules right….
Sharmishta became serious and nodes vigorously in yes with a humm…
Dadi : sun chhodi… After going to your in-laws house don’t cut our nose or down our head…. Always follow the rules which your mother taught…. Ok??
Swara nodes like a obedient girl… Dadi left… Shomi comes to swara and bend down… Slightly lift her veil and look at her… Swara smiles and shomi grins with tear…
Just then…
‘dulha agaya… Dulha agaya’… Shomi hurriedly goes from there…
Swara Sits there remembering her mother words…
2 days before…
Shomi is tying her hair…
Shomi : shona you have to go to your Sasural after 2 days… So listen to me with concentration…
Swara nodes…
Shomi: always give respect to your in-laws… Always wear your veil in front of them… Never ever look at them with straight eyes… Always bow your head in front of them… Always make them happy… Never raise your voice… If they scold you bear it don’t think whether it’s your fault or their…. Obey your husband always…. You should make him happy always do whatever he asked to do… Never say no to him ok??
Swara : ok ma…
Shomi smiles : if you do this whole thing you will be PERFECT WOMAN in all sense… And they will praise your upbringing then… Understand??
Swara with genuine smile : ji ma…
That’s what all her mother taught her… And swara being most obedient child or should say a girl she nodes for all thing whatever her dadi or her parents asked to do… That’s why only at the age of 18 when her friends having fun in college and all she is making herself prepare for perfect wife…
Soon her mother come and took her down… She made sit with her husband…. She feels her husband gaze and feels more shy… 3 people was seeing all this with teary eyes… They are swara’s friends in fact best friends… Shruti.. Durga and sharbani…
Merriage done… After ritual swara have to go… Shomi made swara sit in her bedroom… And left for bring something… Just then her friends enter…
Sharbani: shona…
Swara gets happy and up her long veil and looks at them… Trio runs to her hugs her…
Swara : i thought you guys will not come…
Trio remember their arguments regarding merriage with swara…
Durga : we don’t know whether we can see u again or not…
Swara smiles… Trio extend a gift to her…
Swara : what is this…
She ask with grin…
Trio : see yourself…
Swara excitedly open the wrapper… And find one envelope and she frowns but open it again… It’s her results… Results of hs… She got 97%…
She smiles and put it in the file of her study documents…
Shruti: you just smiled?? See your result… You…
She stopped at when swara hugs her tightly…
Swara (while hugging) : i am happy…
Just then shomi came… She was taken for bidai…
At Sasural… It’s her 1st night… She was just sitting when her husband came… He came forward… Swara’s heart was beating so 1st that a Chita will fail in front of it…
That man open her veil and looks at her fully… And touch her cheek for which she shiver and feel bit uncomfortable…
Man : you are so beautiful swara…
She manage to smile shyly but her heart is crunching with fear… She gets a bad smell that she feel to vomit…
Her husband open her veil and also the neck piece… Then literally attck her on her neck… Kissing sensuously and also biting… She clutch her lahenga… She wanted to cry loud… She feels his hand shamelessly roaming on her body parts mostly on private parts… She feels disgusting… Some thing is not matching… She still remembers her bhabi’s dirty talk about 1st night… Her bhabi said you will feel heaven but…
She feels his hand on the knot… Just then his phone rings… He immediately departs and took it… He talk for sometime and went out from the room…
Swara was just sitting their lifelessly… She is happy that she get rid from this torture… She runs to washroom… And cries out opening the tab… She cry cry and cry till her tears got end… Then again came in room… And looks at herself through mirror… She nodes vigorously and makes herself understand that there is nothing happened that she should cry… It’s all natural… She just makes herself presentable…. Soon her mind got the thing her husband is not in room and it’s middle of night and that too their 1st night… She got tensed… Soon she sits on sofa… And dozed off… She open her eyes and looks at the door through which her husband is coming… She looks down and stand up… He came forward to her…
He: don’t tell anyone that i was absent in the room whole night…
He goes to sleep saying this throwing his heavy work sherwani on floor… Swara picks it up and find lipstick mark which makes her Shock…
But she can’t question him… After all he his husband her lord…
She with a lot of thinking goes to ger freshen up… She comes down at exactly 5…and sees her mother in law is taking milk from milk man… She just stand there silently bowing her head… Her mil tell her to come with her… She nodes and follow… Both enter in kitchen… She wonder when her mother in law remove the pallu’s side hanging on her shoulder and checks her neck… She gives a satisfactory smile and bless her…
At breakfast table all praise her cooking… Her father in law says something which makes her shy…
Fil: give this family a hire soon…
She looks at her husband
through corner of her eyes who is busy in phone…
Just then her father in law call her husband : sahil let’s go… We are late for office…
(laga jhatka?? ???)…
The whole day passed with some rituals… All praise her beauty…
At evening… She was cleaning her room when her husband came… She takes her bag… Shail sits on sofa… And call swara while resting his head on headboard… Swara goes to her…
Sahil (extend his legs) : remove my shoes Swara…
Swara just nodes and remove his shoes… Holding his leg on her lap… She place it on floor… Taking the shoes to place it on right place… When she heard a angry voice…
Sahil: who will remove my socks… Your mother??
