Hello everyone!!
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Hello Nifa, I am telling you to feel sad for everyone ๐คท. Because it’s jealousy!
Hello Jayashree, Thank you so much๐ฏ. I hope you enjoy this as well! And their jealousy is seriously tough๐
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Hello Chhavi, Let’s see if they realise ๐คท
Hello Astha, Thank you for laughing ๐. I guess I have a deficiency of the letter โAโ that’s why every new character has an initial โAโ. But mostly the last line of the FF is the reason๐ค
Hello SUMISHA, Thank you so much๐ฏ. And their jealousy is seriously going to go way ahead๐
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Hello Naira U Singh, Disturb! Disturb! You can disturb me on instagram also if you want ๐. Let’s see how much the boys get jealous or the girls๐
Hello Riansh Lover, Haha! Let’s see for whom you need to feel bad๐ค. But their jealousy is super!
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Hello Diha, Thank you so much๐ฏ. Hope their Jealousy excited you! Btw, how’s your health? ๐คญ
The episode starts asโฆโฆ..
At 04:00pm in Sejal’s house,
Sejal and Abhay had returned from shopping long back. They freshed up and Riddhima and Ishani were waiting for the duo to come down. After sometime, they came.
Riddhima: How was your shopping?
Abhay: Don’t ask! Dimag kharab kar diya iss ladki ne.(This girl chewed my mind)
Sejal: Kiska? (Who’s?)
Abhay: Ofcourse! Mera! (Mine)
Sejal: Joke accha tha! Lekin tere paas dimag he nahi hai. (Joke was good! But you do not have a mind.) *Laughs*
Riddhima: Shut up Sejal!
Sejal: Okay!
The bell rang and Riddhima went to open the door, she saw Kabir, Vansh and Aryan outside. They walked in along with her and sat down. Riddhima came and sat beside Vansh holding his hand. Vansh was smiling but he remembered that he has to stay away from her to get her close to him. So, he left her hand. Riddhima looked at him but then ignored the act.
Ishani: How come y’all here?
Aryan: We thought of planning a party here.
Sejal: What party?
Kabir: One of our college friends is coming back so we thought of letting y’all meet her.
Riddhima: Okay! Done! What’s her name?
Vansh: Ashnoor!
Riddhima: Okay! We’ll plan everything. Y’all don’t need to worry!
Sejal: Haa!
Riddhima gets up and goes to her room. She comes out with three shirts-
Sky blue, Navy blue, Turquoise blue. Vansh, Aryan and Kabir look at each other and wonder which shirt will go to whom.
Aryan: Why so many shirts?
Riddhima: Well, they are for Abhay!
Vansh: WHAT!
Riddhima: Ya! Why?
Riddhima gives the shirts to Abhay and asks him to go and try all three. Abhay goes and Sejal follows him.
Kabir(thinks): Is he a kid that Sejal needs to help him change?
Kabir: But Riddhima you were about to give only one to him and the rest two to Aryan and Vansh.
Riddhima: Yaa! And I asked for your help but you couldn’t suggest so I gave him all three.
Vansh glared at Kabir and Kabir changed his gaze.
Vansh(thinks): THIS KABIR!! If only could he have sometime and some brain left then I would have got my gift but now everything will go to that Abhay. What if my Riddhima too falls for him? No! No! I can’t let that happen at all! I’ll throw him out!
Abhay comes out with all three shirts in his hand.
Riddhima: How were they?
Abhay: Amazing! I loved them! Thank you!
Abhay hugged Riddhima and Vansh wanted to slap him the next moment. Sejal also came down.
Ishani: Where had you gone?
Sejal: To my room. I recalled there were some documents which were kept out so I thought of keeping them inside.
Kabir (thinks): Thank God! I thought she’s gone to follow Abhay.
Vansh: Now can we plan for the evening?
Riddhima: Ofcourse!
