Hello this VHM signing back with a new OS …….i thought I will end this OS may be in two to three shots but I guess this took more episodes …….in this shot this SS will end …….this SS is on the current story line of IB with spoilers taken into account….please do ignore the grammatical mistakes….
Khanna ‘’Anika madam where are you going?’’
Anika ‘’sshhh…don’t speak so loud………..i am just going to get fresh air…….’’
Khanna nodded and left from there………
Anika went to the garden and sat on the bench………..She cried ……….she was happy and sad too……..Happy because Mahi was a part of family now and cried because she had to part away from the family……..
She looked at her Bracelet and spoke
‘’Why does it happen to me…….what was my fault? How to prove Pinky aunty ji that I never wanted to take her son away from her instead I wanted to go near her and see my mom in her…….whenever I feel Shivaay and I are getting closer we are getting separated…does happiness ever knock my doors kicking all my worries…….where will I go after divorce..how will I take care of Sahil….even Sahil’s house is not with us ‘’
She was depressed…………
In the living room everyone settled after the much cleared mess when Pinky asked
Pinky ‘’Shakthi ji ….how did you know about Mahi being our child’’
Shakthi ‘’ Because of Anika’’
Pinky ‘’what? How?’’
Shakthi ‘’Remembered Anika had raised doubt about Mahi being good when he saved Shivaay…..after that
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Anika ‘’Uncle ji …I feel there is some connection between Mahi and our family……..it’s just a doubt of mine…….so I need your help’’
Shakthi ‘’yes beta …what do you want me to do?’’
Anika gave the shirt with Mahi’s blood to Shakthi and said
Anika ‘’uncle ji …please get the DNA test done with your’s and Pinky aunty’s …we will get to know who is Mahi and what connection he has with us’’
Shakthi ‘’that’s a good idea …I will send it right away………’’
Anika ‘’thank you Uncle ji…meanwhile I will also try to get truth by meeting Mahi…but Uncle ji…please don’t tell this to anyone else in the house………….they may not accept what we are trying to do’’
Shakthi ‘’don’t worry beta…this will be kept as secret until the results are out and in our favour’’
Anika thanked again and Left from there………….Shakthi took the samples and went to the lab….
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Shakthi continued ‘’ Today morning I called the doctor and the doctor said that the results are ready……..meanwhile I asked our security to trace Kamini ……….to my luck Doctor called and sent me the report to my mobile……..it matched…… and our security found out Kamini and bought her here…….
Dadi ‘’ Anika is so good …she has perfectly done all the duties of a daughter-in-law…….
Mahi ‘’ yes …she is so good……..hadn’t been her even today I would have not known the truth….
Pinky was in thoughts……..
Prinku ‘’but where is Anika Bhabhi? ‘’
No one had answer……..but everyone looked at Pinky
Pinky ‘’why are you all staring at me? I didn’t do anything? And I don’t know where she is? ‘’
Dadi was irked …………
Dadi ‘’Pinky my decision to send you away has not yet changed ……..you need to leave along with Shivaay ‘’
Pinky ‘’but mummy ji…….now everything is clear …so why’’
Dadi ‘’because it’s my decision……’’
Mahi understood what Dadi meant
Mahi remained silent
Again tension ran in everyone but Dadi and Mahi were relaxed…….seeing both of them so …Shivaay too understood what they were upto……a smile covered his lips…..
Shivaay ‘’mom …I think we need to leave……..it’s dadi’s order’’
Pinky ‘’don’t do this with me mummy ji……….i am not at fault……….and now everything is cleared…please mummy ji don’t punish me for no mistake of mine….where will I go…I have nothing except this family…what will shivaay and me do without you all….we have no one except you…..we will become orphans mummy ji’’
She turned towards Shakthi and said ‘’Shakthi ji please tell mummy ji to take back her decision….i cannot stay without you….and you know even you cannot stay without me….we are husband and wife……..we were married with all rituals……….now how can you keep silent……I have every right on you more than anyone in this house…..say something Shakthi ji’’
Pinky was crying…….Dadi came to her ………..
Pinky stood up…….Dadi wiped her tears and smiled……..Pinky looked at her………..
