Hello this VHM signing back with a new OS …….i thought I will end this OS may be in two to three shots but I guess this took more episodes …….in this shot this SS will end …….this SS is on the current story line of IB with spoilers taken into account….please do ignore the grammatical mistakes….
Khanna ‘’Anika madam where are you going?’’
Anika ‘’sshhh…don’t speak so loud………..i am just going to get fresh air…….’’
Khanna nodded and left from there………
Anika went to the garden and sat on the bench………..She cried ……….she was happy and sad too……..Happy because Mahi was a part of family now and cried because she had to part away from the family……..
She looked at her Bracelet and spoke
‘’Why does it happen to me…….what was my fault? How to prove Pinky aunty ji that I never wanted to take her son away from her instead I wanted to go near her and see my mom in her…….whenever I feel Shivaay and I are getting closer we are getting separated…does happiness ever knock my doors kicking all my worries…….where will I go after divorce..how will I take care of Sahil….even Sahil’s house is not with us ‘’
She was depressed…………
In the living room everyone settled after the much cleared mess when Pinky asked
Pinky ‘’Shakthi ji ….how did you know about Mahi being our child’’
Shakthi ‘’ Because of Anika’’
Pinky ‘’what? How?’’
Shakthi ‘’Remembered Anika had raised doubt about Mahi being good when he saved Shivaay…..after that
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Anika ‘’Uncle ji …I feel there is some connection between Mahi and our family……..it’s just a doubt of mine…….so I need your help’’
Shakthi ‘’yes beta …what do you want me to do?’’
Anika gave the shirt with Mahi’s blood to Shakthi and said
Anika ‘’uncle ji …please get the DNA test done with your’s and Pinky aunty’s …we will get to know who is Mahi and what connection he has with us’’
Shakthi ‘’that’s a good idea …I will send it right away………’’
Anika ‘’thank you Uncle ji…meanwhile I will also try to get truth by meeting Mahi…but Uncle ji…please don’t tell this to anyone else in the house………….they may not accept what we are trying to do’’
Shakthi ‘’don’t worry beta…this will be kept as secret until the results are out and in our favour’’
Anika thanked again and Left from there………….Shakthi took the samples and went to the lab….
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Shakthi continued ‘’ Today morning I called the doctor and the doctor said that the results are ready……..meanwhile I asked our security to trace Kamini ……….to my luck Doctor called and sent me the report to my mobile……..it matched…… and our security found out Kamini and bought her here…….
Dadi ‘’ Anika is so good …she has perfectly done all the duties of a daughter-in-law…….
Mahi ‘’ yes …she is so good……..hadn’t been her even today I would have not known the truth….
Pinky was in thoughts……..
Prinku ‘’but where is Anika Bhabhi? ‘’
No one had answer……..but everyone looked at Pinky
Pinky ‘’why are you all staring at me? I didn’t do anything? And I don’t know where she is? ‘’
Dadi was irked …………
Dadi ‘’Pinky my decision to send you away has not yet changed ……..you need to leave along with Shivaay ‘’
Pinky ‘’but mummy ji…….now everything is clear …so why’’
Dadi ‘’because it’s my decision……’’
Mahi understood what Dadi meant
Mahi remained silent
Again tension ran in everyone but Dadi and Mahi were relaxed…….seeing both of them so …Shivaay too understood what they were upto……a smile covered his lips…..
Shivaay ‘’mom …I think we need to leave……..it’s dadi’s order’’
Pinky ‘’don’t do this with me mummy ji……….i am not at fault……….and now everything is cleared…please mummy ji don’t punish me for no mistake of mine….where will I go…I have nothing except this family…what will shivaay and me do without you all….we have no one except you…..we will become orphans mummy ji’’
She turned towards Shakthi and said ‘’Shakthi ji please tell mummy ji to take back her decision….i cannot stay without you….and you know even you cannot stay without me….we are husband and wife……..we were married with all rituals……….now how can you keep silent……I have every right on you more than anyone in this house…..say something Shakthi ji’’
Pinky was crying…….Dadi came to her ………..
Pinky stood up…….Dadi wiped her tears and smiled……..Pinky looked at her………..
Pinky ‘’mummy ji you are smiling ‘’
Dadi ‘’Pinky still you did not figure out what I was trying to explain you ? ‘’
Pinky nodded her head horizontally……….
