Hi guys…I’m back. And sorry I disappeared. Actually got stuck with lots of work. And please don’t be mad at me…?
As promised this is a pure Kanchi FF. I wasn’t sure if I could post it this week. I just thought to start off due to aamna’s request. ?
Kajal and others had asked me to reduce the age gap. But sorry guys. Because the whole story is built up on this fact. But i promise to give you a good one. Atleast I’ll try my best. The rest is up to you…..hope you guys love this one too like my last one
Do keep up the support. Love you guys???
And ya…since the first few episodes will be plot development, you’ll have to wait a bit for Kanchi scenes. But I know my dear friends are soooo patient????????
Ok,ok…already late, ooper se bak bak. I’ll start…
It’s a beautiful landscape. A girl no less than a princess walks through the grass barefoot, her hands rubbing the wild flowers. The breeze flows kissing her face and her hair float in the air. She hears a noise and turns around. Her smile is so beautiful and innocent. Her eyes are twinkling like the stars. She sees a prince coming on a horse. His face is not shown. She waits there to be picked up by her prince. Her expression suddenly changes and she gets worried. The horse comes in front of her and lifts both it’s legs and neighs loudly. She falls down with a loud thud.
And our princess, now in her night gown wakes up from the floor rubbing her head
“Aaj kaunsa Raj Kumar aya tha”
“ mamma, aap bhi na, bilkul galat time par uthathi ho. I was going to see his face today. You spoiled it all.”
Jaya: Sanchi beta, if you keep lying there daydreaming, you’ll have to write your exam in next semester
Sanchi: arre, why didn’t you wake up early. Oh god, I’ll be late for exam..again….
She starts running around trying to get ready
Jaya: arre, beta naha tho lo
Sanchi: no time mamma. I bathed last night.
Jaya holds her head: acha, brush tho Karo
Sanchi: oops, I forgot. I forgot. I’ll do it quick
Jaya: I’ll set your breakfast. Come down
Sanchi comes down hurrying. She is wearing a beautiful floral short skirt and a sleeveless top. She finds her brother sunny munching down her breakfast and gets mad at him
Jaya: why are you both fighting early in the morning. And sunny, what is this. Why are you eating her breakfast.
Sanchi: I’m getting late. I’ll eat something from the canteen. Bye.
She hurries of giving a knock on his head
Sunny rubs his head: late hain, phir bhi 3 inch putty lagake ja rahi hain mooh par. She can miss her exams, but not her make up
Jaya: she’s your sister. Aur ladkiyan make up lagathi hain. Its not something new
Sunny: girls look more pretty without makeup. Pata nahi ye Dumbo kab samjegi.
Our trio are relaxing in the canteen
Pragya: yaar, exam acha ta, but I could have done better
Isha: ab chode, next time better Karna. How many times should I tell not to discuss exams when they are over
Sanchi: finally exams are over. And now it’s ok if I’m late and….
She smiles dreamily
Ishagya: …and dream till noon
Sanchi pouts
Isha: so did you see his face today
Sanchi: no. I wonder where will be my prince charming. What must be he doing now. (She places her chin on her hand) is he also waiting for me….
She is again lost …
And on the other side a guy in suit steps out of his car. He walks towards his meeting with his secretaries in tow. He is busy on phone , but signs documents on his way and also gives instructions to his assistants. Inside the hall a lady waits with her son and daughter in law.
Son: mom, I think we should start without waiting for Bhai. It’s already late. I can manage the bid.
Dil: yes mom. You should give Karan a chance to prove his ability.
A man comes to the lady: gayatri ma’am, the bidding is about to start. We can’t wait longer.
Karan and his wife Riya smirks. Gayatri is tensed. But then her face brightens as she looks towards the entrance
Gayatri: kabir.!
Enters our hero, in his early forties, but still hot and charming.
Karan and Riya’s face fall. Kabir approaches and touch gayatri’s feet. Gayatri hugs him
Kabir: sorry ma, the flight was late.
Gayatri: it’s ok. You are just on time. Now I’m relieved. We will get this bid.
