hey guys ananya here..like i always say thanks alot for commenting…if there r any silent readers..please break ur silence… comment more if u can because ur comments only give me energy…then ill be enthusiastic to write so please continue like this throughout and once again thanks alot for ur immense support and vast response
lemme make 1 thing clear to u its ishqbaaz ff as a whole..not on any particular pair..ill introduce other characters soon…..
scene 1
in the hospital room anika oberoi bros and dadi r present
anika: dadi u go home na take some rest even u all go from here im fine
dadi: puttar ill go but not leaving u alone om or rudra or shivaay will stay here with u tonight
anika: bhaagad billa?? no dadi please
shivaay: oh hello im also not interested to stay with u and look at ur facee ok so mind ur tongue
anika: shut up u duffer oberoi
sivaay: dadi c her tell her to mind her language
dadi: billu please calm down dont get hyper
anika: ha u first stop drinking that kaali coffee atleast then ull top getting irritated to petty things
sivaay: its espresso ok
anik: ha wahi chod dijiye use
om: guys guys atleast dont fight here
rudra: om u dont poke ur nose…billu bhaiyya hena voh sab handle karega
they chuckle and give a hi fi to each other
shivaay gives an angry wala look to them
dadi: ok now lemme speak….anika ill go home along with om and shivaay….rudra will stay here with u
rudra: no dadi actually i have to workout
om: ok then ill stay u and shivaay go home along with dadi..ok dadi
dadi: ok
om looks at shivaay
he is already staring at him angrily
om realises what he just did
he messages rudra what to do and rudra gives an idea
om: oops dadi i also cant because my statue is almost done and i need to give a finishing touch to it as it has to be displayed in the art gallery tommorow
dadi: so now only shivaay is left out
shivaay: dadi actually i have to make a ppt presentation for the meeting tommorow
(he acts as if he is least interested because boys always try to maintain their ego infront of girls..right boys? hey no offense i was just joking lol)
anika: thank god i thought i should look at ur face the whole night
shivaay: mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai tumhara chehra dekhne ka
their cat fight is about to begin but gets stopped as shivaay gets a call from tej
shivaay: hello..ha bade papa boliye
tej tells something
shivaay: ok bade papa
he ends the call
dadi: kya hai billu
shivaay: actually the meeting tommorow is cancelled it seems dadi
dadi: ok then problem solved ull stay here tonight along with anika
shivaay: ok dadi koi option bacha hai kya..hey u pleae dont irritate me ok
anika: i should tell this not u
rudra: bye bhaiyya bye anika babdi
anika: babdi? whats this
rudra is about to say that its a combination of babhi and didi but stopes as om signs him
rudra: nothing didi byee gn enjoy
om: bye shivaay anika take care of urselves and ha if u guys need anything do call us
scene 2
om rudra and dadi r present in their car
rudra: om temme the truth do u really have to work on ur statue??
om: no no shivaay was messaging me continuously so i had to lie
and shows him shivaay’s messages
rudra: dadi u were right bhaiyya ko takkaer ki ladki mila
dadi: hmm am happy abbout that
scene 3
at the hospital
anika is trying to take water but is not able to and shivaay is working on his phone
anika mumbles: donno y he stayed here- to help me or to fiddle with his mobile
shivaay looks at her and says
shivaay: did u say something?
anika: nothing
shivaay: good if u need anything then ask me and ya dont bother me unnecessarily
anika: ok(biting her teeth) gn
shivaay: gn sd
she sleeps
the next morning
at oberoi mansion
rudra goes to soumya
he goes and peeps through the key hole but just then she opens the door
rudra fall down as he loses his balance
soumya: tum
he is about to call her sumo but then realises what he came for
rudra: no this time i wont tell anything..actually i came here to say sorry this time i really understood ki sorry boli jaati hai khareedi nahi and am sooo sorry sumo oops i mean soumya and then he pours a glass of water on him..u need not do this i only did this
soumya laughs like hell
soumya: its ok rudra please come in
he goes in
they have a cute chat
this is the end guys
thanks again for ur wonderful comments
message me personally if u have any interesting ideas
ill be back with another new episode untile then
bye bye folks
luv u all loads muaahh 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
77 Comments
nice one
Tq
Shivika part was awesome…. your ff s too good yaar! I just can’t wait for next update…plz try to extend the episode…
Thanksss will definitely make it lengthier
plss add ishkara senns
OK
It was amazing…….u r awesome Ananya. Loved SHIVIKA scenes today and BABDI????Plz post d next part asap and try to lengthen it……..
Thanks mukta….BABDI loll
U could have added few more shivika scenes in the hospital after Dadi nd omru went ….
Ok will add more scenes as anika is still at the hospital lol
Superb one yaar but sorry to say I expected more shivika scenes at hospital…. But OK tc dear …
Thanks I’ll add more if possible in the next episode…..I hope ull be satisfied
Well done ananya gud going.I am expecting romantic scenes between shivika.
Thankss hope I’ll reach ur expectations in the next part
Shivika scenes were awesome. Its so lovely .tanq for fast update ananya.
Thanks kavinnilla
Nice episode
Thankss
Ur fanfic is real fab.. Do upload d next part.. Do add iskaara scenes… All d best
Thanks vinnu…I’ll add more in the next part
I m loving it
Thanks sharmansangel
Loved it
Thanks
Really nice ff shivika scene was awesome plz update soon
Thanks ayath
Plzzz extend the episode?? u and ur ff is simply awesome?? upload the next one soon can’t wait??
Thanks and I’ll try to make it lengthy
Episode was awsome…!! Naku chala nachindi… commenting in telugu…. lol… any ways waiting foe the next one… take care and keep updating….
Dhanyavadamulu even I’m replying in Telugu
ananya is telugu your mother tounge…and i also love to speak and chat in telugu…im from hyderabad..may i no where are you from..
Nice episode but expected more shivika scenes and this one is too short nxt time pls try to write lil longer and that bhabdi part is awesome. Post nxt ff asap
Thanks next part u will get more and I’ll try to make it lengthyy
Ananya this part is really awesome .love shivika???. Thanks for the fast update . And Ananya I am from Kakinada AP. Where are you from
Thanks sat I’m from ap vja
Love it tooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Am glad u luvd it
Nice episode love it…….
Thanks eisha
Please lengtgened the episode
Okk
Interesting as always loved it but it needs some spice in ishkara scenes now Omkara has done friendship with ishana n now she has to enter in his heart for that she has to intro herself to oberio family n later she will help omkara for taking Svetlana out of his life a suggestion
Thans I’ll keep this in minds..thanks
loved it… SHIVIKA scene was very nice…..????
Thanks 🙂
Awesome waiting for more shivika scenes
Thanks
nice one.you are really a good writer.but it was a short ff.pls try to give it long and update soon.
Thanks shanya
very cute epi… 🙂 🙂 🙂
love shivika 🙂 🙂 🙂
nice one….wating for more fun…nd shivika scenes…. nd update soon….??
Thanks tanu
It was nice…keep on writing…it was really awesome
Tqq
Nice especially sivika scenes good work ananyaa
Thanks
ur updates are awesome:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂
actually I love the way u change ur ff cover according to the story ….it gives me an early idea of what ur focusing in this update and this is so good….. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Thanks alott
plz keep on updating dear.. and dont ever get demotivated.. 🙂 🙂 🙂
love ur ff 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