Independent Girl – FF Kriyam
Hello awesome people,
Hope U all are having a great day,
I have been silent reader for ages and you people gave me so much inspiration and this is my first story. Constructive criticism is appreciated. I have loved SSEL from the starting episode even when it was off track. I was so much in love with kriyam ff on TU and just a minute ago a story popped in my head and putting it in words. Please help me through my journey. If you like it please encourage me
Character Introduction.
Krishna : silent, smart, ambitious dreamer, practical engineer but her passion is writing, wants to live life queen size though she has low confidence.
Saiyyam: fun loving, caring, smart at times rude to people lives life on his terms
Yuvan: Krishna’s first love, a cool out going guy living simple life irresponsible Saiyyam’ cousin
Yuvani: krishna’s best friend, a strong willpower girl always supports krishna eventhough Yuvan is her brother.
At midnight krishna woke up suddenly due to her repeated bad dream and was having panic attack. She was sweating heavily and has difficulty in taking deep breaths. She went near her bedroom stand and drank some water to sleep again but could not find proper sleep. She is tossing and turning and when she looked at the time it was 2am. She thought of writing and started her story. She was feeling tired after sometime and slept on her couch itself. She woke up at 8 at was really late to her college. In college, Saiyyam was waiting for her and asked ” where were u sleepy head I was waiting for you.” “I am not able sleep properly at night so woke up late”.” Did u dream of me last night ?? asks saiyyam winking at her and small smile appears on her face. She thinks he is flirtious all the time and is just looks around class for yuvan and best friend yuvani and there were no where in sight. Saiyyam observes and questions ” looking for any special person??” She looks at him angrily goes to her seat. Saiyyam comes around and sit behind her.
Yuvan and yuvani just stroll around at that time, Yuvani hugs her ” Kyun itna buja buja sa hogaya tumhara chehra? Raat mein soyi nahin hai kya? ( Why are you looking so dull?? Didn’t you sleep last night?) Ha she is dreaming about me,replied Saiyyam giving Yuvan a bro hug. Listening to this, Yuvan was angry at this but kept silent not to hurt krishna. Classes went on as usual and everyone were having a great time, during lunch there was fight going on in the canteen. Krishna and Yuvani came running towards the accumulated crowd and were shocked to see Saiyyam and yuvan fighting. Both the best friends came to stop the fight and Saiyyam angrily replied to krishna he doesn’t deserve your love.
Looking for comments and hope u like my first chapter.
Zillions of love and thank you for giving me a chance Telly updates.
See you guys!!
12 Comments
nice start dear….looking forward for more such episodes….and u know i was waiting for ur update from yesterday….i saw ur wall post yesterday only…
Thanks a ton palak it is so wonderful to hear from you. am literally on the moon right now. Wow I really did not know you were waiting. Am just an amatuer writer taking baby steps. Hope you guys support me through out the journey. 🙂
Hey Honey ?
Awesome and different start to a new story…
So nice to see new Kriyyam ff pop up?
Looking forward to know further…
Hope to see u soon?
Hey love, thanks a billion for the appreciation, u really made my day. I would put my best efforts my best to keep it interesting and hope you guys support me through out the journey. Lots love to you muniya…
Hey there madhu,I really liked it..I wonder what happened to saiyyam that he said like that….keep writing…I want to read more…?
hey isha, firstly, I am so thankful for ur comment you made my day, wait and watch how the story unfolds. lots of love to you girl.
Wow so nice and awesome and wonderful I loved it so much thank u so much for starting ff on Kriyam I loved ur ff so much eagerly waiting to read next update
thank u sravya love, its good to have so much appreciation for my first ever piece of writing. I am really thankful to you guys.
thak u sooo much madhu really like your Storyline…plzz continue & update soon
thanks a ton sabana, am just developing the characters and story hope u enjoy the journey.
This is an amazing ff i am loving the start its really very nice. Please continue to write i will really love ut
thank u crazyizz, it really means a lot me, hope u give me support through out my ff