ISHKARA FF-NEW FACE OF LOVE (PART 7 )
[By Renima Ishqie]
Hey Ishqies, am back with the 7th part of my ff. Your comments, suggestions and opinions are really inspiring to me and am grateful to all readers commented on it inspite of the limitations of this ff.
Scene-11 (@ Art hub…Continuation from the 6th part)
{ISHKARA-EYE LOCK….They couldn’t take eyes from each other when Omkara hold Ishana’s hand. Slowly Ishana released her hand from his hold though she was not willing to do that.}
Omkara : Ishana, If you don’t mind please do me a favour
Ishana : Sure Omkaraji….What can I do for you?
Omkara : We are going to meet a person named Kritika….
Ridhima’s Sister……Shall we go now ?
Ishana : Yeah omkaraji….
Omkara : I need one more favour. You just call me Omkara …. That’s enough….No need of “JI” as you are using it like surname…..{Smiles}…Just kidding…..
Ishana: Sure I will call you Omkara only Omkaraji……Sorry…I
{Omkara smiled and Ishana also smiled. She really felt happy
to see Omkara’s smile….}
Scene-12 (@City Hospital)
{Omkara felt so sad to see Kritika in the hospital.As doctor explained Kritika has lost her mental balance and her body parts are paralysed. In this world only Ridhima and her mother realized Kritika’s pain. Kritika was sitting in a wheel chair like a statue. But her eyes conveyed how much she has suffered @ a very young age.}
Ishana : Omkara…..Please…..Don’t get upset…..
Omkara : Ishana…..Am missing Ridhima…..I want to see her….
{Ishana didn’t shocked as she know how Ridhima has influenced Omkara.}
Ishana : Come, Lets go….
Scene-13 (@Police Station)
{Ridhima was placed in a cell. Omkara stared her and called her “Ridhima”……Ridhima became much excited as soon as she saw Omkara }
Ridhima : Om, How are you ? And who is with you? Mala/bela/Ishana….
Ishana : Am sorry Ridhima
Ridhima : You have done nothing wrong Ishana….In fact am so glad to see you with Om…..
Ishana : We met your sister Kritika
Ridhima : Kritika…..I wish if I would have met her. By the way you guys didn’t tell to my mom that am in jail
Ishana : No, not at all….
Omkara : Ridhima…..I don’t know what I can do for you…..
Ridhima : Om, once we shared a relationship….I mean….for me you was like a puppet……You and me have never love each other….I will not ask you to love me also…..But if you really want to do something for my sister and me….Then you should give me a promise…..
Omkara : Sure…Just tell me ……
Ridhima : I want your dad Mr. Tej Singh Oberoi in prison within 2 hours…..Om are you able to do this? Think well and promise me…..
Omkara : Without a thinking I can promise you…..
Ishana : No, Omkara….he is your dad….Don’t do this….
Omkara : I will always stand with truth……Ishana…..
Ridhima : Thanks Om….I know you well……
{Omkara and Ishana leaves the police station….On the way….Ishu tells omkara….”Please omkara….don’t do this”….Om is in full of anger and he is not ready to listen Ishu’s words….Both reaches @ Oberoi mansion…..Shivaay and Tej were discussing an important matter. Om in much anger shouts on his dad….}
Om : Mr.Oberoi……{Shivaay, Jhanvi, Anika and Prinku are shocked to see Omkara’s anger}
Shivaay : What’s wrong with you Om, why are you shouting@ bade paapa ?
Omkara : Shivaay, you don’t know, this man has ruined Kritika….Just now we saw her in hospital….Not only Kritika…. He has destroyed every relationship…..He cheated Roop bua’s husband…..He threatened Gayatri’s Husband and he spoiled ridhima’s sister….Shivaay I will kill him…..
{Omkara burst out @ Tej and in much anger he presses tej’s collar…..Shivaay tries to control Omkara….But he couldn’t…. Jhanvi asked to stop …..But om didn’t listen it……Some how shivaay managed to push back om ……. Omkara stated “ Mr. Oberoi I hate you…..I feel shame to say you are my father…..” Jhanvi couldn’t control herself and she slapped Omkara….. All are shocked…..}
Jhanvi : Mind your words, Om….he is my husband……
Omkara : Wow !! Mom, only now you realized this thing….. Mom…. Mr.Oberoi was playing with your life for the past 29 years…..He never love you…..
Jhanvi : Shut up Om, you have no right to accuse Tej….He is your dad.
Tej : Jhanvi, let him do what he want
Jhanvi : Tej…..
Tej : Omkara…never consider me as his dad….And I don’t want to prove him what I am….
Omkara : Really Mr. Oberoi….You can fool …. shivay, prinku and my mom….But not me…..Shivaay….At least you please stand with me….
Shivaay : Om, some time truth can be bitter. Its better if you won’t explore that….Bade paapa is a part of our family…..I know you are saying this just because this girl Ishana……… again fooled you……
Omkara : Not at all….Shivaay…Ishana was not wrong and today also she is not wrong……You don’t trust me….Just go to city hospital……You can see kritika……
{Tej gets tensed as soon as om mentioned City Hospital….he goes to his room…..Nobody noticed that…}
Shivaay : Ok, om….calm down….I will go there and confirm….
PRECAP : Omkara calls Tej as “Paapa”……
So, Ishqies….Hope you like it….please comment on it….
17 Comments
Renima di there are no words forme to describe about your ff. It is simply superb to say. Di, a small request, please update the next epi ASAP
Thanks sat…i have submitted 8th one…tmrw i will submit last two parts
I am speechless di .I have no words to describe your ff
Thanks dear….and tmrw i will submit last two parts
awesome
Thanks a lot….
Di really amazing very exited to know why om calls tej as paapa what changes his mind
Disha…thanks…reason…8th part mein hai…bit emotional…..but i felt that as good….as it is not so easy to forgive tej
Suspense ko khol nahi sakti….by tonight u can find it…
Omg..precap is a suspense ha???y this shivay always think ishu is at fault…pagal ladka….use toh anika bhi buri lagti hai ishu bhi….sry for late cmnt di..i went to shopping..
Thanks…8th part ….get posted…
Speechless can’t imagine how to describe my words …..awesome..
Thanks yaar
Its becoming intersting dr
Thank you so much dear
Words shortage and your way of description imported me in ff straight and the scenes were flashing in front of my sight…
Just lucky we are to have u
Thanks
Bshama….Thanks a lot