Hello everyone I always wanted to write an ff, since now I know that how to submit my article I m on it now.
My ff will be based on shivika. This story starts from when Shivaay brings Annika home(after the gunshot and hospital sequence) that too against Pinky’s wish.
Shivaay brings Annika home @ d door of OM where pinky enters and stops him saying “this girl cannot stay here(ye ladki yaha nahi reh sakti)” Shivaay calms his mother down and says that whatever happened Annika is not @ fault in it. Saying this he grabs her hand takes her to his room.
Shivaay tells Annika that his mother is not @ fault, she is just worried for him her actions were wrong but her heart and her intentions were pure. Annika just keeps looking at him lovingly.
Tia sees all this and thinks it to be good opportunity for her to brainwash Pinky as the iron is hot.
In Shivaay’s room, enter omru & sumo,
They discuss about the lohri night. Shivaay asks khanna to get him CCTV footage. They c the man who fired. Shivaay gives this info to the commissioner.
Pinky’s room, enters Tia
Tia says to Pinky “I m so scared my Shivaay baby got shot bcoz of dat Annika, today he is safe but what about tomorrow, this Annika is such a bad omen for Shivaay”
Pinky “don’t talk like this about my son nothing wrong will happen to him”
Tia, “but what about me and my child till Annika is here I m doubtful whether the child gets his daddy’s name or not”
Pinky “u don’t worry I will do anything for my grandchild I will throw this girl out at any cost”
Next day
ACP Randhawa enters OM and informs shivaay that the man is a sharp shooter, they will find him soon.
Randhawa questions Annika, that do u have enmity with sum1. She answers no, I don’t have any enemies. Randhawa says that this sharp shooter takes very high prices for shooting Someone, his price starts from 1crores.
After all this enquiry ACP goes and Shivomru gets thinking that who might have enmity with Annika.
Shivaay’s room
Annika is sitting on the sofa & she z in her deep thoughts, Shivaay enters and calls her name, Annika is still in her thoughts, Shivaay sits beside her and calls her twice, still no response then he pours a glass of water on her face. And Annika screams “ye kya kiya apne, mujhe pura gila kar dia”
Shivaay “wo isliye qki tum sun nahi rahi thi, mujhe tumse zaruri baat karni hai, chalo”
Annika “kahan”
Shivaay “car me”
Annika “par q abhi to apki itni chot aai hai aur abhi car Me, jo baat karni hai yahi kar sakte hain na”
Shivaay “Nahi, car me omru aur saumya bhi honge, hume bohot important discussion karna hai aur mai nahi chahta ki koi usme hume disturb kare”
In car
Shivaay tells everyone about the jungle attack on Annika and also recalls Annika’s fridge incident.
Om “iska matlab koi hamari bhabhi KO marne ki koshish kar raha hai wo bhi baar baar”
“Wo insan ghar ke andar ka hai ya bahar ka hume ye bhi nahi pata”
Shivaay “hamare ghar me koi aisa nahi kar sakta except Svetlana, lekin use Annika ki jaan lekar koi faeda nahi hai”
Rudra “Bhaiya ACP ne bataya tha ki sharshooter ke prices bohot zada hain iska matlab wo jo koi bhi hai bohot paiso Wala hai”
“Bhaiya mere pas ek plan hai ye pata karne ka ki Bhabhi pe kaun attack kar raha hai, bas usme thoda risk hai agar bhabhi taiyar ho jaein to mai plan batau.”
Precap: ACP FINDS THE SHARP SHOOTER.
Pls do comment how u feel is my ff. ??
30 Comments
Superbbbbbb
Loved it
Continue soon plz ???
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Nice one …..well I hope I will see jealous shivaay (no offense just thinking)…… Really good update soon
Not so soon but yes u will
Nice interstng..
Good. I like current track ffs. Pls update soon
Nice one Sanjana….??
Continue…?
Good continue
Nice
Superb….
Nice… I really wish it happen in serial
Awesome…..brilliant
Please continue dear I am waiting for rudra’s plan
Nice
Nikitajai, Rudra’s plan will come in action after fourth episode.
Shanaya1526, u will c jealous Shivaay soon but not so soon, let the story build up first.
Thanks to all who commented. Thanks for liking my ff.
nice… plz with english sub
Very nice
Hi Sanjana. Your name is very sweet. Loved your ff.
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Hi Sanjana. It’s a nice start. Please continue.
Nice
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Its good……….. 🙂
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Nice
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I liked your ff Sanjana,,, It’s really nice.
khidkitod start waiting for next episodes..
Already posted 3 episodes. Will post the fourth chapter today
Yep dear…
I know u must have posted the next episodes but I’m little late latif..
I’ll read them as soon as i get time..