Ishkara – Pyaar ya Nafrat – Suggestions needed
Hi guys, before continuing with the story further, I really want you all to answer a few questions honestly, please this is really important for me to continue with the ff. Don’t feel that I would feel bad, its not like that and moreover you all will help me in making my story better.
Is Ishkara’s love story going too fast for you all?
Do you like Anika’s, Ishana’s POV?
If Tej’s truth come out, should Shivaay help him to come out of this or get him punished?
I don’t show much of Rumya, should I add Rumya scenes?
If Anishveer bring truth out, would it be wrong?
Can I make Gauri the cupid for Ishkara’s story? (Please answer this one)
Should Anishveer give Tej a chance?
And, now the most important of all,
Are you guys really liking my story? (Please be honest)
So please share your views and then I would further develop the story based on the answers I get to my questions. Please feel free to give any other suggestions if you have any in mind.
Till then, keep smiling.
Bye.
23 Comments
Not at all absolutely correct pace
Yup povs are good
Get hum punished
Ur wish for that ?
As u think suits u
Not initially until he is guilty
Yes loving it so much ?
thanks a lot Sairan and I’ll def think about it
-I don’t think their love story going too fast
-Their pov’s are good
-No shivay should not help tej.he must be punished
-Add rumya scene also
-No it won’t be wrong they all doing this for their parents
-It’s ur choice
-No
-Yes I loved it to the core ??????
thanks for this love Niriha
There are 8 questions.. I’ll answer one by one..
1)it is going on right way only..
2)I loved AnIsh POV.. You portrayed well..
3)I don’t have answer for this..but tej need to be punished..
4)you can add them if there is any need for their role..
5)the truth must be out.. it will not be wrong if they bring the truth out.. their parents are murdered.. they have the rights..
6) Gauri as cupid not a problem..but don’t create misunderstanding between ishkara..
7)can but only if tej repents for his deed.. sometimes, forgiveness will be the greatest punishment for someone..
8)I don’t like your story at all..I love it very very very much..don’t dare to stop it..
Thanks a lot dear and I promise to keep up to the mark
I want u to enter gauri pls so it will be a bit mazza i would love to see the love triangle of gauri om and ishana
Sure, i’ll add Gauri
plz dont discontinue
I understand insecurity but never underestimate ur talent
yer,Tej should be punished but I dont think Shi. will help as he’s his badepapa whom he loves more than his parents
yes Anika’s & Ishana’s pov is needed & also some RuMya scenes
no u should brin AniShVeer truth out after reavelation
yes u may make gauri cupid as she is a sweet girl
update soon dear
Thanks a ton and I’ll work on it
The story is on track..
I like Anish pov..
Get tej punished for his deeds..
plz add more rumya scenes…
No it won’t be worng…
About gauri as per ur wish…
I don’t think so..
liking ur story ye bhi koi puchhne ki baat hai.. loving it..
Eagerly waiting for the next update.. plz post soon..
thank you so much Ankita and I will def work on your points
It is awesome dear… You are doing well.. Add guari but don’t separate ishkara..
Mujhe nahi lagtha IshKara story fast jaa rahi Hai.
I like anika ishana’s pove
tej get punished
Of course add RuMya scenes.i miss them a lot
it’s wrong
Don’t Make gauri character a vilan and a possesive lover.don’t create misunderstanding between IshKara
Agar tej ko apni galthi guilty hai tho ek chance dena chaahiye
What a question yaar of course I like your story.it’s AMAZING BEAUTIFULL SUPERB
Thanks UF for support and I will try my best to entertain you all
No no..it’s all going great..nothing fast
thns dear
Make gauri as cupid but don’t create misunderstanding between ishkara n I’m in love with ur ff update soon
thanks a lot
Gauri as Cupid..”yesss
Add rumya scenes
I like your POV
Story isn’t fast
thanks Neha
No it’s going smoothly n in correct pace.
Yes,I do like.
Yes,he should be punished.
Yes,plz do so.
Yes,they should bring it out as their parents were murdered.
As per your wish.
Maybe but not before he feels guilty.
I really like it.
thanks Madhuani