Pinky ‘’mummy ji you are smiling ‘’
Dadi ‘’Pinky still you did not figure out what I was trying to explain you ? ‘’
Pinky nodded her head horizontally……….
Dadi ‘’Pinky you felt bad when I asked you and Billu to leave from this house…..you said you and Shivaay were not at fault..am I right? ‘’
Pinky ‘’yes mummy ji’’
Dadi ‘’pinky you did the same with Anika …then don’t you think you are also at fault ?’’
Pinky was taken aback…………she remembered what all she did the previous day ………..she compared her situation with Anika’s situation…there was no much difference……..
Dadi continued ‘’Pinky, what was Anika’s fault…..did she know that whoever gave her birth would leave her and go somewhere……had she known she wouldn’t have taken birth……..Anika was made orphan she is not orphan by birth…..she is wife of Shivaay and she has more rights on Shivaay than you ..in the same way you have more rights on Shakthi than me…….it was she who made all the mess cleared…………had she not raised doubts about Mahi and got to know about him…you wouldn’t have met your son…… Pinky , Anika has not taken Shivaay from you but returned Mahi to you…. everytime she proved herself worthy of this family and everytime you tried to make her away………when will you learn Pinky…..and Sahil …that small kid is like her son as Shivaay is to you……and you never left a chance to insult that poor little one…….yesterday you didn’t do mistake …you committed crime……you thought Shivaay is more concerned about Anika and doesn’t care about you……….but time and again Shivaay proved that you are his first priority…….yesterday he proved it by keeping silent when you asked Anika to leave……..today when I asked you both to leave he never questioned his fault and spoke a word to stay back leaving you, all alone’’
Shivaay looked at his mom teary eyed ……….
OmRu explained Pinky what Shivaay has said the last day night of not leaving his mother alone…….
They explained her about what Anika thinks about her……..
Pinky remembered what Anika said when she blamed her of separating her and Shivaay…….
Pinky got teary eyed……..
Shakthi ‘’Pinky …you failed as a mother ……..not because you couldn’t identify Mahi as your son ..but because you couldn’t understand Shivaay’s heart……look at him Pinky……can’t you see how much he loves Anika….his concern these days for Anika was his way of showing gratitude for saving his life by taking bullet…….if he cares for his wife it doesn’t mean he doesn’t care about you…’’
Dadi turned towards Shivaay and said
‘’Billu you are also at fault…I already said that a man needs to balance his mother and wife…….your concern for Anika is right but you should care for Pinky too……..you can give credit of your success to Anika but you must share the credit with Pinky also……if you fail then the relation between Anika and Pinky will always be failure ……because you are the bridge between Pinky and Anika…….’’
Shivaay went near Pinky and apologised to her…..
Shivaay ‘’ Mom…I am sorry….i didn’t realise that in taking care of Anika I was making you insecure…but trust me mom you are equally important to me…..i will from here on try to balance you both’’
Mahi ‘’No need Shivaay…now you can devote your time to your dear wife as I am not going to spend your time also with my mom..’’
Pinky hugged both of them………Everyone were happy……………
Pinky ‘’now I need to do something for my Heera beta…….i will have to apologise to Anika and bring her back with respect……….but after whatever I have done will she forgive me………’’
Shakthi ‘’ you do so much Pooja don’t you remember the lines… first do whatever you are supposed to and don’t expect the result……..so Pinky first apologise her……..but this time don’t pressurise her to forgive you……..as far as we all know her she is very good …..so there are much chances that she might forgive you’’
Shivaay ‘’yes mom, dad is right …we have to apologise to her first’’
Pinky nodded her head in agreement………
Dadi smiled seeing Mahi……..
Om ‘’wait a second …Dadi why are you smiling looking at Mahi ?’’
Dadi ‘’nothing Om’’
Rudra ‘’something is fishy Dadi…..’’
