Hiii guyzzzzz here i,m with a lil story 🙂
the story is about a girl and boy who study together since childhood (sumo and sharvan) but in 7th sharvan leaves that school and sumo completes 10th in that school and now they both are in 12th………………..
Means they both had not met each other since 5 years
so part 1 start with a
girl sleeping in room and she gets a call she takes a call without opening her eyes she was sumo
sumo: hmmmm bol
ria: (her friend) get up yar i have breaking news of the day
sumo: to bol na
ria: SCHOOL REUNION
Sumo: (gets up in suprise) what?????????
Ria:haan ji today @9pm
sumo:(with excitment) finallyyyyy we will meet our all friends after 2 years
chal ab phone rakh i hv to do preparations bye
they cut a call
@school 9pm
all old friends meet and greet each other and every one asks abt sumo
sumo: here i, am (with a wide smile )
(she is wearing a pink gown)
she meets her friend and group of boys of their class meet them and girls and boys shares school time fun memories………..
Suddenly lights gets off and every one walks here and there to inquire
sumo: (goes to a side) wowww what a perfect preparations our school has made (in iritation) and gets busy in cell phone
just then light comes and after few moments she looks up of her phone and find sharvan standing infront of her
they both just look at each other (and dj by mistake plays abhi mjhme kahen)
after some time everyone asks dj to change a song to some party type and group of friends come to sumo and sharvan who are still just looking each other
ria: guyzzzzzzzz statue bn ke kun khare ho ek dusre ko phechan to rahe ho na
aarav: (thier other friend to sharvan) dude tm to 5 years se gaib e hogae
sharvan: yeah due to study and some reasons get very busy (and looks at sumo who is looking down)
and everyone talks abt that how sumo and sharvan compete with each other in tests and be together all tym
just then a teachers come to them ( he is cool and just like freind to students )
sir: like seriously is this party itni boring com,on guyzzzz
rock the dance floor
and everyone goes to dance floor happily and dances except sumo and sharvan who still stands there looking aside
sir: tm dono ko invitatiob dena parega,,,, jaoooo
sumo:mera blkul mood nh
just then
sharvan ask for her hand to dance
sumo looks on
sir: com,on suman
sumo gives him her hand hesitatly and give fake smile to sir they both goes to dance floor
they dance and ek duje ke vaste tittle track plays…………………….
So that was first part give ur reveiws thats should i write second part
thankuuuuuuu
20 Comments
Plz plz write the next part .
It is awesome.
thanku so much 🙂
sure i,ll try to post next part
Superb yaar…. Plzz write next part soon…..
thanku bhoomi 🙂
yeah i,ll post it soony soon
Its really awesome…eagerly waiting for the next part.?
thankuuu abhi 🙂
will post it soon
Wow too good….update next part soon…
thanku 🙂
will post it soon
Hi its just awesome…i saw ur comment in edkv page that its real story so was dam curious to read….finally I did…update next one asap…..
thanks for comment,,,,
yeah its true story which is quite similar to edkv isn,t
and yeah i,ll post it soon
Wow very interesting shwetoo 🙂
thanku so much fatarjo 🙂
All Ur ff’s r nice angel I just read Ur krpkab ff n now edkv… Awesome keepwriting dear
thanku tani but i,m not the writer of krpkab ff writer by coincedence our names r same
but thanku for comment
so good to kn that u also write a true story.
my ff abhi na jao chor kr is also a real story n i wll reveal it in my story vry soon
most imp fact it is my real life story
hope u will keep reading it n cmmntng
@lovely lady
really is it true story?? And urs?? then i,m more curious to read it plzzzz post next part soon
will try to read and comment 🙂
but thanku for compliment
glad to see your exciyemnt. actually very cmmnts were there so i was a littl bit dissappointed as this story is very cls to me.
now i m again excited to write.
bt one thing as it is a true story there may nt be fairy typ love story
yeah i can understand it happens to see less cmntsss
butttttt i,mmmm reallyyyyy veryyyy veryyyyy excited
abt it 🙂 i guess it will be more excited to read abt real love then a fairy tale 🙂
thnx angel
anytime 🙂