Episode 9 – Part 1
Next day, the Tripathis get busy into preparing the house for the function. Workers decorating the walls of garlands, cooks getting their duty done, housemaids cleaning the dusty corners, the entire Ayodya Nivas had a busy schedule. Thankfully, half of the work has been done on the earlier day, and Daadi kept appreciating Dhaani’s magic and cleanliness in all the work she used to touch, and especially her perfection in managing everything alone. She was managing the preparations while Viplav and Pankaj took the kids to the playground close, so that they don’t disturb the work at home, though the men and kids were missing their ladies. And Shalini was obliged to take rest in her room. Bhaiyaa and bhabhi prohibited her, she mustn’t disagree.
Dhaani : (indicates a worker about adding garlands in the house) Bhaisaab, don’t add so many here. (points a corner spot) Do put them there, loads of them are needed.
Phoolwala : Ok madam.
Dhaani : Everything must look perfect at Shalu’s function.
Daadi comes to the hall admiring the decorations.
Daadi : Arey wah Dhaani!
Dhaani looks at her.
Daadi : (looks at Dhaani) You have done a wonderful job betha. I am so proud of you. Shalu will really like it.
Dhaani : It’s Shalu’s function Daadi. It must be on point.
Daadi : (caresses her granddaughter-in-law’s cheek) Shalu is very lucky to have a sister-in-law like you betha. God bless you!
Dhaani : No Daadi, I am lucky and happy to be a part of this family. (a broad smile on her lips)
Daadi smiles at her and goes away leaving Dhaani busy with the work. Once done, she takes a food tray upstairs for Shalu. Entering the room, she sees the lady busy tidying up her room.
Dhaani : (surprised) Shalu! (puts the tray on the small table in the room) What are you doing?
Shalini : (looks at Dhaani putting some dresses back in the cupboard) Nothing Bhabhi, just tidying up some clothes, when free.
Dhaani : If you had called me, then I would have done it na?
Shalini : Don’t worry Bhabhi, I can do it.
Dhaani : But we asked you to take rest. If something wrong happens…
Shalini : No Bhabhi, nothing will happen. I am perfect.
Dhaani : But…
Daadi : Arey betha! Let her do na.
Dhaani turns her head to fall on their grandmother.
Daadi : Working and exercising our body during pregnancy is good for delivery.
Shalini : And Bhabhi, this is my work. How can I let you do that?
Daadi : (teasing) Haan, let her do something. Now that she is doing something more responsible.
Shalini : Daadi!
Dhaani : (still not convinced) Alright, if you insist. But first, eat something. You must get ready also.
Shalini : Haan Bhabhi, I will eat. Don’t worry.
Daadi : (looks at Dhaani, her hand on her shoulder) Dhaani betha, you also eat.
Dhaani : Yeah daadi, I am just waiting for the guys to come back. We can eat all together. And Daadaji is meditating in his room.
Daadi : Alright. Then go and take some rest. You are working hard since morning.
Dhaani : That’s nothing Daadi. And there are so many preparations more. I can’t take rest.
Daadi : It’s ok. We will manage. You need to get ready also.
Dhaani : Alright. I will be with Shalu for a while then get ready.
Daadi : (smiles) Ok as you wish.
She goes away from there leaving the young women in their conversation. Both got to laugh and talk a lot like two close friends, that they didn’t notice time flying. With time, both ladies got closer and Dhaani felt seeing a little sister in Shalini. But they didn’t have any proper time for conversing once fate separated the families.
Dhaani : I think we have to get ready. Guests will come soon. Otherwise Daadi will scold us.
Shalini : Bhabhi! More than Daadi, mah will scold both of us, like always. She doesn’t like me the way she loves bhaiyaa.
Dhaani : Why are you saying so ? Mahji loves you a lot, as much as she loves Viplav. You are the daughter of this house after all. And not only Mahji, but we all love you the most.
Viplav : (enters in the room surprisingly and stands in front of Dhaani’s seat when the two kids run to embrace their mothers and Pankaj comes from behind and joins Shalini) 100% wrong, Mrs Viplav Tripathi! (sits next to Dhaani on the hand part of the couch) Mah and all in this house loves me the most. You must not lie so much.
Shalini : (cute sad face) Bhaiyaa!
Dhaani : (turns to look at him and hits on his upper arm) Viplav!
Viplav : Why do you hit me ? You even love me the most right?
Dhaani : Maybe because you are my husband.
Viplav : (excited tone) See I to…
Dhaani : (interrupts his joy) But I still love your family more than you. (looks at Shalini and puts her hand on her nanand’s) Because I respect them for having (points Viplav with her hand, her palm facing the ceiling) beard you all these years.
A cute and angry Viplav suddenly smacks on her fingers that were facing him, and her cheeks kissing pink by embarrassment, she removes her hand away from her hold, while the man shows his one-million-dollar curve on his lips.
Shalini : (clears her throat with a teasing smile) Ahem ahem! Bhaiyaa, all this, in private please.
Dhaani looks down shy.
