ISHKARA FF : WHEN PASSION MEETS COMPASSION ……PART 6 [By Renima]
Hello Ishqies…..Thanks to all for supporting me….So guys, hope u enjoyed the twist in previous part….This one is short as am not getting much time 2 make longer one due 2 some office work…..This episode will be bit emotional ……Just say how u analyse omkara in this episode….And from next part onwards….certainly i will bring more ishkara scenes and hope u will start liking the track of this ff……Pls express ur views through comments…..
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Scene – 14 {@ Oberoi Mansion} [continuation from part 5]
Swethlana : Am impressed…..Omkara…..[swethlana moves ahead]
Tej : Can any one tell me, what’s going on here ?
Swethlana : I think my role is over…I mean partially it’s over…..Omkara…..
Omkara : U will get it within three days….itself…….In fact u will get it tmrw……..
Swethlana : Really…….omkara…..I have started believing u…….
Omkara : Do, whatever u want…..but after 3 days…just leave this house….
Tej ; Swethlana is not going any where …….Isn’t it swethlana?
Omkara :Mr. Oberoi !!!!
Swethlana : Oh, Come on omkara…..Why are u wasting ur energy and time by bursting on ur so called father……U have 2 focus on ….the game…..which has begun right now….{omkara stares swethlana with sharp eyes} let me remind u again I can stay here until and unless …..{she gives a crooked smile}
Omkara : {recollects the conditions said by her} I have a sharp memory….swethlana……
Swethlana : Tej…..Pls learn some thing from ur son…He knows to fullfil promise very well…..He is punctual in his words, not like u…….{swethlana stares @ tej and goes inside}
Tej : Swethlana….swethlana……..{tej screams}
Omkara : Why are u shouting mr.oberoi…..Can’t u see she has gone inside ?
Tej : U have played with my emotions……U have hurt me…..Omkara…..U have betrayed me……
Omkara : Mr. Oberoi…..It’s u who taught me the lessons 2 hurt beloved ones, 2 betray them, to play pranks with their emotions and now I have learned it…….and I returned the same 2 u right now…….
Tej : Omkara!!!! {tej raises his hands 2 slap omkara}
Dadi : {hold tej’s hand} Enough tej……what he said is right…..U deserves it……Tej……I trust my grand son more than u………because my son has broken every one’s trust……..And the father who never show any kind of concern towards his children himself is a big sin only…… ……If children commits mistake, parents can question them. But if parents themselves are drown in sins…..then they have no right 2 slap their sons and daughters……{dadi releases tej’s hand from hold….}
Tej : So, Omkara…u are challenging ur own father ? Of course the chance 4 ur victory is high since u are still an oberoi ……If u will leave this oberoi mansion, ur surname…..then how will u win it ??
Omkara : Mr. Oberoi……Mark my words…..I will win it without the tag of surname…..Just wait for my arrival @ third day…….U will find me as Omkara only….Not omkara singh oberoi
Tej : I will wait 4 u…..omkara….{tej goes inside }
{Shivruprinku rushes 2 omkara and omkara hugs them…..”Lafzon kaa yeh rishta “plays….After a while all release themselves from hug ….}
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!!! U did a heropanti today……Am feeling proud of u…beta……
{Pinky kisses on omkara’s forehead and smiles with wet eyes} I think we have started regaining the lost happinesses of our house…..Isn’t it shivaay ??
Omkara : I have 2 leave now……
Rudra : What are u saying, om ??
Shivaay : Haa…..om…..the one who broken our home has just fired…….om…and about bade paapa….it will take time om….and almost complications are sort out….
Omkara : But shivaay….still the prblm has not solved……
Shivaay : Yeah…I saw the way swethlana took the brief case and I think she has demanded money from u……
Omkara : Exactly…..she needs 100 crores and I brought 50 crores right now…..
Shivaay : Don’t worry…..Within 1 hr…I will transfer money from my acct. 2 that blo*dy lady and trust me every thing will be fine….
Omkara : Shivaay….she and mr. oberoi had challenged me…..It’s my turn 2 win the challenge……So I have 2 arrange money……And tmrw itself I will find a way 2 arrange money and I will leave this mansion forever……
Shivaay : Om…..i didn’t get u…..
