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its abhi…
Its the last episode..
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episode 5
Ragini:Laksh..Tum?? Ragini gets shocked as well as happy! Ragini:So you send that card..??.. Laksh:yes..its me.. Ragini:Then why didn’t you say that you love me…I had to wait these much years. Laksh:For that na..i came today. Laksh sits on his knees.takes out a ring. Laksh:Will you be my better half? Ragini gets super duper happy seeing her invisible lover whom she loved a lot.Definitely she is gonna accept him. Ragini:Yes..he makes her wear the ring. Ragini blushes. They both went to their respective rooms. Today sanky n laksh are in Ragini’s house As they came today only,Ragini’s parents insisted them to stay there. Next day morning. Laksh comes to the hall. There,all are sitting on the sofa. Laksh:aunty…uncle…i need to say something to you both. Uncle:say laksh. Laksh:I love ragini ..and she also loves me. Uncle:But what if we dont want you as our son in law,? Laksh:Uncle ..
please..i will take care of her..like a princess. Uncle:laksh..do you really think that we wont accept you? Aunt: yes ..laksh,..Ragu is lucky to get you.. Ragini gets happy and hugs her parents. Sanskar:oyy..you both didnnt say anything to me…cheaters… Ragini:sorry ….yesterday only we … Sanskar:He proposed u..right?? Ragini:how do you know?, Sanskar:I just guessed..hehe Sanskar:so..when is shaadi..??I will go next week..i need to attend your marriage. Ragini:but that’s too early,.arrangements n all.. Aunty:Yes..how will we do the Arrangements? Sanskar:Iam there na…i will do all the arrangements. Laksh:sanky..u r my Chunk bro yaar,. Sanskar :haha..enough of soaping. Tomoro engagement…Wednesday mehendi..thursday Sangeet …Friday Haldi ..aur Saturday…Marriage.. Ragini:what a planning yaar…So ..today”,,??
Sanskar:shopping. Ragini:wow…shopping.laksh..call your parents too. @shopping mall. All are busy taking dresses.Ragini is taking different lahengas. Ragini:This blue colour lehenga is nice right”? Laksh:no no…take that red. Ragini:okay.. Sanskar:you liked blue colour right?? Ragini:its okay sanky. Laksh is taking sherwani. Ragini:Take that blue sherwani. Laksh:my dress need to be matching to urs.so I will take that red one. Ragini gets sad. Sanskar:bhaiyya..give that blue one. I think its good on me..i will take this one. Ragini gets happy. Ragini:sanky..u r so sweet..i love u yaar.. Sanskar:love you too.. They both laughs. Shopping over. Next day Engagement. Sanskar arranged everything beautiful.everyone praises him. Sanskar:haha..enough of my praising..today its engagement .. Laksh made her wear the ring.Ragini was about to make him wear the ring ,but suddenly the ring falls from her hand.It went near to sanskar.he will take it and give to Ragini. Sanskar:its ok…continue. Ragini makes laksh wear the ring..all claps.. Suddenly sanskar leaves from there as he gets a call. Next day.. Mehendi All girls are putting mehendi..in the centre Ragini is sitting. Sanskar is taking photographs. Mehendi writer:whats your husband’s name’s first letter. Ragini:Sanskar…come here..
Mehendi writer thought that sanskar is her would be.and she wrote s.. Ragini:Take the photo of my mehendi. Sanskar:ok.. He takes it and checks. Sanskar:Ragini…why is it written s..it should be L na?? Ragini asks the mehendi writer. Mehendi writer:That..when I asked u husbands name..u said sanskar.so I thought… Ragini laughs. And said:its ok.. Sanskar:wat ok..how can you be so irresponsible. Ragini:sanskar..cool down yaar..its just a letter. Sanskar :but its a ritual. Ragini:ok then..di..write L somewhere on my hand. Ragini :now fine na?? Sanskar:but what about that s?? Ragini:let it be there..so what??anyway iam not gonna leave you..i will be with you forever..so let it be a symbol of it. Suddenly Sanskar leaves from there. Mehendi over..