Vansh, Aryan and Kabir get along and start decorating the house while Riddhima and Ishani go to the kitchen to prepare snacks first. Sejal and Abhay walk out of the house to get drinks. The decorations are done well. And then everyone went to get ready.
At 06:30pm in Sejal’s house,
Riddhima and Ishani entered the house and noticed the decoration now because previously they were in a hurry. They noticed the balloons which were red and white and the fairy lights around the room. The flowers kept around. They liked the decorations but found it like someone’s going to be proposed but they shrugged their thoughts when they heard Sejal’s voice. Sejal came downstairs followed by Abhay and they sat in the living room.
Riddhima: Ishani, have you heard about Ashnoor?
Sejal: Even I had the same question, She’s Vansh and Kabir’s friend, if it was for Aryan then we could think.
Ishani: No! Ashnoor is new to me as well! I don’t know her.
The doorbell rang and Abhay went to open the door. He saw the boys entering. He smiled at them whereas they just forced a smile and walked in. They didn’t greet anyone and sat by themselves.
Riddhima(thinks): It’s odd! He doesn’t behave like this. What’s wrong?
Ishani(thinks): What’s wrong with Aryan? Even in the morning he was strange!
Abhay: Guys, where’s your friend? She’s coming right?
Vansh: Yes, she is!
Again the bell rang and all three boys quickly went to open the door and this made the girls really surprised since none of them have been this eager to even look at them. The boys come in along with Ashnoor. The girls jaw is dropped and the boys feel to laugh at their situation. They all come closer and stand in a circle.
Vansh: So let me introduce you to them.
She’s Riddhima, my friend(pointing towards Riddhima)
Ashnoor and Riddhima hugged each other.
Vansh: She’s Sejal, my friend (pointing towards Sejal)
Ashnoor and Sejal also hugged each other.
Vansh: She’s Ishani, my sister. (Pointing towards Ishani)
Ashnoor and Ishani also hugged each other.
Vansh: He’s Abhay, their friend. (Pointing towards Abhay and then the girls)
Ashnoor and Abhay just shaked hands.
And everyone sat down.
Riddhima(thinks): All these days, I had the wrong perception of me being his fiance but today he corrected me.
Ishani: So Ashnoor, how long have you known them?
Ashnoor: It’s been so many years, since college.
Vansh looks at Riddhima who’s looking down and not looking at anyone.
Vansh: Let’s dance! It’s so boring to just sit.
Kabir: Oh yes!
Vansh offers his hand to dance with Ashnoor and Kabir plays the music. Riddhima and Ishani move to the bar and prepare drinks. Sejal and Abhay also come on the dance floor. Vansh looks at Riddhima. He sees her holding a wine glass in hand. She walks near him and drops the wine on Ashnoor’s dress. Ashnoor snaps her fingers in front of him.
Ashnoor: What are you searching for?
Vansh looks at Riddhima who’s still standing at the bar with Ishani.
Vansh: Nothing, just thinking to make her more jealous.
Ashnoor: Do you think that she’s even getting jealous?
Vansh: Ha, yes!
Aryan walks up to them and they break their dance and move aside to stand and talk. Kabir comes next to them. The boys are freely laughing with Ashnoor.
Ishani(whispers): Riddhima, What’s going on there? They are so free with her but with us, Huh!
Riddhima (whispers): Don’t worry, we both know it won’t last long.
Ishani(whispers): Yes! It will end soon!
Riddhima(whispers): Ashnoor, isko khud pe hai itna noor.
Ishani(whispers): Lekin toote ga iska guroor!
Riddhima(whispers): Jab iske saare sapne honge choor choor!
They both giggle and give a hi-fi to each other.
Precap: Riddhima asks Vansh to leave.
