Here i’m back with the next update hope you guys will like it.
Ignore all spelling, typo and grammatical mistakes.
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RM @ 9:00 am
Om” why shivaay fone is switched off?
“Gauri calling at farm house talking to Om” omkara g ramu kaka is also not picking up the fone. What we gonna answer maa? Soon maa will wake up.
Rudra” O! Anika bhabhi theek ho gayi na?
“Bhavya gets furious” Rudra!! what bhabhi theek to ho gayi na? Nothing happened to Anika di ok. So stop your nonsense.
Rudra” gazes her cluelessly”
“Gauri puts landline on table walk to bhavya” Doll! What’s this? Why you………
“Bhavya hug Gauri cries” Gauri di i’m not feeling good.. Maa is still under effect of medicine and di is not back yet and shivaay bhaiya also not responding…. humain bohat dar lag raha hai.
“Om brushing bhavya hairs” ACP Bhavya sahiba nothing will happen to your Anika di.
“Rudra pat on bhavya shoulder” got it bandariya nothing will happen to our Anika bhabhi. Kyun O….. Rudra gazes om
“Om cages trio in his arm” nothing can happen to Anika di / bhabhi when SSO is there with her.
“Bhavya with watery eyes” sach may Shivaay bhaiya , Anika di kuch nahe honey dey gay?
Om” Yes ! honestly” …..
Gayu” pinky promise”
“Omru about to lock their little finger with Gayu…… When Om eyes fall on stumbling feet.
He lift his gaze to find the onwer of stumbling feet gets stun to his position to see blue orbs and off white shirt dentched red……
Rudra” O! What happened? Pinky promise”
“Om without looking trio point his index finger towards door”
“Gayu and Rudra switch their gazes to indicated direction” trio too gets shocked.
Gauri” Shi…vaay bhaiya”
Shivaay” face is shown tears rolling from his eyes”
Gayu and Omru” runs to him”
Om” Shivaay ! Are you fine? This blood? your fone is switched off and why you are crying?
Bhavya” Shivaay bhaiya why you are crying? And where’s Anika di…. Bhavya start looking sides of Shivaay”
Rudy” Shivaay bhaiya why are you quite please tell us where’s Anika bhabi”
“Om getting angry squeeze Shivaay shoulders” Shivaayyyy we are asking something from you? Where’s bhabhi?
“Shivaay lift his eyes up and gazes all with red shot eyes”
Om” Shivaay!! Will you stop giving this dramatical look to us and please open your mouth?
“Gauri step forward holds Shivaay hand” Shivaay bhaiya humari Anika di theek hai na?
“Shivaay hug Gauri tightly cries” forgive your bhaiya i, i…..
“Gauri breaks the hug shouts….. What i, i……. ha? Tell me where’s my Anika di?
“Shivaay bend his head turns a side”
“Gayu and Omru passes dreadly gaze to eachother and then gazes Shivaay with millions of questions arrowing him”
Shivaay” crying vigrously”
“Men enter the house and place body in the mid of hall”
“Bhavya shaking Shivaay” Shivaay bhaiya what’s this?
“Gauri eyes getting watery” stop joking Shivaay bhaiya none of us gonna tolerate this”
Om” Gauri is saying correct Shivaay and aunty g will slap you for this prank.
Scene shifts to Devohi room
“Aarohi screams Anu and short sits on bed”
Dev” Aarohi what happened ? He comes and sit next to her”
Aarohi” i’ve seen every bad dream Dev. She comes out of bed and question him about Anu”
Dev” Aarohi! Come sit here you need rest”
Aarohi” where’s Anu ? Did she came back? She’s fine na? Wait let me check her?
Dev” Aarohi, Aarohi take a pause. Anu is fine”
“Aarohi throws his hand away” stepping out still i myself don’t see her i won’t believe you.
Dev” walking behind her.. Aarohi listen to me”
“Aarohi running towards hall calling Anika” Anu, Anu”
“Gayu and Shivomru get shocked to hear Aarohi voice”
“Shivaay craking” M…a..a
Dev” Aarohi listen to me”
Aarohi” Anu where are you Anu”
“Gayu running to Aarohi” Maa, Dad
“Aarohi enter the hall” The moment Aarohi enter the hall winds starts blowing and cloth gets aparted from death body face.
Aarohi eyes gets widen to see the face
Dev” feet gets fixed with the floor tears start rolling from his eyes…. A…..nu
All faces gets black and white to see the face
“Shivaay break down near the enterance”
Scene shifts to unknown place
“Vahni scream at the top of her voice ” Nooooo!!! Anika can’t die no she can’t die. I’ve not kept both alive that you( addressing god) give such a smiple death to Rajput’s. I had that right to give merciless death to them not you.