Omkara : This is the last day of omkara singh oberoi in this oberoi mansion……..
Prinku : Bhaiya……what are u saying ?? U want 2 say that u will leave this house……
Omkara : Yes……prinku….am leaving this house…..
Dadi : What happened 2 u omkara?
Omkara : Don’t worry dadi……I can’t stay here any more….it doesn’t mean that I will not be leaving from u all…..
Pinky : Omkara…..why are u folding riddles……just tell me…beta…..what exactly troubling u…….And even I want 2 ask u how u arranges money within few hrs……..
Rudra : I know om…….certainly there is a prblm……No secrets among brothers……pls…..om…..
{Omkara smiles with wet eyes and touches on rudra’s shoulders…….and stares him}
Prinku : Bhaiya……I can’t suggest any solution since am younger than u…..But bhaiya…… I want ur care…..how can u leave ur choti behan……{literally cries}
Omkara : Prinku….be strong…{omkara wipe out her tears}
{Mean while shivaay gets a phone call from malika and when the call was finished he stared omkara with teary eyes ……}
Shivaay : Now….what he will say, when he himself has been sold ??
Dadi : Billu……
Shivaay : Om…….whatever u did 4 the family……it’s……unbelievable…..bhai…… U sold ur art hub….ur passion …….
Prinku : What!!!!!
Rudra : Om!!!!
Pinky : I know u have changed…..but I didn’t expect that u will take this step…….beta……
Shivaay : U know what om…..u are behaving so adamant…..right now……It’s not too late…. I will talk 2 raanas and I will return the amt. and will gain ur art hub back……
Omkara : Shivaay…….Pls….try 2 understand…….its my persistence 2 fight alone……And @ any cost I can’t lose this battle…..shivaay……..
“But I have lost my son “ {All are shocked to see jhanvi behind them]
Omkara : Mom!!!! Why did u came here….u need rest…..
Jhanvi : How can I take rest when my son is leaving me…… By killing ur heart, how long u will stay as a stone, how long u will fight alone beta?{emotional}
Omkara : I will fight until I find victory…..mom…….
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!!! Omkara…..u have started talking big matters which am not able to understands…….Earlier u used 2 show ur concern and care towards me …..But now u are cheating ur own heart as well as ur choti maa also…..
Omkara : Choti maa!!!
Pinky : I never find u as a third person omkara…..like shivaay u are also my son only….But seems u didn’t find me @ the place of jethaniji…..because am ur choti maa….not ur maa….won’t u ?
Omkara : Why are u thinking so, choti maa……I always love u and I admire u for ur boldness and straightforwardness……U show me those care @ my lonliness, even I think shivaay missed it from u……
Pinky : If u care these much of ur choti maa, then why u are telling that u will leave this house ?
Dadi : I trust u more than my son……U are my hope…..omkara…..And u will go away by breaking my trust…..beta???
Omkara : I have decided it…….dadi…..pls let me go……
Shivaay : So…..u will leave ur bhai…..now u don’t need the great wall of shivaay singh oberoi, won’t u ??
Omkara : It’s my struggle and I have 2 move forward….Once I win the challenge certainly I will return here…..not as omkara singh oberoi, but as omkara…..only……
Jhanvi : And if u will fail 2 win…then what will u do, my son ?
Omkara : Then think that u have lost ur son, omkara…….
Jhanvi : Om!!!! How can u talk like these……The om which I knows as the soft caring man, who is sensitive as well as emotional …….how can he say this 2 his mom……
Omkara : Am sorry mom…but when u was burning in fire, I burnt my heart also……Now all I knows is the passion of struggle only…….This change is giving me immense pain…..But I have changed this pain as the weapon for my battle…..only……I will not cry because my tears will stay as flames in myself as all I want is to win and show mr. oberoi that how much he had hurt his beloved ones……I am alone, but I will not limit myself to darkness because I want to make my darkness as my courage…..I will not take drugs to intoxicate myself by running from prblms because I want to recollect all the all those pains which mr.oberoi rewarded 2 my beloved ones and me @ every moment of my life……I will kill him with pain as he made each and every one of my family 2 suffer in extreme pain only……..It’s my challenge……
{All are shocked 2 see the terrific omkara …..Every one were speechless ….After a while, omkara stared every one and fold his hands} Pls…..I have 2 leave……
Jhanvi : Beta….om…..