Shivaay ‘’ I am guessing that all this drama was done by Mahi to make my mom realise her mistake towards Anika’’
Mahi ‘’no ….this plan was by Dadi’’
ShivOmRu Shanky ‘’ what by dadi …by maa’’
Mahi ‘’yes’’
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Mahi ‘’you are eldest of this house and has every right to take decision and I am sure your decision will be accepted , agreed and followed by everyone …so I need to speak to you ‘’
Dadi ‘’Since it’s a mistake from my side ….i will have to agree to your demand…..tell me what you want to say’’
Mahi ‘’not here Dadi……I think I can call you dadi with every right now….so not here dadi …I will talk to you personally in the room’’
Dadi agreed to Mahi and went with him……….Everyone was tensed in the living room…….
In Dadi’s room
Dadi ‘’tell me what do you want?’’
Mahi folded his hands and said ‘’I got what I wanted to always hear…Shakthi ji my father accepted I am his son and I am very happy with that……can you all ever accept me in this family as you accepted Anika… I request you to accept me as your family….because if you will accept everyone else will also try to accept…….can you please do this for me….and I promise I will never do any bad with Oberoi family again as I have no greed left’’
Dadi ‘’No ….don’t even ask for the same fate as Anika has in this house………never….’’
Mahi ‘’Dadi …but……’’
Dadi ‘’but before I can accept you and help you…I wanted to ask you for a help…I know you can deny but I still want to ask’’
Mahi ‘’yes Dadi…I already said I have nothing against you all now…but it’s starnge that you are seeking help from an outsider like me’’
Dadi ‘’sometimes God sends someone at right time to help and might be he has sent you’’
Mahi ‘’what do I need to do Dadi’’
Dadi ‘’I need to make Pinky realise her mistake of throwing out Anika from this house….she has to understand Anika is perfect bahu for this family and to do this I need your help’’
Mahi ‘’I didn’t understand anything but if the matter is to help Anika ji then I will do it withour even thinking as I owe much to her for what she has done’’
Dadi ‘’god bless you puttar’’
Mahi ‘’but what do I need to do’’
Dadi ‘’nothing much..you just need to say that you blackmailed me, that you will go infront of media and say about Shakthi cheating your mother kamini…….and to stop you from doing I should send Pinky and Shivaay away from Oberoi Mansion and get your father divorced from Pinky ji’’
Mahi ‘’what? Are you serious Dadi ?’’
Dadi ‘’yes Mahi……..i know Pinky very well….she would react and fight for her rights….she is not calm like Anika…for Anika’s sake do this’’
Mahi ‘’ though I don’t understand anything I will do what you asked me to do’’
Dadi blessed Mahi to always stay happy and promised that she would do her best to give Mahi his rights in the family.
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Mahi ‘’ so that was it Rudra……..’’
Rudra ‘’true Dadi ….Hadn’t Anika Bhabhi met Mahi and got to know his truth all this wouldn’t have happened….she was the reason for us knowing Mahi being an Oberoi’’
Shivaay went to Mahi and said ‘’You proved you are bade bhayya even before knowing the truth…thank you so much…………’’
Mahi ‘’we all must thank Anika ji’’
Om ‘’but where is bhabhi’’
Khanna came there just then to give an important message to Shivaay but Shivaay was no mood in listening……..
Everyone was searching for Anika ……….
Khanna ‘’Shivaay sir …Anika ji said she is going to ‘get some fresh air’ he shouted……..
Rudra ‘’Khanna you have so much voice…for the first time I am hearing you speak ………’’
ShivOm ‘’Shut Up Rudra’’
Shivaay ‘’where…where did she go’’
Khanna ‘’I think towards the garden’’
Shivaay ran towards the garden followed by others except Dadi and Mahi…….Anika was not in the garden…….he screamed Anika…Anika…….but no response…he sat down holding his head on the same bench where Anika sat………everyone started consoling Shivaay…Shivaay turned towards Khanna and shouted
Shivaay ‘’Khanna track Anika’s number …fast …now….’’
Anika entered Oberoi Mansion gate……..Khanna saw that….
Khanna ‘’Sir…woh…’’
Shivaay ‘’ didn’t you hear I said go………..’’
Khanna ‘’Sir Anika mam is coming’’ he shouted again pointing hands towards Anika……….Shivaay stared at Khanna and then saw Anika and ran towards her
Rudra ‘’ok…ok…khanna relax…after Anika Bhabhi you have started shouting at Shivaay bhayya….jaise bhai waise behen’’
Om ‘’Shut up Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’ab maine kya kiya ?’’
