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Home»Fan Fiction»An Intangible Feeling (RAGSAN FF) Part 1
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An Intangible Feeling (RAGSAN FF) Part 1

MmpBy MmpMarch 23, 201742 Comments8 Mins Read
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A Girl shown sleeping peacefully.. with a big size teddy bear.. hugging him tightly. A smile is playing at her lips like she was dreaming about something special.

A girl came in her room…and patt her cheeks softly. “wake up chotu…its your first day of college.. You don’t want to be late naa..” said she sweetly. “Don’t disturb me jaanu…” said the sleeping girl and turned opposite side. “I know how to wake her up..” said a boy of age 12 coming into the room. “No I am waking her up naa…Don’t do anything.. ” said the second girl looking at the boy. But he didn’t listen and came with a small puppy in his hand. The girl give a glare to him nodding no. He brings the puppy near sleeping beauty’s face n puppy starts licking it. The girl sitting beside her put her both hands on her ears knowing what was coming. The girl slowly open her eyes feeling little wet on her face but wide her eyes horrified. “Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh….” screamed she loudly, pushing puppy n immediately run out of the room screaming. Both girl n boy giggled.

“Sorry naaa ragu di..” said the boy sitting beside her on dining table for breakfast. She gave him a angry glare n turned her face pouting angrily. He gulped n wishpered to the other girl. “Today’s temperature 104′ “…said he chuckling. “Shut up avi.. she is too much angry today.. Why you do this.. You know naa she is scared of dogs.. ” wishpered girl strictly. “But you too was laughing naa” said avi pouted. She glared him n he bend his head.” Maa my choco milkshake..”..asked ragini little loudly looking at the other girl from the corner of her eyes. “Chotu I will get naa like always.. ” said the girl standing up. “Maaaaa…” shouted ragini again. ” Mishu di…..105′ “..whispered avi again making her sit back on the chair. She pouted looking at ragini. Janki came holding a glass of choco milkshake and ask misavi raising one eyebrow what’s the matter.
They make puppy face. “You know mishu di.. Yesterday my one friend gave me a big silk..I thought to give it to someone as I don’t like chocolates.. But now I am thinking to give it back to him itself “.. said avi showing a big dairy milk silk to mishu. Ragini licks her lips looking at the silk with desire filled eyes. “Avinaash…” called ragini sweetly. ” You are talking to me ragu di…I thought u r angry with me ” said avi raising his one eyebrow. Ragini smile sheepishly. “How can I be angry with my sweetheart little brother ” said she trying to take chocolate from his hand. Janki n mishu chuckled. ” Promise me you will not be angry if I do any masti again “…said he waving choco in front of her face. She nodded instantly not removing her eyes from waving choco. They heard a bus horn. ” Your bus came avi” said janki holding his bag n water bottle standing at the door. ” Take this n yaa don’t get angry now..” said avi placing choco on table winking at her n rushed towards janki. She look at his direction confused but squealed like a child to see choco. Shomi and mishu smiled looking at her. As soon as she pick choco her smile replaced with a frown n then anger. “Aviiiiiiiiii..” screamed she with full force. Janmish suppress their laugh seeing the chocolate cover empty. “He did it again.. showing her a full chocolate and and at the last moment.. remove it from cover and make cover like before..” said janki laughing. Ragini pouted looking at both of them. “Aww..my chotu…I will brought a chocolate while going college.. come we are getting late..” said mishu caressing her hair. “Sachhiiii..” asked ragini with twinkling eyes. “Muchhii.. “..said mishu kissing her forehead. She squealed like a kid and rushed towards her room to take her bag.