Omkara : Mom!!! {om rushed 2 her and hugs her…..both of them burst into tears}
Shivaay : Om….my bhai…….Today ……I just want 2 say that…..my bhai is the world’s best man……..And am feeling proud 2 say that omkara is my brother……{emotional]
Rudra : Om…….I can’t grow up like u…..but I will really miss u…..om……I will miss u…..{emotional}
Prinku : Om bhaiya…..In this tough phase, u have 2 travel alone….But as u used 2 say prinku should be like a pahalwan ….today am telling u that u should be like a pahalwan….U should be strong……bhaiya……{emotional}
{Omkara released himself from jhanvi’s hug and extended his hands towards shivruprinku….. they rushed and hugged om……}
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!!! Jethaniji…….we are really luckys 2 have these kind of caring and lovable children…… [emotional]
Jhanvi : Yes…..pinky…….Our children have grown up….they know better than us 2 keep the value of relationships…….[emotional]
Dadi : I wish these bond should stay forever……{dadi prays 2 god and cries]
{Shivruprinku and om release themselves from hug….}
Rudra : Om……bhaiya, prinku I want 2 make this as oberoi moment…….{emotional}
{Shivaay and Omkara stare each other’e eyes and smiles with wet eyes}
Omkara : I want mom, choti maa, dadi, prinku everyone in this moment….I am going 2 miss it defienitely…….{emotional}
Shivaay : Om……am with u……whenever u will 2 talk just make a call and I will be there…..
Omkara : I know…shivaay…….
Rudra : Bhaiya…..shall we…….
Shivaay : Yeah……
{All extend their hands and say it @ a time…..”One for all and All for one”}
Omkara : Now…I have 2…….
Pinky : Omkara……u will not say that ur choti maa is sweet……{pinky burst into tears}
Omkara : Choti maa….{omkara places his hand on her cheek and smiles with wet eyes} U are so sweet …….I will miss u……
Pinky : I miss u too…..beta……..
Dadi : Beta…..believe in urself……u will win….
Omkara : thanks dadi…..[omkara touches her feet and dadi blesses om}
{Omkara turns 2 leave…..Soon shivru takes his name……he turns behind and stares them….. shivruprinku signs +ve singn and tell “all the best” Omkara smiles @ them and leaves….”Lafzon kaa yeh rishta” plays…..}
Scene – 15 [@ Art hub]
{Ishana arrives art hub and gets shocked 2 see that some one is destroying arthub with a bull dozer….She rushed and asked the workers 2 stop it}
Worker : We can’t stop it madam….its an order form sidharth raana ji
Ishana : Sidharth raana…..
Worker : Yes…..he has bought this plot and has planned 2 launch his factory here…..
Ishana : How is it possible……This is omkara singh oberoi’s land
Worker : This was omkara sir’s land….But yesterday he sold this land and art hub 2 raana saab…..
Ishana : What!!!!
{Ishana feels that her heart has been broken…….She finds that the workers were throwing omkara’s paintings and statues on soil…..She takes one of the painting from them……Her hands got shivered ……She placed it with her chest and burst into tears….}
Scene- 16 { Through streets}
{With an unbelievable broken heart ishana started driving her car through the streets….Omkara’s eyes were revolving her mind …..She recollected the moments which she spend with him……By engaging herself into thoughts, almost she had lost focus on driving…..She lost the control over her car and har car gets hit 2 a person who was wandering through the streets…..She stopped the car with a sudden brake and rushed near him…..She was shocked 2 see him severely injured as it was none other than omkara…… She scremead……”Omkara….” But there was no response……She placed his head on her lap and finds that he has fall unconscious……With the help of some people she managed 2 lie down in her car and she take him 2 the hospital}
Scene – 17 [ @ Hospital]
{Omkara’s leg got fractured and his forehead was wounded…..Ishana sits beside his bed and stares him……Tears were continuously falling from her eyes only…..After some time, omkara slowly get back 2 his consciousness by opening his eyes slowly…..He finds ishana’s teary eyes near him….he tries 2 get up, but ishana placed her hand behind his head and managed 2 lean his head gently by placing a pillow on his back……}
Ishana : Am sorry……omkara……I intentionally didn’t hit u……I have almost lost the balance of the car and it just…….{literally cries} {mean while omkara tries 2 raise his leg, but he finds that it was not moving and he feels extreme pain….