Om nodded his head horizontally and patted on Rudra’s shoulder saying ‘’Come let’s go there’’
Shivaay rushed towards her and held her ………..he hugged her and asked ‘’are you alright Anika? What’s this way of leaving without informing anyone?’’
Anika ‘’are you worried or are you scolding me?’’
Shivaay ‘’off course I am scolding you being worried?’’
Anika ‘’I went to bring Sahil back home…what’s there to inform?’’
Shivaay ‘’ohh ….i thought…I thought…’’
Anika ‘’ha ..you thought that I have left you and this house’’
Shivaay ‘’yes’’
Anika ‘’Not so easily Shivaay …as I know I cannot keep your reputation at stake….so I called the lawyer on the way while going to pick up Sahil’’
Shivaay ‘’what ? are you mad? Why did you call lawyer ?’’
Anika ‘’to bring divorce papers’’
Shivaay ‘’whose divorce’’
Anika’’ have you lost it Shivaay…our divorce …..’’
Shivaay ‘’what the wuck …when did I say I will give divorce’’
Anika ‘’you said yesterday that I should stay here till we are legally separated ‘’
Shivaay ‘’Anika are you mad …….where do you get these strange thoughts from ?’’’
Anika ‘’what did I do now ?’’
Shivaay ‘’tumne raita faila diya’’
Rudra ‘’bhabhi please let’s go inside first…”
Sahil ‘’ she will come in if Shivaay jiju will leave her…I am observing he is speaking to my didi from then on hugging her ……how will my didi move ?’’
Anika and Shivaay saw themselves and broke the hug feeling embarrassed…..
Rudra ‘’we have a surprise for you…woh actually Chotimaa’’
Om , sumo and Prinku cupped Rudra’s mouth
Anika ‘’I know Rudra Pinky auntyji is very happy …she got her other son….i am also happy for her…and in this happy time i don’t want to come before her and ruin her happiness’’
Pinky ‘’who said my happiness will be ruined if you come infront of me’’
Anika stared at Pinky being surprised completely , listening to Pinky’s words
Pinky ‘’Anika I found my other son and a daughter too…wouldn’t you come with me inside the house now as my daughter?’’
Anika stood still………
Pinky came near her and cupped her face……..tears rolled out of both their eyes
Pinky ‘’ I am sorry Anika beta………please forgive me…….i got so jealous that I couldn’t see your love …you said the truth I was punishing you for no fault of yours…and I offered you…I offered you money to get out…chi…I am so ashamed of myself……….i know it is not easy for you to forgive me………but ‘’
Anika ‘’but …but now you want me to forgive you…….’’
Pinky ‘’yes’’
Anika ‘’sorry Aunty ji……..but I cannot do so’’
Everyone was shocked to hear that from Anika…………
Shivaay ‘’Anika what are you saying?’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay please …let me speak today……yesterday I understood you……….today can’t you understand what I am going through’’
Anika folded her hands and very politely spoke with tears running out of her eyes..
Anika ‘’Aunty ji …I can accept any blames …any hurting words…anything about my family, surname, blood, being an orphan …but I cannot accept the blame that I tried to separate a mom and son……..i already said you auntyji… a mothers anger is above all (ma aka gussa saraankhon par) but ….mothers jealousy seedha dil par……..i am not annoyed with you aunty ji………..but it will take time for me to get out of this……..so please don’t ask me for forgiveness……….i am no one to forgive you aunty ji………’’
Pinky ‘’I understand you Anika…and I will keep trying until you accept me as your mother-in-law…no infact your mother…….’’
Everyone smiled…………….
Everyone started leaving from there towards the mansion…… Shivaay and Anika behind…………..
Shivaay ‘’I am sorry Anika…..i should have supported you yesterday’’
Anika ‘’that’s okay Shivaay…I understood your feelings’’
Shivaay ‘’then why did you call lawyer and spoke about divorce? ‘’
Anika ‘’Shivaay …Pinky aunty was much hurt and I was just completing her wish’’
Shivaay ‘’what about me Anika?’’
