Hi dearies!!! I’m back with the update… I have settled in new place but still trying myself to get adapt to the place… I don’t when I can post next update… But, I will try to upload whenever I can… I have tried my best to give a good chapter… I’m sorry if you don’t like this chapter….
CHAPTER 97
OBEROI MANSION
Living Room
The Oberois are angry thinking about Riddhima…
Shivaay: How dare she said like that about Om??
Madhu: But Ishu and Priyanka never let him down and stood against her… She tried hard to turn Ishu against bhaiya but Ishu gave back to her nicely…
Jhanvi: Chi!! It’s good that Om didn’t marry her… He have broke everything with her after learn about her intention…
Shivaay: (hugs Priyanka’s arm) I’m very proud of you, Prinku… You have again proven that you are not less than Jhansi ki Rani…
Prinku: (slaps his arm) Bhaiya, stop teasing me… How I will let anyone to talk bad about my bhaiya and bhabhi??
Kalyani: Prinku, Ishu don’t take that as serious right, after knowing about Om and Riddhima?? Because this is very sensitive matter for the girls… Ishu aware of Gauri but she didn’t know about Riddhima…
Karthik: Don’t worry about that, daadi… Ishu maa clearly said that she loves Om with his past and she doesn’t care about her relationship with him at past…
Kalyani: But, putthar….. (Cuts by Rudra)
Rudra: Daadi, I think it’s better if you asked bhabhi directly… She is coming from O’s room… (All turn and see Ishana coming out from Omkara’s room…) I’ll go and bring her… (He is about to call her but suddenly Ishana is pulled back inside the room… Rudra shouts…) Oh, no!! (All look at him) Someone pulled Ishana bhabhi inside… Let’s go and save her… (About to go but Soumya holds his hand)
Soumya: Duffer, it’s bade baalwale bhaiya only… He might want to talk something to her… (They again see Ishana coming out from the room…) See, I told you… (Rudra smiles and about to go to Ishana but again she is pulled inside the room making him confuse… Soumya smiles covering her mouth…)
Rudra: What is wrong with O?? Why he is pulling her inside again and again?? (Soumya shrugs her shoulders… They turn and see Ishana running towards living room while smiles shyly looking at behind… She collides with her family who are giving a teasing look towards her… She turns away feeling embarrassed…)
Annika: (turns her face) What happened, Ishu?? You are coming out and going inside the room… Anything special?? (Ishana blushes hard) And why are you blushing like this??
Soumya: (stokes Ishana’s cheek) Ishu bhabhi, a strawberry can lost seeing your cheek colour… See how red it has turned into?? (Ishana blushes more and runs from there before they could say something… All burst into laughter… They stop laughing seeing Omkara coming out from the room…)
Rudra: Wait!! Just see what I’m going to do… (Calls Omkara) O!! (Omkara goes towards him)
Om: What, Rudra??
Rudra: (hands over a handkerchief) Wipe your face… Something is there on your face… (Omkara turns his face feeling embarrassed and takes the handkerchief from Rudra… He wipes his mouth making everyone surprised…) O, I said something on your face… Why did you wipe your mouth?? (Omkara looks at him in shock while everyone burst into laughter… He mentally cursed himself and runs from there before they started to pull his leg… Rudra hugs Kalyani’s arm…) Daadi, did you get your answer?? They are fine… My Ishana bhabhi is not like that… She is simply different and no…. (Cuts by everyone except the Chabras and Gauri’s mother)
All: No one can be like my Ishana bhabhi… (Rudra looks at them in surprise while Chabras and Gauri’s mother are confused)
Soumya: Your signature statement… Everyone knows it here…
Chaya: Signature statement??
Annika: Yes, aunty… He always tell this line whenever we talked about Ishu… Since their first meet, Ishu and Rudra shared a good bonding… No matter what happened, Rudra will be on Ishu’s side only…
Reyaan: But I’m agreeing with Rudra… No one can be like our Ishana bhabhi…
Rudra: See, I already told you… (ReyRu have a high five while others just shake their heads seeing them…)
Savi: So, we are taking our leave now… There are still a lot of work left for today’s engagement…
Shivaay: Daadima, we are coming with you as well… (The Oberois youngsters leave with the Raichands to Raichand Mansion)
Evening at Raichand Mansion
Raichand Mansion has been adorned beautifully for MaKar’s engagement… The girls are helping Madhu while the guys are helping Karthik… The guests have been warmly welcomed by both families… The guys bring Karthik to the living room and make him seated on a chair which has been decorated for the couple… The girls come bringing Madhu and make her seated beside Karthik… Karthik is mesmerized looking at Madhu who is looking stunning in a grand orange colour saree…
Karthik: (whispers) I told you all colours will look good on you… (Madhu smiles shyly) And, that day you were right… (She looks at him in confuse) That day during Ishu maa’s engagement, you said that I was ogling at you… (Madhu recalls the day) Yes, I was ogling at you… (Madhu blushes… Everyone chuckle among themselves…)
Ranveer: (bends towards Karthik) Karthik, if you have done your romance with my sister, can we start the ceremony??
