Hi frnds… I am shivika, rhis is my 1st ff and i hope u ll like it. I read many of ur ffs nd they were just osum and min blowing. I liked them all. After reading them i thought to share my own thoughtful story……..so here i m with my 1st ff.
Plz comment so that i could know did u liked the ff or not
And i should continue it further or not …….
Starting with the character sketches…………
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All the characters are almost same
Shivaay singh oberoi: business tycoon. Eldest brother of om, priyanka and rudra
Omkara singh oberoi: well defined artist….
Elder bro of rudra and priyanka and younger bro of shivaay
Rudra singh oberoi : a protein shake boy and a gr8 Casanova. Youngest bro of om and shivaay
Priyanka singh oberoi : youngest of all 4 brothers sister…
Tej and jhanvi singh oberoi: husband wife. Tej elder bother of shakti.
Shakti and pinky: husband wife.
Kalyani devi(dadi ) : mother of tej and shakti…. and grandmother of shiv om ru prinku.
Anika: a middle class hardworking girl. Suffered a lot in past. Sahil’s adopted sister
Sahil: anika’s brother and very naughty kid.
Ishana: a middle class girl suffering from debut….
Somaya ; a nice girl and a love angle….
Tia : a very cunning and a lady baba……
Riddhima: om’s gf with whom no commitement is done yet.
Ranveer singh randhawa : Acp who was handling gayatri’s murder case and solved it successfully…
And now kept opp. Prinku
Rest characters i ll intro u later on according to their track…..
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According to original show i ll pick up the story line when finally shivay is going to announce his marraige with tia……………anika shattered…………
Really broken by heart but not able to understand her feelings……….
One more thing guys no roop and swetlana in this ff
And gayatri is mudered by some one and shivaay was saved by anika as she takes a reuins her own image and save him…….
And no track of om’s any past …….
Randhawa is shivaay’s childhood frnd and was from begin convinced that shivaay was not guilty but his duty let it do so ……….he found the criminal and punished him……
And started liking prinku and finds the way to meet her…….
As it is showen that shivaay and randhawa are childhood frnds…….family knows about randhawa vry well…..and randhawa frequently visits the oberoi mansion
That’ s it for intro i ll post my first episode if u like my story line ……
So kindly post ur comments below so that i can know whether i should cont……….
Also post comnent negative positive any …..
All r welcomed.
36 Comments
its nice……go for it
Thnxx shivu…..
Its good keep writting ??
Thnxx Avishi
Interesting dear waiting for ur next post
Thnxx dear
It’s awesome.
thnxx priyali
awsum intro shivika 😀
update soon
Thnxx dear
Im with u just go for it its nice
Thnxx 4 ur support saba
Nice waiting for the first episode
Thnxx
Nice shivika….
Thnxx san
Nice buddy.go ahead
Thnxx Akshaya
Plz add more priveer scenes?
Sure i ll try my best to do so
Niceee
thnxx Hridey
Nice plot…. plz continue and post the episode soon!!!!!
thnxx mukta and ofc i ll try it to do so
It is good. I am eager to get to know the story line. Post soon?
thnxx….surely i ll be doing it soon
It’s awesome…. Pls continue ? ?
thnxx akansha
Nice ?
Thnxx sahanaa
Intrestng one dear…plzz continuee
thnxx dear
Nice one …… pls do continue
thnxx Angel
Nice dr
thnxx dear