This is first time I have tried something poetic…. So this is it…. And yes I realized today that some authors who don’t have time to read even comment to support us so silent readers please do comment ππ
So this OS is based on current track where Riddhima lied to Vansh that she herself wanted to change her identity and leave (according to precap)
Vansh: Tell me damn it!!
Riddhima: wo…. actually….I wanted to change my identity……
Riddhima closed her eyes tightly in fear.
Vansh:(firmly) Why? Why do you want to (angrily) change your identity!!??
Riddhima: You only said… Go away from my eyes, you don’t want to see me.
Vansh: Really Riddhima?
Vansh turns back and leaves Riddhima also follows him.
Riddhima’s Pov
I know I lied, but I want to keep my promise Vansh. I know this is very wrong but I will surely pacify you. I love you and I can’t live without you.
Pov ends
Riddhima: Vanshhh…. Please listen to me I am sorry I have changed my mind I will….
Vansh holds Riddhima with a jerk. Riddhima looks at him with sorrow in her eyes. Vansh leaves her with a jerk.
Riddhima: Vansh I …
Vansh: (cutting) You wanted to leave no, you can leave. I am saying now and I amΒ saying it with full courage.
Riddhima becomes shocked…. Tears escape through her eyes which make no change in Vansh.
Riddhima: You really want me to leave?
Vansh: Yes
Riddhima: Vansh sacchi? You want me to leave?
Vansh(angrily): Yes! I want you to leave! (Shouting) DON’T COME BACK!!!
Riddhima scaredly runs away. She runs to her room crying when Angre saw her running. He called her but she kept running.
Here, Vansh kept drinking and went to his room.
Vansh’s POV
You broke me and want me to forgive you so easily? You ruined our 1st marriage anniversary Riddhima.
Pov ends
As he was drunk he sees his own images, one in white and one in black.
White image: Vansh? How can you do this to your life? You hurted her and yourself very much. Now forgive her, Come on. She your wife and carrying your baby!
Black image: No! Are you mad! She broke your heart! You did good by punishing her! She needs it.
White image: What about your baby?? It can effect your baby’s health.
Vansh: SHUT UP!!!!!
Vansh sits in his bed and slowly sleeps…
Next morning, Vansh’s deep sleep was broken by the knock on the door. He opens the door with his hand on his forehead. It was Angre.
Angre: Good Morning boss.
Vansh: What happened?
Angre: Actually, Bhabhi was not in her room so I thought she must be with you, it’s time for her medicine.
Vansh: She is not with me.
Vansh closes the door. He washes his face and gets ready. He was descending the stairs when his own words echoed his mind and he remembered how he scared Riddhima so much that she ran away. He started going back up to her but he finds it empty, he shouts her name and looks for her in hotel but finds her nowhere.
Vansh: Angre!
Angre: What happened boss?
Vansh: She went away…
Angre: Went away?
Vansh: Yesterday I said her in anger that I want her to leave and she really left!
Angre: What! We have to find her. I will do something.
Suddenly Vansh’s phone rings and he gets a message.
‘your wife is in the hotel, find her if you can. You have only 20 mins, or else she will die a painful death’
Vansh dialled the number but it was switched off. He told Angre about the message and searched all over, he decided to look for her in the tea estate.
!!!!!Riddhima!!!!!
In my heart only breath is left without you, promises, conversation and memories are left without you
Vansh shouted with all his voice to find her. He was very terrified in thoughts of loosing Riddhima.
You will always be remembered, you will never go from my heart, it’s not easy to forget you
Happiness only came for a while in my heart, will there be distances always?
I am still obsessed with you, how can this habit go?
I couldn’t change for you, I need you but you are not here, what will I do with these lifeless breaths?
Happiness only came for a while in my heart, will there be distances always?
My wishes are all worthless, nor you are mine neither I am yours
Sometimes you saw dreams in my eyes which had only you and meπ
How much I have laughed, I have paid by crying, never it has rained in monsoon that much my eyes are raining
Happiness only came for a while in my heart, will there be distances always?
-Tanvi π
He fell on the ground crying, his guilt, his fear all came up together. He heard someone shouting back…….
To be continued…….
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