Omkara : Ah!!! [screams in pain]
Ishana : Omkara…..It’s much paining, isn’t it ?
Omkara ; When my life itself is rewarding me pain per day….then I think I am a habitat of pain…..
Ishana : Are u feeling fine now?
Omkara : Better…..{he pretends a fake smile}
Ishana : Omkara……I don’t know what’s undergoing in ur life….But when I find ur art hub has been destroyed…….
Omkara : {interrupts} So u went there…….
Ishana : Yes….What I saw there were nothing, just broken paintings and statues only…….
Omkara : They are meant 2 be broken because now I have broken myself…..Ishana…….
Ishana : I felt like my heart is been broken because I can see ur heart in ur art……Omkara…..
Omkara : My way is filled with stones and am victim of pain……I am fighting myself to kill all pains as some times pain makes me weak……
Ishana : Pain sounds pain…..U can’t get away from pain…..But if the way is filled with stones, then u should know 2 break it…….also……
Omkara : My heart has changed 2 stone and now it will not beat, it will resist only……..
Ishana : If ur heart is stone then my heart is nothing, a broken piece only……..Am inspired with ur soul and heart which I find in ur art and now when my inspiration has become stone then how can I stay with a heart , omkara??? {emotional}
Omkara : Ishana!!!!
PRECAP : LIFE’S TURNS ARE UNPREDICTABLE……
18 Comments
So emotional
Thanks shabnam
It was sooooo emotional one Yar ????? I was literally crying when om was leaving the house …. The sceans u wrote were extremely heart touching ….. I really loved Pinky and her Care toward om and jhanvi ….. It really felt awesome one to read it out….
Super… Superb superb ???….
And at last the emotions of ishana towards om and his art was awesome one.. it was really heart touching scean.??
Post next one soon…..???
Thanks and sorry 4 making u cry baby….and 2 post next one is bit difficult right now….as am not getting time…..But will try 2 post next one by tmrw itself
It is like a heart breaking… So emotional and pain ful state of omkara… Waiting for the next update…
Thanks and sorry 4 heart break
Yaar…i feel lyk crying new…om ????..o god renima di dis was fab….waiting 4 nxt…
Thanks a lot….yashu….and sorry for making u cry…..and next part is been updated and its too short as am not getting time yaar…..pls check it yaar…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-part-7-renima/
Hey, sorry dear for late. Actually i was busy in my work and today only got your message. Today completed reading all the parts. All were awesome dear. And today’s one is very imotional. Keep writing and again sorry dear
Thanks pari……and don’t feel sorry as am also working i can understand it’s really difficult for 2 read and comment as time shortage is a big issue….and i have updated next one also…..but it’s 2 short as now i have 2 complete some urgent office work as soon as possible…..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-part-7-renima/
pls check it when u get time
Yes … Life is unpredictable ..and uncertain too … Renima… ???
Thanks a lot ridhima
emotional one….
superb update…
i just love pinky in ur ff…
Thanks mrunal….actually in ib they have spoiled pinky’s character by making typical saasu maa…..initially in ib she was not like that….and though her tongue slips, she can never thought 2 harm any one from heart intentionally……That’s the real pinky and in my ff i love 2 portray pinky in the same way only……
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-part-7-renima/
pls check this part also…..and it’s quite short as i didn’t get time yaar
very emotional… Amazing… Waiting for the next update…
Thanks ankita…..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-part-7-renima/
pls check it dear
Wow this part is so emotional di??????????om and the family ????????you are outstanding this part is out of the world di???
Thanks a lot chandini and sorry for making u cry….any ways next one is uploaded….pls check it…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-part-7-renima/