Anika ‘’what about you? I am your responsibility…one day this responsibility would have to end’’
Shivaay screamed ‘’shut up Anika…..you are not my responsibility…you are my wife…..wife for all my life…did you get it? ‘’
Anika looked into his eyes…….they had an eyelock………..
Shivaay broke the eyelock and cleared his throat…. Everyone was staring at them in surprise…….
Anika ‘’do you want to say something ?’’
Shivaay ‘’yes…woh…woh…’’
Anika ‘’I know you will not be able to say it……..’’ she started to move leaving Shivaay behind……….She stopped in surprise when she heard Shivaay saying
Shivaay ‘’Anika you are so beautiful…since you came in my life, colors filled in my life, when you come in front of me, my heartbeat gets fast. If I don’t see you, my breath stops, if I don’t talk to you, my day does not complete, you have spread raita in my heart, you made me Ishqbaaz’’
Anika looked at him in shock….she remembered saying him these words on his behalf and here he stood repeating the same words…she was on cloud 9……..she looked at him lovingly and walked towards him………
Shivaay too took steps towards her they were just looking into each others eyes………
Anika’’ you said this’’
Shivaay ‘’yes Anika…I said this…you were right…you made me Ishqbaaz….you don’t know how much hurt I was yesterday……….i cannot live without you Anika……you are my everything…I LOVE YOU Anika…..I LOVE you from bottom of my heart and I WILL LOVE YOU My entire life’’
Anika was very happy excited and tears of happiness flowed through her eyes…she hugged him and said ‘’I LOVE YOU TOO SHIVAAY…..I LOVE YOU SO MUCH’’
They broke their hug and Shivaay was moving towards her to kiss her when Rudra closed Sahil’s eyes and Om coughed to make them realise where they were and what they were going to do……..
Shivaay and Anika smiled shyly and moved away………….Rudra looked at Shivaay and was smiling….
Shivaay ‘’why are you smiling Rudra?’’
Rudra ‘’nothing bhayya…..i think you had plans of some intense romance…….’’
Shivaay ‘’what?’’
Rudra ‘’yeah…Bhayya …hadn’t we stopped you both … imagine what would have happened’’
Anika blushed and Shivaay embarrassed……….they both again looked at each other
Rudra ‘’ugghh ugghhh…If you take a break from romance someone else is also waiting to meet you Anika bhabhi’’
Rudra held Anika’s hand and dragged her …. He smiled and followed Rudra and Anika…..everyone entered the house……
Mahi stood up as soon as he saw Anika
Anika looked at him happily………Rudra went near his Mahi bhayya and said
Rudra ‘’Anika Bhabhi miliye hamre sabse bade bhayya Mahi Singh Oberoi se……’’
Anika smiled happily……..
Mahi went near Anika and said ‘’Thank you Anika ji…….hadn’t you met me the other day…all these wouldn’t have been possible……you gave me my family back…I am indebted to you for my lifetime’’
Anika smiled and said ‘’I am so happy for you…you are lucky to get your family back……otherwise ‘’ she stopped being sad
Sahil came from behind and spoke
Sahil ‘’otherwise I will be with you Anika didi as always’’
Shivaay ‘’and I too Sahil…you are in my team right’’
Sahil ‘’yes’’
Rudra ‘’waise Bhabhi aap Mahi bhayya ko kya bulayengi…Mahi ya jheth ji ya bhayya’’
Mahi ‘’mein tho Anika ji ko Anika ji hi bulaoonga’’
Anika’’ nahi …aap mujhe Anika bulayenge……aur mein aapko Gangaram ji bulaoongi’’
Everyone laughed…….
Anika ‘’mein mazaak kar rahi thi……mein aapko Mahi ji hi bulaoongi’’
All the four brothers and Prinku stood together and Anika , sahil and soumya stood opposite to each other……
Anika ‘’ab aur do ladkiyon ki aur ek ladke ki jaroorat hain hamare team mein’’
Om remembered Gouri and Prinku remembered Ranveer………they both became sad…..