Sangeet Sanskar is the host.. Sanskar.:So today is the sangeet ceremony of my two best friends Ragini and Laksh.Now here,we are gonna conduct a couple dance.There is no winner or loose..its just for fun. Many couples are standing on the stage along with Raglak. Ragini:sanskar…come na!!!join us.. She calls out a girl and said her to participate along with sanskar. So sanskar also took part in it. Starts.. Pairs will be changing aftereach song. Raglak dance.. Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya (x2) Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa Enna sona, enna sona Enna sona oh.. Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya Enna sona oh.. Enna sona oh.. Enna sona, enna sona Kol hovein te sekh lagda ae Door jaave te dil jalda ae Kehdi agg naal rabb ne banaya Rabb ne banaya rabb ne banaya Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya Pairs change Ragsan. Ragini enjoys dancing with him while he is looking at her deeply. Tu safar mera Hai tu hi meri manzil Tere bina guzara Ae dil hai mushkil Tu mera Khuda Tu hi duaa mein shaamil Tere bina guzara Ae dil hai mushkil Mujhe aazmaati hai teri kami Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi Junoon hai mera Banoon main tere qaabil Tere bina guzaara Ae Dil Hai Mushkil The song ends. after this..its a special dance of sanskar dedicating to his best friends marriage.. Sunoh ek thi kanch ki gudiya Suno ek thi pyar ki pudiya Sadke Uss pyar ke Sunoh ek tha pind da shera Aaya kaske bandh wo sehara Sadke Uss yaar ke Saji thi doli… wo Chadha tha ghodi.. wo Khoya jaane kahan inna sona pyar baliye Jogi maahi heer ranjhana Sabnu jaake main ye bolna Baat bolke Raaz kholna…
Sanskar is having tears in his eyes.. By seeing it..Ragini also felt hurt..he suddenly leaves from there. Haldi All the arrangements are perfectly done. Ragini’s mom is bringing the haldi suddenly she collides with Sanskar and a little haldi fell on his face. Sanskar:sorry aunty. Aunty:its ok..usually it says that..if haldi falls on an unmarried person..then his marriage will happen soon. Sanskar:haha..i dont believe in all these stuffs aunty. function starts. Sanskar applied haldi on both raglak..The trio hugs. Marriage On marriage..all preparations are perfect..mandap is beautifully decorated. The groom is sitting in the mandap waiting for bride, Ragini comes there.They both smiles looking at eachother.
Sanskar is standing little away taking their photos. Finally..laksh puts vermillion on her hairline and wears mangalsutra on her neck.A drop of tear fell from sanky’s eyes. Ragini looks at sanky and smiles.She felt confused seeing his eyes filled with tears.He wipes the tears and smiles. Marriage over. Reception. Ragini and laksh are standing on the stage.All are coming towards them …gifts them and takes photos with them.. Sanskar:Iam gonna sing on my best friends marriage…so friends clap for me,.hehe.. Acha chalta hoon Duaaon mein yaad rakhna Mere zikr ka zubaan pe swaad rakhna Dil ke sandookon mein Mere ache kaam rakhna Chitthi taaron mein bhi Mera tu salaam rakhna Andhera tera maine le liya Mera ujla sitaara tere naam kiya. Ragini is looking at sanky .she is confused. Finally sanskar goes towards them..hugs them..and gives a light smile. Sanskar:Ragu..here is a gift for you.Heyy.dont open it now.Open it only after i go.Today I need to go to UK for some works. So iam leaving.he gifts a watch to laksh. Sanskar:congrats guys.
Ragini is a bit confused seeing sanky’s eyes.(tears) He walks away from them..he turns and says..”you both look made for eachother”. Laksh smiles.while Ragini looks at him confused.she suddenly opens the gift which he gave.she gets shocked. He starts going.All the memories flashes in front of him.keeping cards on her house’s door.sending her roses.His identity”the invisible lover”..blue saree ..everything..(all cards except the last card..where its written meet me at terrace .was sent by sanky..last card was by lucky..) He wipes his tears …
Ye dil tanha kyun rahe Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye Ye dil tanha kyun rahe Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein Kyun rooh meri ye sahe Main adhoora jee raha hoon Hardum ye keh raha hoon Mujhe teri zaroorat hai Mujhe teri zaroorat hai (x2) Andheron se tha mera rishta bada Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya Main adhoora jee raha hoon Khud par hi ik sazaa hoon Mujhe teri zaroorat hai Mujhe teri zaroorat hai.. Ragini finds that blue lehenga in it.which she couldnt buy because laksh wanted red colour…its written”For my angel…by Sanky.
