It is human nature to be imperfect, no one can change this truth. We pretend to be flawless but are we really ? This story is a take on how one completes other’s imperfection.
Prologue :
It is a dark night and inside a dark room with only the lamp as a source of light, a man in his mid 20s comes inside fully drunk and locks the door.He stands holding an award in his hand. He starts to talk to himself “I am Omkara… people say I am a great artist and admire my art works.. but do they really understand the turmoil of pain which I undergo while I do this so incredible artworks…have they ever, ever realized the true meaning behind my each work… how will they.. they are all fake ..this world is made of lies ..and she is … ” he throws the award with full anger and falls on his knees as he screams in pain. He questions himself on why all this is only happening with him , his heart, his faith and his world has again come down shattering into pieces.
Prologue ends
How you guys liked it, it is my first try please do tell me in the comments below whether I should continue this story or not.
37 Comments
I loved it Anamika?
U r a fab writer , continue soon dear
Thank you so much
Hi namyaz no post of kanchi
Nice ? update the next part soon.
P. S- I loved the title
Thank you so much. Will update soon
Awesome start…… Waiting for the story to start……. All the best…..post next part soon
Thank you so much. Will post next part soon
nice…I loved the prologue…who is Om’s pair??? Ishana or Gauri????
Thank you so much. It is a Suspense, will be revealing soon.
Nice start.
Loved it.
Thank you so much
Superb prologue
Thank you so much
Awesome dr.loved it.i’m a huge omkara n rikara fan.so obviously I love dis.hope gauri will be d prtner of om.plz post asap.bye dr tc
Thank you so much. Will post soon
Omg….it was so good…eagerly waiting for nxt update….post soon….
Thank you so much
Again painful life for my Om 🙁 Hope you will give the more happiness and colourful life in future.. keep writing dr
Thank you so much. After every pain we suffer, there is always is a treasure of happiness awaiting us. Surely Om will get his bundle of happiness.
awesome
update soon
Thank you so much
Amazing prologue..but Ishkara or Gaukara??
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Good one…best wishes
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Please continue…Hahaha, you got me..Here was I thinking that this story is about Shivika and found out that it’s about Omkara. Nice change.
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Great start… loved it… Eagerly waiting for the next part.. post soon..
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Prologue looks promising dear..I am an ardent Rikara fan…I hope that Gauri will be pair for Cutipie omkie?????Pleasss come up with First episode soonnn….????love Rikara…Take care???
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Go ahead dear..
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it is a awesome start , i am loving it already . pls update it soon and let it be rikara pls
Thank you so much.
AWESOME EXCITED INTERSTING SUPERB??????
Dear Anamika
Prologue Is Excited And Intersting?????????
Keep It Up?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thank you so much.