Dadi ‘’Pinky you felt bad when I asked you and Billu to leave from this house…..you said you and Shivaay were not at fault..am I right? ‘’
Pinky ‘’yes mummy ji’’
Dadi ‘’pinky you did the same with Anika …then don’t you think you are also at fault ?’’
Pinky was taken aback…………she remembered what all she did the previous day ………..she compared her situation with Anika’s situation…there was no much difference……..
Dadi continued ‘’Pinky, what was Anika’s fault…..did she know that whoever gave her birth would leave her and go somewhere……had she known she wouldn’t have taken birth……..Anika was made orphan she is not orphan by birth…..she is wife of Shivaay and she has more rights on Shivaay than you ..in the same way you have more rights on Shakthi than me…….it was she who made all the mess cleared…………had she not raised doubts about Mahi and got to know about him…you wouldn’t have met your son…… Pinky , Anika has not taken Shivaay from you but returned Mahi to you…. everytime she proved herself worthy of this family and everytime you tried to make her away………when will you learn Pinky…..and Sahil …that small kid is like her son as Shivaay is to you……and you never left a chance to insult that poor little one…….yesterday you didn’t do mistake …you committed crime……you thought Shivaay is more concerned about Anika and doesn’t care about you……….but time and again Shivaay proved that you are his first priority…….yesterday he proved it by keeping silent when you asked Anika to leave……..today when I asked you both to leave he never questioned his fault and spoke a word to stay back leaving you, all alone’’
Shivaay looked at his mom teary eyed ……….
OmRu explained Pinky what Shivaay has said the last day night of not leaving his mother alone…….
They explained her about what Anika thinks about her……..
Pinky remembered what Anika said when she blamed her of separating her and Shivaay…….
Pinky got teary eyed……..
Shakthi ‘’Pinky …you failed as a mother ……..not because you couldn’t identify Mahi as your son ..but because you couldn’t understand Shivaay’s heart……look at him Pinky……can’t you see how much he loves Anika….his concern these days for Anika was his way of showing gratitude for saving his life by taking bullet…….if he cares for his wife it doesn’t mean he doesn’t care about you…’’
Dadi turned towards Shivaay and said
‘’Billu you are also at fault…I already said that a man needs to balance his mother and wife…….your concern for Anika is right but you should care for Pinky too……..you can give credit of your success to Anika but you must share the credit with Pinky also……if you fail then the relation between Anika and Pinky will always be failure ……because you are the bridge between Pinky and Anika…….’’
Shivaay went near Pinky and apologised to her…..
Shivaay ‘’ Mom…I am sorry….i didn’t realise that in taking care of Anika I was making you insecure…but trust me mom you are equally important to me…..i will from here on try to balance you both’’
Mahi ‘’No need Shivaay…now you can devote your time to your dear wife as I am not going to spend your time also with my mom..’’
Pinky hugged both of them………Everyone were happy……………
Pinky ‘’now I need to do something for my Heera beta…….i will have to apologise to Anika and bring her back with respect……….but after whatever I have done will she forgive me………’’
Shakthi ‘’ you do so much Pooja don’t you remember the lines… first do whatever you are supposed to and don’t expect the result……..so Pinky first apologise her……..but this time don’t pressurise her to forgive you……..as far as we all know her she is very good …..so there are much chances that she might forgive you’’
Shivaay ‘’yes mom, dad is right …we have to apologise to her first’’
Pinky nodded her head in agreement………
Dadi smiled seeing Mahi……..
Om ‘’wait a second …Dadi why are you smiling looking at Mahi ?’’
Dadi ‘’nothing Om’’
Rudra ‘’something is fishy Dadi…..’’
Shivaay ‘’ I am guessing that all this drama was done by Mahi to make my mom realise her mistake towards Anika’’
Mahi ‘’no ….this plan was by Dadi’’
ShivOmRu Shanky ‘’ what by dadi …by maa’’
Mahi ‘’yes’’
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Mahi ‘’you are eldest of this house and has every right to take decision and I am sure your decision will be accepted , agreed and followed by everyone …so I need to speak to you ‘’
Dadi ‘’Since it’s a mistake from my side ….i will have to agree to your demand…..tell me what you want to say’’
Mahi ‘’not here Dadi……I think I can call you dadi with every right now….so not here dadi …I will talk to you personally in the room’’
Dadi agreed to Mahi and went with him……….Everyone was tensed in the living room…….