She remembers invisible lover’s card.. Same handwriting…same type rose..his tears… She was not understanding anything..so thought to ask laksh “is he the invisible lover”…but no!she didnt ask……she didnt want to understand anything….A drop of tear fell from her eyes…she didnt know why she cried.. Laksh asked her what happened. Ragini said nothing and smiled at him. Sanskar was about to turn back and look at her..for a last time.But he didnt. Thats the end.. “””Pyar hum dono ne kiya … magar tadapna sirf mere naseeb mein aaya”””
Every lovestories may not have a happy ending..
40 Comments
Mind blowing game played by destiny or i would like to say.. By Abhi……
Bt yaar its reality… The game which played by destiny is toooooooo emotional………….
Yes…everything is with destiny…we cant change destiny..Mayb destiny want laksh n rags to marry…
Hate you Abhi! Why can’t you unite them
Omg it’s really disturbing
Oohhhh…iam really really sorry…plzzz dont hate me..even I love ragsan other than anyother couple..but here…they have to b separated..plzz..sory if I hurt u
Not like that Abhi I love raglak pair but I thought ragsan as final couple but ???
I will write another ff ..n will unite them in that ff definitely
Its emotional and are you writting any other ff.
Thankewww..currently iam writing..the mad girl who made me crazy…ragsan ff
Nice
Thankyuuuu
Hi abhi first i sanskar only invisible lover but you changed dear but i really felt bad yar for ragini and sankar
Sanky is the invisible lover..n ha, Ragini is is not completely sure about that…hmm..feeling sad for sanky
I am disturbed with cilimax
Sorry yaar!!
No I will not forgive you until you update ragsan ff??
awesome update, loved it so much, yet i am feeling restless. sanskar’s pain is unbearable. he just did one mistake, he became her invisible lover, and your last line is very heart wrenching,”Pyar hum dono ne kiya … magar tadapna sirf mere naseeb mein aaya”.
Hmm..yes he could be visible..but it was too late..he was about to propose her,but that day he saw laksh proposing Ragini.so he backout..
yes…that line made me too emotional.
AWESOME
Thankyou so much yaar
Absolutely gorgeous…. you should write more stuff…..
Thankyou so so much
awesome yaar u literally made me cry by ua last line …..it’s extraordinary especially the last sentence…..superb story well i thought u would make ragsan unite when the incidents occured on engagement , haldi…eventhough it’s just too good
Thankyou so much yaar…even i felt to unite them..but…this idea came in my mind n i couldn’t resist,
superb..but feeling bad for my lovely ragsan
dear..can u continue..ur kiddnaper ff(if u r interested)..I have d link , 7updates of that ff
Thankyou so much yaar…even i felt sad for my lovely couple….
Yes…i will continue kidnapper ff..but i need little time for it..after my exam only i will continue..otherwise my mom will kill me..after my exam i will try to continue all my ffs…including warrior girl n kidnapper….love u loads yaar…u still remember my ffs!
Awesome
Thankyou so much?
Noooooo yaar abhi why aankhon M aansu AA gye yaar please unite them na pleasee ,?????
Sorry…..sorry…plzzs
in my next ragsan ff i will unite them…
Ragsan????????its wat i m doing ryte now…
And those songs…. Emotional queen… I m naming u this… Bcs my heat is still aching… ?
When i said this story to my frnds..they also called me the same…
sorry yaar..i kno its a sad ff…my next ff will be happy one
awesome episode yaar par ending was really sad yaar ???
Thankyou…..n sorry for the sad ending
awsme story dear..at last raglak gt united..tnk u 4 ur aswme hrt touchin story…
Thankyou so mich
awesome dear…..After reading the mehandi part i thought u r going to unite ragsan but u separate them…..Ohhh my poor Sanky feeling bad for him….am really sad yar….invisible lover s invisible to ragini….tkcr dear…
Thankyou so much..n sorry di..
Fab and sorry for late comment ,,wow destiny played such a cruel game xx