Karthik: Sure… Why not?? Let’s start… We don’t have to delay anymore… Where is the ring?? (Arjun slaps his head while others laugh)
Arjun: Have some patience… (Looks at Ishana) Ishu, bring the rings… (Ishana nods and goes to them…)
Ishana opens a small box which is having two rings inside it… Karthik takes a ring and slides it into Madhu’s finger… Madhu takes another ring and wears for Karthik… Everyone clap their hands… Karthik takes her hand and kisses it making her blush…
Ishu: Karthik, you have made her to wait for long… For that, you have to sing for her…
Karthik: (smiles) Sure, Ishu maa… But, I will sing in Tamil… Is that ok??
Rudra: No problem, Karthik… Madhu can understand you… We will find the translation in Google… (Karthik smiles and looks at Madhu and holds her hand)
Movie: Rajini Murugan
Singers: Jithin Raj, Mahalakshmi Iyer
Un mele oru kannu, neethan en morreponnu, (I have an eye on you, you are my bride to be)
Unnodu ive onnu, unne marantha verum mannu, (He has united with you, if he forgets you, he is just mud)
Irukkuren unnale,parakkuren thannale, (I am here because of you, I’m flying by myself)
Kerengguren, norungguren, (I’m struggling, I am crushed)
Paaru naan un maapillai!!! (Look, I am the one your groom)
Madhu smiles shyly looking at him while everyone clap their hands… Ishana hugs MaKar and kisses their foreheads…
Ishu: I’m very happy for both of you… (Everyone congratulate them and snap pictures with them)
The function ends after few hours and all the guests leave from there…
Kalyani: Tomorrow will be mehndi…
Annika: Daadi, I already booked the mehndi artists… They will be coming tomorrow afternoon…
Savi: People used to say a girl can know how much her husband loves her by seeing the mehndi darkness… Guys, it’s a challenge for you… If their mehndi is not dark, then you all will land in trouble… (OmRanKa look each other in shock while other guys are laughing…)
Kalyani: Why you all are laughing?? This challenge is not for them only… But, for every married men here including TejSak… (All the men are shocked while the ladies jump happily)
Tej: Maa??
Kalyani: Don’t ‘maa’ me, Tej… This is my final decision…
Pinky: Corrects, mummy ji… We will know our husbands still loves us very much or not…
Jhanvi: Pinky is right… Tomorrow, we will know… Come on, girls… Let’s go and prepare for tomorrow… (The girls left leaving the men at living room… Arjun burst into laughter after they left…)
Arjun: Luckily, I’m not married yet… Or I too have to worry like you…
Sid: (slaps Arjun’s head) One day you will get married and will be facing the same situation as us…
Shakti: Pinky can’t stand if I can’t identify her belongings itself… If her mehndi is not dark, she will be jumping from earth to the sky…
Shivaay: Papa, mine is more worst than you… Annika will give me a long lecture about it… Now, she is pregnant some more… It’s very hard to handle her mood swings…
Rudra: Soumya will force me to her eat paratha… (Making a puppy face)
Dush: Relax, guys… Mehndi getting dark is depend on a person’s blood… Some people’s mehndi can get darker quickly… For some people, it will take some time… So, if your wives feel bad, tell them to see the mehndi after few hours…
Shivaay: Really?? (RaDuKa nod) That’s why you three are looking relax… Thanks, guys… We are relieved now…
Karan: Tomorrow, three of us need to go to hospital for a while… Actually, we have applied for the transfer here… We need to meet the Dean here and discuss about that…
Sid: Ok… But, try to come back early… (RaDuKa nod)
Next Day
OBEROI MANSION
All the girls are getting ready for the mehndi ceremony… The guys are chatting with each other… RaDuKa already returned from the hospital and join them… The girls come after a while… IshPriMa sit on the sofa and the mehndi artists started to draw mehndi on their hands and feet… Shivaay already arranged another mehndi artist for other ladies because he knows more time need to take for the brides… So, he has arranged another mehndi artist for other females… The guys just look at their girls admiringly… IshPriMa started to feel pain at their back because sitting for long… OmRanKa realised that and place a pillow behind their back to make them feel comfortable…
IshPriMa: Thank you… (OmRanKa smile and leave from there)
Mehndi artist: Whose name should I write??