In Dadi’s room
Dadi ‘’tell me what do you want?’’
Mahi folded his hands and said ‘’I got what I wanted to always hear…Shakthi ji my father accepted I am his son and I am very happy with that……can you all ever accept me in this family as you accepted Anika… I request you to accept me as your family….because if you will accept everyone else will also try to accept…….can you please do this for me….and I promise I will never do any bad with Oberoi family again as I have no greed left’’
Dadi ‘’No ….don’t even ask for the same fate as Anika has in this house………never….’’
Mahi ‘’Dadi …but……’’
Dadi ‘’but before I can accept you and help you…I wanted to ask you for a help…I know you can deny but I still want to ask’’
Mahi ‘’yes Dadi…I already said I have nothing against you all now…but it’s starnge that you are seeking help from an outsider like me’’
Dadi ‘’sometimes God sends someone at right time to help and might be he has sent you’’
Mahi ‘’what do I need to do Dadi’’
Dadi ‘’I need to make Pinky realise her mistake of throwing out Anika from this house….she has to understand Anika is perfect bahu for this family and to do this I need your help’’
Mahi ‘’I didn’t understand anything but if the matter is to help Anika ji then I will do it withour even thinking as I owe much to her for what she has done’’
Dadi ‘’god bless you puttar’’
Mahi ‘’but what do I need to do’’
Dadi ‘’nothing much..you just need to say that you blackmailed me, that you will go infront of media and say about Shakthi cheating your mother kamini…….and to stop you from doing I should send Pinky and Shivaay away from Oberoi Mansion and get your father divorced from Pinky ji’’
Mahi ‘’what? Are you serious Dadi ?’’
Dadi ‘’yes Mahi……..i know Pinky very well….she would react and fight for her rights….she is not calm like Anika…for Anika’s sake do this’’
Mahi ‘’ though I don’t understand anything I will do what you asked me to do’’
Dadi blessed Mahi to always stay happy and promised that she would do her best to give Mahi his rights in the family.
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Mahi ‘’ so that was it Rudra……..’’
Rudra ‘’true Dadi ….Hadn’t Anika Bhabhi met Mahi and got to know his truth all this wouldn’t have happened….she was the reason for us knowing Mahi being an Oberoi’’
Shivaay went to Mahi and said ‘’You proved you are bade bhayya even before knowing the truth…thank you so much…………’’
Mahi ‘’we all must thank Anika ji’’
Om ‘’but where is bhabhi’’
Khanna came there just then to give an important message to Shivaay but Shivaay was no mood in listening……..
Everyone was searching for Anika ……….
Khanna ‘’Shivaay sir …Anika ji said she is going to ‘get some fresh air’ he shouted……..
Rudra ‘’Khanna you have so much voice…for the first time I am hearing you speak ………’’
ShivOm ‘’Shut Up Rudra’’
Shivaay ‘’where…where did she go’’
Khanna ‘’I think towards the garden’’
Shivaay ran towards the garden followed by others except Dadi and Mahi…….Anika was not in the garden…….he screamed Anika…Anika…….but no response…he sat down holding his head on the same bench where Anika sat………everyone started consoling Shivaay…Shivaay turned towards Khanna and shouted
Shivaay ‘’Khanna track Anika’s number …fast …now….’’
Anika entered Oberoi Mansion gate……..Khanna saw that….
Khanna ‘’Sir…woh…’’
Shivaay ‘’ didn’t you hear I said go………..’’
Khanna ‘’Sir Anika mam is coming’’ he shouted again pointing hands towards Anika……….Shivaay stared at Khanna and then saw Anika and ran towards her
Rudra ‘’ok…ok…khanna relax…after Anika Bhabhi you have started shouting at Shivaay bhayya….jaise bhai waise behen’’
Om ‘’Shut up Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’ab maine kya kiya ?’’
Om nodded his head horizontally and patted on Rudra’s shoulder saying ‘’Come let’s go there’’
Shivaay rushed towards her and held her ………..he hugged her and asked ‘’are you alright Anika? What’s this way of leaving without informing anyone?’’
