ISHKARA FF- NEW FACE OF LOVE (PART 10 )
[By Renima Ishqie]
Hey guys, Am back with the last part of my ff. About this part….I have just tried to create the passionate unique love of ishkara…..But am not sure how much I can do justice with ishkara as due to lack of time and another reason as am getting very much emotional while writing this part. So to convey all feelings is bit difficult for me as am not a professional writer. So ishqies if you feel that I have not conveyed well ishkara then please forgive me. Please read the ff and comment on it.
ISHKARA : Eternal love (@ sea shore)
{Omkara was looking the waves of the sea. He was just recollecting his memories of past. Ishana reaches there and calls him “Omkara”. Omkara turns behind and stares @ Ishana}
Omkara : Ishana……
Ishana : Omkara….I danced……well…….Paapa, Mona, Jhanvi aunty…every one ……like…..But……why…omkara….you…….
{Omkara interrupts her words….}
Omkara : Ishana….You got the New Face…..
Ishana : Yeah…Omkara…..I don’t have words to express how should I thank you…….You are ….such …a kind hearted …..
Omkara : Now you got a profession…You got the money….. You got whatever you want ??
Ishana{ much shocked and sad}: Omkara…..Not all ….
Omkara : What do you want ??
Ishana : This Idol{ she show the idol which she got as the prize} I know…..You have made it….And I …
Omkara : Ishana…..You really deserve it….And…..whatever I done because you have the real talent…..Nothing else….{Om gets emotional}
Ishana : Nothing else ?? Omkara……Nothing……
Omkara : I don’t want to offer you pain……I want to be……in this battle……I mean to say…..I have canvas and colours……I think…..They are sufficient to……
Ishana : Heal your pain?? Right ? You only witness the frame …….Can’t you see my heart? Can’t you see my pain?? You have to answer me….Omkara…..I can’t be the colours or canvas or any principle…..As I don’t understand what they convey…..I listen to my heart….and my heart says…..I just want to be ……{she stares @ omkara with teary eyes}
Omkara : Please….don’t say it…. Ishana…..Earlier we share an unknown bond….It was focused on your success for the new face…But now….You should live with this new face as this is your identity……You have Mona, your dad and Shivaay, Anika,
Mom,Prinku…..
Ishana : And you ? Omkara??
Omkara : Am …..You can come and meet me @ any time…..I mean if you want you can continue your dance in the art hub itself….Else… you can search another platform{ He is unable to stare @ her eyes}
Ishana : Omkara……Seems my role is ending here…..And…
{Ishana burst into tears}
Omkara : Ishana…..Please….Listen to me….
Ishana : I don’t want to hear nothing….You have given me the new face, right ? And you said me not to wear a mask on it?? Now Omkara….you are also wearing a mask…….
Omkara : Am scared…..
Ishana : Why ? Omkara …..
Omkara : I can’t hide truth….In favour of truth when I speak ……I always face pain….and …..the people whom I trusted have …..questiond me….. Shivaay, Ridhima, Mom…..Just blamed me that I separated her soul….while paapa never consider her feelings….never tried to understand her dreams …..And Paapa….. never tried to confess…..Ishana….you have changed…..But I believe in Truth only…..I can’t compromise relationships before truth….As I believe in relationships we are committed and we have to compromise so many things…..and…
Ishana : Enough, Omkara……Truth….You know when I listen my heart it doesn’t show me your idealism and principles…I can understand….for you Ishana is a congirl only……A congirl…..You are Great!! Really Great!!
Omkara : Ishana….I didn’t mean it…..I said it because I don’t want to give you pain….Because I….{Omkara gets emotional}
Ishana : You can’t say it….Omkara…..And Thanks for this new face….At least for two weeks….I enjoyed this new face….. But……Now….I understood that I don’t deserve this new face…..So I am…{She takes the idol} returning this idol……And I will try to return the amount which I got for this new face as early as possible…..Omkara…..I will return to my old faces…..As I can’t dance…..As….I have lost the rhythm of dance and life…..And one day…..you will find in the news that……Congirl Ishana……{She is in extreme pain and she is not able to control herself. She covers her face with her hands….and burst into tears….}
Omkara : {Omkara couldn’t see her pain….He holds her face in his hands and }Ishana, look @ me……
Ishana : {stares@ omkara}Omkara…..
Omkara : Will you be my better half ??{Omkara with teary eyes…with much emotion….}
Ishana : {Much excited..but emotional} Omkara……I don’t deserve you ……isn’t it?
Omkara : I just want to know in my battle of life….in my pain……will you be my better half??