“I am very much worried for her mishu.. She is still kid…” said Janki with moist eyes. “Don’t you worry Maa…her jaanu is always with her like shadow.. “.. said mishu assuring her mother. “I trust you for that but she is so innocent… I am worried what will happen when she will know about the truth.. “..said janki with worried face. Mishu’s face fell listening her. “No maa…she shouldn’t know about it…If she got to know .. she is going to hate baba.. whom she think her world now..”.. said mishu painfully. They saw ragini coming out from room and composed themselves. ” Maa when will baba return… Its my first day of college.. “..asked ragini pouting. “He has some more work there beta… It will take two days more..Doesn’t he told you on call..”asked janki. “I didn’t talk to him…as I am angry on him..”…said she sheepishly. “From when you are not taking to him “..asked mishu little worried. “From yesterday night “..said she pouting. Janmish chuckled. “Don’t worry ragu bachha… ur baba will be here today itself ” said janki winking at mishu knowing the reason. “Really… But you said he will come after 2 days.. “asked ragini innocently. “Because his princess is not talking to him…that too from yesterday night… Till now toh he would be in his flight to come here.. ” said mishu holding her shoulders with a low chuckle. Ragini gave them a close-up smile. Both headed to their college.

A boy shown whistling n entered in a room n look at the person shocked. “Why are you getting ready this much early ” asked he to the boy who is all set to go to college. “This is my first day bhai..”said he plainly. “So what….first day means no study…only masti….Opps sorry.. Whom I am saying to do masti.. Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari have to prepare notes for exam today itself naaa…carry on..carry on…” said he patting his shoulder. “Whatever “said sanskaar and took his bag. “You are not coming lucky bhai” asked he. “Ofcourse I am coming… There hot hot freshers will be coming naa…” said laksh dreaming. “Flirt ” said sanskaar nodding his head in disbelief.
“Bye everyone “…said sanskaar and took blessings from his parents and grandparents. “Mom named you as sanskaar… that doesn’t mean you have to be sanskaari all the time ” said laksh decending the stairs. Sanskaar make faces. “Bye oldies n bye beauties ” said laksh winking at their family. Dp and hp glare at him..while ladies chuckled.

A car entered in college campus.
” M.G. Technology & Management College” a board shown. Sanlak came out of the car. “Bhai I am going to the class “said sanskaar walking away. “Oye ruk naa….Let’s meet my group first ” said laksh coming to him. “I am not interested in meeting anyone.. I have to reach class on time..so bye..” said he and goes from there. ” When will you start to live your life again chote..??.. I miss your smile champ..” said laksh painfully looking at his retreating figure.

“Aauchhh” said mishu when her head hit with laksh’s back while walking talking to ragini. “U fine jaanu ” asked ragini rubbing her head. She nodded.Laksh turned towards them but frown looking at mishu. “You didn’t find anyone else chuzi(chicken) … that you hit me with ur million ton head” said laksh glaring her. ” O hello medak(Frog) who told you to stand in the middle of the path” said she glaring back. ” Don’t spoil my mood like always early morning ” said he resentfully. “Btw who is this beautiful “asked he pointing towards ragini. “She is my sister n don’t you dare to flirt with her “said she pointing her index finger in front of him. He ignored her words n hold ragini’s hand. She became nervous n look at mishu who was looking at laksh shocked. “What’s your beautiful nam……Aahhhhh” screamed he when he felt a punch on his stomach. “Told you… Dare you flirt with her” said she smirking and hold ragini’s hand and goes from there.

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SHEKHAR MALHOTRA – Father of Ragu, Mishu n Avi



JANKI MALHOTRA – Mother of Ragu, Mishu n Avi



MISHKA MALHOTRA – Elder sister of Ragu.



RAGINI MALHOTRA –



AVINASH MALHOTRA – Little brother of Ragu



HARI PRASAD MAHESHWARI – Grandpa of Sanlak



RADHA MAHESHWARI – Grandma of Sanlak



DURGA PRASAD MAHESHWARI –
Father of Sanlak



ANNAPURNA MAHESHWARI – Mother of Sanlak



SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI –



LAKSH MAHESHWARI – Elder brother of Sanskaar



I will give other characters intro when needed.:-)
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Hey guys, I am back with one more Story.
Thank you to all whose wishes made me come back soon.
Hope you all love this story like you love my previous one.
Please do comment if you like it and let me know.
And I know pictures are not showing in tu…so you guys can find it on wattpad.. I have updated this story there too..
My wattpad id- ragika1
Till then
Be happy n keep smiling.. 🙂
With love
Urs Ragika

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    Wattpad id-ragika1 You can read my other work there too. And just be happy n keep smiling.. ?