Ishu: I will tell his name but you have to write it differently… (Signs her towards a small piece of paper beside her… The girl takes the paper and reads it… She smiles looks at Ishana…) You can write it??
Mehndi artist: Yes, mam… I can write this… Don’t worry… (Ishana smiles and the artist continue her work… The mehndi artists have finished drawing after an hour… IshPriMa continue sitting on the sofa because their legs are having mehndi as well… KalSav go to them…)
Kalyani: Have you written your partners name in the mehndi?? (The girls nod their heads) Good… (Looking at the men) Now, you have to find your names in their hands… (The men nod and go to their partners and sit beside them…)
Savi: If you all couldn’t find your names, you will be punished…
Shivaay: What punishment??
Arjun: Let me tell… You have to lift your partners and walk around the house…
Soumya: Superb, Arjun bhaiya… I agree with this…
Reyaan: If they have found their names, ladies should feed your partners after washing your hands… Agree??
All: Agree!!!
Kalyani: Now, start to find your names… (All the men are searching for their names in the mehndi… Tej, Shakti and Mr Chabra manage to find their names in their wives hands while the youngsters are still searching for their names… The girls are looking at their guys hopefully that they will find the names… Omkara looks at Ishana and shakes his head…)
Om: I’m giving up… I can’t find my name… (Ishana feels bad seeing him giving up)
Ishu: I will tell you…
Om: No, it won’t be fair if you tell me… I have lost and I’m accepting it…
Ishu: But, I can’t see you lose in anything…
Om: But, I don’t mind losing to you… (They heard Shivaay’s voice jumping in happiness)
Shivaay: Yes!! I have found it… (Hugs Annika)
Rudra: (excitingly) Yeah!! I also have found it… (All the guys except Omkara have find their names in the mehndi… Tej looks at Omkara)
Tej: What happened, Om?? Have you find it??
Om: No, I couldn’t find my name… I have lost…
Shivaay: How can it be like that?? Your name must be written there… Check properly…
Om: I have checked it, Shivaay but I can’t find it…
Swet: Ishu, you have written his name right?? (Ishana’s eyes are welled with tears)
Ishu: Anni….. Actually….. I……
Om: It’s ok… So what if I can’t find my name?? I will accept the punishment… (Lifts Ishana in his arms much to everyone’s shock… He smirks and winks at everyone and leave from there with Ishana…)
Rudra: That means O is lying?? (All nod their heads)
Soumya: So that he can be with his love for some time…
Tej: Actually, he didn’t lose… He is the real winner… You guys never take this as a chance to be with your partners… But, Om has thought like that… I’m really proud of him… (The seniors smile while the girls stare at their guys making them gulping in scare… The girls laugh after a while…)
Annika: Om and lie are like two poles before this… But, now both are very close especially in his love matter… (All chuckle listening to her…)
Omkara’s Room
Omkara places Ishana on the bed and adjust her duppata which slipped from her shoulder…
Ishu: I’m sorry… Because of me, you…… (Omkara places his finger on her lips and shakes his head… He takes her hand and looks at her palm… The mehndi is almost dried… He circles her palm with his finger without spoiling the mehndi… Ishana is surprised to see him showing his name… Omkara raises his eyebrows looking at her…) You have found it??
Om: I have found it the moment I held your hand just now… (Ishana looks at him in shock)
Ishu: Then, why you didn’t say it earlier??
Om: (hugs her neck) Then, how I will get this punishment?? How I can spend time with you like this?? (Ishana smiles shyly)
Ishu: But, how did you find it?? It has written in Tamil…
Om: I have checked in internet how to write my name in Tamil… I have a feel that you might write like this… That’s why… (Ishana grins and about to hug him but stops seeing her mehndi hands… Omkara chuckles and hugs her gently…)
Ishu: Did I ever say how much I love you??
Om: (holds her waist and pulls her closer) No… Tell me how much you love me…
Ishu: (spreads her arms) Very very very very much that I don’t know how to express it… I love you that much… (Omkara chuckles at her cuteness)
Om: I know one way to express it… (Brings his face closer to her)
Ishu: (moves back) I know what you are going to do… But, please don’t start again… This afternoon, everyone were teasing me because of you… I don’t want that to happen again… Control yourself till our wedding over…
Om: Ok… I will control myself… Let’s see if you are able to control yourself…
Ishu: Excuse me… You are the one always seeking for a chance to romance… Not me… Ok??