21 Comments
I think riddhu and Ishani will play some prank on them๐๐๐
Ab aayega na mazza ๐๐๐
Soo cute yrr the track is fascinating ๐๐
I will be waiting for next episode โบ๏ธ๐
Heheeee๐.. Episode was amazing. May riddima and Ishani not fell in boy’s plan and give it back to them. It would be fun ๐. Well, I have also started writing a ff. It’s beginning for me. So please do read it๐.. (#The game of destiny)
Ever considered joining tv industry? You are so good with ur storylines. Loved this and previous 4 updates
Oh God!! I want ki vansh, Kabir, aryan ka plan successful ho gaye๐… Ab girls ki jealousy dekhne hai please seanna this time make girls jealous ๐๐ ๐
Amazing episode๐ฅฐ๐๐๐
And ya who would u take ashnoor in real๐๐คฉ
My Goodness your storyline is soo good and the way of writing is awesome it makes me addicted to it… But pls do write in English as I don’t know hindi.. A lot of my friends are reading your story regularly and guess what you hav a lot of fans…
I had to take a break to come and read your update after you were being so extraordinarily โpyaariโ. I didn’t want to break your heart, choor choor kar ke, but the last few dialogues had me in fits. How do you find the rhyming words, haha? Anyhoo, this episode was amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I’m gonna look forward to the next episode.
Wow super dear ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ. Thanks for updates daily ๐๐โค๏ธ๐. Riddhima jelaoauy for ashnoor and riddhima drop the wine of ashnoor because of jealous but it was Vansh dream. Keep rocking dear you and your updates ๐๐โค๏ธ. But precap why riddhima ask Vansh to leave I think some twist is added for next update. Iam waiting for your next updates ๐๐โค๏ธ๐. Once keep rocking dear ๐คฉ. Eat well take care dear โค๏ธ. Good night ๐ด๐๐ค sweet dreams ๐ค๐ค and your family also dear ๐.
No words to describe how much I liked ur way of expressing each and every emotion anger,happiness, romance, jealous ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Better u should turn to a script writer then you will fly with colors ๐๐๐
I have no comments to describe the episode it’s really awesome ๐๐๐๐โค๐๐๐๐ serial mein itna dekhne ko nahi milta jitna iss ff mein hai thank you for making our day ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ can’t wait for the next one
It’s fine
Such a nice episode….๐
Shayri done by the girls at the end is so awesome…๐
Why i m getting the feel that this jeolousy track will end up Abhay and Ashnoor together…๐ค
I m really enjoying it….
Plz make sejal jeolous also….๐…poor kabir he is suffering so much…๐
Don’t know what Ridhima and ishani will do with Ashnoor….i m feeling pity for her in advance…๐๐
Waiting anxiously for the next part..๐บ
Arrey…there we go…
MISUNDERSTANDING๐…
I really wish your ff was immj2…its amazing yaar….
Riddhima got so so jealous that she asked him to leave๐ฎ๐๐๐๐…
shabash…๐
Wow such a nice episode, i just don’t have words to describe
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Really amazing..
Now what will happen?
Hope they clear all the miss understanding and get back to their respective partner….
I guess u should find one partner for abhay๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Maybe she ask to leave the house but i really enjoyed it
Yaar next episode half century cross karega. Kuch to special hona chahiye us episode mein, jaisi ki ridhu ka vansh ko nikal dena, 50th episode ko special karna chahiye. Coming to the episode, I want to ask Ishani and Riddhima, “Ab kaisa laga?” – Jab mazak sehe neki shamta nahi hai,tab mazak mat kiya karo
No words to describe how amazing was the update
Really enjoying a lot๐
Keep updating us๐ฅฐ
Awesome episode…
The girls are planning something….. What could it be๐ค๐ค..
Little sad about the precap๐๐
Eagerly waiting for the next ones!!
Keep writing!!
Love you and your ffs!!
Aww….what a episode full of jealousy waiting for next episode
Lovely update and that last lines were hilarious๐๐๐
Now after this jealousy track start the marriage track .. and more riansh scenes please … by the way your ff is amazing.. eagerly waiting for ur ff everyday ..