    42 Comments

    1. Asw on March 23, 2017 5:31 pm

      Interesting keep going

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:18 am

        Thanks dear

    2. dharani on March 23, 2017 5:42 pm

      awesome

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:18 am

        Thank you

    3. Sindhura on March 23, 2017 6:23 pm

      Awesom welcome back

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:19 am

        Thank you dear

    4. Lahari on March 23, 2017 7:46 pm

      Awesome

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:19 am

        Thank you

    5. mk on March 23, 2017 8:26 pm

      u comeback so soon thank u so much dr awesome

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:20 am

        Thank you dear

    6. keerthi on March 23, 2017 8:27 pm

      awesome update soon

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:21 am

        Thanks dear

    7. adithi on March 23, 2017 8:29 pm

      awesomeeeee dr

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:21 am

        Thanks dear

    8. vani on March 23, 2017 8:30 pm

      interesting post soon

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:22 am

        Thanks dear

    9. Aleeza2 on March 23, 2017 9:23 pm

      Awesome

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:22 am

        Thanks dear

    10. honey on March 23, 2017 9:27 pm

      Cute n Interesting update …

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:23 am

        Thanks dear

    11. Follybraverl on March 23, 2017 9:28 pm

      Back with a bang……..

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:23 am

        Thanks dear

    12. Berdilla on March 23, 2017 10:17 pm

      awesome friend

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:24 am

        Thanks dear

    13. Ammy on March 23, 2017 10:26 pm

      Superb & thanks for writing another ragsan ff.All the best

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 12:25 am

        Thank you so much dear

    14. A.xx on March 24, 2017 1:57 am

      amazing and cant wait to see how it will become ragsan xx

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 7:42 am

        Thanks dear

    15. Vk on March 24, 2017 8:10 am

      Awesome

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 1:04 pm

        Thanks dear

    16. asra on March 24, 2017 10:01 am

      awesome dear….u came back with another ff….yippee…..loved it alot dear…..eagerly waiting for nxt…tkcr dear….

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 1:05 pm

        Thank you so much asra.. 🙂 tc

    17. Anisha on March 24, 2017 11:13 am

      Interesting & really cute.Why Sanku is like that?Rago is sooo cute even mishka is sweet.Hmm so Mishu is Laksh’s heroine right 😉
      I love RagMish sister bond.Who is playing Mishka?Thanks for such a cute story :-*
      I love kiddo Rago <3

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 1:10 pm

        Thank you so much ani.. Glad you like it.. 🙂 And about lakmish.. u have to wait to see what they would be.. 😉 and Mishka/mishu playing Sanaya Irani.

      • Anisha on March 24, 2017 6:48 pm

        Oky Ragi 🙂
        I donno why but i felt Shekhar married 2nd time.I hope mera guess wrong nikle 🙁
        Post soon dear.Waiting for RagSan 1st meet btw i love RagLak’s 1st meet 😉

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 9:35 pm

        you have to wait for this..Anyways thanks dear

    18. keerthu on March 24, 2017 12:44 pm

      Awesome dr……… Differnt story………… Welcome dr………….. Waiting for next ff dr…..

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 3:31 pm

        Thanks dear

    19. Slk on March 24, 2017 2:04 pm

      Yaay..excited to read it…..

      • Mmp on March 24, 2017 3:34 pm

        Thanks dear

    20. jazzy on March 26, 2017 4:12 pm

      Superb

      • Mmp on March 26, 2017 7:57 pm

        Thank you jazzy.. 🙂

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