Anika ‘’are you worried or are you scolding me?’’
Shivaay ‘’off course I am scolding you being worried?’’
Anika ‘’I went to bring Sahil back home…what’s there to inform?’’
Shivaay ‘’ohh ….i thought…I thought…’’
Anika ‘’ha ..you thought that I have left you and this house’’
Shivaay ‘’yes’’
Anika ‘’Not so easily Shivaay …as I know I cannot keep your reputation at stake….so I called the lawyer on the way while going to pick up Sahil’’
Shivaay ‘’what ? are you mad? Why did you call lawyer ?’’
Anika ‘’to bring divorce papers’’
Shivaay ‘’whose divorce’’
Anika’’ have you lost it Shivaay…our divorce …..’’
Shivaay ‘’what the wuck …when did I say I will give divorce’’
Anika ‘’you said yesterday that I should stay here till we are legally separated ‘’
Shivaay ‘’Anika are you mad …….where do you get these strange thoughts from ?’’’
Anika ‘’what did I do now ?’’
Shivaay ‘’tumne raita faila diya’’
Rudra ‘’bhabhi please let’s go inside first…”
Sahil ‘’ she will come in if Shivaay jiju will leave her…I am observing he is speaking to my didi from then on hugging her ……how will my didi move ?’’
Anika and Shivaay saw themselves and broke the hug feeling embarrassed…..
Rudra ‘’we have a surprise for you…woh actually Chotimaa’’
Om , sumo and Prinku cupped Rudra’s mouth
Anika ‘’I know Rudra Pinky auntyji is very happy …she got her other son….i am also happy for her…and in this happy time i don’t want to come before her and ruin her happiness’’
Pinky ‘’who said my happiness will be ruined if you come infront of me’’
Anika stared at Pinky being surprised completely , listening to Pinky’s words
Pinky ‘’Anika I found my other son and a daughter too…wouldn’t you come with me inside the house now as my daughter?’’
Anika stood still………
Pinky came near her and cupped her face……..tears rolled out of both their eyes
Pinky ‘’ I am sorry Anika beta………please forgive me…….i got so jealous that I couldn’t see your love …you said the truth I was punishing you for no fault of yours…and I offered you…I offered you money to get out…chi…I am so ashamed of myself……….i know it is not easy for you to forgive me………but ‘’
Anika ‘’but …but now you want me to forgive you…….’’
Pinky ‘’yes’’
Anika ‘’sorry Aunty ji……..but I cannot do so’’
Everyone was shocked to hear that from Anika…………
Shivaay ‘’Anika what are you saying?’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay please …let me speak today……yesterday I understood you……….today can’t you understand what I am going through’’
Anika folded her hands and very politely spoke with tears running out of her eyes..
Anika ‘’Aunty ji …I can accept any blames …any hurting words…anything about my family, surname, blood, being an orphan …but I cannot accept the blame that I tried to separate a mom and son……..i already said you auntyji… a mothers anger is above all (ma aka gussa saraankhon par) but ….mothers jealousy seedha dil par……..i am not annoyed with you aunty ji………..but it will take time for me to get out of this……..so please don’t ask me for forgiveness……….i am no one to forgive you aunty ji………’’
Pinky ‘’I understand you Anika…and I will keep trying until you accept me as your mother-in-law…no infact your mother…….’’
Everyone smiled…………….
Everyone started leaving from there towards the mansion…… Shivaay and Anika behind…………..
Shivaay ‘’I am sorry Anika…..i should have supported you yesterday’’
Anika ‘’that’s okay Shivaay…I understood your feelings’’
Shivaay ‘’then why did you call lawyer and spoke about divorce? ‘’
Anika ‘’Shivaay …Pinky aunty was much hurt and I was just completing her wish’’
Shivaay ‘’what about me Anika?’’
Anika ‘’what about you? I am your responsibility…one day this responsibility would have to end’’
Shivaay screamed ‘’shut up Anika…..you are not my responsibility…you are my wife…..wife for all my life…did you get it? ‘’
Anika looked into his eyes…….they had an eyelock………..
Shivaay broke the eyelock and cleared his throat…. Everyone was staring at them in surprise…….
Anika ‘’do you want to say something ?’’
