Ishqbaaz – Duniya palat gayi – Epi 1
So after reading all your comments, I think you all are interested in seeing our lovely couples in reverse roles. But before that I need your help, can you all please suggest a nick name for Anika, like Shivaay has Billu, you know naa so that Shivaay can irritate her. Also please share your views via comments. So here is the first part for all of you.
Oberoi Mansion,
Anika was busy on a call and Ishana was busy in her dance practice when they hear Soumya calling for them, they get worried for her as she was shouting like hell, they immediately run to her room,
Anika: Soumya, what happened, are you ok?
Ishana: Say something duffer, why were you shouting like this?
Soumya: Di, Ishu, I have a very big problem.
Anika: Problem, tell me, I’ll solve it in minutes.
Soumya goes and opens her wardrobe and picks out two dresses, Anisha look at each other in confusion, Soumya shows them the dresses and stands in front of them,
Ishana: Duffer, why have you brought these dresses?
Soumya: This is only my problem.
Anika: What do you mean?
Soumya: I am getting confused as to which dress I should wear, you know I am college’s most popular girl, I have to look the best but I am unable to decide, red or black?
Anisha look at each other with “Nothing-can-happen-of-her” look.
Anika: So you were shouting for this, and I thought…
Soumya: What did you think?
Ishana: Are you out of you mind, I thought something major happened, and you are busy with such stupid things.
Soumya: Oh please, Ishu, this is not at all stupid and anyways how would you know, you are so boring.
Ishana: I am not at all boring, ok.
Soumya: whatever.
Anika: Ok, stop it both of you, Soumya wear that black one, you’ll look great.
Soumya: Thanks Di (and she hugs Anika tightly)
Just then they hear Tej and Jhanvi shouting at each other, they immediately come down to the living room,
Tej: How many times will I have to tell you to leave me alone in peace, why don’t you understand, I don’t want you in my life, don’t you get it?
Ishana shouts at the top of her voice, Ishana: MR. OBEROI, how dare you talk to my mom like that?
Tej: I was thinking that only, how come you didn’t come to defend your mother, now again your mother-daughter drama will start.
Dadi: Tej, what are you saying?
Tej: Truth only maa.
Ishana: Truth, the word doesn’t suit you, a man who only knows to ill-treat his wife.
Jhanvi: Ishana, he is your father.
Ishana: Please mom, I have already made it clear, he is not my father.
Anika: Ishu, what are you saying.
Tej: Leave it Anika, now anyways there is no use talking because whatever I say these two will never understand (he said looking at Ishu and Jhanvi and leaves from there)
Ishana ran to Jhanvi,
Ishana: Mom, are you ok? (Jhanvi nods, Ishana turns to Pinky) Choti maa, please take mom to her room. (Pinky leaves with Jhanvi, Shakti and Dadi also leave)
Ishana starts to move,
Anika: Ishu, where are you going?
Ishana: Somewhere, where I can get some mental peace.
Anika tried to stop her but Ishana left before that.
Anika: Soumya, go to your college, I have to go for a meeting.
Soumya: But Ishu…
Anika: Don’t worry, she’ll be fine. See you for dinner. (She patted Soumya’s cheek and smiled)
Soumya nods and leaves.
Anika (thinking): When will we get a day without fights?
Anika was standing there staring at the empty hall, from the past 15 years she had been witnessing fights in this place, her Bade papa shouted and blamed her badi maa, ishu shouting back at him, Soumya being worried, Dadi getting disheartened, and she standing there consoling her younger baby sister. She had failed in all attempts to stop all this but still tried her level best.
Ishana was driving, the morning incident still fresh in her mind, she had been seeing all this from the past 15 years, and till date nothing had changed, her father shouted at her mother, her mother cried and she could do nothing but shout back at him, all these years they had been doing the same thing.
Anika was driving when suddenly the car stopped, she came out and looked at the punctured tire,
Anika: Oh God, this Khanna, is such useless, I have told him 100 times to check the cars but he is so irresponsible, now I have to fire him only.
As she was cursing Khanna, a ball came and hit her wind screen, Anika was shocked and moves away,
Shivaay: I am really sorry
Anika turned around to see a man holding a cricket bat, now her anger doubled,
Anika: Idiot, don’t you have any sense, who plays cricket like this on the road and now you have damaged my car also, such a cheap.
Shivaay: Excuse me, first of all, this is gali cricket (Anika looked at him in shock) and secondly, I said sorry.
Anika: How dare you talk to me like that, do you have any idea what I can do, I can ban playing cricket here.
Shivaay: Do whatever you want, I don’t care and please keep your tadi to yourself.
Anika: What did you say, what tadi?
Shivaay: Haww, you don’t know tadi, (he laughs)
Anika was now even more pissed off by his laughing.
Anika: Just stop laughing and don’t you use that weird language in front of me.
Shivaay: I will use whatever language I wish, who are you to tell me?
Anika: You have taken enmity with the wrong person, you don’t know what I, Anika Singh Oberoi can do?
Shivaay: I don’t care, even I am Shivaay, I am not afraid of you. (he does his hair step and goes)
Ishana was going to her dance academy when Omkara comes in front of her car, she applies brakes immediately, she comes out and goes to him,
Ishana: I am so sorry, are you okay?