Swara shivers… Her eyes full with tears… She gulp her tears and again goes to him and remove his socks… He gets up and walk towards the washroom… Swara compose herself…
Swara : shona… What is this… It’s totally your fault… You should do that… It’s your duty…
She went to kitchen…
Days passes… Sahil was probably 11 years older than swara… In those days he can only do the thing is shouting on her and sometime show his lust but not that much extent… Everytime interrupt by phones or by some of their family… She was most obidient daughter in law and wife… Does all her duty… This way one month passed… Oneday… Sahil announced that he will go to delhi for work…
His parents tell him to take swara which he denied but after lots of arguments he accepted… And both swara and sahil goes to delhi via train…
Sahil was continually talking on phone by that swara got tp know that he is talking with some ‘baby’… At delhi station… Both got down… Swara for the 1st time traveling via train… The platform was low… She feels difficulty while getting down… She wants to call her husband to give her support but sahil paid no attention to her and was just talking on phone… For that swara has to got down by herself… She stumbled and falls on sahil… For which sahil shouts at her with high pitch voice for which everyone in the platform look at them…
Sahil: what the hell… Can’t you walk properly… Useless… You make my life hell… Now go to that bench and seat their until i come…
Swara just nodes with teary eyes and sits their… Sahil goes out… Sahil meets with a girl wearing a tight one piece… He hugs her…
Sahil: hi baby… Umm you are looking so s*xy baby… I can’t wait to have you…
Let’s go…
He says while nibbling her earlobe… The girl depart…
Girl: control darling… Let’s go… But what about your illiterate bahan ji wife…
Sahil laughs : let her enjoy delhi platform…
Both laughs and left… Here swara was still sitting with her side kit bag which containing some of her necessary things and also her education file… Cause she never leave it… Only she knows how much she loves to study…
Minutes turns in to hours… One hour… Two hours… Like this 6 hours passed… She was verge of crying… She doesn’t know anything but han she was just scared that something negative happens with her lovely husband… It’s evening… Rail police in charge mrs Ragini laksh gadodia is watching her since she enter in platform… It’s time to her leaving… Her duty hours over… She goes to her…
Ragini : hey… I am noticing you since morning… Why are you sitting here… Waiting for someone…
Swara 1st gets afraid seeing police but then open up…
Swara : ji… Wo… My husband…
She starts crying and tell her what happened… Ragini is intelligent enough that she easily understand that her husband intentionally left her here…
Ragini : umm… Ok come with me… I will help you searching him…
Swara gets some hope… Ragini took her to police station and right a missing diary… But she have no photos of her husband so They tell by that case ragini will call a sketcher or will contact with her family but for now nothing can happen they will start from tomorrow…
Swara : no i will not come madam ji… I will wait for him here only… What of he come and can’t find me…
Ragini : in that case i am telling the officer to keep an eye if your husband come then he will surely search you and they will identify him… It’s not safe for you to stay… You come with me…
She took her…
Both comes in her house… Small yet beautiful…
Ragini show her guest room and tells to get freshen up…
Ragini comes down but can’t find swara… She goes to kitchen… And finds her cooking…
Ragini : swara you don’t need to do this… You go…
Swara : please mam… Let me do or i will cry…
She starts crying… Ragini feels she is very young so she ask her age and shocked to know she is just 18…
Just then someone came… Ragini goes to open the door… She smiles widely seeing her hubby… She hugs him tightightly… So do laksh then pecks her lips… Ragini blush…
Laksh : how was day…
Ragini nodes ok… : yours??
Laksh (pouts) : boring without you…
Then grins place his hand on her tummy : how is she…
Ragini : it’s he.. And he is perfectly fine.. I have talked with sir… From next month i am taking leave…
Laksh nodes… Both goes to room… After sometime laksh came for dinner… Ragini already tell about swara which make laksh more proud…
Both comes for dinner… Ragini brings dinner… Laksh takes 1st bite and stands up…
Laksh : ragu… Who… Who is the girl… Where is she…
Ragini : what happened… She is in kitchen… She refuse to come in front of you…
Laksh runs to kitchen and sees swara sitting on floor hugging her knees and dug her face in it… Laksh with slow steps and teary eyes goes to her… And place his hand on hers… Swara looks up…
Laksh (whisper) : shona??
