ISHQ HUA (episode-12)
WARNING- will be shifting between scenes so whenever u encounter @ it will indicate that scene has been shifted..
At few points Dialogues started in one scene will be completed in other.. hope u won’t get confused..
If some kind of confusion gets in your head then I will post the episode again..
So do tell me if any issue gets raised!
Plus I have used a song named HUM TUM so for those who don’t understand hindi… I have provided meaning… but the lines that will be repeated for them have attached meaning just once… not again and again…
About the sweet surprise I mentioned… guys it’s a rain sequence..
I hope u all will like it..
So enjoy!!
*****in car*****
Priyanka picked Karan from his house for the party..
Priyanka: Karan, so who there in your family..
Karan: maa and papa and me..
Priyanka: u have a sister also I guess..
Karan (looks outside the window): she is no more..
Priyanka: I am so sorry..
Karan: it’s fine..
Suddenly car breaks down… priyanka and Karan get out of the car to check..
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Shivay and anika are also on their way to home… suddenly anika shouts
“stop the car”
Shivay: why??
Anika: I said stop the car..
Shivay: but…why..
Anika: focus on the weather..
Shivay: what?
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Om: baarish (rain)
He smiles and says..
Lo aaj Phir Ronay Laga hai Asmaan,
Ban ke Barish ..
Shayad Aaj us ko Phir
Ehsas Hua Hai Meri Tanhai ka!
He takes water droplets in his hand and closes his fist tightly..(like he did in original IB)
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Somya(screams): aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa….this is not face-wash.. this is
Rudra: washing powder nirma.. nirma..
Somya turns to look at him..
Somya: u mixed washing powder in my face-wash.. Rudra have u lost it??
Rudra(laughs): nirma has many many many good qualities..
Somya: what?
Rudra: haven’t you heard?? Dudh si safedi..nirma se aaye.. sada hua chehra bhi sundar bann jaye..(it was an advertisement of a washing powder.. I just changed the last line)
Somya(shouting): you are..
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Anika: are you calling me mad??
Shivay: any doubt?
Anika: fine I am crazy.. It’s good at times to be crazy… we live happily, what is there in life without some pagalpan(craziness)??
Shivay: who wishes to dance in rain in the middle of a road that too at night??
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Om: I wish to dance with you again in the rain on the road.. Ugly things turn beautiful with you.. and without you beautiful things turn..
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Priyanka: horrible..
Karan: o god! We are stuck.. This rain and car jammed.. damm!
Well after some minutes finally the engine starts to work..
Karan goes to priyanka’s side and opens door for her..
When priyanka comes to sit in the car.. she slips and in order to save her from falling karan tries to hold her but since the side of the road was muddy so due to rain he also slipped.. and both of them fell backwards.. away from the raod..
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Here anika runs outside since she saw some kids dancing on the road…
Anika too joins them in dance…
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Somya tries to open her eyes when the surf gets into her eyes…
She screams due to the irritation..
Somya: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Priyanka and Karan: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
They slip down the road… they keep slipping towards the jungle…
When both of them land up in a pond….
Priyanka stops shouting and realizes that it’s just a small pond… but karan was nowhere to be seen…
Priyanka starts searching him here and there…
When suddenly Karan comes out of water… with some banana leaves over his head… and few leaves in his mouth…
Priyanka looks at him… and starts laughing holding her stomach…
Karan spits the leaves from his mouth…
Karan: are you ever going to stop?
Priyanka (trying to control): you look so funny…
(And she again starts laughing)
Karan: funny?? Let me show you what fun is…
He tries to move towards priyanka… and priyanka tries to go back but due to muddy base of the pond she loses her control and falls on Karan…
**** saanson ko saanson mein dhalne do zara((let the breaths mould into breaths (of each other)))****
Karan takes a step back and puts his hand on priyanka’s waist…
**** dheemi si dhadkan ko badhne do zara((let the slow heartbeat rise)))****
Priyanka stands straight and removes the banana leaves from his head… priyanka was standing very close to Karan…both were looking at each other… straight into the eyes…
Karan was able to feel priyanka’s body… she was all wet… his hands on her waist were giving her shivers…while her hands on his chest were doing the same…
The hunger of love… various desires… Started to rise…and that was visible in Karan’s eyes… his eyes were showing how difficult it was for him to bear this little gap between them….
And the closeness between their faces was becoming more and more irresistible…
**** lamhon ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaayen((it’s the plea of moments that we come together.. ))****
Water droplets on priyanka’s face were making her look more beautiful…
both of them close their eyes..
Karan holds priyanka’s waist little tighter by one hand and pulls her towards him… and priyanka also tightens her grip on his shirt and does not resist…
Karan runs his index finger on from priyanka’s forehead to her neck… and places both hands on her waist… and then his forehead touches priyanka’s forehead…
****hum.. hum tum..(( we, you n me))****
Both stand still with foreheads meeting and closed eyes and lost into each other’s embrace….