Shivaay ‘’yes…woh…woh…’’
Anika ‘’I know you will not be able to say it……..’’ she started to move leaving Shivaay behind……….She stopped in surprise when she heard Shivaay saying
Shivaay ‘’Anika you are so beautiful…since you came in my life, colors filled in my life, when you come in front of me, my heartbeat gets fast. If I don’t see you, my breath stops, if I don’t talk to you, my day does not complete, you have spread raita in my heart, you made me Ishqbaaz’’
Anika looked at him in shock….she remembered saying him these words on his behalf and here he stood repeating the same words…she was on cloud 9……..she looked at him lovingly and walked towards him………
Shivaay too took steps towards her they were just looking into each others eyes………
Anika’’ you said this’’
Shivaay ‘’yes Anika…I said this…you were right…you made me Ishqbaaz….you don’t know how much hurt I was yesterday……….i cannot live without you Anika……you are my everything…I LOVE YOU Anika…..I LOVE you from bottom of my heart and I WILL LOVE YOU My entire life’’
Anika was very happy excited and tears of happiness flowed through her eyes…she hugged him and said ‘’I LOVE YOU TOO SHIVAAY…..I LOVE YOU SO MUCH’’
They broke their hug and Shivaay was moving towards her to kiss her when Rudra closed Sahil’s eyes and Om coughed to make them realise where they were and what they were going to do……..
Shivaay and Anika smiled shyly and moved away………….Rudra looked at Shivaay and was smiling….
Shivaay ‘’why are you smiling Rudra?’’
Rudra ‘’nothing bhayya…..i think you had plans of some intense romance…….’’
Shivaay ‘’what?’’
Rudra ‘’yeah…Bhayya …hadn’t we stopped you both … imagine what would have happened’’
Anika blushed and Shivaay embarrassed……….they both again looked at each other
Rudra ‘’ugghh ugghhh…If you take a break from romance someone else is also waiting to meet you Anika bhabhi’’
Rudra held Anika’s hand and dragged her …. He smiled and followed Rudra and Anika…..everyone entered the house……
Mahi stood up as soon as he saw Anika
Anika looked at him happily………Rudra went near his Mahi bhayya and said
Rudra ‘’Anika Bhabhi miliye hamre sabse bade bhayya Mahi Singh Oberoi se……’’
Anika smiled happily……..
Mahi went near Anika and said ‘’Thank you Anika ji…….hadn’t you met me the other day…all these wouldn’t have been possible……you gave me my family back…I am indebted to you for my lifetime’’
Anika smiled and said ‘’I am so happy for you…you are lucky to get your family back……otherwise ‘’ she stopped being sad
Sahil came from behind and spoke
Sahil ‘’otherwise I will be with you Anika didi as always’’
Shivaay ‘’and I too Sahil…you are in my team right’’
Sahil ‘’yes’’
Rudra ‘’waise Bhabhi aap Mahi bhayya ko kya bulayengi…Mahi ya jheth ji ya bhayya’’
Mahi ‘’mein tho Anika ji ko Anika ji hi bulaoonga’’
Anika’’ nahi …aap mujhe Anika bulayenge……aur mein aapko Gangaram ji bulaoongi’’
Everyone laughed…….
Anika ‘’mein mazaak kar rahi thi……mein aapko Mahi ji hi bulaoongi’’
All the four brothers and Prinku stood together and Anika , sahil and soumya stood opposite to each other……
Anika ‘’ab aur do ladkiyon ki aur ek ladke ki jaroorat hain hamare team mein’’
Om remembered Gouri and Prinku remembered Ranveer………they both became sad…..
Rudra ‘’ yeah Choti maa has already found an other girl for Shivaay bhayya …they will be coming in sometime…am I right Choti maa ?’’
Anika “what?’’
Dadi ‘’Oye Khotiya…will you ever understand what to speak when and when to speak what?’’
Rudra ‘’ohhooo Dadi ..let me complete…Anika Bhabhi don’t take tension…Shivaay bhayya has strictly denied …he loves you so much right’’
Anika blushed heavily……
Rudra ‘’Waise choti maa…what will you say to those people now ?’’