Om: Yeah… What can I do when I have a gorgeous fiance beside me who is always pulling me towards her with her intense eyes?? (Ishana blushes hearing this… Omkara chuckles seeing her blushing…) Have I ever said how cute you are?? (Pinches her nose) You are just too cute… (Ishana smiles at him) Let’s go now or they will come here searching for us… (He lifts her and leaves from the room)
Precap: Sangeet ceremony and haldi….
Guys, please suggest some songs for sangeet… I’m very poor in selecting the songs… Please help me, guys…
15 Comments
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Enna aachu??? Mokkaiya irukko!!!
Illa ore vekkama iruku …..
Enna aachu??? Mokkaiya irukko???
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Fabulous….loved it
Thank you so much, dear….
What about bole chudiyan song from K3G… That’s one of my favourite…… Eagerly waiting for next update so plz post soon…
That is my favourite too… Let’s see how… And thanks for the suggestion…
Aww it is lovely
Thank you so much, dear….
Hi Ruby 🙂
I have read your story in one go and was eagerly waiting for this one to comment for you …
You are just amazing ^^ The way you potray every single character is just mindblowing…
I initially felt bad for Gauri and Dev but the flashback story with the accident, kidnapping, villains etc. were just awesome
And of course I just loved it how you brought every character into the relations for an example Ranveer Madhu and Karthik they’re all so lovable and then the 3 doctors how Ishu see them as her dads. The sisters what can I say I love how independent they are with their own shops and nothing more to say about Svetlana how you just changed the whole negative character to positive and this much positiveness? 😀
From the Oberoi family I just fell in love with Rudra(a) he has really changed to matured one just like Prinku they got more space in your story with their personality… Shivaay is just the opposite from the original one he’s more understanding ^^ and about Anika and Soumya they’re just too cute…
About the elder ones they cooporate more with the younger ones and they include them in everything…
Aprom neenga vera Tamil ponnu – sollava venum?!
I loved it how you brought Madhu and Karthik into the story (since the Karthika i could just imagine Sivakarthikeyan…
Ore oru varutham that you didn’t bring any character for Arjun Sweetheart 🙁
In a whole sentence: OMG I am so speechless I don’t know what to write now and I hope I wrote everything I had in mind…
Oh PS: I love Omkara and Ishana’s Love Story which began from the first look itself and they didn’t not even deny it… they just went with the flow <3
I just love this extraordinary story of yours just bring more of them you've got much talent 🙂
Thank you for this story and do continue as soon as possible dear 😉
First of all, thank you very much for this long comment…. I’m really overwhelmed reading this… I’m very glad that you are liking this story… Actually, I imagined this type of family bonding since few years but never thought to pen it down… It’s just suddenly popped in my mind when I watched the show… I thought I would stop after few chapters but I never thought I could write this long…. As we know, Rudra and Prinku’s character have been scrapped in the show by showing Rudra as immature… I want to change it and give importance for them too… Not only this, but in my another FF too… I don’t like problems in family and that’s why I made all the characters are understanding… Before I forget, innoru Tamil ponnu santhichathule rombe santhosham… Swetlana mostly nereya FF let negative ah thaan kaaturangge…. Namme konjum positive ah kaatuvome, athan inthe muyarchi… Sivakarthikeyan, remo sister get up avare thavire vere yaarukku set aagum… Athan avare Karthik character play panne vechen… Arjun ku pair illenu enakkum varutham thaan, but I never planned any pair for him here… But, I have a plan to start a season of this FF… He will have his pair in that… But I’m not sure to post it here but I will upload in wattpad for sure…
And thank you once again for reading and liking this FF… I have written another two stories titled hatred love and our angel, Ishana… You can read them too… Aana, hatred love paduchathukku appurom enneye kandapadi thitte aaramichirathingge… Yena inthe FF ku opposite athu… Till then continue reading and supporting me… And this FF will end in another few chapters….
Aww you’re so sweet dear…
Unga fan aayithean ponga 😀
I already started to read that and yeah naan appidiye shock aayithean
The way Omkara is here and there what a change
but you brought my favourite pairs together inge Pooja and Gautham na ange Neil and Avni
I am just flat xD
Aww!! Thank you once again… Yes, Om is different there… Athu just a try how if Ishana really caused Gauri’s death and the Oberois already aware of that… Story konjem cruel ah thaan irukkum, konjum adjust pannikongge… Pooja Gautham enakku pudiche pair thaan… Police role ku enakku Neil Gautham thavire vere yaarum teriyale…