Hi guys thanks for your comments…
Let’s start..?
CHAPTER 1
The episode starts with a few guys chasing some one
A little girl was being kidnapped..
Some others were following them…
Soon the they were also kidnapped from a mall…
All the goons
Goon:who are you..
The other kidnappers see eo and smile..
Guy:wht does it has to do with me..call your boss
Goon:why..
Guy-tell his wives are safe with me..
Goon what??
Guy yes…
Goon calls him and
Guy snatches the phone…
Guy: see you give me the kidnapped girl and i will return ur wife to you..
Boss hw should i believe..
Guy talk to your husband..
Thw the wife talks..
Then she to other lady
Wife i will tell him to save u too
Lady talks to boss..: u said i am ur darling nw wht haa..
Biss:Chameli..tum..
Wife wht second setup..?
Guys laugh
Boss wht do u want
Guy: Come to pavali railway station…with a water bote and girls..and come alone
..
The goon comes…but the crooked mind as it is..his men are a few stations away..
Goon; nw give me ny wife
Guy: I dont have ur wife she climbed the same train you came..
Goon gets frusted..and throws the water bottleat him..hus face revealed.
None other our SANSKAR????
NOW ..
Sanskar girls..??
Boss.. i wont give themm..
Sanskar dobt worry my friends already saved the girls and the police are coming…
Sanskar hugs the girls and he and gis friends leave…
Police and media acknowledge the unknown boys development…
Sanskar and his friends…reach a big building…
What is revealed to be
INDIAN POLICE RECRUITMENT COLLAGE…
They secretly climb the wall and get inside..
Rudra ab kya..
Laksh Sanskar set it for 10 seconds..
Sanskar ? Are u sure..
Dev Yess…
All laugh and swotch on a button in their phone and the jammed cameras of the institute started working normally..
They rush to their rooms and close the door of their dormatries…
This was Sanskar and his friends who work secretly and save lot of innocent people though their wit…
And i knw..Swara…she will meet me next time…
Till then Bye…???
Will upload Swasan forever yours soon..
Love u all ❤❤❤
22 Comments
Nyc
Hi JANPA
I am sure you seen THANI ORUVAN . But I hope you have made SOME CHANGES in your story to make it more interesting.
By the way which state are you from? Tamilnadu or Andhra
Andhrapradesh..sagar yup i re rgt made some changes
Hey janpa
Even im also from Andhra Pradesh
nyc
Oye I think it’s jayam Ravi film thaniourvan
But continue with some extra swasan movement pls . nyc
interesting
Nice
Nice…
Thani Oruvan ?? But seems interesting with swasan…. Continue soon dear….
Nice ma…nd thanks for accepting my worthless advice..haha..r u from tamilnadu..super ma…I think this is thani oruvan first scene..nd ur character sketch also symbolizes that film..Bt nayathara is not doctor..soo i think u have another idea by giving this plot…anyways all d best for ur ff..I’ll support u always…take care..waiting for next..
Nice
Awesome ?
nice. waiting for the next part ? ?
Nice dr…. It’s same like tamil movie thani oruvan…
Awesome post the next part soon
Niceeee
Nice
Hi janpa
Episode is awesome
And thani oruvan is remaked in our state as dhruva
ram charan and rakul are leads
SWASAN in dhruva is very interesting n ur writing tooo gud
But dear make space between dialogues and by using punctuation like semi colons u can make story more understanding
Its just my suggestion
And in andhra Pradesh where r u from
Your ff’s this epi seems like Thani Oruvan movie’s first scene…. I just loved that movie especially Siddharth Abhimanyu character. I really want to see thani oruvan for Swasan style. I hope you make some changes in it. I eargerly waiting for the villan revealation.
nice