Twenty years, twenty years i waited for their death day and you just in few hours splash water on my hardwork.
I kept Rajput’s in dark that Aarohi is dead but Anu never believed that. I made Rajput’s lifeless soul’s for twenty years they were sleeping on death bed only sorrows became their destiny.
And today you changed my whole game plan. You give those Rajput’s just a smiple death……Noooooo.
Rajput’s ki barbaadi sirf Vahni ki hatho ho gayi aur koi mujhse say haq chheene nahe sakhta tu bhi nahe. Suna tu bhi nahe…..
Scene shifts to RM
Gayu scream” Anika di
“Om chutching Shivaay collar” Shivaayy! Yeh sab kya hai ? Bol
Rudra” Shivaay bhaiya speak up”
Bhavya” she’s not my Anika di”
“Dev pull shivaay drag him to body” tell me who’s body is this and where’s DSR daughter?
Shivaay” silently cries”
“Aarohi step foward sit next to Shivaay in soft milky voice question him” Shivaay beta where’s Anu?
“Shivaay shout” Maar gayi hai ap ki Anu……..
“Aarohi slap Shivaay hard eyes gets red” what you said?
“Shivaay forgive me he join his hand infront of Aarohi ” SSO can’t save for Anu
Aarohi” No! Anu can’t d…….. you are lying to me.
Shivaay” i’m so….r…ry”
Bhavya” come close to body Anika di get up other otherwise i’ll take Maa and Aloo puri. You always says na Maa and Aloo puri are only of Anu’s but now i’m gonna take it so if you don’t want this to happen so get up it’s my order”
All crying gazing the body except Aarohi
“Aarohi stop crying she’s not Anu she’s some imposter”
“Dev cup Aarohi face” Aarohi yeah she’s some imposter.
“Shivaay stop it she’s not any imposter he stand up gazes all” She’s your Anika di he points towards Gayu, yours Anika bhabi and yours Anu…….. She’s dead.
All shout you are lying
“Shivaay crying” i’m not lying damn it i’m not and still if you think i’m lying then ask maa to touch her and clear your doubt
Gayu runs to Aarohi” Maa dekho na yeh Shivaay bhaiya kya bol rahy hai.
“Dev pleading Aarohi to check”
“Aarohi gazes all moves near body smiles” i know she’s not my Aun….. Aarohi still gazing all slowly moving her hand towards Anika body. She slowly holds Anika hand.
“Shivaay crying and nodding negatively”
All gazing Aarohi with watery eyes
“Aarohi holding Anika hand”
Screen freezes on Aarohi and Anika hand
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Precape no precape.
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9 Comments
Hey Nati di sorry for not commenting tough i promised you but i was buzy with exams but i read all the pervious one all were beautifully written.
Now coming to current one it’s good one my fingers are crossed all are waiting for Aarohi’s enunciate.
Plzzzzz update the next one ASAP. If possible post the next one today
The most ghatiya ff on TU ever from beginning to end only rona dhona nothing else.
End this fiction ASAP just wasting your time and poor ishqbaaz fan……
Nati di you always got huge number of dislikes and people who comment on your fiction just say ” good, beautiful just one word. So it’s simply showing people are fedup from your fiction
There are 27 likes and only 6 dislikes , i am sure that you have disliked it but we all liked it and it is a great ff you know what sadness is also a part of life …. so please nati dont stop updating
Don’t mind nati di but please go and check other fan fictions and writers stories all are speechless and what great number of likes and comments the get above 50 likes and more than 10 comment.
Whatever i’m saying is to save your persious time. I don’t have any hated for u i’m saying for your good
Hello NAti di.. i don’t even comment your previous chapters but iam a big fan of your ff.. you are really a great writer… i am addicted to your ff.. please post next episode ASAP.. and one more thing can you please write fully in English. … and waiting for your next episode
dear sister..,,
aaj ka episode bohot shocking tha…
kuch samjha nehi ki kya annika such mai maar gaya ya phir shivay ka koi plan enemy pakar ne k lye….
Please sis….
jaldhi update ki jiye please…
I am desperately looking forward for your next part….
Hey dear.. Today’s update is little shocking but I know you have planned a surprise in next update… Keep writing dear….
I m in shockkkk….. Is all these Vani’s dream????
Hope dream hi ho… Finger crossed…!!!
Plzz di post ASAP… My eagerness increasing more nd more….
OMG…what is happenning ..Anudi ?????You seriously increased the level of excitement Nati dear …i just cant wait for the next..Pls post ASAP…