**** tum.. hum tum..(( you, you n me..))****
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Looking at somya shouting… Rudra gets scared…
Rudra (in mind): ohh god… her eyes are burning, what if she becomes blind… she will get me arrested…
Rudra quickly takes some water in his hand…
Rudra: somya let me wash your eyes…
Somya: no I don’t trust you… I will help myself… just go…
Rudra (trying to hold her hand): somya I said na let me do this….
Somya (jerks his hand): just go…
Rudra uses his power and puts both her hands behind her back and hold them tightly with his left hand… and takes some water in his right hand and sprinkles in her eyes…
Somya tries to resist more… and Rudra pushes her towards the wall (still holding her hands) and this causes Rudra to stand closer to somya…
Rudra sees tear coming from somya’s eyes… and they were red…
Rudra felt bad for harming her… he comes even more close to somya and blows air into her eyes to sooth the pain…
Somya once again tries to free herself and hand falls on shower tap and shower gets started…
But Rudra tightens his hold on somya’s hand…
Somya looks up at Rudra with anger… while Rudra looks down at somya with guilt (height issues guys)
****aankhon mein humko utarne do zara(let me descend into (your) eyes,)****
Both share an eye-lock filled with anger and guilt… Rudra turns off the shower…
Takes the towel and wipes the water off somya’s face but without breaking their eye-lock… slowly… then he dries her hair with the towel… even then Rudra and somya didn’t break their moment…
Rudra eyes were saying it loudly that somya was that girl with whom he can share his entire life… whose pain was hurting him… whose tears were making him cry….
****baahon mein humko pighalne do zara(let me melt in (your) arms,)****
Rudra traces somya’s hand from her fingers to her neck.. With his left on and holds her neck gently to pull her closer…Somya too lost herself in the moment…
Somya keeps her hands on Rudra’s biceps…
****lamhon ki guzarish hai ye paas aa jaayen****
Rudra gently pulls somya by her neck and leans his forehead against hers and somya closes her eyes… Rudra too closes his eyes and a tear from his eyes falls on somya’s face… and he puts his hand on somya’s waist…
****hum.. hum tum..****
Suddenly Rudra speaks up…
Rudra: sorry…
Both kept standing there with foreheads touched and wrapped into each other’s arms….
Both were breathing at an increased speed… their heart was not beating at normal pace…
****tum.. hum tum..****
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Here anika excitedly jumps out of the car… and runs towards the kids who were dancing in the rain… anika joins them and starts dancing like some crazy little girl…
Shivay looks at her from the car… and he gets arrested by her beauty… he has never seen someone enjoying rain this much…he was amused by the fact that the girl who always says bitter things to him can be so playful… so beautiful…
And shivay didn’t even realized when we came out into the rain and started to walk towards anika…
**** salvatein kahin karwatein* kahin phail jaaye kaajal bhi tera(somewhere be creases, somewhere be changing sides the kohl of eyes be spread too..) ****
Shivay keeps looking at anika… she was a beauty to watch… her laugh… her innocent face… everything was beautiful…
****nazron mein ho guzarta hua khwabon ka koi kafila(let there be a caravan of dreams passing in the eyes)****
While dancing anika collides with shivay… anika’s back with shivay’s chest….
Shivay keeps his hands on anika’s stomach… both of them stand still for a while…
Anika turns her face to look at shivay who was already staring at her…
****jismon ko ruhon ko jalne do zara(let the bodies and souls burn for now,)****
Shivay takes anika’s hand in his hands… turns her so that she can face him… anika breaks the staring game and looks down… shivay placing his index finger on her chin lifts her face up…
Anika looks into shivay’s eyes…
Shivay’s eyes were full of passion… full of desire… desire to feel her… desire to make her his… his eyes clearly showed that he was losing his control…
****sharmohaya* ko machalne do zara(let the shyness sulk a little,)****
Shivay pulls anika closer… and places both his hands on her shoulders…
Anika feels a shiver…
In response to this pull her lips get parted… making it more difficult for shivay to have a grip on his emotions…
**** lamhon ki guzarish hai Yeh paas aa jaayen****
Suddenly kids start to run and one of them strikes with anika and this causes the gap between anika and shivay to reduce further… and
Anika’s forehead touches shivay’s forehead…
**** hum.. hum tum..****
Shivay moves his hands from anika’s shoulder to her back and holds her tightly by waist
Anika closes her eyes due to the shock waves that she felt…and places her hands on shivay’s chest…
Then he too closes his eyes…
**** tum.. hum tum..****
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**flashback**
Om and ishana were walking on the road as om wanted to drop her to NGO office…
When it starts to rain… om tries to run but ishana holds his hand…
Om: what??
Ishana: where are u going?
Om: not me, we… it’s raining, I don’t want any of us to catch cold…let’s go
Ishana: arre, nothing will happen… come… let’s dance…
Om: dance?? In rain…
Ishana: yes… come na… it’s fun… I love rain… I always dance in rain with my didi…
Om: but…
Ishana: what but?
Om: I don’t know even d of dance…
Ishana (laughs): so what?? Haven’t u heard of abcd?
Om: u mean alphabets?
Ishana: no, I mean Any Body Can Dance…
Ishana holds om’s hands and teaches him few steps…
And moments later…om starts dancing on his own… withput her help… and gets lost in the rain…
Ishana steps back and looks and om and smiles…
Om stops after few minutes and notices ishana looking at him and smiling..
