Fan Fiction

ISHQBAAAZ OS COMPETITION (Entry 1)

Sometimes u just need to follow the paths God has shown to u…
Kai baar hamein bas chalna padata hai zukna padta hai hamari kismat ke aage…
Wahi karna padta hai hi hum nahi karna chahte… aur yahi cheez kabhi kabhi hamare zindagi ki sabse dardbhari yaad ban jaati hai…’ a man was sitting in a corner of his lavish the most beautiful room but for now it was just a shelter for him with 4 walls n one roof … his mind was in deep these thoughts n his heart was screaming only one name ANIKA …

Yes he was shivay the great wall of SSO who was now fall down after throwing HIS ANIKA out of OM….
Crying continually cursing his fate for separation between two pure souls..

While on the poolside two brothers were sitting being very sad n cursing themselves..
O – Rudy what happened yaar ye sab kya hogaya..
R – (while crying ) yes o we can’t do anything now everything is shattered now…
O – I can’t see shivay n bhabhi in such conditions
R – (while getting angry )bhaiya I’ll never forgive choti maa for this beacause of her my superman and superwoman are far now..
O – yes rudy zindagi ….. zindagi rudi ye aise khel khelti hai ki sab badal jata hai… ye haton se ret jaisi fisaltihi jaati hai or hum kuch nai kar sakte. ..
R – bhabhi ki kasam ki vajah se main bandha hua hoon agar ye kasam na hoti to main bhaiya ko sab bata deta…

Voice – konsa sach….
Suddenly omru turns around and get huge shock seeing their standing….
Omru at once ” SHIVAY ”
S – konsa such om rudra
omru – nothing bhaiya…
S- agar muze nai bataya to tumhe mera mara hua mu..
Om– chup bilkul chup aise sochna bhi mat..
Omru looked at each other sadly n say everything to shivaay..
shivay stumbles for sometime omru hold him
Fresh pairs of tears was making space in eyes of both of three brothers for whom they were each others life… omru were deep hurt to see shivaay in such condition..

S – main m..ain na..ja..yaj hun muzme us kamini ka khun hai…
By this he was terribly crying..
Om – nai shivaay tu hamare liye wahi shivaay hai hamara bada bhai. .
R – ha mere superman the grt wall of SSO
S – muze zyada bura is baat se lag raha hai ki mom.. mo..m ne aisa kiya mere saath tu jantahe om mai unki pooja karta tha mere liye wo bhagwan se bhi badgkar hai….. magar unhone kya kiya om unhone muzse meri zindagi meri ANIKA chin li..
While getting some conscious
S – omru common lets being anika back I have hurted her a lot man ..
And he gets up n ready to go..
O- shivaay it’s too late hum jayenge
R-haa bhaiya aur bhabhi ko pure respect ke saath vapis lekar aayenge..
S- magar..
Om- magar vagar kuch nai abhi chalo
R- haa bhaiya vaise bhi kal aapko phirse paraya dhan hona hai #fake crying# aaj ki raat to aapke is most handsome bhai ke saath bitao…
S- okay (while giving a pale smile)

Next morning they went to chandas house where anika was staying… shivay stood behind as he was becoming restless..
Omru knocked door and chanda opened it omru-bhabhi hai…
Chanda calling inside Anika…
Omru saw her coming ..
Pale face .. swallowed eyes due to continue crying… messed hair… lost eyes… a soulless body…
They both feel a deep hurt but as she saw both of them she came n hug them..
They too reciproted while whispering in her ear..’surprise bhabhi’ n they parted away…
N she saw him…
Not him she was seeing her life gain..
Her eyes started twinking again…
Her lips started smiling again..
Her heart started beating again..

And for him..
He was just breathing till he started living again…
As his reason to live was in front of his eyes..
His heartbeat started tunning again..
His face started glowing again…
In inside heart he found the solace for which he craved….
He was looking at her as 3-4 years child met his mother after craving for her…

As their eyes met they feel all the piece…
That was the meeting of two ocean’s…
They can feel the much comfort between them..
Slowly they started moving towards each other … but anika striked reality she moved back…
But held by omru they told her the night incident and lots of tears made ways from both of their eyes..
Shivaay just ran to her and get her into a bone crushing hug… she reciproted it with same passion… they let out their all pains all emotions all sorrows in each others arms they felt the best warmth in their embrace..
Anika was about to speak shivay kept his finger on her lips… ‘ no anika I just want to live the moment plz don’t talk’ they stood their silently…
After 5 min rudy spoke “haww bhaiya aap bhul rahe hai ki aapke samne ek chotasa baccha bhi khada hai jara sochiye uske chotese dil par kya asar hoga in sub ka (making puppy face)”
Shivom once- shut up rudra..
While om give car keys to shivay n both went in the car…
A- where r we going ..
S- u trust on me na (while looking at her eyes filled in innocence and pain )
A- more than myself..

S-then just keep quite paanika…
Kitni bakbak karti ho tum…

A- k then I’ll not talk u (with anger on her face she turns her face aside)

After 15 minutes driving they reach somewhere..
From where shivaay got down n open cars door for his ladylove..

While anika is still angry ..
S- accha baba sorry ..
No response…
S-plz
No…
S-plz
No..
Now it was it … he lifted him in bridal style while anika got in shock. .
A- billuji leave mi..
S- shivaay Singh oberoi kisi ko chodne ke liye nahi pakdata..
His sentence turn her chubby chicks in creamson red…
He put her down …
S- look their panika..
With annoyance she saw there…
It was the most beautiful view in front of her lush greenery with soothing cold breezes clouds making crowd in sky..
Its just amazing billuji… said anika
While she was admiring nature’s beauty he was admiring his ladyloves beauty..
Her innocent face.. Her curly silky hair whom with wind was playing … Her deep eyes in which he always found love for him…

Suddenly they felt wetness over there … raindrops were making their ways between air..
Anika saw this n started to going towards car as she knew billuji will never allow them both to get wet…
But suddenly she felt a tug on her wrist making her stop to go…she turned and get 4400 volt shock it was her billuji staring at her lovingly with a huge smile on face with kneeling down in front of her …..

S-anika I no I hurted u a lot I even don’t have rights to apologize I pointed ur character n I no it’s the worst thinng a girl feels but I promise u from onwards I’ll respect u more than I love u.. I’ll trust u… I’ll never feel u disrespected … in case if i need to oppose mom I’ll oppose her…
Will u trust me again anika will u be my paanika again will u marry me again…

He said all this with a pain an assurance in his voice while his tears mixed with raindrops falling over his face …
N anika she felt her world completed.. N said YES BILLUJI in one go..
He overjoyed n hugged her tightly for who anika too reciproted….
N they were enjoying the best moment in their life while making rain witness of there immense love…..
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A/N – This is my first attempting of writing so please do let me know what you feel about this in the comments section. Thanks for reading.
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