ISHQBAAAZ OS COMPETITION (Result time)

Hello guys! I’m sorry for the delay, I got caught up in Independence Day function and school. So here I am with the much awaited results. So first let me reveal the writers name and give the review.

Entry 1- Mrunal1

Review- It was good. The punctuations were really distracting. Also do take care of spelling errors.

Entry 2- Prajkta

Review-Well to be honest, there are only a few piece of work, where I’m unable to point out mistakes and this was definitely one of them. A flawless piece of work.

Entry 3- Riana

Review- 
– what I liked about the one shot– The best thing about the one shot was the title. I really liked the title and the story line was also good. 
-what I did not like– The punctuations were a real turn off. Please use proper punctuation. Also I did not understand when the point of view ended. If you are writing in narrator’s POV then please don’t change it. 
– Tips – try to write the dialogues in inverted commas. Also please describe it more with proper punctuation

Entry 4- Srindhi (Sent by Siddhi Thakur)
I guess she forgot to mention her username but this is the mail Id.

Review- To be very honest, the story line was good but the description wasn’t that good. Also punctuation were really not used properly.

Entry 5- Pui

Review- Well the story line was awesome. The chantomai Anika was amazing.
But please either write it in Third person’s POV or let it stay in a particular person’s POV. It can kind of really breaks the flow. Also mention when the POV ended. I was really confused.

Tip- Write the dialogues in inverted commas cause it gives much more feel like you are reading abook.

For example–
Shivaay- (Voice cracking) please don’t do this to me.

“Please don’t do this to me” Shivaay’s voice cracked.

Entry 6- Archiya

Review– it was nice. I enjoyed reading it. A different concept. Please describe a little more. It will turn out to be really good.

Entry 7- VHM

Review-OK! So what I liked about this one shot was Shivaay and Anika’s reunion. The concept was good. And I loved the fun element.

What I did not like is that you did not use proper punctuation. Punctuation marks are a real turn off if not used properly.

Tip- don’t write it like Anika’s POV instead write it like Anika thought because you want to just show a single thought.

Entry 8- Shraddha-DBO

Review- It was really nice. I enjoyed reading it. The description was beautiful. Just one thing, write it in one tense only. Somewhere it was present tense as well. So it’s better to write in one tense.

Entry 9- Rosewood

The concept was very motivational. It was nice. I don’t have much to say about it though.

Entry 10- Sairish

Review- Well, it was definitely the cutest one.

Tip- Take care of captilization and use proper punctuation.

Prize-

1st Prize— OK! So you’ll get shout outs for your work in two of my works.
Plus I had thought to review the first four chapters of your work.

2nd prize- Shout outs for your work in two of my posts. (I’ll be doing it in the article that I’ll post today) I’ll also review the first two chapters of your work.

3rd prize- Shout out for your work in two of my works.

So now time for results. Yeah! I’m so super excited and I hope you are too. Drum rolls please….

THE FIRST PRIZE GOES TO PUI. CONGRATS! YOU AND THE SECOND ONE HAS JUST GOT 8 POINTS IN DIFFRENCE. THAT WAS A CLOSE ONE.

THE SECOND PRIZE GOES TO PRAJKTA. CONGRATS! I PERSONALLY LIKED YOURS THE MOST. (SORRY OTHER PARTICIPANTS)

THE THIRD PRIZE GOES TO ROSEWOOD. CONGRATULATIONS! I REALLY LIKED YOURS AS WELL.

Well I’ll be doing the shout outs for the winners work in two of my one shots.
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Thanks everybody for participating. And thanks @aliza111 for helping me. It really means a lot. And to those who participated but did not win, please don’t get disheartened. But good luck for next time ??