Suddenly it began to thunder and ishana got scared…
She runs and hugs Om with all her strength…
**** chhoo lo badan magar is tarah jaise sureela saaz ho
(touch the body, but touch it as if it be a musical instrument (very gently))****
Om hesitates to touch her… they have never been so close… but ishana’s clutch was so tight that even in such a cold weather om was able to feel her body warmth…
Om keeps his hands on her back so as to console her….
His touch raised many thunders inside her body… her heart was pounding…
Both close their eyes and feel their hug… both were able to completely feel each other’s warmth…
Ishana comes back to her senses.. and tries to walk away… but om holds her hand and pulls her back…
**** andhere chhupe tere zulf mein kholo ke raat azaad ho
(darknesses are hidden in your hair, open them so that the night is free)****
Her head lands on his chest…. And her hairs cover om’s face…
Om slowly removes her hair from his face and moves them on one side of her neck…
Ishana looks up at om.. ishana was about to say something but om keeps his index finger on her lips and asks her to be quiet…
**** aanchal* ko seene se dhalne do zara shabnam ki boondein phisalne do zara
(let the shawl on your body slide from your chest, let the dew drops glide (on your body)****
He slowly moves his finger from her lips down towards her chin and then traces her neckline and finally holds her by her hairs and pulls her closer….
Ishana comes on her toes due to this sudden pull…
**** lamho ki guzarish hai Yeh paas aa jaayen****
Both look into each other’s eyes… om’s eyes were showing that their friendship wasn’t just friendship… it was much more… more than just attraction… it was love… it was passion… he wanted to make her his… he wanted her to be his lover… to be his life…
Om pulls ishana closer and bends so that their foreheads come into contact…
**** hum.. hum tum..****
Both close their eyes… and feel the fire of love that was burning inside their hearts…
How desperate their hearts were to become one… both were trying to get a grip….
**** tum.. hum tum..****
And the episode ends on screen divided into 4 parts..
Showing the 4 couples standing in rain…in each other’s arms and foreheads touched….
–hope u guys will like this episode—
–sorry for being late, actually was doubtful about how this episode is, since writing a romantic scene is difficult—
–sorry for mistakes, as I couldn’t review it… due to lack of time.. so really sorry.. kindly ignore the mistakes—
–love u all—
–thanks—
–by manu–
44 Comments
Awesome
Thank u shuklarashi 🙂
Hayyo Rabba!! What a sizzler! Kispe comment karoon aur kitnaa likhoon is the question. First, I LOVE that song. Everything about it. Second, Rudra and Soumya. There’s something about his innocence that always steals my heart. Your romantic Om is like Bond to me- has licence to kill. And ShivIka chemistry is like none other. So I am a goner after this episode. Thanks for writing such a beautiful one. And boy do I know how hard it is to write romantic scenes. Deciding what too far and what’s not far enough. Keeping dignity intact while igniting an aura of passion. You did a fab job. ?
Ohh thank u so much diyaa…
Even i love this song…
And yes, rudra is so cute… i really love the way he behaves…
And thank u for understanding..
Thank u… Thank u…
Ohh gosh….speechless..wat a tomance darling…..how romantic……loved it to the core……..u nailed ut yr it was……….mind blowing…….the scenes even made me blush ……..post soon eagerly waiting
Haha.. blush.. this word reminds me of shivay…
Thank u shivika.. 🙂
Fantastic…
Thank u aisha 🙂
It was awesome..no need for any review..so romantic..and thank you for finally posting it !!!
But loved that you are simultaneously concentrating on each love story ..fabulous ..rainy season is not that romantic I think but reading such stories force me to think about existence of love ..great !!!n please post soon..
Thank u so much mansi…
Haha… actually rains lead to romance in serials and movies… Even i am not sure if it happens in real 😛
Awesome
Thank u debdutta 🙂
Nice dear
Thank u vincy 🙂
lovelyy… plz update soon dr
Thank u lisaaa..
And i will try 😛
Awesome epi….
Thank u lilly 🙂
Awesome….
Thank u shivika 🙂
Simply awesome
Thank u nikitajai 🙂
Manu it was great !!
Thank u so much vaishali 🙂
Awesome.
Thank u shalini 🙂
OMG….. :0 its so romantic….loved it totally….its awesome……. 🙂
Thank u so much bhavana 🙂
wow! amazing. so romantic! i’m simply speechless right now. 🙂
thank u so much samm 🙂
Loved it…
thank u so much yashu 🙂
It was… cuteness overloaded! I really loved how in the end all had there foreheads touching. You did a fantabulously amazingly awesome job manu! Waiting for the next 🙂 !
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Awestruck!
thank u so much sweetheart :*
Awesome romantic amazing episode
thank you so much sso…:D
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Omg…
Fantastic
Thank you so much tamanna :* :*
Lovely update…
thank you so much ankita 🙂
khidkitod episode yaar..
loved it to the core…
specially the rain sequence and song..
wow…
thank you so very much mrunal…
ty 🙂
Loved the episode manu.
thanks kriti 🙂