Rudra ‘’ yeah Choti maa has already found an other girl for Shivaay bhayya …they will be coming in sometime…am I right Choti maa ?’’
Anika “what?’’
Dadi ‘’Oye Khotiya…will you ever understand what to speak when and when to speak what?’’
Rudra ‘’ohhooo Dadi ..let me complete…Anika Bhabhi don’t take tension…Shivaay bhayya has strictly denied …he loves you so much right’’
Anika blushed heavily……
Rudra ‘’Waise choti maa…what will you say to those people now ?’’
Pinky ‘’what will I say…I said them that I am ready to get married to my son…so if my son likes I will get him married to the girl’’
Sahil ‘’But Shivaay jiju is already married to my didi…how can this happen’’
Pinky ‘’Sahil …I am talking about my other son Mahi…..about your Mahi jiju…. I said to them my son but I never took Shivaay’s name’’
Shakthi ‘’for the first time you have done spoken something good’’
Everyone smiled , Rudra pulled Anika and Sumo and Mahi, Shivaay , Anika, Om, Rudra, Prinku, Soumya , Sahil had a big group hug…………..
Khanna was clicking the pictures and taking the videos …………
Anika went to Khanna and thanked him for his help………Khanna looked at Shivaay…Shivaay nodded him to keep calm………Anika saw both of them……….She understood that it was Shivaay who asked Khanna to help Anika by saying him to take Anika to a place where she can reside happily….Anika thanked Shivaay in her heart…….
Mahi had got his family back…Shivaay did the unexpected thing of proposing Anika in front of all the Oberois…………Shivika got united…………Anika had no qualms with Pinky and Pinky made all attempts to become the mother and mother-in-law of Anika……time will take it’s course of action and make their relation much better and strong……Thus the Oberois clan became ‘’THE INSEPERABLES’’
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NOTE :
I Know many of you have written in your comments that MAHI might have planned to make Pinky realise her mistake……….but that logic didn’t seem to fit in here because ‘’MAHI met ANIKA out of oberoi …he had no idea who threw Anika out……secondly I wrote in Shot 5 that ‘’ Dadi decided to speak to Pinky to stop her making any further mistake the next morning……….’’ But after assessing the situation she decided to make Pinky realise her mistake.. which looked a much better logic for me…
THANK YOU TO EACH AND EVERY ONE WHO HAD BEEN SUPPORTING ME BY POSTING THEIR COMMENTS / OPINIONS / SUGGESTIONS / IMPROVISATIONS THROUGH OUT THIS FF……I NEVER EXPECTED THIS MUCH RESPONSE …THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN
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I started to write an OS may be two to three shots but this became an FF with 7 episodes….
So let me know how you felt reading this ? any sort of comment good or bad is welcome….i will respond at the earliest !!!
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VHM di
This is de last part so today de comment of ur dramebaaz must be longggggggggv longgggggggg nd longgggggggg
De words which I mention below all is true
Amazing outstanding excellent awesome rocking fabulous superb fantastic wonderful mind blowing lovely …………………………………. ( no any other words came in my mind ) if u remember then put it in de blank ………………………………
Oohhhhhhhh I miss something which is really requires here nd that are : khirkitor darwajator chattor ghartor
From de 1st part 2 de last
Every words nd each dialogue is perfect ……….it seems like some professional writers wrote this
My suggestion 2 gul mam is really right 2 change her writer nd opt u in their place
U show every character with perfection
While reading ur ff I imagine de situation nd de drama plays in my mind. …………..at present I m sad nd happy both
Sad as ur ff came 2 an end nd happy that u end it so beautifully
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Plzzzzzzz plzzzzzzz plzzzzzzz come back soon with a new ff or OS
I m addicted 2 read ur ff
Now I will miss it extremely
Nd have a request 2 u
Plzzzzzz participate in os competition held by TU PAGE
I m asking all my favourite authors 2 take participate into it
Nd u r one of my favourite authors
So give ur name soon
U r a tough competitor for them
Once again THANK YOU SO MUCH for providing us a wonderful ff
I loved it ?????