Viplav : Oyye moti, I do romance wherever, whenever, (hugs Dhaani from the back) however I want. Don’t bring bad eye in it.
Shalini, the kids and Pankaj giggle at his answer while the innocent bhabhiji reddens more. They get stopped suddenly when Daadi makes her entry.
Daadi : You guys havent got ready yet? Function is to start in 2 hours. Go and get ready fast!
Viplav : (standing up) 2 hours? That’s way too much for men Daadi! I can make it in 10 minutes.
Daadi : Let’s see ! (looks at Dhaani) Dhaani betha, go and get ready fast. And come to help me in the kitchen after.
Dhaani : Ok daadi.
Viplav holding the little Dhanush in his left arm, he follows his wife and the three reach the room to get ready.
Dhaani : Go and get your dresses ready. (makes Dhanush get down of his father) Till that, I will make Dhanush (once on his legs, the little one goes towards the sofa) take a shower.
Viplav : (looks at her moving here and there in the room) First answer my question.
Dhaani : (takes a towel and dresses ready) What?
Viplav : You (longs on the word) … really don’t love me the most ?
Dhaani gets stopped in her moves and looks suddenly at her husband with surprise while the latter smiles at her expecting for a reply of hers. She then shyly smiles looking down, turning red at his question.
Dhaani : (takes the red “Cars” towel and goes towards Dhanush who was playing games sitting on the sofa, smiling now teasingly) Is it important for me to tell ? (bends down to the boy making him stand up) Don’t you already know the answer ? (takes off the little one’s tee-shirt while he was very busy on his game)
Viplav : (comes close to them) Maybe. (sits next to them) But still, I want to hear it from you.
Dhaani : Haan haan but right now, you have to get ready for the baby shower. Go go go !
Dhanush : And Dhanush will get faster than you papa!
Viplav : Acha? (removes his blazer and leaves it on the sofa) Let’s see (unbuttons the first two buttons of his shirt) who wins the race.
Dhanush : Yeah race! I will beat you. (looks at his mother) Mumma, let’s go to shower fast na.
Dhaani : (laughs at her two men’s madness) Haan, let’s go.
Both mother and son stand up and get set to go, while Viplav takes his sherwani set in hold smiling. When suddenly he hears a sweet “Suno!” and turns round to look at that person. However she was faster and drops a soft kiss on his stubbly cheek with a shy smile, not letting him see her.
Dhaani : (whispers lovably near his ear) I love your family the most … for having given me the most beautiful gift I could ever get in my life.
He turns to look at his lovely wife surprised of the answer she just uttered but she runs away before his eyes fall into hers. He gets emotional and blushes remembering her words, with that broad smile which makes his eyes get smaller and adorable, rubbing his pink-lipped cheek.
Precap – Function at the Tripathis.
Thanks for reading. Keep commenting and telling your views.
Hey! So here you go for IKRS – AIFF’s update. Hopefully you liked it.
PS : Excuse the mistakes if found, I am literally sleepy while posting.
With lots of love!
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woow its amazing shruthy… 🙂
thanks for updating ur lovely fan fiction…
And i am eagerly waiting for vidya
please introduse her as soon as possible…
once again thanq very much… 🙂
Thank you so much Lalitha 🙂
Glad you are liking the fan fiction.
Same. I am also eager to introduce her as Vidya.
Hey everyone!
Well I am extremely sorry for this very late update my sweet pellows. But let me tell you a (non-interesting) short story reasoning why.
I actually used to store all my stuffs (school stuffs and personal like photos, edits, stories etc..) on a hard disk. Due to my very bad luck that haunts my life since EVER, I just lost ALL my documents. Even the word files where I saved my stories. And I got very disappointed of my clumsiness.
And since, I tried hard to get back all what I lost and still on the process.
However, I kept writing on the other side and I felt not to delay anymore here. So, HERE I AM BACK, with new updates of my stories “IKRS – An Imaginary Fan Fiction”, “Because Destiny Has Become Our Love Story”. And again “Baarish (IKRS)” is yet in making process so still it won’t come for now.
Along with the updates, I have some more surprises for you, as a “sorry” for my late comeback. Some of the recent ideas that popped in my mind months ago are slowly coming through short writings. I haven’t finished the production, but ideas are already finalised. So the making will also be quick. Hopefully you would like them when posted. Mabe not today, but very soon, PROMISE! <3 And all your critics about the stories would help me knowing if I should make more like them or concentrate only on my longer fan fictions.
Regards,
Shruthy.
Hey Shruthy!! First of all sad to know that you’ve lost your private data which is very painful thingy? and more sad to know that the stories are deleted? How did this happen yaar I mean it happened because of your mistake or it happened at its own ?
By the way if the stories were saved then why you took so much time for posting, you should’ve post it earlier as all you have to do is copy and paste?
And wait a second, that means BAARISH has been erased NAHIIIIIIIII? Now I’ve to wait more for BDHBOL and for BAARISH? Kia hai yaar? but chalo koi nahe take your time as nothing can be done now however I pray to God that may you find each thing which you’ve missed?