Pinky ‘’what will I say…I said them that I am ready to get married to my son…so if my son likes I will get him married to the girl’’
Sahil ‘’But Shivaay jiju is already married to my didi…how can this happen’’
Pinky ‘’Sahil …I am talking about my other son Mahi…..about your Mahi jiju…. I said to them my son but I never took Shivaay’s name’’
Shakthi ‘’for the first time you have done spoken something good’’
Everyone smiled , Rudra pulled Anika and Sumo and Mahi, Shivaay , Anika, Om, Rudra, Prinku, Soumya , Sahil had a big group hug…………..
Khanna was clicking the pictures and taking the videos …………
Anika went to Khanna and thanked him for his help………Khanna looked at Shivaay…Shivaay nodded him to keep calm………Anika saw both of them……….She understood that it was Shivaay who asked Khanna to help Anika by saying him to take Anika to a place where she can reside happily….Anika thanked Shivaay in her heart…….
Mahi had got his family back…Shivaay did the unexpected thing of proposing Anika in front of all the Oberois…………Shivika got united…………Anika had no qualms with Pinky and Pinky made all attempts to become the mother and mother-in-law of Anika……time will take it’s course of action and make their relation much better and strong……Thus the Oberois clan became ‘’THE INSEPERABLES’’
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NOTE :
I Know many of you have written in your comments that MAHI might have planned to make Pinky realise her mistake……….but that logic didn’t seem to fit in here because ‘’MAHI met ANIKA out of oberoi …he had no idea who threw Anika out……secondly I wrote in Shot 5 that ‘’ Dadi decided to speak to Pinky to stop her making any further mistake the next morning……….’’ But after assessing the situation she decided to make Pinky realise her mistake.. which looked a much better logic for me…
THANK YOU TO EACH AND EVERY ONE WHO HAD BEEN SUPPORTING ME BY POSTING THEIR COMMENTS / OPINIONS / SUGGESTIONS / IMPROVISATIONS THROUGH OUT THIS FF……I NEVER EXPECTED THIS MUCH RESPONSE …THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN
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I started to write an OS may be two to three shots but this became an FF with 7 episodes….
So let me know how you felt reading this ? any sort of comment good or bad is welcome….i will respond at the earliest !!!
93 Comments
awesome
Thank you so much Naisha……thanks a lot
?????????????superbly amazing ? its so good ? i wish it happen in real also …. today i will tell you the reason why i am commenting on your shots every time because i always want to get your reply which are obviously amazing ? last two reply u gave me was something unexpected i just loved it ❤️
Awee …thanks a lot Nida……i am very happy that you liked this FF.. taking a sigh of relief now….you made me so emotional………i still remember you were the first person who always posted your comments on my every write up’s …..you were also the first person i connected with outside of my known and met friend circle or rather say through an online platform…..so waiting for your comment, reading the comment and replying back has become more of a habit for me……….and in some instances while i type the story in my laptop i think whether Nida would appreciate this or not……i already said this earlier but i again want to say that i have my own imaginary picture of you and you will always be the special friend i met in TU page……
It was very very very very nice
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you so much Ananyagour
Wow!! Di this is really unexpected happy ending… I didn’t expect that Shivaay proposed Anika infront of OF!! Very good ending di… I liked Anika asks time for forgive Pinky….its absolutely correct! Now I get my answers from this shot di.
Once again I told u di, u have fantastic imagination power…..
Come back soon di! Take care….Bye di…..
Thanks a lot Gayathri…you are such a sweetheart….i will come back soon with may be something different……and whenever i come back i would hope that you would be there to support me the same way you did all these days….Lots of best wishes from my side
Thank you di. Yes, whenever u come back I will there for support u di. May be I m late but I always support u…….
Loved it totally amazing and beautifully written
Thank you so much Ruksy….i am so happy to read your opinion on my every write up of this and previous FF /OS……i can’t thank you enough for such an awesome support
It is awesome dii…. Simply amazing…. Maza aagya… What a master stroke of dadi… Just love it…
With lots of love and care dii…
Thank you so much Nikita….yeah i hope none of you all were disappointed when i wrote that it was the plan of Dadi not Mahi…….lots of love and best wishes to you too Nikita
Exceptional.. Amazingggggg.. Fantastic…Loved it…mahi dadi ????
Thank you so much Sairan…..thanks a lot…now it’s my time to post my opinion and eagerly wait for your FF episodes to be uploaded and published on TU IB page.