My Chirpy Amayaa…thank you for the Amazing, outstanding, excellent, awesome, rocking, fabulous, superb, fantastic, wonderful, mind blowing, lovely, long, sweet, cute, khirkithod, dharwazathod chatthod and gharthod comment…….hope i have used all the wrods that you used for me plus two to three extra……..
You are addicted to read my FF …so am i addicted to read your super awesome comment on my FF, well not to forget your FF too…..I will definitely come back with a new FF or OS soon….
Coming to OS competition held by TU Page i was thinking whetehr to post or not and if i participate can i give my best or not…but i promise i will definitely think about it……..
I will miss your chirpy comments until i come back with something new but i will read you FF meanwhile and will be in touch with you in your FF comments tab………
Love you loads and always be the way you are …i really like that about you…all the very best from my side
Great!
Thank you so much Mani………
Thank you Haarikaji(Annika-Mahi style)..
You too Brutus..made Khannaji as a camera man..lolz..I too made him one before 2 days…Telepathy..our telepathy…
Awee thank you Astha ji…ohh yaa …seriously our ideas matched too once again…first dadi ki shaadi then khanna ji cameraman….telepathy works ……….i know i have said this in your FF page but once agin i wanted to say you write fab yaar …….i am in awe of your writing and episodic analysis !!!
Vhm di . U rocked . I swear cvs learn something from di . Your trp will rise .
Di , Wat to say you left me totally speechless ……
A PERFECT ENDING !!
Love u ….???
thank you Surbhi….how to thank you as i am getting no proper words to write…….love you too little sis ….keep rocking and loads of best wishes
Harika di……..
Apne to mere di mag ka gangaram kar diya….by writing so wonderfully….
The conclusion was just awesome…more than bahubali conclusion I was excited for the inseparable CONCLUSION!
But In a way, am sad too……because this sweet awesome emotional beautiful impressive and khidkitod story will end now…….but come back soon with an ff or os . Also participate in the champion writer os competition….am sure u can win…….Yaar…This was one heck of an emotional and mysterious roller coaster ride……totally love your imagination……..U r awesome at writing suspense thrillers……….Seriously it was excellently crafted…I wish CVs see this so that they know how to craft an absolutely perfect story with no loophole fests and logic ki band baajaoing
Anyways love u loads di….Aur Han , thanks vanks Mat bolna because we r friend k?
Love u loads di…..
Hey Vivikhta ….ohh…i am also feeling sad and happy …sad because i will miss visiting TU Page very frequently to wait for all your comments to read and reply….happy because whoever has read the FF almost everyone liked it ……….and i will come back with another OS or FF soon…i donno my every OS or FF turns into suspense thrillers in the mid…i think i have to stop reading suspense thrillers for some time…….lol……….regarding participating in competition as i said earlier i was thinking whether to post or not and if i participate can i give my best or not…but i promise i will definitely think about it……..
waise i will not say thanks but i will say shukriya/dhanyawad Vivikhta for the for the awesome comment….we are friends is there any doubt about it ? Love you loads too dear
Beautiful ending
Thank you so much Alekhika20
It was SUPERB an unexpected ending dear……. a little bit emotional & happy ending…..Luv it….. U nailed it…. U r really a very gud writer dear……
Thank you so much Banita … thanks a lot for the compliments…i donno how to react
It was a Superb unexcepted ending ….. Luv it…. U again nailed it dear….. U really an amazingg writer….. Always luv ur writing skill…..
thank you again…and i will miss your comments ………
Sry 4 twice commenting dear…
no worries
Om superb awesome amazing unbelievable outstanding fabulous fan fabulous out of the world…Ufffff no words more to express…such a good story di!!! I loved it and this is termed as ” One of my favorite stories in the world “
thank you so much Anu…what more can i say…i am feeling top of world now after reading this……thanks a lot again and am waiting for your next shot of FF
Di, this is called a perfect ending. Never thought that the revelations will be this superb. Its amazing. Love you loads for this. Come with more❤
thank you so much Jerry…i am happy a fantastic young writer has appreciated my work….will come soon with something different……hey i forgot to ask…how are you feeling now? did you fever go down ?
Nope actually it increased and also I am having a severe throat. Thank you for your concern?