Hello Readers
So I’m going to start a FF not really FF I have taken the story from kdrama. The story is totally different from the the track of isqbaaaz. I cannot call it really my FF but the characters and some parts are different from that kdrama.
CAST
Anika and Anshika – Anika and Anshika are twins. Anika lives in orphan whereas Anshika is adopted by the woman.
Shivaay – He is a great swimmer of his high school and know Anshika from 10 years.
Rudra- is described by his father is an idioic and problematic child. His father is the director of High School and his mother is a famous actress, he is known as the greatest liar and likes to pick fights and provoke his classmates but most didn’t know was that behind his smile, he was actually a struggling child with a painful life. He suffered a lot but everything changed when he met Anika and was always by her side, even when Tia decided to make her life hell.
Tia – She is very bad. She used to bully Anika. As she will be in negative role
More members will be added later
EPISODE 1
A small town in Haryana in Nuri High School.
Some girls are taking a girl with her eyes close singing Happy Birthday to you. The girl which is having birthday is tia and the girls closing her eyes are her friends.
Girls – surprise
They are holding Anika.
Anika- leave me
The put Anika dowm. And throw eggs, flour and special sauce on Anika.
Girls- your special cake is ready.
Tia- with shocked face. Hmm candels are missing. But thank you.
All in class but Anika is not there.
Tia to her friend
Hey what that sauce is
Suddenly Anika enters in her gym suit. All the children put there hand on nose. What disgusting smell.
Tia- whats that? Eel fish sauce? And laughs.
Teacher- class is over. Anika see me in my office.
At teachers office
Anika its not once only you are always in your gym suit.i gave you warning last time to. Is someone bothering you
Anika- no!
In orphan
Anika- Be in line all will get food.
Anika washing clothes and see one cloth is getting tear.
She goes to twinkle (one of the girls in orphan she is 12)
Twinkle whats happen tell me. Nothing di! No tell me she see at her stomach is very big wound. Who has done this?
Anika and twinkle at the neighbours home.
Anika- see what your child has done to her.
Neighbor- what do you want?
Anika- sorry from your child!
Neighbour- hell no!
Anika sits there at road and said im not going till your child apologise.
N- in anger calls her child and say say sorry, he say sorry and gone from there
Anika to twinkle. Hey! Twinkle don’t be afraid of anyone just say to me if anyone do this thing to you.
At Orphan she gets gift from Anshika
A t-shirt.
At delhi
Someone calling Anshika, Anshika
There is suitcase and with same t-shirt that Anika have.
Anshika- yah mom im ready. Mom whats this so much of things im going there only for 3 days.
Mom- take it you will need this.
Anshika- no im taking only few things she picks her suitcase and said to her mom. Mom I will be right back.
She meets her friends and they move to bus.
They are going to HAryan at that town only where Anika lives but Anshika don’t know.
There at the National swimming championship all are shouting shivaay!
And he is swimming.
All start cheering up and shivay won gold medal in his first national tournament.
Anshika is lisning the tournament in bus with headphone on. Her friend ask whats up?
Anshika- nothing!
They all reached Haryana.
There shivaay thinking seeing his gold medal
10 year before!
Shivaay as child and Anshika as child
Shivaay wearing medals
Anshika- Give me one.
Shivaay- no
Anshika- what
Shivayy- I promise you that I will give you mine First NAtiona gold medal.
Anshika- Its promise ok! Pinkki promise
Shivaay- yes!
Real time
He texted to Anshika- I have got gold medal now my promise is going to be fulfilled.
Anshika friend – hey! Eat this.
Anshika- no!
Just try it
No I said no!
At night
Anika call Tia at place near orphan
Tia- why did you call me here?
Anika- your uncle is orphan helper. Can I get help from him?
Tia- oh! Ok give me your phone im going to text him.
Anika- ohh my phone you didn’t have yours?
Tia- I forget it at my home
Anika- ok
She gives her phone to tia. Tia types the message to the boy- I love you! You are my crush
Anika- its done?
Tia- yeah!
Anika takes her phone and see the message the boy replied back.
Are you mad or something how could you im going to talk to teacher tomorrow.
Anika- what are you doing?
Tia- Do you think I will help ypu.
Anika- why are you doing this to me. You know when I see you first time I feel very sorry for you.
Tia- what are you saying and start pushing her.
Anika takes a wood and said stay away.
Tia say a cctv there and said to anika hit me!
Tia pushed her at back there where some wood that is gong to
fall on tia but Anika protects her.
Next day at school.
School discipline meeting.
Anika it is proved that you tried to hit Tia you have to apologize to tia.
If you not that you are going to kick out of school.
Anika- I think that I haven’t done anything wrong. Tia mother is going to slap ANika but people stops her.
Anika moves out.
Teacher here is your paper of leaving up school
Anika- can I attend your last class. So don’t thik that I am being kick out.
Teacher- ok
At class
Tia- why didn’t you say sorry to me? Girls take her back at curtains.
There she maded bad vedio of Anika
Anika RAns out of school.
She leaves her batch out there only.
Precap- Anika jumps at River.
hope you like it
25 Comments
Interesting… Waiting for the next update…
thank you
It was extremely confusing though the story wasnt bad. Try to structure it properly and show the dialouges in “quotations”. You have a lot of scope for improvement.
ya i know next episode will going to be alright
Unable to understand anything..Sorry..
It seems out of the box types
Me to sorry I’m too confused as but next part is going to be better?
Awesome…plzzz update nxt part asap…
Thank you and soon
Nice one dear.. Plz continue..
Thank you and it is going to be continue
Nice. Hope you to update soon and detailed one next time
Thx and yes next one will be better
And plz don’t confuse Shivaay between Anika and Anshika..
but story is like this
But… ????
It is seriously very confusinggggg! I dont understand whats going onnnnnnn! You have a lot to learn. Read other fan clubs and learn from them. Example: “Road to Redeemption” and “Serendipity” by Diyaa. They are awesome! Learn from them. Specially serendipity. Infact new one is gonna start “Expression Unfettered” (also by diya). Read and learn. And there is also a writer called Dreamer whose current ff is named “Lies Bring them Closer”. You should really read them and Learn.
Thanx i also know its confusing but next one is okay
i think it is a copy of who are you school 2015
Yeah
Dear it was confusing… Story was gud
Thx
Hey… is this based on the Korean drama “who are you school-2015” ???
yes i mentioned it up
Interesting
I think it is who are you school 2015