Fabulous…u nailed everything perfectly….Superb ending with justifocation….keep going on dear
Thank you so much Adhya…thanks a lot
Superb epi…amazing….emotional too… loved it…
Thank you so much Lilly for each and every comment you posted on my FF …i am gald you liked this FF
Awesome update. I just loved it. amazing Dadi…. superb….
Thank you so much Lincy Arnav……Dadi is always amazing and so are your comments…keep rocking
VHM…., It’s was an awesome lovely super duper ending dear. so this was the plan of dadi to make pinky realize her fault for separating anika from shivay. And such a lovely cute love confession of shivay .He repeated the same words of anika she speak these words in the behalf of shivay in their room. This was so sweet moment of this part. finally pinky realize her fault and accept anika as her DIL but asnika forgive her so easily it’s was justified. she is anika the owner of pure hearted so she will forgive her MIL but pinky is waiting for her forgiveness. That was an nice idea .And anika, shivay, Mahi, rudra, om, priyanga, saumya are joined the dil bole oberio moment ,when anika said the oberio moment complete only after the coming of two girls and one boy that time omkara remember gaury and priyanga remember ranveer that moment was the best moment in the shot. And finally Mahi got his family and anika prove that she was the best Oberon bahu .I really wish this os happen in real IB too. Like the super duper starting it was ended at super duper climax. I really missing this shot. every day I’m waiting to read the shot. so I really miss this os. Thank you Harika di for giving such a lovely os. you are an amazing writer. please coming with an long lovely os or ff. I’m waiting for that. ❤❤❤❤????
sorry for the mistakes
*anika can’t forgive pinky so easily it’s was justified.
*anika prove that she was the best elder oberio bahu
Thank you so much Ahsana for such a long and amazing comment….trust me whenever i upload a shot of my FF and the moment it gets published on Tu page…i always search whether readers are liking it …and i get to know this only through the comments you all post……i eagerly wait for all your response and when response is such as you posted now…you cannot even imagine how happy i feel……i too can’t thank you enough for such an enormous motivation…….will come back soon with another OS or FF ……..lots of best wishes from my side to you
Awesome…. Anika didn’t forgive Pinky that easily.. I really liked it… Don’t want to end this ?
Awee thank you so much Aryaraju….everything should come to an end one day or other…i know this line too philosophical but that is the truth too…i will come back with something else very soon….
it’s was an awesome episode dear.
Thank you so much Ahsana
I’m comment your ff twice sorry for that actually I posted my first comment and reopen your ff page I can’t see my comment in your comment box so I checked that if my comment is posted or not so I write the second comment and it posted when that time my first comment was posted that was actually happen sorry for that.
No problem Ahsana…it’s always a pleasure to read your comment whether it’s once or twice..i get the much needed boost
Nice ending?????????????
thank you so much Sri…thanks a lot…glad you felt the ending Nice
Dii..i really want to give a bigggggggg hug….i thought the inseperables are shivika but u gave us suprise as it was the oberois who r inseparables….
Really loved it dii..pinky apologising to anika and anikas reply is reasonable. Shivaay s confession…awww??and mahi anika s bonding..soo adorable.
By now i have used all d adjectives to praise u and the last one left wid me is……….I LOVED IT A LOT DII??????
U and aastha are really talented persons who write up every scene in such a way there is noo other way than just loving that….now i really miss ur writing dii plz comeback wid a supercool ff as soon as possible.
Chotii…what are you waiting for …give me the best hug…and i will reciprocate it with same effection…i said right expect the unexpected end and so was the title ….chotii thank you for using all the adjectives for me but i am going to return all those adjectives with interest to you, as you deserve it more ….because you have very patiently read all the episodes and posted your comments…..i donno about me but i agree with you that Aastha is definitely a fabulous and amazing writer…i will come up with something new soon………loads of love and best wishes to you my dear Chotii
Awesome episode
Thank you so much Vincy…your comments are also so special to me…mostly one liners but posted on every single write up of mine…….thanks a lot once again
loved it do come up with another os………..
thank you so much Nithu…….will come back with something else soon
Awesome…
Lovely Ending….
I hope Pinky realises her mistake soon in the serial too….
Shivaay repeating Anika’s words were amazing….