Omkara (thinking): Now the game begins, (to Ishana) haa, I am fine but I think my leg is hurt.
Ishana: You please come with me, we’ll go to the doctor.
Omkara was happy as the first part of his plan had succeeded as Ishana looked quite worried that because of her someone got hurt, they reach the clinic,
Ishana: The clinic is there, you go and I am sorry once again.
Omkara was shocked as he thought she would herself accompany him but here things didn’t happen as he thought,
Ishana: What happened, get down or else your injury may turn to be serious.
Om just nodded and got down, Ishana drove away.
Omkara: What the hell, I thought she would come with me, help me but…. Looks like it isn’t as easy as I thought to crack her…but even I am Omkara, wouldn’t leave until I succeed. (He does his hair flicking step)
PRECAP: Rumya’s meeting…..Shivika shocked…..Om’s new move
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12 Comments
Superb
AWESOME INTERSTING NICE SUPERB??????
Dear Prajkta
I Know This Story Main AniIshSou ShiOmRu Ka Female Version Hai.But I Think Unko Full On ShiOmRu Banane Ki Zaroorath Nahi.Iam Try To Say Kuch Different Add Karo AniIshSou Pe.Story Read Karthe Time Mujhe Feel Nahi Ho Raha Hai Ki AniIshSou Hai,I Feel Like ShiOmRu.So Please AniIshSou Ko Full On ShiOmRu Banane Ki Saath Unki Baathon Main Unki Behave Main Wo Log AniIshSou Hai Feel Karane Ka Kuch Tho Add Karo.Sorry To Say But Story Read Karthe Time Kuch Missing Lag Raha Hai.I Want Enjoy Your Story But I Don’t Know Main Full Enjoy Nahi Kar Paa Raha Hu.So Please Add Some Different Thing In AniIshSou And ShiOmRu Characters.Don’t Make Them Full On ShiOmRu Female Version And AniIshSou Male Version.
I Hope Aapko Meri Comment Hurt Na Kiya Ho.Agar Kiya Hai Tho Please Maaf Karna Okay????
Take Care?
Dear Prajkta
Anika Ko Shivay,Shivay Ko Anika And Ishana Ko Om,Om Ko Ishana And Soumya Ko Rudy,Rudy Ko Soumya Banthe Dekh Kar Hassi Aa Rahi Hai?I Think Ye Story Ye Three Lead Actors And Actress Ko Read Karna Chaahiye?But Try Add Some Different Thing In Her Characters.Anika Ka Nick Name Is Bill.Show Main Bhi Kabi Rudy Unko Bilu Bili Bulatha Tha.So I Think “BILI” Perfect Hoga Anika Ko?
Awesome start Dost.
Loved it.
Poor Om ,Ishana went away …hehe
Amazinggggg
It is awesome dear
Superb update
What is dis???!!! 2 amazing. I luv it. Maine abhi CS nd promo wala part nd dis part padha. Nd after reading dis ulta version main hasste hasste chair sehi gir gayi aur meri maa nd choti sis aake mujhe daat ne lagi. It is 2 funny. Girls ko ek baar ke liye male version pe maan liya but boys they character is hilarious.
Shivaye saying SORRY mere too akhe hi bahar nikal gaye.
Om thinking NOW GAME BEGIN I was like WTF. Om ko jhuut bole huye imagine karna bohot mushkil hai.
Nd Rudy as a nerd. He is doing Padhai all da time. Mere too tote hi udd gaye.
I have a lot of ques…… OM KI KOI BHAI HAI KYA?( LIKE ISHU HAD MONA) , OM BHI KYA GUJJU ME BAAT KAREGI JISE ISHU KARTI THI? , ISHU KI KOI BF HOGI???(LIKE OM HAD RIDDHIMA),OM KI KOI MAJHBURI HAI KYA??(LIKE ISHU HAD HER FAMILY ND DATS WHY SHE CONED) ANIKA KI KOI FIANCEE HAI KYA JAISE SHIVAYE KI THI TIA ND IF SHE HAD WHAT HE WILL CALL ANIKA “ANIKA BABY”?? AUR SUMO KYA RUDY SE HELP LEGI LIKE RUDY NE LI THI ROMI KO PAATANE KE LIYE??ND SHAADI KE BAAD KYA BOYS LOG OM ME GHAR JAMAI BANKE RAHENGE YA GIRLS SASURAL JAAYENGE???
Dis ff is outstanding. Tum Anika ko “Allu” naam de saakti ho. Like Shivaue had Billu nd Anika will be Allu.Nd I wish TejVi le relation bhi ulta hota then Jaanvi Tej pe chillati aur vo sunta.
OMG Mahi, so many questions, i am just surprised, so I’ll answer them one by one.
Om has no family, Om wont use much of Gujju expressions althought he is filmy like Ishu was, about Ishu and Anika’s BF and Fiance, you’ll know soon, Om has no majburi, its just for easy fun going life, soumya is not flirty like Rudy so maybe no Romi like thing will happen, and about boys living in OM, lets see, shaadi abhi dur hai
I hope you are clear now, and continue to read to know how the three love stories unfold
Superbbbbbbb…….awesome start
Super interesting update
Great start dear… Amazing update… n for nick name of anika ”panika” jese show me hai…