Ishana : I am always with you…..Omkara…….You are not alone….In favour of truth….may be you have to suffer a lot…..you will get pain…..But just I don’t let you alone to suffer…. May be this world will not be able to heal your pain…But I believe I can do it……….Because I…..love you…..Omkara….{She literally cries}
Omkara : I….love you too….Ishana……And I can’t see tears in your eyes…..as this is the new face given by me……And you have no right to damage this face with tears……{he wipe out her tears}…..Ishana…..I can’t live without you…..{He kisses on her forehead….Ishana smiles with wet eyes….}
Ishana: Omkara…..Shivaay said you are painting…..like…
Omkara : Do you want to see ? {Ishana shake her head}….Its here….{Omkara placed her hands in his chest …..}Ishana….i promise you….I will not let you down……
Ishana : Me also……You are the beat of my life….the path….my…..{she is unable to complete words}
Omkara :Sh…sh….!{He placed his finger on her lips….They staes each other}No need to say as I can feel it….{They hug each other…..Their passionate feel of love has really got the new face…..Ishkara love is not the usual love….They share a bond of pain, care and concern which is really very much inspirational and unique.Their Love is on Different level}
Love is divine….It is very sacred as you fall for him/her who is very close to your heart…..The feel of true love is eternal and unique. The path of true love may be filled with so many thorns as life is not a bed of roses. But the one whom you love is with you in every phase of life, you can overcome all issues. Now I ended this in the 10th part as Ishqbaaz is telecasted on 1Opm and am much senty with this number 10. I hope you all like this part and I wish who all are in true love get succeed in their lovelife as love makes life beautiful….
36 Comments
Awesome ending to a rocking ff..
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Oh, Thank u so much Janvi
Wow its sooooooooo emotional… I have no words di…I m speechless.. U r the best writer.. Sach Mei I don’t have words.. I m ending it here as I don’t know which word l be suitable to express this ff..
Luv u di.. Hope u comeback with one more ishkara soon ???
Thanks priya…..I am so glad that u loved it
Renima I, sorry for not commenting on the last part as I just came from school. And di your ending, I just loved it. And those words are so emotional. They touched my heart to the core. And thanks for presenting us this wonderful ff. Hope you come with another ff with all 3 couples.
Oh…Thank u the new Karan Johar….I mean Sat….the director……
Good 1 di karan johar
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And please guide me as you’re so intense emotional just lovable as its for ur ff and you… In the last note I am an immature in front of you di
Thank u dear….And omg to guide…..u r so creative….then what should i have to do
I am speechless. What Gul Khan couldn’t do with ishkara, you did it. This episode was emotional but also beautiful.
I just want to say that your ff was amazing. And always keep rocking and shine bright. I AM GOING TO MISS YOUR FF.
Thank you Dear…..And gulkhan ….what 2 say…she ended ishkara…so sad
Renima di I have got a problem. I missed ur 7,8,9 episode & when I clicked the link it’s showing page not found. I wanna read ur ff. Please reply me on tu page. How can I read the 7,8 & 9th episode???
Tridha see down..di has given u the links..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-new-face-love-part-9/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-new-face-love-part-8/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-new-face-love-part-7/
Thanks 4 commenting and here is the links….I have posted in tu page also…..Just hope tu has moderated the comment
This is the most emotional part of ff so heart touching words amazing ending
its sad this is the last one
Oh disha….it is emotional…i know but ishkara love is unique…so…it should be like that
Thank you renima di for giving me the link. You know I was dying to read ur ff. I also read the previous ff’s but couldn’t comment there because I was really late to read. But I read all. You know u should teach gul how to deal with situation. She just escaped & ended my dream love story ishkara. BTW ur ff was like the real ishkara story. Same pain, same untold & most beautiful love. U r amazing di. Appreciate ur job. Love u di. Stay blessed.
Thank u
Renima its a superb ending just loved it dr thanks for ur superb ff and thanks for asking me to read it and after reading ur ff i just wish ishana should come back to ishqbaaz. Gul khan doesn’t had any idea about ishkara story then she should taken something from this ffs it will be really good. Once again thank u so much for ur beautiful ff dr. Its short and sweet
Thanks a lot
Sincere Thanks to all people who commented here.
Feeling bad that it is last but last wala happy wala …ishkara united….how fluently you wrote Di…it was fabulous….luv it ….
Thank u dear
Super duper part!!!!!!! Ur ff was really amazing di but I’m sad coz this is the last part!!!!!!! But seriously, this was a treat to Ishkara fans!!!!!!!! Loved the ff very much!!!!!!! Di one request…. please write a ff on Shivika also na….. if possible!!!!!!!!!!
Mukta,thanks
This is so gooood. I loved it a lot ???
Like it’s really really awesome
Keep up the good work ?
I read all the 10 parts as i was bored
It made my day ?
Thanks a lot fatarajo
Hey renima do how are you your ff was awesome last part it was a rocking ending all your part was awesome ??
Thanks dear
Wow di …it’s phenomenal ♥️♥️♥️????…can’t express in words..sad that this one is the last part ….I wish Gul khan did something lyk this with ishkara ?..but ur ff really makes me happy …will miss ur ff ….this one was the best ishkara ff I’ve seen ??
Thanks a lot
Renima d just now i read all parts of ur ff….d it is the bestest ff ever i read…..d i read all the os n ff on shivika n ishkara….but d i must say i love it to the core of my heart d…each n every scene of ishkara is like m seeing it infront of my eyes…..thnku soooooo much for such a beautiful ff….lv u d…..
N sorry for not commenting on every part bcz i just know read all the parts….each part is superbbbb….there is no such words in my dictionery which can express my feelings….thnxxx…
Oh! Abiha thank you so much dear
superb ending di.love it
Thanks dear
Awesome..
Thanks