Keep writing…. 🙂
thank you so much Shivika….thanks a lot..yeah me too waiting for Pinky to realize her mistake in the real IB……will defintely keep writing and be back with something new next
VHM DEAR, i have no words for you.you are such a great writer.ye os kab suru hoke khatam hogayi pata nahi chala.
Hope you will back with onither os it is really really heart touching
Thank you soooooo much for yhis beautiful os.
I will miss you.???????
Good luck my frnd
Thank you so much Arpita……..i thought i dragged this FF way too much…but glad you din’t feel so……thank you for posting your opinion in the comment box and motivating me throughout……..i am so happy with the response i got………will defintely come back soon…and when i am back i hope you would be with me to support
I’m speechless dear….awesome wonderful amazing fabulous and khidkitod OS….loved it…I’ll be waiting for ur another story….all the very best…
thank you so much Zaveesha………thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you…..i will come back with something else soon….thank you for the best wishes and wish you all the very best
awesome
Thank you so much Lisaaa…it’s always a pleasure to read your comment
mujhe kal hi lg gya tha ki yeh sab raita dadi ka phelaya huya h…
byt seriously yrr kya tum writer ni ban skti serial ki … toh IB will come back to its standard again…
Thank you so much for posting your comment Ahaana…….mein writer ban jaati tho IB ka standard ka kya hoga ye tho pata nahi par GK ke pressure mein aake zaroor jabardasthi ka serial ko drag karna padtha jaise abhi CV’s kar rahe hain
its an awsome epi kaaash kaash sach mein bhi easi hi hoo but cvs have their own thoughts wat to do
thanks a lot Saidha…truly said CV’s have their own thoughts what to do…..i don’t mena to say my ff would have been considered i just meant that they shouldn’t have unnecessarily dragged the Pinky jealousy drama…may be they wanted to unfold Anika’s past but this way was not surely the best way
yes this is definitly not the way to get anikas past
AWESOME!!! loved the ending!!
I had a doubt, in shot five u told that someone is going to enter nd change the entire scenerio,by that did you meant kamini?..
Well eagerly waiting for ur nxt work!!
heya Bhavana….thank you so much…yes dear i meant Kamini…because if Kamini wouldn’t enter then Mahi would have never known his birth truth and he wouldn’t have apologised to Pinky and …also Daima’s video confession truth wouldn’t have got revealed…she was the game changer for oberoi relations at that moment…….hope you liked this……will miss you …i will come back with something new soon
Eagerly waiting for that…come back asap with an amazing nd interesting one soon!
as always it was awesome dear. i just loved it to the core. hope you make a comeback with another work
thank you so much Sanskriti120……..thanks a lot…..yes would come back with something new soon
Awesome.. fantastic fabulous..lovely ending loved it to the core
thank you…thank you…thank you…thank you so much…
Amazing update… loved it…
thank you so much Ankita……i am happy to know you like this FF
Didi it was awesome superb fantastic and mind blowing and what not I have no words to tell or express how it was I don’t know why nowadays am becoming addicted to tu page so much than other social sites…….And it was awesome and superb superb superb………..I need u to continue with some other shots pl pl pl and ur writing is awesome…….Do come up with some other shots with some other idea pl……Didi………Pl…..
thank you so much Arthi….i too am short of words to thank you for such an amazing comment……there are outstanding writers in this site (don’t count me in one of them..i am not so good) and everyone has their own wow factor……..may be because of that even me..i am also gradually getting addicted to TU IB written updates page…..ohh don’t request me so many times..you can rder me to come back…and i will comeback soon with something new very soon
well done riku… I really liked it a lot… I too guessed the idea to be mahi’s hehehe
Thank you Amore…..lontime heard my new name from you …enjoying the new name so much…and thank you so much for everything….will miss you…and whenever i am back i expect you ti be with me connected in the TU page
sure dear… I do have written some OS and chapter series… do read n tell me… help me to improve…
If possible can you PM the links…i will definitely read and post my comments…not sure if i am able enough to suggest you improvements.
Wow harika di it was fantastic .. V all wish this happens in IB..
Thank you so much Haridhra…..i wish something sensible happens in IB……pinky’s drama is over the top……
Yaa di ur absolutely ri8 ..She is getting on my nerves..