And finally as expected, kabir wins the bid for his company. Everyone is happy except Karan and Riya. They leave the venue without waiting for others.
Kabir leaves for the office with gayatri’s permission.
Gayatri: you just returned. Get some rest
Kabir: ma, you know I can’t rest. I wouldn’t even bare the loss of one second.
Gayatri: I’m afraid you have turned into a workaholic
Kabir smiles: it’s not an addiction ma, it’s my passion. Anyway, I’ll get going. See you at the company.
Kabir leaves. Gayatri stays behind to have chat with other business personals. Gayatri is talking to an old friend when she hears few talking about kabir
Guy1: kabir malhotra cracked the deal again.
Guy2: this guy is a real competition when it comes to deals like this. He started at a very young age and it’s really amazing how he achieved so much at such a short time.
G3: citco was sinking after anad malhotra passed away. But kabir malhotra has taken it to heights which is not easy to reach. The turn over is ten times what it used to be.
Gayatri smiles triumphantly
G1: no wonder gayatri has kept him tied to her pallu till now
G2: is that why he is still single. Isn’t Karan malhotra her elder son. He got married already
G3: arre, if married how will she be able to control kabir. After all he lays golden eggs.
They all have a good laugh.
Gayatri leaves angrily….
Enna Sona plays in the background. Sanchi n friends are out on prince hunt…
They sit in the park and screen all the hot boys out there. None matches sanchi’s concept. They have a good time together. They cross the road when the signal turns red. Sanchi passed in front of kabirs car. Both don’t notice each other…..
Precap: gayatri urges kabir to get married.
18 Comments
finally you are back…awesome one this is…feels like watching scenes while reading..beautifully described…hope you post next part soon…
Thanku so much dear. And sorry for keeping you all waiting. I’ll try to update next one soon?
Hey it’s amazing, I am speechless right now just loved it dear. Post next one soon. Take care
Thanku dear. Am glad new people are also commenting. I’ll try to post soon. Do keep commenting ?
superb story and thank god tune iss week per likha kuch…….i missed you a a lot……….where r u disappear such a long time hmm?
please if you have a time post next one asap and put little recap………..so i get idea what happen in previous episode……………….
tc…………….love you ziyu……..
Thanku dhruthi. And sorry for disappearing. Was stuck with work. I missed you all too. And ya, I’ll remember to add a little recap. Love you dear?. I wonder where are others.
Nice…
Thanks sweetie ☺
zIYu dea glad r bck after a long tym….epi waz o7m….post nxt part tmrw n doo’t u dare to disappear again….lyk others dey ol hve become mr.india…itz a request 2 others plz post ua ff’s soon em eagerly waiting n jst lyk evry1 iz waiting so plz post soon….ziyu daea u 2….luv u loads
Sana
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Sorry for disappearing. I’ll promise to update regularly. Thanks for missing me???
Ziya. First I luved the title of ff. 2ndly it’s really Fab. I know u r Osm writer and I luved it dear. WaiTing for next updates
Thanks Kajal. Actually when I kept this title, I wanted to portray sanchi as an innocent sweet childish girl who takes tiny steps towards a mature relation.?
What I say about this starting…….I am speechless reading the ff……. Please ziya post it regular ………I can’t wait for this yaar……..you are rock ziya…….so so amazing and mind blowing and fantastic and wonderful start yaar……keep it up dear…..tc……
Thanku dear. Glad u liked it. And sorry for not commenting on your ffs . You too keep up your good work. Love you???
Finally u returned…. Amazing episode… Hope kanchi get married soon…. Update soon
How couldn’t I when asked me to. Sorry for the delay dear. ?
Ziyu………..finally teri wapsi………haha……….I was eagerly waiting for ur plot………..sorry, padhaai ke wajah se, late cmmnt kar rhi hoon………..but yaar, tere plot ki ek dum zabardast shuruaat hai……….like always………..luv u a lot sweety…………bye……….tc
Thanks Yaar. Love you too and sorry too. I was worried if you guys were mad at me, not seeing your comments. But now I’m relieved and happy. ???