Laksh sees her mangalsutra and vermillion… Fumes in anger…
Laksh : they will never change right??
Swara : bhai…
Swara hugs him and cried out loud… Laksh kiss her forehead and carry her in arms…
Ragini : laksh??
Laksh : ragu… My shona… My baby… I told na??
Ragini is shocked…
Laksh : look ragu… They didn’t spare my doll… They also makes her life hell…
Saying this he goes to her room and place her on bed… Laksh kiss her forehead…
Laksh : shona your bhai is here na… Don’t worry he will make everything fine… So don’t worry…
Swara hugs him like a scared child find shelter in her father’s lap…
Laksh pull her and makes her sleep near his chest remembering how he used to do same when she was 3 years old and he was 15 years old…
Ragini Place her hand on his shoulder assuring him everything will be fine… Laksh just nodes and determine to find the truth by morning… Ragini help him… 1st they see the cctv footage of the station then outside the station… Laksh fumes in anger seeing sahil’s betrayer… At morning swara open her eyes and sees laksh sitting beside her… Laksh smiles…
Laksh : got up my doll…
Swara kiss his cheek and hug her… She remembers 10 years ago it was her everyday routine…
Laksh : doll lets go…
Swara (crying) : did you find him bhai…
Laksh (cold face) : hmm chalo…
Laksh takes her to a big hotel… Then to a room.. By duplicate key they open the door… Swara enters and shocked to see clothless sahil and that girl under blanket… She steps back… Sahil also shocked…
Laksh takes swara out… She was like lifeless body…
Laksh : here is divorce paper sign it…
Swara Look at him with shock… :bhai how can i do this… He is my husband…
Laksh : can’t you see what he is doing… He is betraying you… He is a wrong person…
Swara : but dadi says husband’s mistakes are not mistakes… It’s my fault i can’t keep him happy…
Laksh (shouts) : stop listening that woman’s word…. Sign it now…
Swara look at the… Laksh kiss her temple… : trust your bhai shona…
Swara looks at him… With teary eyes then sign the paper… Laksh Enter in the room… 1st he beat him then forward the paper, : sign it..
Sahil : no i won’t… She is the money tree of our ho…
Laksh : i will give you to police… And here no father brother of your will can release you… Sahil gets scared and sign it… Laksh took swara with him…
Swara : bhai we should inform at home…
Laksh : they will know automatically…. Don’t take tension ok??
Ragini welcome swara whole heartedly…
Swara starts to live with laksh… Trio always took care of each other after knowing ragini is pregnant swara never allow ragini to do work… But in heart she is so much hurt that she always cry in absence of raglak… She has also fear about what will her family say…
It’s been 5 days that swara is here… Laksh and ragini tries to chear her up but it’s very difficult to digest what ever happens with her…
One day… Raglak were out for their respective works… There is no chili powder so swara herself goes to buy it… Shop is near so she just close the door didn’t lock properly…
She came back and open the door… She was checking the money and dashed with someone…. She close her eyes due to fear of fall but 2 strong arms of the perso hold her by waist and a deep eye… Look at her with astonishment and some what lovingly….
Guy: hey beautiful… Open your eyes… You are safe cutie…
Swara slowly open her eyes and looks at about 22 years old guy is holding her…
He makes her stand and look at her from top to toe : arey wah now a days thiefs are became fashionable also… And beautiful also?
Swara (nervous and pull the dupatta on her head and turn) : i am not thief… I am…
Guy: no i know you are thief… Oh my god… You steal chili powder… Arey my jiju is rich steal some other things… But how can you steal now i am here na… So better luck next time… And i won’t mind if a beautiful girl like accompany me until my jiji and jiju come…
Just then ‘stop your flirting sanskar’…
Swara runs to Ragini and hugs her…
Sanskar scrunch her eyebrows and look at them…
Laksh came from behind: doll… What happened…
Swara runs to him leaving Ragini and hide herself in him… Laksh also hugs her protectively…
Sanskar : exactly jiju… She is doll… Baby doll… Sorry barbie doll ??
Laksh looks at him with cold face : she is my sister sanskar…
Sanskar bite his tongue and scratch the back of his head….
I will stop if you don’t want this… ???