About the update it was so good yaar?? like the way you’re showing their family bond and cute scenes among daadi, dhaani and shalini too nice? last part was amazing, in short it has become my favorite one, viplav was looking so cute in asking that question and when he was putting off his blazer and unbuttoned his upper two buttons, my Goodness flat hogae mai tou??? and the light and pyari se kiss was too beautiful and her reply was indeed wondrous? I just loved the last scene!
Apart from it, don’t forget to tell the winner, winner of that race actually I was telling the story to my sister and she quickly asked me about the winner so now I’m also curious to know that who exactly won *Viplav or Dhanush*??
Besides I’m really excited for your short stories, please post them soon. Don’t take so much time. Ok!!
And the most common line “Post the next part soon and yeah post the other stories too plus give some long updates yaar already you update after a looooong gap”
Take care!
Don’t be yaar. I am gulty for being so maladroit. And I lost my everything :/
It was my mistake, I was updating my laptop and… BOUM!!
Saved? I write my stories on drafts, and then I copy/paste on word files. :p
All got erased girl!! And If I don’t find them, I will have to copy/paste everything from the posts on TU. What I worry the most for is about the stories I haven’t posted on TU. I have to find out a way to get them back, wazrna, my mind will BOUMMM!
Oh thanks! I am even enjoying writing a lot about the family. They look so cute.
And same for me, the last scene is my favourite. I got so inspired and enjoying while writing. So glad that you reader also liked it as much as I do.
Yeah. I don’t know if I described it well enough, but yeah he was supposed to look the cutest, with a smile of expectation and love.
LOL it was not to flat the girls that I wrote those details on removing the blazer and unbuttoning, but I can see that I actually melted a poor girl’s heart.
Glad you liked that moment too, when she kissed him and replied him something unexpected as he believed she went with Dhanush leaving him alone.
Oh woow you tell about my stories to your sister. Hopefully she liked it too.
I thought it was quite obvious XD LOL it was out little rockstar na. Who went to bathroom first afterall? :p
I will try too don’t worry. Still not finished writing them and also have to make the cover picture. With internship, I don’t get proper time for that. So… HAVE PATIENCE! 🙂
XOXOXOXO
And haan, I already struggle to cut my part into logical episodes, and it’s hard to post longer parts. I have to get longer parts already written for that. And since I lost my stories, I am quite discouraged.
Oh so you should be careful yaar, I hope you get successful in getting everything back inshaAllah!
Acha ok I get it! Haan it was literally a beautiful scene? yes I told her in fact I’ve told her every story and she use to tell me the stories which she read on swaragini page!
Haan bilkol she loved it yaar, who can dislike it girl ? Hmm so that means Dhanush won? yaay!!
Absolutely correct he melted me by his gestures and acts, my goodness he is so phenomenal???
Don’t be sad yaar you’ll get everything soon, don’t worry!
Post it when you feel easy, I’ll always wait?
I know :/ I hope so girl! *HARE RAMA HARE KRISHNA*
Yeah thank you by the way.
Awww that’s so cute. and there are so many stories for Swaragini. Here, I am alone. 🙁
Awwww I am so touched. Please read her this message “Hey sweetie! Thank you so much. Your sister told me you have liked the scene. I am very glad knowing that. Hopefully I will bring such nice scenes again and that I can satisfy you all again.” (I wanted to add “pagal” before sister but you would have taken it wrong :p)
Of course. He went to the bathroom na, Viplav was busy taking his dress to get ready. :p
Cool down cool down!! I know he is, but he is Dhaani’s also.
Hopefully yaar. I had stored so many stuffs in it. Stories, edits, stills (lik I have so many files of pictures of shows), and even the shows’ episodes I have saved to make VMs. I seriously felt my heart and mind got shot at the second. It was my entire life that I lost.
Haan haan I will try to finish. Woh kya hai na, more I come to the end, more I have new inspirations of scenes and longer the story becomes. I am thinking if I might not make it in two/three shots as it’s longer than I thought.
Haan there are so many stories in swaragini! Aww that’s so sweet! I’ll make her read it?? and she won’t feel bad if you had added that pagal in it as you know, we are quite frank?
Haan Haan I know?
Oh I’m feeling so bad because I know how it feel like when we lost something important, I’ve gone through that moment when I lost my story then my PC is out of work currently and I’m feeling so low as ViDha’s pictures were saved in it and only pictures there was a lot more
Now I’ve to use lappy or mobile phone?
That’s why I can perfectly understand?
Yaar post it whether it’s two or three shots or even more than that!
Always seeing a new name in the recent updates list.
Lol do whatever you want :p BAHAHAHA nice sisters! xD
You know what ? I think I have got back some new files. I have given my hard disk to a shop that get back data and I guess I had something. Have to check up tonight. But still praying not getting excited before anything happens.
OH! Really? That’s very sad.
No I don’t want to make it a short story. First I thought to post the entire thing in one go, I wanted to try making one shots and all… But I fear you guys will find the shot very very long. That’s why I am waiting.